Hi everyone
Thanks a lot to all of u. U all gave such a sweet comments ,I am really very happy.just a request guys if u read my parts lately also just do comment a word.???
Last episode I kicked daksh , tia ,dhruv out of my imagination. Hope u like it.
So here goes to ta scene where I stopped
Anika leaves seeing everyone broken. Shivay stood like a statue looking down with frozen expression.dadi trembles and sits down on sofa with help of jhanvy n pinky.there is silence all over mansion. Om rudra see each other come to shivay.
Om: shivay…..Shivay….
Shivay still being a statue.
Om places his hand on his shoulder and shakes him. “ shivay”.now shivay cones to senses. He looks immediately at ta place where anika was standing but she is not there.he looks around but can’t see her anywhere.
Om: voh ja chuki he Shivay
Shivay looks at om n starightly goes to his room and closes the door.he leans to ta door for a moment then slowly goes near bed sits on the floor without any expression .
Anika reaches her place.enters inside her house lost somewhere.tears r rolling down from her face.she goes n sits near bed on the floor.she looks at her hand which shivay holded tightly sometime back distrusting her again, the wound was again sightly bleeding due to pressure.
Nazdeekh hai dil ke………
She removes bandage
Phir kyun large milke…….and she cleans it with cotton and again does dressing.
She looks other side breathes out heavily and bends down her head on bed. Still tears rolling down.
The only flash coming to her mind is shivay again not trusting her in ta morning.
Oh jaanaaaaa……………
Shivay sitting on floor still with no expression.flashes in his mind are going in one go
“ Shivay asking her what’s ur price, what’s ur status, I will buy u, ur self respect ur proud .then shivay giving her cheque.then he saying bleady outsider, then he saying there is line between us which will be forever.anika coking and saying shivay was with her all night holding his hand. Anika saying tia hugged someonand he scolding her.Shivay saying anika tat she is doing this with motive. Anika saying tia is married.he again bursting on her.his stupid convo with om when he says anika is golddigger.anika today saying I trust u. Shivay holding her hand tightly.”
He looks at his hand tightly closes it and hits ta floor so hardly that his hand starts to bleeding.
Tuhe meri jeene ki vajah ………..oh jaana………….
In living are evryone sitting on sofa.
Pinky: kabhi soch nahi ta tia yesi nikalegi.chiiiiiiiiii
Jhanvy: she made her husband as brother in front of us, disgusting
Tej: what had happened if shivay marries tia
Shakti: bcoz of matarani tat anika saved us from all this
Dadi: rudra is right, she is angel of this house specially shivays angel whom she always saves. Whether it be chopper blast ,whether it be current in water,whether it be poison gas attack,whether it be CD scandal, whether it be murder case and now she saved us all from kapoors.but in return she is blamed n targeted always.if Shivay is great wall in front of us na then anika is great wall in front of shivay.
Evryone smile at this but still in a shock with all happenings.
Pinky: we should have understood anika is best bride for shivay when she saved shivay in tat murder case staining her respect
Now everyone are silent.rudra watches everyone comes n stands in middle and plays song in his phone and starts dancing “ let’s nacho……..”
Everyone: rudra !!!!!!!!!
Rudra: arey lady baby is kedi baba I know all ta time. Now she is out.and my anika didi will become wife of my great wall.dance toh banti hain na…..
Again he dances let’s nacho and pulls everyone
Slowly everyone smile n then laugh n then dance.
Now evryone again relax on sofa.
Om: really she is angel if she is not here then what would have happened with shivay!! I can’t even imagine
Rudra: but u see anika didi became more smrt being with me.how smartly she exposed reiki centre na? Ek dam pahad thod……( mountain breaking….)
Now everyone realise something and at same time
“Royal security department?????”
Tej: how is anika connected to them
Pinky: may be she worked with them
Jhanvi: pinky but they saluted her
Dadi: om beta!! U are her bff na u know abt this?
Om: no dadi. I too don’t know anything abt this.
