Hiiii frnds……This is the second shot of my TS..Hope you like it…
@OM
Om and Anika reaches to Oberoi mansion …With all the proofs but om is teary eyed …Chulbul runs to him and asks what happened…
Just then Shivaay too comes from office…He sees om in tension and Anika holding his hand..
Shivaay (coming towards them) – om…Anika is everything fine…..
Om closes his eyes and remembers dr.dang’s death…They got the proofs but Unfortunately they couldn’t save dr.dang….
He opens his eyes and shouts for swetlana
Along with her all Oberoi family members comes down…
Om and Anika exposes swetlana and her past deeds , her crimes and everything and she is not the real swetlana….Tej gets shocked and even feels disgusted….He goes to swetlana and slaps her….
Om – mr.oberoi ……. Please control ur anger…Police will handle her….
Anika – ji uncle om is tight…We already informed the police..They will arrive at any time…..
Swetlana (laughs hard) – you both bhabhi and devar are really very innocent do you think with these proofs you will get me arrested….I can prove that these all are fake and I can file a case against you ….. remember I am swetlana and I have many contacts…
Tej and Shivaay know what she can do…
Om (angry) – you are not swetlana atleast now stop this acting of yours….
Swetlana (coming close to om) – ohhhhhh darling so you wanna know my real name…Please have patience….My dear..
Saying this she was about to touch om but Anika holds her hands and twists her finger…
Anika (angry) – apni gandi haat se om ko chuna bhi mat….You can’t do anything until I am with him…Om Tum Apne kamre mein hai
Om leaves
Swetlana winces in pain but soon grabs her
hand and about to slap Anika but a strong hand holds her hand ….Yes it’s our Shivaay…..
Shivaay – how dare you to rise ur hand against my wife….I would have killed you if….
Swetlana – relax Shivaay….This much anger is not good for ur health…..You can’t do anything to me because these proofs couldn’t prove my deeds….And as you are a businessman you have to know basic laws….
Anika – oyyyy chepdi you no need to teach us laws and one more thing….The laws which you are talking about even have something more…
(She explains some laws of Indian constitution which leaves Shivaay and the whole family stunned) according to these we can put you in jail and till you try to prove them wrong we will find more proofs…..
Swetlana gets shocked to listen to anika
Shivaay (shocked) – Anika tum Yeh sab kaise janti ho …How do you know about these many laws…..I mean….
Anika too gets shocked (to herself) – Yeh Maine kya kardi…..
Anika (stammers) – woh … Shivaay mai…..
Swetlana (shocked but covers it with smirk) – Shivaay tumhari biwi toh bahut smart Nikli…Jitni bewakoof mai isse samjhthi thi….Yeh itni nahi hai…..
Shivaay – mind your words swetlana….
Anika (smirks) – Shivaay…Y r U wasting your time and energy on her……And you (to swetlana) no need to hide your fear…. Don’t worry…As you said we will not handover you to police….If we send you to jail then you will be a permanent member there…..
Shivaay – now get lost swetlana….
Anika – nahi Shivaay…Agar Yeh yaha se jayegi toh seeda jail jaayegi….
Shivaay – but Anika…
Anika – trust me Shivaay Please….
Shivaay – ok….
Tej – Shivaay are you out of ur senses….You are listening to Anika…. I mean swetlana can’t stay here…Anika is talking senseless…. usne law ke baare mein do chaar baatein kya boldi tumne toh uski baaton mein aagaye…..I want this woman (swetlana)out right now….
Anika – but uncle….
Tej (shouts) – U don’t interfere in this Anika…You are here just because of Shivaay…He has accepted you but not we…So stop behaving like a daughter in law of this house…
Shivaay (shouts) – bass badepapa….
Shivaay is about-to say something but Anika holds his hand and nods in a no with teary eyed…
Om (descending the stairs) – Mr.oberoi…..You can’t talk to my bhabhi like this….It doesn’t matter if you accept her or not because no one considers you as a family here….So the actual Oberoi family has accepted my bhabhi including choti ma….So mind your words while you speak….
Swetlana leaves as she has some other works to do…
Pinky (angry) – jethji…You can’t talks to my bahut like this….
Rudra – ha papa Anika bhabhi is so good ..She is my super girl…
Janvi – Tej Anika is this house’s Dil you can’t disrespect her like this….
