Hiii friends…… I’m Lalitha…. author of “SHIVIKA:My feelings towards you” & “Ishqbaaz: Expect the unexpected”…… I hope you remember me….
Today is some special day for me….. Ok I will mention it at the last…..
Let’s go to the story now:-
KINDLY IGNORE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES
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Here goes the 5th part:-
Present:
Evening…
Anika’s pov:
“Is it necessary to go Anu” asked my maa….. This is enough for me to analyze how much my Janu ( jahnavi – anika’s mother) is going to miss me….. Even I will be missing her a lot….. But this trip is equally imp for me….. So I have to go….. I turned towards her, I assured that I will be back soon & hugged her….. She kissed on my forehead & hugged me tight…..
Soon after bidding bye to my Janu….. I left to mallika’s house….. I found mallika walking at the entrance speaking over the phone & went to her….. On seeing me she ended the call & started to confront me…..
Me: Baby relax….. Please listen to me…..
Mal: What is this anika??? You said that you will be here by afternoon & now it is almost 7…. & You are not even answering my calls…. Do you know how worried we are???
Me: Baby please….. I’m lil busy & my phone was in silent mode….. Plz try to understand…..
Mal: Atleast you must infrom Anu…..
Me: I’m sorry (holding ears with a puppy face)
Mal: This is the problem with you Anu….. U will make me cool even my anger is at peaks…..
Me: Thank god!!!…. Shall we go now???
Mal: Come let’s go…. (While walking in) You know what…. Everyone are on time except you….. Even those Mumbai guys are on time…..
Me: What??? Mumbai guys???
Mal: Yaaa… Daksh’s friends…..
Me: U mean shivaay & all…
Mal: Yaaaa
Me: Are you serious mal…. U know the purpose of this trip right…..
Mal: Anu.. anu.. anu… I will manage everything you don’t need to worry….. Daksh want them to join with us….
Me: Whatever….. I just don’t care…..
With this I left from there….. I’m so angry on mallika….. But When I realized that shivaay will be joining the trip don’t know why, I felt lil happy….. Is he coming to the trip??? Am I going to see him again???….. A small smile crept over my lips…..
Shivaay’s pov:
I’m soo excited to see her….. From the very first second we stepped in Banglore, my heart was jumping in happiness to see her….. When we were entering mallika’s house, my eyes were searching for her….. We were worried for anika as she is not even answering our calls….. I’m so tensed abt her….. What if something happened to her??? Noo!!! that can’t happen….. I don’t know what to do….. I & rudra went to anika’s home to check on her….. When we reached there we got to know that anika left a few mins ago….. I informed mallika about this & got to know anika reached there….. With a sigh of relief we went back to mallika’s place….. When I stepped inside I felt a pair of hands closing my eyes….. [O jaana…… instrumenatal plays…….] I slowly touched the hands & I can feel that these are anika’s hands…..
Anika’s pov:
I heard rudra’s bike sound…… This is when a idea striked my mind…. I hid myself behind the door & when he entered inside i covered his eyes with my hands from back…..
He kept his hands on my hands….. That touch….. it passed some vibrations through my body….. This is when I noticed him…… He is not rudr…… He is.. He is… shivaay… Yes it is shivaay…… I just took my hands back & about to leave in a hurry but….. my hand was held by him….. I turned back to see him…… He is continuously starring at me….. “I… I… I’m… Sorry…… I thought.. It is rudra……” I said looking at him….. There is no movement in him….. This is when some strange thing happened….. Ranveer came running to me….. He hugged me tight & said “Hey Anu…. Finally you are here….. We are soo worried about you”…… I felt sooo weird at his act….. Ranveer & I are friends but we were never this close….. I don’t know how to react….. This is when Rudy entered in… He came straight to me & by holding my hand he started running….. “Rudr what’s this???” I asked him…. “Arey Anu I’m soo hungry let’s have dinner now….” came his answer…… We all gave a smile & gathered at the dinning table…..
Ranveer’s pov:
On holding Anu’s hand, Shivaay’s face turned red…. This the evidence for my doubt…. Common Shivaay open up…. You have feelings for Anu & you can’t hide them, atleast from now…. It will be fun from now…..
While having dinner I sat beside Anu…. Shivaay was opposite to anika….. “Anu common taste this…. This is the perfect combination…. you will love it for sure” I tried to feed anu….. Anika was expressionless & shivaay started coughing….. “Common anu” I forced her….. She started with her excuses…. Suddenly… “Aah…..” I felt someone stamp on my foot…. & then I noticed a smirk on Shivaay’s face….
Shivaay’s pov:
O god!!! Ranveer is up to something…. I have to find it out…. Is he trying to snatch my anu….. No… Y will he do that….. If not so, why he is trying to be close to anu….. I’m soo confused with my thinking….. Whatever it is I want “MY HONEY” I will always be with her so that ranveer can never come between us…..
oh god!!! At the dinner I’m soo surprised by his act….. Y the hell he want to feed my HONEY….. I’m here na….. I eagerly waited for anu’s negative response….. When he again tried to force her, I couldn’t control myself….. I stamped my foot hard on his foot….. When he dropped the spoon I felt lil comfortable…..
