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shr was busy In his laptop
sumu: Shr what r u doing
Shr : I think work
sumu: work……. today also….
Shr: is there anything special today
sumu: today is the first day of out marriage we should go out
Shr: sorry I m busy
sumu: Shr u r akroo
Shr: akroo?????
sumu: yes ur nick name
Shr: oh should I tell u ur nick name
sumj: what¿??
Shr: afat
sumu: afat???
Shr: yes afat
afat means aannn I think bad thing that is gonna happen to someone that is called afat
sumu closes Shr laptop
SBR: what the hell my all work will be lost
he opens the laptop sumu again closes it he again opens she again close he open again
sumu: close it otherwise I will sit on it
Shr; r u out of ur mind u moti my laptop wl break
sumu: so if u want safety of ur laptop plzzz tale me out I wmat to see Delhi
Shr: seriously???
sumu nods
Shr; OK fine where do u wanna go????
sumu: park
Shr: r u a kid???
sumu again nods
Shr: oh god OK fine chalo
sumu bs do min bag le kr aae
Shr and sumu enter park
sumu by smelling air
sumu: Shr kitna acha park h even the weather is gud
Shr: ya
sumu sees balloon and sees Shr
Shr: not again I m not going
sumj. ; Shr plzzzzz
shr: no way pagal ho tm
sumu starta jumping : I want balloons I want balloon I need balloon
she: stop it just just shut up
sumu: plzzzz Shr
Shr: k fine going
Shr goes and takes balloon
Shr; take it
sumu takes them and then leave them making them go In the air
Shr: what the …….what u did y uleft them
sumu: they gud flying
Shr: what????
sumu: yes I like them like that
she: k let it go
sumu: Shr ice cream WO dekhen
Shr: dekh raha hn
sumu: I wanna eat
Shr: it will contain germs pagal
sumu; I don’t care I wanna eat let’s go she starts pulling him
Shr: oye main bakra nae hn aaraha hn
shr: bhya ek de do
sumu: ap nae kahen ge
Shr: no u carry on
sumu: OK she takes and starts eating like gola spreading all around her fac e Shr was busy in staring her
kese btaen kese jataen
subha tk tjh main Jena chahen
bhege honton ki geeli hansi ko
pene ka mosam h pena chahen
ek bat kahon kia ijazat hai
tere ishq ki mjh ko adat h
ek bat kahon kia ijazat hai
tere ishq ki mjh ko adat h………
sumu; kia dekh rae hain
Shr without moving; nothing
sumo finishes her icecream and sees children playing football
sumu: u know what I m champion of basketball but can’t play football I wish I could play
Shr: I can and I will teach u
sumu: seriously ap ko ati h???
Shr: demo delhaon???
sumu: yes plzzzz
Shr goes to the children and starts playing whereas suman starts. cheering for him
this time suman gets lost in Shr antics
shr makes the goal suman cheers
Sumu: I will also learn onwards
Shr: yah OK that’s gud weather is becoming stormy we should leave
sumu. : but…….OK let’s go
Shr and sumu sits in the car and drive towards there mansion but in the middle car breaks down
Shr: oh god
sumu: kia hoa car kharab ho had????
she: ya an kia Karen ge
sunu. khatara car olex pe bech de
Shr: dnt u adare I love my car
sumu: ya ya whatever
Shr: pedal chalte hain rasta thora h
sumu; BT weather
Shr: pohnch Jaen ge don’t worry
sumu: OK
both leave on foot but in the middle it starts raining
Shr runs towards shelter
sumu stands in rain
Shr: what r u doing there bemar ho jao ge
sumu: nae hn ge let me enjoy rain
suman starts feeling the rain and Shr gazing him but soon he realizes that if she will enjoy rain like this she will get ill
Shr goes and takes her to the shelter
suma: annnn Shr mjhe nahana h
Shr: ghr ja k Naha Lena OK
sumu; Ann maza araha tha kitna Jane den na
Shr: no means no
there is a popcorn nearby
Shr: wanna eat popcorn
sumu: han I want to eat
Shr: OK yehen ruku main let kr ata hn don’t move from here OK
sumu; OK
Shr BRIngs popcorn he gives it to suman
Shr throws popcorn upward and then tales it in his mouth
suman: woww mjhe b try krna h karun???
Shr; karo
sumu throws it bit it fall on ground
Shr: bechare OK football k sath ye b sikha dn ga
sumu: paka
Shr; paka
after sometime rain stops and they starts their journey suman starts shivering
Shr: r nahao barish main
sumu; yar ap mjhe kun tang kr rae hain
sumuwas shivering and shivering
shr makes her wear coat by his hand and there comes eyelovk between Sherman
aahaten kese ye aahaten sunta hun ajkal aae dil bata
dastaken dete hain dastaken kun ajnabi se pal aae dil bta
kuch to h Jo bend aae kam
kuch to h Jo ankhen hain naam
kuch to h Jo to keh de to
hanste hanste mar Jaen ham
sound of thunder
suman gets scared and hugs Shr tightly
Shr; kuch nae hoa come on
suma. leaves him
sumu: sorry
Shr: for what???
sumu: WO
Shr: oh acha WO koi nae let it go
they again start their journey and reach home eat dinner and sleep like that one on bed other on couch
day ends
epi ends
precap: same party
sorrrrryyyyyyyyy for the lateness and second sorry for the epi actually I wrote first time epi with the Romantic touch so sorry if u don’t like
so guys take care
lots of love
ufaaq
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Yaa…
Yaar…
First time with romantic touch..
