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So here the 12th chapter…..
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”cute pie , are fine?” Sejal asked me when I bumped into her on my way to rest room
”ya I am fine… I was just lost in somewhere” yes I was thinking about that boy calling me sister-in-law …. I never dated anyone in real as I only dated my V oppa in dreams….
”lost where?” she asked winking…. aish !!!! this girl
” I brought a boy who accident to the hospital… and now he called me sister-in-law …. ”
”oh ho then he maybe planing to make this beautiful young doctor marry to his brother…. ” she said smirking at me
”nonsense…. but his brother must be handsome too because this boy is also handsome” I said laughing
” Cute pie now I am serious, don’t you think you have so many things to tell me” she asked in a stern voice…. ha I have to tell her about Vansh but somehow I fell anxious to tell her about him because he is not a human…. I never hide anything from her so even I feel guilty
”nothing…. nothing like that”
”if you say so…. but remember Ridz I know you more than anyone and you know how much you important to me…. so please share your every burden with me ok?” she said cupping my face …
”ok ok ma’m …. ”
”ok then let’s go I heard Dean will come today so let’s complete the reports”
” ok…oh wait … I forgot to tell you…. yesterday I dreamed marrying V oppa and having a BTS concert in my wedding …. will you came to my wedding…?” I said while laughing at my own dream
”oh god !!! I know one day you will end up in a mental asylum thinking about BTS and South Korea…. ” she said pulling my ear hard …. that’s my friend …. my partner-in-crime…. everyone should be blessed to have such a bestie who can be with you like your soulmate…. so I am blessed to have her who is like a sister and a mother to me…..
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” Angre , put this man into river of fire in the seven circle of hell and make sure he will hanging there whole day bearing the pain”
”As you wish lord” saying this he command to bring that sinner in to the seventh circle of hell
”please….please forgive me….please ” that man (sinner) pleaded at Vansh
”huh! forgive you…. forgive a sinner…nah!!! never….” vansh said putting his foot on his chest
”please…. I promise I will never do sins…please …. forgive me this time…please” he again pleaded holding Vansh’s foot
”huh! you know what you have done in earth when you alive…. you raped your own daughter… you killed your own daughter….. you abused your own wife and had affairs with other women… huh! you have done the worst sin raping you own blood your daughter…. how can you say forgive you after doing that much sins…. ” Vansh said slapping that man again and again
” do you know what happen in the seventh circle of hell” Vansh asked with his evil red eyes
”n…no…no” that man said wiping the blood coming from his lips
”Angre tell this sinner what is it before he get that ”
”The seventh circle of hell is where it starts getting good, which is to say where the punishments start getting really bad. For instance, in the outer ring of the seventh circle, those who were violent in life are forced to hang out in a river of boiling blood and fire and if anyone tries to inch up out of the water, a centaur shoots them with arrows until they sink back down to their appropriate level” Angre told
”when you hang out in boiling fire you will understand your sins… you will feel the pain which you gave your own daughter and wife…. ha ha ha …. how funny to see a sinner get punished”
”pleas-”
”GET LOST FROM MY EYES ….YOU SINNER”
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After completing the reports for Dean I had nothing special to do ….. so I came to the garden of hospital… ha what I mostly admire in this hospital is having this little garden…. even though it’s a small garden it helps to the patients to relax them selves and have a good walk… so I sat on a bench and go through the Instagram…. Then I felt someone sitting beside me
”YOU!!” I shouted seeing the boy whom I take to hospitle
”ya me…. I was having a walk then I see you … so came to have a talk with you…. Thanks for saving me” he said with a smile…. his smile is indeed beautiful but I feel some bad vibes in that smile… maybe I am too much thinking
”oh it’s my duty as a doctor anyway I am Riddima Das” I said forwarding my hand
”oh nice name…. I am Aryan ”
”so how do you feel now”
”much better after seeing you” he said starring at me… how can he feel better after seeing me… I am not a walking medicine
”ha ha such a nice joke…” I said avoiding the awkwardness I felt ….
We talked too many things…. even I felt some kind of relieve after talking to him…. sometime I felt I am telling too much things to him … he is such nice joker and I think he is a good one though I felt bad vibes around him
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I was thinking about Vansh…. I didn’t see him these days…. Where can be he…. is he have a place to stay …. does he eat or drink? does the non humans have digesting system? does he have a heart? is there blood in his body…
”Thinking about me? ”
”huh! you startled me ….. ” I said looking at the Vansh who is smirking at me ..
” miss me?” is he mad why should I miss him… huh!!! idiot
”why would I? anyway when did you come…. don’t you have manners to knock before come inside… ” I said showing my fake anger…. inside I was super happy seeing him again….