After the dinner we took rest for some 10mins & then started to keep our luggage in the vehicle (mini bus)….
Everything is ready by now….. As I thought to sit beside anu I went near her seat….. But….
Anika’s pov:
What’s wrong with ranveer??? From morning he is behaving weird….. When I’m about to step in the mini bus he asked me to keep the next seat for him…..
But before he came prinku came & took the seat….. I felt comfortable & when I’m adjusting my seat shivaay came to us….. He is looking upset….. As if he lost something…… Shall I ask him why he was so???…. But before I can speak anything he left to the back seat…. Don’t know why, seeing him like this made me sad…. I want to speak with him & wanna cheer him up…… I went to the back seat & sat beside him….. “Why are you looking upset??” I asked him but there is no reply from him… Even he turned his face to other side….. I slowly whispered in his ear “Won’t you answer to your fiancee???”…… On listening this he turned to me….. There is sparkle in his eyes & a smile on his lips….. Then I realized what did I said….. Oh Anu!!! What did you do???
So, done with this part….. I hope you will like it…. please ignore grammatical mistakes….. & please let me know your views…. Guys please comment…. I really wanted to know whether you want me to continue with this or not….
Guys I’m soo happy that some of you still remember my ff & messaged me for the updates….. This really means a lot to me….. You really don’t know how happy I’m…. at the same time I felt bad that due to my own stuff I made you all wait for my ff….. I’m extremely sorry for that…. I really missed you all….
I just love your response…. support…. & love towards my ff….. A very big thanks to all of you….
love you guys….. I’m soo thankful to god for giving me such loving friends…..
THIS IS VERY SPECIAL DAY to me….. As it the birthday of my sweet sis….. I think you all know her well…. she is the writer of “TRUST ME” Ishqbaaz ff…… Yes, she is none other than our MRUNAL di……
Didu…… “WISH YOU A HAPPY BIRTHDAY”……
WISHING YOU THE HEALTH, HAPPINESS & LOVE ON YOUR SPECIAL DAY….. ALWAYS HAVE WONDERFUL DAYS DIDU….. LOVE YOU LOADS….
My mru di…. she is the one who inspired me…. supported me…. in everything….. she always supports me when I’m right….. corrects me when I’m wrong….. teaches me when I’m unaware of something….. She is like the sweetest change which happened in my life….. & because of her I got few more loving sisters on TU….. Didu I just love you a lot didu….
44 Comments
Awesome update dear, so glad to have you back on TU. Can’t wait to see the love blossom between these fiances??
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I still remember your story and it was one of my favourites but you never update thereafter.
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I’m so glad that u loved my story….
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This is what I was waiting for….sorry dr forgot ur ff’s title but remembered the storyline…….and thank you for posting it dr…..
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I know I made you wait for a long time & I’m really sry fr that dear….
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after such along tym di….really missed u …nd this story too…awsm update loves it…plzz post not soon…i know u r bit busy by do try Di.
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Hiii dear??…. Hw r u???
I hope everything is fyn vit you…..
I missed you too dear….
& about the ff… Thanks a lot dear???
I’m soo sry for making u wait fr a long dear….. But this time I will update soon… Plz don’t worry dear…..
& yaaa plz take care of yourself dear….
Love you loads???
Bubye???
Awesome one lali specially I loved shivika part it was a fabulous part waiting for next part eagerly love u dear lots u and ur ff??????????????????
Thank you soo much didu??
I’m glad that you loved it….
& yaa… Will post soon….
Love u loads didu???
hey sweetie, so finished with reading ur fan-fiction cum novel ….its the way writers write a novel ….and yes I had a happy ROFL reading when it came to jealousy part… ????… You know I love ur art piece very but being a sister and studying for writing I could figure out some minor errors which are not grammatical but some basic ones… I would pen down those suggestions on whatsapp if you want to or even I can mail you…..
Over all I loved it.
Keep going…
Love you…. Finally got a nice name for you sugar calls you sweetie so I would call you melody ?????????????????
Thank you soo much didu???
I’m glad that you loved it didu….
& yaaa I would love to learn writing didu….
I’ll message you on WhatsApp & plz suggest me didu….
Thanks for everything didu.???
Love you loads???
Thanks for the new nickname di…
I just loved it…???
Yo di welcome back… finally time mil gaya so padh liya apka FF..maza a gaya bohat time ke baad ye FF padh ke… Bas ab next jaldi jaldi post Kar de na di..
Thank you soo much dear???
I’m sry fr making you wait for a long time….
& this time I’ll post soon??
Love you dear???
Take care….
Yo di welcome back… finally time mil gaya so padh liya apka FF..maza a gaya bohat time ke baad ye FF padh ke… Bas ab next jaldi jaldi post Kar de na di..love u.. ?
Once again thank you soo much dear?