hi guys I am fine now and I am very very very sorry for the late update but I was busy with my school work and this episode will be bid not long only sharman scenes today
so let’s start
there are black clouds in the sky a car is moving on a sunsaan types road and guess who is in the car kya hua samajh aya ki nai jinhe nai aya unke liye sharman are in the car and they are talking like they know each other from along time
sumo – toh tumhara dream vacation spot Kaunsa hai
shr – mera fav vacation spot Goa aur tumhara
sumo – mera bhi Goa wow humari pasand kitni milti hai
and suddenly their car stop at the middle of the road and their is no one around expect trees and thundering voice
shr – main jaake check karta hoon and as he was about to open his door sumo holded his hand and they had a small eyelock which is broken by sumo – vo…..actually…. aam..mujhe……dar lagta hai
shr – understood kisse but didn’t say it cause sumo was looking damn cute during this time so he says
shr – kisse
sumo – vo tum mat jao na
shr – miss suman aab hum yahan poori raat to ruk nai sakte toh jaana to padega
sumo – toh main bhi tumhare saath chalongi
and they get down the car and shravan starts checking what happened to the car and he sees the tyres are punctured and suddenly bijali kadkne ki awaaz sunai di aur sumo shravan ko tightly hug kar loyi they know this was not correct but shravan was not expecting that but both of them were feeling a safety sumo was feeling that iss safe jagah usse koi nai lagi aur shravan ko toh lag raha tha ki usse pora Kohinoor ka heera mil gaya ho but a naam poped there mind and that was of and thinking of her they parted away they were feeling embarrassed as well as guilty embarrassed toh aap samajh hi gay honge kyu aur guilty ki UN dono ne ek dosre ko Jane diya and as sumo turned around she saw…..
khatam
sorry sorry sorry chahe toh datlo but please yaar maaf kardo ek toh dimag me algebra chal raha hai upar se haath cum rough copy hogai hai aur itne din ke gap ke baad it na choto SA episode me kya karun aur in dono ko ladne se fursat nai jab dekha ego self respect yaa MR. So called father RAMNATH mahrotra beech me aajate hain lekin chodo please please please comment like last episode and don’t disappoint me done OK bye aur dat bhi comment box me hi dal Dena haan
lots of love???
Riya
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Guys the name poped their mind was of suhaani
Ok mai pehle comment kr rhi hoon maro se u I have words to say
U r abhi with me hana
And ty for forgiving me
U will forgive me right
So let’s start
How sweet ur ff epi was little suspicious right
Nice one
Riya u r very nice writer sissu
Ff was amazing and super duper
Bye
Sweetu
Take care
Chalo kiya maaf and thanks for your lovely comment
Welcome for my lovely comment
Bye
Gud night
Gud night my lovely preet di
Lots of love..for u too..
For this ff???
Ya..it was short..
But post the next part long..OK☺??
Thanks sona di I will write along one but it will take time
Hello riya !!! Nice ep bt short na .. why yr ??
Was waiting for this ep .. acha chalo leave it .. bt next part should long ok ..
Post very sooooooon ..
Thanks Fatima next one will be definitely long but it will take time
Nice one..
Thanks
Oooyyyy my sweeto kaise ko…????
All fyn shine…
Ep WS mast as usual… 😀
Loved it to d core bt it WS short chalo koi nai….next wala jaldi n baad post Karna…ok
M waiting tik tok……
When will u gonna post nxt chappy…??
Hahaha algebra bakwaas hota hai…..
Chalo ok byyy
Take care….
Love u sooo much n glad to knw that u r fyn now…
Love u too aab di sab keh rahe hain bada bada toh likhna toh padega aur thoda time bhi lagega so sorry again you have to wait???
Hahah riya. I can understand ur problem bilkul sahi se. Even I have those algebra problems with me??? well glad that u posted and post soon and long one. Lots of love dear?????? post soon
Thanks yaar and definitely next one will be long but take a little time so till then
Lots of love???
Riya
No problems but kitna time, I mean how many days??? Well, glad that u posted and replied. Lots of love to u too dear??????????
Look kal yaa parson
Keep posting di u r a fan author … Loved ur ff
Thanks smile
Keep posting di u r a fab author … Loved ur ff
Koi bat nahi riya di aise bare bare ff main aise choti choti episodes hote rehte ha..
meri sanoriya aap baas thik ho jao
warna mumma kehengi tv dekhna chor do..
daddy kahenge ff likhna parna chor do
bhaiya kehenge registration chor do
ekdin sare fans kahenge ye ff likhna hi chor do???… Acche epi ke sath aye yahi kafi he..
pyaar le lo pyaar Neeti ka pyaar le lo taza taza fresh fresh pyaar ab abko by bole to bye
Aww neeti maza kitna acha tha aise hi comment karogi toh for main bemar padongi aur neeti jaldi se apna os post karo it’s my order and I hate delays neeti I hate delays vo alag baat hai ki hum se bhi Kai baar ho jata hai OK chalo bye and happy friendship day
Lots of love???
Riya
I love to read your ff….post soon….. please…………………………………………….. waiting for the next update……………
Thanks kaya I think u r a silent reader
K i tried sending a comment 3 times but it failed!!! UH!!!!! forget whtever…. now I hope u get it and if it fails this time too, I’ll msg u. So…..the epi….tooo good. Awesome!!! I want longer ones!!!! And post asap. I’m waiting.
Lots of Love nd blessings
Thanks Ariana i ll post a bigger one soon
very much short….
feeling bad for Shraman .. guilt??
but u write really well loved it.. ??
Sorry di
Sharman i too liked your work..i read this part and then go back to read previous ones…i thoroughly enjoyed your work…..keep it up…loved your way of writing…I comment very rarely…but do read various ff….but sometimes the writer is so influential…like your work which force me to leave comment… 🙂 🙂
Thanks prekar and hpe my rest of the work too force u to leave a comment