Anika is worried as everyone are talking against Tej…She genuinely not wanted Tej to feel bad….
Anika – no aunty it’s ok Tej uncel bade hai….He has that right….
Tej – no Anika I don’t have any right…And ha I agree you have done a lot for this FAMILY but still I can’t accept you because we don’t know your blood lean….
Shivaay and om (at a time shouts) – ok that’s enough…..
Anika holds Shivaay’s hand and he calms down..
Om – mr.oberoi ….U had hurt my bhabhi now apologise…
Tej – what r U crazy….
Anika goes to om – om what r h saying….There is no need for this….You come with me…You need to rest…..We have to think about next….
Om – par bhabhi…..
Anika drags om to his room…
Tej is about to leave….But Shivaay stops him…
Shivaay – don’t you dare to insult my wife again badepapa..I couldn’t stand it….
Saying this he goes… Everyone leaves to their respective rooms…
Anika after calming om leaves to her room….
@shivika room
Anika is sitting on the bed and thinking how she blurted about the laws and all…..
She mentally slapped for saying it but she starts thinking….
Anika (to herself) – Shivaay is my husband he has every right to know about me…..Ha they are my best friends but it’s not that simple….They mean the world to me….They are my only FAMILY which I have…But after that fight….We never talked to each other or tried to contact each other….It has been more than 7 months of that fight…but they didn’t even try to reach me….Or they tried but they couldn’t reach me as they really don’t know where I went…But by now they should be knowing where I live as Shivaay announced me as his wife….I think they are still angry with me…But fault is not mine.. it’s completely their fault….If they don’t consider me as their friend then Y would I care I too don’t care…..
Thinking this she wipes her tears…. Shivaay who saw her crying thought it was because of his badepapa….So he knelt down and wipes her tears….
Shivaay – Anika I am sry for whatever badepapa had told you ……
Anika makes him sit on the bed and says – Shivaay aap kyun sorry bolre hai….. It’s not ur mistake and I am really not worried about that….I mean it’s ok it will take some time for Tej uncle to accept me….Even you took so much time…..And he is replica of you….I mean you are replica of him…So it’s ok….
Shivaay (with his cute kanji eyes) – bahut tang Kiya na maine tume….I had hurt you alot na I am sry for everything….I know forgiving me is not easy but…. Please try to forgive me….I love you and I promise I will never hurt you …
Anika (smiles at him and keeps her head on his shoulder) – Shivaay you no need to ask sry…I have forgiven and forgotten everything…..
Shivaay (staring at her with desire and love) – really …..Then will you be mine…. Forever…..
Anika (blushes) all She say is just hmmmm….
Shivaay understood her and he got up and went to the door and locked it…
With that lock sound Anika’s heart started to beat fast…..
Shivaay moved closer to Anika but Anika got up and is about to go but Shivaay pulled her close and started kissing her face….And then her lips..They Both had a passionate liplock…..With that Anika blushed and hugged Shivaay tightly….
Shivaay kissed her neck while she mourned in pleasure…..She tightly hold his shirt….. Shivaay picked her up and placed her on the bed and they conssumated their marriage….
Anika wakes up early for a change and gets freshen up …..She sees Shivaay sleeping peacefully and smiles at him….
Shivaay too wakes up and sees Anika staring him…He sees her….She is in her saree and with wet hairs.and sindhur in hair like a perfect
wife….
Shivaay pulled her closer – am I dreaming or is this true…..
Anika (blushes) – Shivaay….Please stop it…
Shivaay – first answer me….You know if it’s a dream then I don’t want to wake up and if it is true then also I don’t want to wake up because I loved this position….
Then Anika sees her position she is completely on Shivaay and they are inches apart…..
Anika pulls her hand out and immediately gets up….
Shivaay gets irritated and gets up….
Shivaay – you are so unromantic….Anika….
Saying this he is about to go but Anika holds his hand and moves towards him…..
Anika kisses his cheek and says – gud mrng Shivaay….
Shivaay gets overwhelmed with her move….
Shivaay too kisses her forehead..- U know this is the best morning of my life……
Just then a servant comes and says – Anika mam someone came to meet you…..
Shivaay – at this time….It’s too early……
Anika just laughed at his statement….
Anika – ok you go I will come…
Shivaay – why are you laughing Anika…
Anika – Shivaay you know what’s the time now??
Shivaay gives a questioning look…..