Rudra: arey may be she have friends. Anika didi is so nice na anyone will do friendship with her.
Om: may be.
Its been 2 hrs.anika and shivay are still in same position.anika still crying.
Suddenly her new phone rings its ram flashes on screen
Anika: ha ram
Ram: so x told me what hpned.so u did tia pardafash finally
Anika: what I did they did everything smartly( she says in low tone)
Ram: so u r crying now
Anika: yes Mr.telepathy
Ram: u know what just go to shivay and gve him a tight slap , u will feel better
Anika: kucj bhi!!!
Ram: if i would have been there then I would have did tat only.but I can’t come there right now
Anika: hmmmm
Ram: oye….enough ha.don’t become sunset from sunshine.
Anika looks at her tattoo and smiles till with tears
Ram: stop crying now…
Anika: just be on call line, tats it
Both on call with silence.
Anika remembers all her moments with Shivay. All their good moments their nokh jhok, his care his concern.
Ishq pe ansoon ishq hai nagma ….
Ishq junon hai rahat ka….
At last she remembers again how shivay distrusted her.now she closes phone speaker with her hand and cries vigourously then calm downs and brings phone near her
Anika: OK listen , I am fine now. One more thing I am leaving from ths city to some other city.after 1o days I will comeback as decided.OK?
Ram: just take care
Anika: OK bye
Shivay: bye.
In mansion,
Om: rudra its been 2 hrs now we should go to shivay
Rudra : haan bhayya
They both go to shivay room. They open ta door and see him sitting on floor.
Shivay is in same position.
Omru go near him sees his hand bleeding
Omru r shocked.rudra ges first aid box from cupboard
Om does dressing.
Om: R u mad Shivay? What have u done? Have u lost ur mind?
Shivay still in lifeless expression
Om shakes him forcily “shivay”
Shivay turns towards om. And remembers om words “ when u fall in love u will come crying to me and will say om u r right” now shivay starts crying terribly and hugs om tightly.
Shivay: om u said na..tat when……I….reali…….realise……
Om: u will come to me crying
Saying this he pats Shivay. He was crying terribly. Om sees rudra rudra too joins the hug
After a moment,the break apart
Om: Shivay u realised na every thing will be OK. U have to make OK.
Shivay: I can’t om…. I destroyed everything by my own hands ..i…. I cant face her. I can’t….
Om: u have to. U have to face her, apologise her, win her trust again and u have to express ur feelings to her.u will do it
Shivay: om I can’t…
Om: u will. And he shows his hand rudra to joins n places his hand now shivay looking at both of them gets courage and places his hand tooo
And they three hug again.
After sometime everyone assembled in hall. Shivay is standing in front of them
Dadi: so billu…
Shivay: so?
Tej n jhanvi:so…
Pinky . shakti: soon….
Shivay: what?
Prinku sumo omru: sooo ( in angry tone)
Shivay gives a confused look.
Rudra: oho bhayya every one wants to know how u r going to propose anika didi oops bhabhi.
Shivay: I…. Don’t….know….
Evryone: what do u mean by u don’t know?
Shivay: I don’t knw means I don’t know. I kow she even won’t hear me. She will not even accept apoplizise and proposal is so far thinking
Evryone: who hurted her?
Shivay: me
Everyone: who said harsh words to her?
Shivay: me
Evryone: who didn’t trust her?
Shivay: me
Evryone: who will apologise?
Shivay : me. Wait . guys I know I have to apologise and i have to propose but I don’t kow what to say.
All giggles
Shivay: stop it.just help me if u can.
Tej: shivay just book high class restaurant and make high class arrangements and propose her with most precious solitary diamond ring.
Jhanvi: seriously tej anika don’t give imp to all this.shivay just surprise her. U know a beautiful surprise…..
Shivay:????????
Shakti: just take her to temple and ask her hand for marriage in front of god with blessings of pandit.
Pinky: yes and make her listen mata’s bhajan
Shivay:????????
