Hii gyzz
This is my first story I hope you gyzz will like it…
OK enough of my interruption, I will start the story..
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The story starts when Shivay comes home after he got kidnapped..
Anika (A)- Shivay kaha hai app mujhe kyu aisa lag raha hai ki raita phail gaya hai, aur kuch bohot hi bhura hone vala hai..(Shivaay where are you why am I feeling that something bad is going to happen…)
Anika sees duplicate shivay while he fixes his lense and goes in anger to confront him
Anika holds collar of duplicate shivay and asks him where is shivay….
A- Shivay kaha hai bata mujhe mere shivay kaha hai bata mujhe varna me tumhe zinda nahi chodungi…
Duplicate shivay(DS)- Anika tum kya keh rahi ho me hi shivay hu tum aisa kyu behave kar rahi ho..You are behaving weird from morning, what’s wrong with you..
Everyone comes there after hearing noice from shivika’s room..
Pinky(P)- kya huva hai shivay tum dono lad kyu rahe hoi, whats happens( what happen shivay why are you fighting)
Shivay explains everything…
P- yeh tu kya bol rahi hai anika.. tu mere hera beta ko aise kaise bol sakti hai aur us par hath kaise laga sakti hai
Dadi- anika puttar kya hua tu thik haina yeh shivay hai puttar tera pati fhir tu aisa kyu keh rahi hai(anika what happen, he is shivay your husband then why are you telling all this to him)
Omru- bhabhi app think toh hai na
A- omru, dadi, pinky aunty mai sach keh rahi hu yeh shivay nahi hai
dadi- beta aise kaise ho sakta hai
flashback-
someone calls to anika
person- hello anika voh jo insan shivay bankar reh raha hai vo shivay nahi hai
anika- kya yeh app kya keh rahe hai
real shivay- ha anika tum kuch bhi karo aur us par najar rakhna jaise me call karu tum uska sach samne la kar rakhna me bas aa raha hu..
anika- thik hai shivay..
anika recognizes shivay’s voice and even she is connected to him by heart, so she trusts the caller
after sometime
shivay calls her
shivay in broken voice and feeling really emotional
shivay- ani..ka expose him
anika sees duplicate shivay and asks him where is shivay..
rest you gyzz know right…
P- anika tera dimag toh thik hai na, mujhe tu hamesha se pasand nahe hai and todays tune te sari limits hi cross kar dii
Kamini smirks towards duplicate shivay
Ds- anika bohot hua maine aur mere family ne tumhe bohot bardash kar liya ab aur nahi
He hold her hand and drags towards the door of the mansion
Dadi- shivay kya kar raha hai…
Om- shivay bhabhi ko lag jayegi
Ru- bhaiya bhabhi ko lag jayegi sambhal k
Duplicate shivay throws anika out of the OM and she was going to fall when anika was going to fall when a person who has covered his face catches her
Duplicate shivay throws anika out of the OM and she was going to fall when anika was going to fall when a person who has covered his face catches her
Anika looks at the person
A- app a gaye
person- kaise nahi aata anika maine tumse kaha tha na mai tumhe har ne nahi dunga
they both look at each other and hugs each other
they both look at each other and hugs each other
Everyone is shock looking at the person and anika
Ds- Ka…un ho tum aur meri biwi ko aise kaise hug kar sak te.. ho(while stammering)
Ds shivay pulls anika towards him..
Ds- tum kaisi biwi ho pati yaha khada hai aur tum kisi paraye mard to gale laga rahi ho
Ds- tum kaisi biwi ho pati yaha khada hai aur tum kisi paraye mard to gale laga rahi ho..
A- Tum mere pati nahi ho.. mere pati shivay hai mere shivay jo mujhe kabhi girne nahi denge
Ds- Wah biwi ho toh tum jaisi pati yaha khada hai aur kisi aur insaan ko gale laga rahi ho, tum ek number ki ghatiya ladki ho
P- shivay maine kaha tha na iss ladki to sar par mat bitha, ek din apna asli rang dikha hi dengi
Ds- sahi kaha tha maa apne mujhe is par bharosa kar na hi nahi chahiye tha..
P- ab nikal de ise ghar se bahar
Duplicate shivay comes near anika and tells her tum aur tumhara shivay , tum dono ko koi nahi bacha sakta hai, ab tum bhi uske pass jaungi…( he tells her when no one was listening and slowly)
Anika gets angry and slaps him…
(In this picture shivay stops her hand but imagine gyzz that she was slapping him)
(In this picture shivay stops her hand but imagine gyzz that she was slapping him)
DS- anika yeh tumne kya kiya me tumhe nahi chodunga
He was going to salp ani when the person who has cover his face comes and saves ani
He was going to salp ani when the person who has cover his face comes and saves ani
(In this picture imagine Ds slapping ani and shivay stops him)
Person- Tumne meri biwi par hath kaise uthaya
Ds- Ka…un ho tum aur yeh mere biwi hai naki tumhari
person who had mask on removes his mask
All the people in Oberoi mansion are shock seeing two- two shivay infront of them..
Shivika ignores everyone
Shivay ask anika to come to him
S- tum thik toh ho na anika
while carising her face
A- while crying me thik hu shivay
Shivay then hugs anika and kiss her forhead
Shivay then hugs anika and kiss her forhead
Ds brokes there trance
DS- tum kaun ho aur mere biwi hai wo naki tumhari
S- yeh mere biwi hai meri samjhe tum, anika sirf meri hai sirf meri
anika looks at him happily
Ds calls omru and asks who is this person ask him to go out
Omru- jaoge toh tum yaha se
Ds- yeh tum kya keh rahe
Om- ha kyuki shivay kabhi bhi anika bhabhi par hath nahi uthate hai
Ru- aur ha agar koi hath uthata bhi hai na toh woh unke hath tod dete hai
DS- yeh nakli shivay hai
S- mai hi shivay hu
Everyone else are confused ki ab kya hoga
Janvi(J)- why don’t we questions them, aur jo sare questions k answer dega woh shivay hoga..
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Precap- everyone questions both of them and both gives right answer.
19 Comments
Nice one
thanks
Good start…and interesting concept…hope to see the next part soon….and will u like to be my di….
Sure dear… and thanks for appreciating it
Awesome start dear waiting for your next update
thanks
This is already on wattPad na…. I was unable to cmmnt there….thank god u posted it here on tu…. It is really cool ff n have a different concept….n the way u described all the scenes n decorations was mesmerizing….. Description of the dresses of all members was too Gud n have new idea…. Luv u di ….keep writing
thanks dear and your welcome for updating it here.. and love you too sis…
Nyc..
Thanks
It is nice one dear
Thank you
superb update..
Thanks
Nice….need English translation…..
I am sorry dear for the inconvenience but story is already written by me on wattpad and I am just copying it here so there is no translation for this but some chapters are in english. Thanks for appreciating
Nice update
Thanks
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