Anika – Shivaay it’s 11:30 am and that means it’s going to be afternoon and we are still stuck at good morning….
Shivaay (shocked) – what the wuck…..I have a very important meeting at 10am you know I was waiting for this deal for 1 year ….And….
Anika – Shivaay relax ….I talked with ur PA and she told me that the company’s head will come to meet you here itself…So stop worrying and go and get freshen up….
Shivaay – thank god….
He runs to washroom and gets freshen up….
Anika is arranging the bed….When Shivaay comes out….
Shivaay – Anika tum Abhi tak yahi ho ?? I mean servant told that someone came to meet you right….
Anika (hitting her forehead) – ha Shivaay I totally forgot about that….But who came to meet me…I mean …
Shivaay – ok let’s go and see ….Wait a while I too will join you even if we go alone or together they will tease us so it’s better to go together….
Anika nodded in yes a little worried as she can’t bear the embarrassment…. Because of the teasing of her lovable devars……
@hall
Tej is shocked to see that person……
Tej – Mr.Malhotra……
(Guys I am introducing a few new characters Shravan malhotra from ek Duje ke vaaste he is a lawyer by profession same as in the show…..
Another one is Dev dixit of kuch rang pyar ke side bhi he is a businessman same as in serial…These two are the best friends of Anika)
Shravan gets up…And greets him – hello mr.oberoi…..How are you??
Tej – i am fine…I am so happy to see you…..I want you to handle our case …. I was continuously requesting you but you kept on denying me as you are busy….I am so happy that finally you got time to deal our case….Only you can take up this case as you are the best lawyer in the whole Mumbai….
All this while Shravan was trying to speak but Tej was so happy that he is not letting him speak…
Shravan (finally) – no mr.oberoi…. I actually came here to meet…..
Just then Shivaay comes down followed by Anika…..
Shivaay comes there – badepapa he is Shravan Malhotra right….whom you wanted take up our case and for whom you are waiting for 1 year….
Tej – exactly Shivaay…
Shravan tries to speak something but just then he sees Anika coming to them….Anika doesn’t see him….
Shivaay – Anika meet him…He is…
Anika sees Shravan and frozes in her place….A layer of tear appeared in her eyes….
Anika (whispers) – Shravan…..
Shivaay and Tej gets shocked…..
Shivaay – you know him ??
Anika (rudely and with anger) – why is he here??
Shravan wants to explain that he came for her but Tej again started blabbering that he came here for case purpose…
Shivaay – but that’s not my answer Anika do you know him ??
Anika is hurt as Shravan doesn’t came to meet her but to discuss the case…..
Anika (utter disgust)- ñahi Shivaay mai isse nahi janti…(I don’t know him)
Now Shravan gets angry….
Shravan – ohhhh seriously Nikku don’t you know me ??
Now it’s a 440 volts shock for Shivaay…
Till then Everyone are assembled in the hall….
Anika – don’t call me that mr.shravan Malhotra….You came as a lawyer so…Do your work and leave….
Shravan (shouts) – stop it Nikku….Bina puri baat jaane hi conclusion pe nahi aana chahiye Yeh baat tumne hi bola yaad hai na tumhe…And ha I came here to meet you understand….I haven’t come for any case discussion….I am sorry mr.tej Oberoi I was trying to say this from a long time….I didn’t come here to take up your case but to meet my best friend Anika….My Nikku….(he said with teary eyed)
SHIVAAY got very angry at that word my Nikku…Only he has that right to call her mine…..
Little did he know that Shravan is married and had a beautiful wife named Suman…..
Anika (sarcastic smile) – your Nikku…Stop ur acting mr.shravan Malhotra….. Nothing is left between us….You are neither my friend not my FAMILY….You are nothing to me…..So if you came to talk to me then let me tell you it’s waste of time….So just leave….
Saying this Anika turns to leave…..
Shravan – ek minute Nikku….
Anika – Anika….. It’s Anika for you….
Shravan – tum bilkul Sonakshi ki tarah baat karri ho…..And ha it’s Nikku for me….And I know you are angry with me but stop behaving like a kid….
Anika came to her fighting mode….
Anika – mai bachon ki tarah behave nahi karte Shravan tum bachon ki tarah behave karte ho….USS din bhi tumne jagda shuru Kiya tha….Bachon ki tarah….