” I just ago came then saw you were in deep thinking…. maybe about me”
”puh!!!! by the way Vansh do you have a heart?”
”why? do you want to love that heart?” aish this man!!!! can’t he stop flirting ….
”nonsense I was just curious as you are not a human” I said looking aside… suddenly he drag my hand placed it in his chest…. oh!!! it’s beating…. I mean I can feel his heart beating….
” I have a heart but there is no love so stop falling for me” huh! is he gone mad to think I am falling for him… huh!!! nonsense….
”I am in my sense… so never think I am falling for you… ” I said raising my eyebrow….
”let’s see”
”uff anyway where were you these days”
” I had to some other things like giving proper punishments to sinners… ”
”oooo are you a judge in your world to give punishments….”
”more than a judge… like-” before he complete front door opened…. who the heck- Aryan!!!!!
”oh ho it looks like I am bad at timing…. I just wanted to surprise sister-in-law but never think their will be my loving brother too…. hello babe” Aryan said looking at me
”ARYAN!!!! you ? brother?” I said surprisingly
”what!! do you know him” Vansh asked giving me a glare
” ha he is friend of mine ” I said running my hand through my hair as I am confused
”ohhhh come on bro it’s normal to be friend with own brother-in-law”
” what the heck are you telling Aryan” Vansh said holding his collar
” SHE IS HER…. SHE IS LILY…. I AM GOING TO KILL HER TODAY ANYHOW” Aryan said giving me a death glare with his red eyes…. who is Lily…. As soon as Vansh heard Aryan he quickly looked at me confusingly and said ” No Aryan you are mistaken”
” let’s see who is mistaken ” saying this Aryan changed into a weird look!!! WHAT!!! is he not a human too….. oh my goodness…. why am I supposed to meet non humans these days …. and why is he so angry on me… not me someone called Lily…. I slowly took my steps backward and try to escape from there when he throws his powers towards me…. ahhh it’s paining… my nose is bleeding….?
”Riddima where is your necklace?” Vansh asked … necklace …. how he knows it… and why that is important to here….. I touched my neck …. where is it
”Are you talking about this” Aryan said showing my necklace…. ho….how my necklace with him….
”how ? how ” I can’t talk because of pain I felt in my head…..
Flash back shows Aryan taking off the necklace while talking with Riddima…. she was busy with talking him looking at the sky and garden… so he secretly took off that with a evil smirk….
‘‘ to take off that damn necklace I have to act and get close to you babe…. sorry for betraying… you are too innocent and believe strangers too quickly… ” Aryan said with his evil smirk…. ” you bastard!!! ” I curse at him but again he throws power at me making me weaker ….
” Aryan stop it” Vansh screamed but Aryan again and again throw his power at me …. it was like someone hitting my head continuously…..
”Ayan stop it!!!!!!” Vansh kicked him and pinched him hardly… but somehow Aryan got chance to throw a knife at me… I tried to move away but I was more than weak I thought so I got stabbed …. tears falling down… it is an unbearable pain…. I looked at my tummy which is bleeding heavily …. Is this how I supposed to die?
I try my best to escape from there though I have no energy …. but I failed and collapse on to the floor …. My eyes become heavier…
”ARYAN I SAID STOP IT…. I WAITED AS YOU ARE MY BROTHER BUT NO MORE… YOU BASTARD” Vansh cursed out of his lungs and then ….. then he turned into a different look…. what is happening to him…. My eyes wide seeing the new look of Vansh… he is scary…. he looks red like fire and have two wings and exactly look like a devil…..
wait !!!!! is he really the king of hell? Lucifer? Satan? nooooo now I can see Vansh fight with Aryan and he looks scary more than a ghost in horror movies…. my eyes becoming blurry and heavier…. all I heard before my eyes get shut I heard Vansh shouting,
”ARYAN YOU DID A GREAT MISTAKE MESSING WITH THE KING OF HELL”
So he is really the king of hell…. oh no now don’t tell me that I crack jokes with king of hell…What a ridiculous joke!!!!!!
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so how is this chapter?😋😋😋😋 There are more 2000 words….
59 Comments
Superb episode✨
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I think maybe because of their attitude and their behaviour😋 Actually I admire them ….. They start from zero and and came a long way to this much success …. 💜💜 They are billionaires but yet they are humble and childish like us…. and their song have deep meanings…. so I like BTS…. 💜💜💜 😀😀
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I am sure Vansh will save her..
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Awesome episode Rishii Riddhima even in that situation she is thinking about her jokes and I had a doubt how Aryaan found out Riddhima as lily before Vansh eagerly waiting for next update Happy Friendship Day
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