Hey guys this is my first ff on shraman … Earlier i wrote an ff on Twinj (Tei)…
This is small intro of characters…
Suman Tiwari- She is a bit shy girl… Frank only wid her good frnd or wid people who she find descent… Lost her parents in a car accident when she was 11. Lives wid her mama & massi (both unmarried) nd her nanu…
Preeti Tiwari- Suman’s elder sister
KJ- Sumo’s bestiee… She is beauty wid brain loves her bestie sumo alot… Always fight wid shravan bcoz of sumo…
Shravan Malhotra- A rich polite guy… Has a crush on sumo when they were in class 8th… Kinda shareef…
plot-
So we see a hospital but what’s so special about that … A girl is seen crying there but who is she…
Is she some patient’s Relative?
No, she is not…
But then who is she…nd y is she crying…
oh she is Dr. Suman Tiwari…
she is sobbing hard nd speaking something…
Su- Y u come back again in my life… If u have not met me … U would have not suffered this much… Although i missed u alot in these years but no… I have to be strong… I will not let anything happen to u…
Now you guys think about whom she is talking…
nd plz guys do tell me that how it is…
Should i continue this or not…
🙂
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Ruchi into was so sweet as ur profile pic wow this seems to be interesting post soon dear
Thnk u Preeti… 🙂
will try to asap…
Oh ruchi II m so glad…u started as ff of ur own..it was vry good…nd I think d guy was Shravan….
Post soon..waiting eagerly…!
🙂
Hey WS…
Thnk u so much… 🙂
will try to post soon…
Wow ruchi dear…..!
I loved d intro….its nice n simple…. <3
N interesting tooo……
Plzz continue…n i think d guy is shr….
Or maybe hwr bestie kj….. 🙂
Post soon…..m egrly waiting…
Lots if luv….
Maria… 🙂 🙂
Hey Marie…
thnx dear… 🙂
about the person u will get to know in nxt epi…
will try to post asap…
£ots of Love
Ruchi… 🙂
P.S this cmmnt was also frm khushi ( due to lot of studiea she cant cmmnt ri8 now) 😉 🙂
Thnk u khushi…
nd thnx for conveying frm her side Marie…
Missing u nd ur ff khushi… 🙂
£ots of luv
Ur Ruchi di…
No prob Ruchi di anything fr my bestie…!! 🙂
Well Ruchi di can we be frnds?? 😀
Yes Marie… I would love to be ur frnd… 🙂 🙂
Interesting and i think the guys is our very own S. Malhotra. Please continue this one . Lots of love ruchi dear. Btw may i know ur age or are u in school or college so that we know how older u are from us , (only if u dont mind it) otherwise keep writing .
Hey Nandu…
Thnk u …
Why would i mind yr… M 18 year old wat about you…?
Lots of Love
Ruchi
Well am jst 13 as of now. So now.onwrds ruchi ‘di’. Keep writing. Lots and lots of.love dear di. And yes pkease start posting the episodes jaldi please.
Hey Nandu dear…
will try to post asap… 🙂
Lots of Love…
Ruchi
hi ruchi …
it was really a very nyc start….. u win in creating mystery….. i loved that a lottttt…….
n yaaa u shd surely continue it….
waise phli nzr mr wo persn shravan lgta h… bt agar tumne suspnse rakha h to itna,easy ans to ni hoga… it may be ki koi thrd prsn ki entry ho btwn shraman……
i m excited a lott n shayad ye mere cmmnt me laga hoga tumko….
waiting fr d nxt epi….. post nxt prt asap…
🙂
Hi dear…
m really happy wid the response…
Thnk u so much yr… 🙂
May i know ur age? If u dnt mind…
I will try to post asap…
ya i wll really dont mind …..
i m doing bsc 1 st year….. n i m of 17
youngr than u…… what r u dng? ?? i mean in study…
Coaching for entrance xams… Passed 12 this year…
Hello dear !!!! Very nice intro dear … nd yeahhhhh yeahhhhh u should continue it .. this is such a new story … I luv it … nd I think it would b sharavan .. the victim .. for whom suman was crying … ?? .. BTW post first part ASAP!!!!
Hey Fatima …
thnk u so much dear… 🙂
will try to post it asap¿
Of course..ruchi..continue..and nice intro
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Welcome to edkv..
And all the best for ur ff..?☺☺☺
Go a head..?☺☺☺
Thnk u Sona… 🙂
Hey ruchi..intro was interesting…ofcourse continue writing …will be waiting for it..
Hey Shiny…
thnx dear… 🙂
wow ruchi yaar u r back and r u the one who named me kab tak busy rahoonge 😛 and yeah interesting please do continue yaar 🙂 all the best
Hi Jo
How r u?
haha… No m not the one…
Thnx Jo… 🙂
I m fine yaar how r u?
hahahaha that was me jo who named u that
M also fine Jo… 🙂
hey ru finally u came up with a ff.. mg thanxx lol…
it was cool cntinue dear.. muah
Hey ‘Ta’
thnk u so much… 🙂
Lots of Love
Ru 😉
it was interesting sumo being a doc ! m looking forward.. ?
Thnks Sumo…
will post soon… 🙂