Sumo: bhade bhayya according to study made on a…
Rudra: sumo u leave it.bhayya first make ur body buildup.when anika didi will see ur biceps she will say yes automatically. And does logic wala sign.
Shivay: oh god why????
Soumya laughs at rudra .rudra keeps silent.
Prinku: bha. Bha bhayya. a u just propose aaaannnniiikkkkaaa inn aaaa goooodddd waaaayyy
Shivay: ok( in a low tone)
Now Shivay is totally fed up and looks at om.
Shivay: om y r u silent? What’s in ur hand? That’s apainting right? Don’t tell me tat u want me too give her a painting and say her a painful poem n propose her.
Om: I would never even imagine tat
Shivay: time god
Om: its a gift from our side. U know na she likes painting a lot.so t thought to gift her as a token of thanks. And abt ur proposing wonder just speak out ur heart infront of her.
Rudra: bhayya we will do rehearsal.assume me as anika didi.
Saying this he comes and stands in front of shivay
Rudra: kanji ankhon waale Baghdad billa….mere pyare billujiiiiii….
Shivay: what ta wuck!!!! Just stop it
Everyone laugh
Shivay: its my fault to ask u all.I will do it by myself. But how to make her come? I……. Am…….so…..nervous…..
Everyone smile at him.
Omru: leave tat work to us and give HiFi to each other smiling.
Dadi: finally mere billuki takkar ki ishqbaaz shuru hogayi.
Shivay: but se will forgive me na?
Omru: she is anika
Om: but this time its going to be really tough
Shivay: don’t scare me
And screen freezes on his tensed face.
Precap: shivays proposal. Anika says…….
Tats a surprise guys
Plz share ur views below here. U can guess anika answer too. And plz do comment plzzz zz
60 Comments
Nice episode…..
Thanks dear
Awesome…superb..waiting for the next episode..
Thanks dipali
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Woah!! I think you got my feelings…else anyways I will tell you myself…. I totally one hundred percent I loved it to……to the coreeeeeee…. Shivaay and Anika’s pure feelings and whole family suggesting Shivaay to propose Anika is their usual way like Tej in his usual high class way, Shakti in his devotional way, Rudra in his body shody wala way, Prinku in a decent way, Soumya in a research typic way and Om in his portrait way this is making me feel like even he proposed RiddhiMaa in that way????????????????
Every emotion is all over the place and it’s…. it’s just fab….Oops! It’s more than fab something out of the world and whatever the words are there in Oxford dictionary indicating the synonyms of Amazing you owned them. Keep going like this….like a super fast jatt.
I am dying with the PRECAP….Uff…..such a mobile thod wala Suspense(actually I meant mobile thod because it will be a favourite thing to everyone so nobody usually breaks it)???
Cutie pie with ur comment I am just flying flying????? thanks y so much
Wow…..eagerly waiting for shivaay proposal and anika’s ans……..shivika union
Thanks dear
wowwww… super episode nans eagerly waiting for next one
Thanks anah
Wow family members r helping shivaay to apologize nd propose to anika… that scene was Awesome… Plz post the next part asap… can’t wait
Thanks jaya. I will try to post asap
Interesting episode and precap nandhu
Thanks aksh
Omg…. I m in love with this episode….. Everyone was giving their own suggestion to shivaye…. To propose anika… Wow… I mean u write soo good nans…. What a story line….. Eagerly waiting for next…..
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Thank u so much sana ????
super episode
Thanks anjaly
Awesome epi nans. Nxt epi lo anika ans kosam waiting .?????..al the best nans
Thanks sasi
Awww nandu….its awesum……….i luvd it so so so much dear……anika cryng n rememberng his words …n their nok jhok it was d bestest….suprbb all through…….??? hw ll he propose her??? Wat ll she say?????