I felt it..and its really so lovely..
OK
Party kab hai fir????
Thank u sooooooo much sona di
Party bs aj ya kal
Take care
Hy API…!!
Pehle toh ye Batao how r u now??? Tabiyat kaisi hai ab….!!!???
Or agar theek hai toh thank god nai hai toh rest karo na ye ep kyun post kar rai ho mujhe toh Khub dant rai thi…..
Aray yr….!! Mujhe ye samajh nai aata ye ap na like Karne wali baat kyun or kaise keh deti ho API…..??? How could u…??
Itna acha likhne ke baad kon kehta hai ke ye acha nai hai huh…??
Aj ke baad bola na toh phir ……….. Mai naraz ho Jaon gi ap se…!!
Acha acha naraz nai hon gi Lekin promise karo ke Aj ke baad APNE ep ko bura nai bolo gi…!!
Aray itni hi shok hai toh mere ep ko bura Bol dia karo na…… 😀 Bechara APNE ache khaase ep ki kyun bar baad bana rai ho…?
Khair abhi tak ki Bataon se apko ye toh pata chal Gaya ho ga ke mujhe ep kitna pasand aaya hai……
Nai pata chala……
It was a total perfect ep every bit of it…!!!!
I loved it tooo much se Bhi ziada…!!!
N I love u mostest se Bhi bht ziada…!!
Take care plz plz plz take care of urself n rest plzzzz
Choti behen ki baat maan lo….
Post nxt only if u get well….!!
Love u
Byy
Hi love
Yar pta nae kia ho gaya h is tabiyat ko thk hi nae ho rahe kabhi headache kabhi fever kabhi nausea kabhi chills bs kia krn
Api k liye dua kia karo love
Thank u sooooooo much love
Take care
I don’t use social web do u????
Love u mostest
Yes I do that’s y I was asking……
What’s ur fb profile. Name ????
Tell me plZz
It was nice
Thank u sooooooo much riya
Cute baby how r u???
Fine and u??
I m bit fine now
Liked it a lot ?
When will you post the next episode??
Waiting anxiously ?
Eeeeee u r silent reader yar keep commenting
Thank u soooo much
I will post asap
koi kiu pasand nai kare ga is epi ko, wo insaan pagal hoga jo ise pasabd nai kare ga
so romantic, atleast inki story age br rahi he…
loved the cute moments, are loved full epi loved the full ff loved all your writings, you r so gud so a song fr you from dis gadhi,
(soch na sake song kka nakal kkia he):
apko me itna pyarr kara
ik pal vich sau bar kara,
ki ap ke liye game khelna chordi he
apko me kitna chahti hu
ye ap soch na sake..
love you meri Uffi di- Neeti
Thank u sooooooo much neeti
U know what I was listening the same song have u listened its Punjabi version if not then plzzz listen that is best
Love u toooooooio
Take care sweetu
Hey..
how r u?
it was awsum yr..
take care..
I m bit fine how r u????
Thank u sooooooo much
U too take care
M also fine.…
ur most welcum…
Glad to knw that
I loved it ufaq….lagta hi nahi k ap ne first time romance jaisa kuch add kiya ha its really lovely superb take care lots of love
Thank u sooooooo much naina di
Ya I tried it first time
Thank u
U too take care
Love u
Awww so cute epi. They r kinda falling for each other. Enjoying it alot. Post next part soon. Waiting.
Love
Ariana
Thank u soooo much Ariana
Yup they r gonna fall
I will try
Take care
Love u
Hey !!!
Very nice ep .. ??
Luved it .. ??
Post soon ..
Waiting desperately .. ??
Thank u soooo much fati
Kese ho???
Admission hogaya????
OK I will post asap
Take care
Me fine ..
Han g Alhamdulillah ho gyaa ..
Congrats
i could feel d romance. i just loved it especially d songs ur choice was awesome. post asap
Thank u soooo much
I m glad u like it
I. Will post asap
Take care
This was really nyc ..nyc song post soon but how r u
Thank u soooo much
I will post asap
Fine a bit
And u???
Admission???
Me also fyn just getting hell iritated by revising same things…. Ahhhh admission many uni tests are from sep and gng till oct so waiting and studying…..plz pray sweeto
My prayers r with u
Best of luck
Ufi nice epi
Post soon dear
Thanks pretty
I will post asap
Am so sorry ufaaq di I am Kate to comment. But love these povey dovey moments between these two. Keep writing. Lots of love.
I thought u r angry
Anyway its OK
Thank u sooooooo much
Love u
Take care