Shravan – mai bachon ki tarah karta hu…Mai… Shravan malhotra….Aur bacha…..Time mai kis angle se bacha diktha hu ha ??Tell me ….
Anika – sirf size bada hone se koi bada nahi ban jaata dimaag ki zaroorat hothi hai….Samjha…..
They really fight like kids….
Tej and shakthi are astonished as the Shravan malhotra who is very reserved is talking like that actually fighting like that….
Shivaay is very much irritated and jealous but he couldn’t stop Anika as he has to know who he is ??
And the others are enjoying the show……
Omru are smiling at their bhabhi’s antics….
Just then a girl enters and shouts STOP IT BOTH OF YOU….
Yes she is none other than mrs.suman Shravan malhotra….
Seeing Suman Anika ran to her and hugged her….
Anika (breaking the hug) – kaisi hai tu Suman ??
Suman (irritated but smiled at Anika) – I am fine till now but if you both don’t stop your fight then I will definitely be not fine….
Anika and Shravan gets embarrassed…Just then she notices Shivaay and everyone and then understands her situation….She takes Suman with her and introduced her to everyone…
Anika – dadi Yeh Suman hai meri dost actually my best friend….
Shravan – woh best friend hai toh mai kaun hu ??tumhara Naukar ??
Anika gives a death glare to Shravan…..
Suman smiles……
Suman – namaste dadi…She takes her blessings..
Dadi – khush raho puttar…..
Suman – I am sorry on behalf of my husband…Woh actually indono Ko jagda karne ka itna shouk hai ki Kahi bhi shuru hojate hai…Bina apni surroundings deke….
Gives angry glare to Shravan and Anika….
Rudra – it’s ok we are used to these type of fights between my bhayya and bhabhi
Suman – you are Rudra and you are om right ??
Omru nod – ji but how do you know….
Suman – I know that’s all….
Om – waise ha we r used to see these type of fights but not to this extent….For one second i got afraid of my bhabhi….
Shivaay felt bad and jealous as his Anika fights with someone else more than him…..He wants everything of her only to him…..More than anyone…..But Shivaay got some what relaxed when Suman mentioned Shravan as her husband…..
To be continued….As I am really feeling sleepy…
This is a surprise update as I was not expecting to update it till my exams gets finishes that is April 13th but as today is my dad’s birthday I thought to give you a surprise update
Precap – entry of Dev Dixit and SHIVIKA and whole Oberoi’s gets shocked by Dev and Shravan’s decision
31 Comments
This was damn cool yaar it was something i always wanted great work
This was damn cool yaar it was something i always wanted great work?????
Wow shraman, shivika n devakshi r my favorite jodis…thx for putting them together in one story…..Awesome episode…..plz try n post next one soon….N best of luck for your exams……wish a happy birthday to your dad on my behalf….!
Tanq so much for your wishes……
Hey. When is the next part? Plz post soon….
Superb epi…..just awesome…… eagerly waiting for next…..
superb..really liked it…
It was superb dear I loved it sooo much
U are a great writer u nailed it dear and plz plz post next asap soon
Guys my title is something else it has to be my wife and her best friends but it’s wrongly given ….My wife and her devars is the title for my first shot
Superbbbbbbbbbbb…loved it..
Awesome
wow…
it was a mind blowing epi…
I enjyd a lot especially that shivaay´s jealous part it was so funny
pls.. update it soon
Wowwwwwww…It was fantastic fabulous
It’s damn cool yaar it’s awesome post next shot soon
Excellent
wow
loved it !!!!!!!
post asap…..
tc.
awesome
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Awesome Maza ayegya ??
Nice
That was awesome yr. And tumhara naukar ?? was awesome ??
This is really good.kaash aisa kuch show main hota but tum dusro ki tarah late mat karna .jaldi next part post karna .it is really good.
Too good…. post soon…..
Awesome loved it. please update the next part soon. waiting
Totally loved it. please continue soon . Waiting
OMG!!! Devakshi and Shraman…. Really interesting…..! Shivaay’s jealousy part is funny…and also Shranika’s fight!! Precap….eagerly waiting.
pls write in english
Ok dear from next part onwards I will give in English too sorry for the inconvenience
I am sorry to disappoint you all but from tomorrow onwards I am having my semester exams so I couldn’t give you the update…..I also promise that as soon as I come back I will give continuous updates of my both the ffs
Wow,nyc updt
Amazing☺