Just wait n watch my tussy????? but I am nervous tat if I can reach ur expectations for shivay proposal or not? I just hope tat scene reach ur hearts
U no nandu I am in the same condition I don’t know when I reach all expectations since I wrote SHIVIKA marriage episode I am trying to represent my best for that I till now wrote 3 times but yet not satisfied…
wonderful…..just loved it….update soon
I am typing it dear.thanks for ta comment
Aww….. Shivaay just rocked today haan?? and u know what when Shivika were crying na I felt that the scene is in front of my eyes….. so perfectly described yar?? sachhi yar ur ff satisfies me very much? You’re doing an amazing job??? keep writing & keep entertaining us with ur art? Awesome episode????????
Thanks a lot mukta dear
OMG!!!PRECAP SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!! AWESOME UPDATE NANS… TOTALLY LOVEED IT TO D COREEEEEEE!! POST NEXT ASAP PLS!!!
Thanks priyali.I will post asap
I think Oberois are went mad the way they talk and give advice to Shivay I am laughing and rolling on floor and Rudra ahhh ????
And Shivay and Anika’s pain make me cry…???
I am eagerly waiting for Shivay’s proposal…
Update next part soon Nandupie…☺☺☺☺
Thank u chocopie
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Loved it…❤ waiting for the proposal..???
Thanks sabhya
Episode 6 ka comment:-
Sorry Nan’s dear for late comments but when I red that part I was awestruck and was not able to search words but I failed dear… Just an awesome episode I mean it seriously Royal security omg …. Anika connection
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Episode 7
Alfaz jab kam ho jaaye,
Dil jab thaam jaaye,
Dimaag sun ho jaaye,
Tab dil ke taar kahani se jood jaye
Toh dimaag bhi samjh jaaye ki
Jaadu chal hai joh woh hai koi
Jhadugarni jisse naam ki zarurat Nahi
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Hope you like ur petname dear
Really u play with words so good just strikes soul……
Shama ur shayaris make me feel so happy.jhadugarni? Me? Don’t know its true or not….but thanks for such a sweet comment.
I don’t lie OK ur my jadugarni dear really u deserve this because the way u connect me is purely magical
wooowww suupprrb episode….i loved it…i am also eagerly waiting to know anikas reply..and i think she will ddenie it….any way waiting for shivika romance…and thanku naans for sucha an awsome episodeee
Thanks razna
Awesome… shivays angel…
Thanks lisa
hey,,,wow,,,,,, waiting,,,,,,,anika says,,,,,,,,,, what? really excited..and want to know the way how shivaay proposes,,,,O my mata! next epsiodes is goings to be a blast ah!!!
Thanks ruchi .I will post it asap
Wow wow wow shivi it’s awesome I loved expressions of whole and they idea and shivika emotional scene I enjoyed every bit of it I love u dear and pls reveal suspense soon I eagerly waiting to now wht is this royal security secret and ram ki sunshine and when ur posting next ff mostly I would not be able comment or read ur ff because I have my exams but I promise after finishing exams I will surely read it comment it K in advance it will awesome only so for that also awesome and can I call u shivi If u don’t mind with it
Thanks a lot puvi
???? and I just submitted my ff.it will be out in one hr.and my name is nandini dear.but u can call me shivi dear and all ta best for ur exams
wow superb nans and sorry too fr the last epi ……
Thanks ayath.don’t be sry tats OK??
Nice episodes ????
Thanks liara
So awsum…..just loved it……so excited….???
Thanks samaira
I really loved ❤️ ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️ it. Plz post the next episode soon
Thanks jazz. I submitted it now.
Wow wow wow shivi it’s awesome I loved expressions of whole and they idea and shivika emotional scene I enjoyed every bit of it I love u dear and pls reveal suspense soon I eagerly waiting to now wht is this royal security secret and ram ki sunshine and when ur posting next ff mostly I would not be able comment or read ur ff because I have my exams but I promise after finishing exams I will surely read it comment it K in advance it will awesome only so for that also awesome and can I call u shivi If u don’t mind with it love u all ishqbaaz family
Awsm episode……. Waiting for next episode….. Update new episode ASAP…..
Thanks sat.I submitted it already
So them I can call nandu is it fine
U can call me by any name u want to.I will love to get called by nicknames
Thank u dear