Chapter 2
Here is the link for the last part:
chapter1
“Enough is enough….!!! Why don’t you guys stop this nonsense right here?. For god’s sake stop all these nonsense right here..?” Om shouted on top of his voice.
His voice echoed the whole room and there was an utter silence. Nobody spoke anything. Anger was clearly written on Om’s face, his eyes were red and his fists were tightly clenched. Om poured his heart out.
“Why don’t you guys stop torturing me? What happiness do you get by seeing me suffer? Why do you scratch the old wounds? Please let me live my life peacefully. I have had enough of this. You guys never did anything for me at least this time give me some peace. I’m living this life only on somebody’s insistence. I have no interest in life, i already feel like living in a hell….Please don’t make it more miserable to live in.”
Tears fell from his cheek and he looked tired mentally. He stumbled onto the chair and he started again
“You guys could never be good parents….at least try to be good human beings. Let me live my life like this and please stop discussing about issues which wont happen in my life again”
By this time jhanvi started to cry miserably by hearing the word “NEVER BE GOOD PARENTS” and tej had guilt written all over his face. Om stood up and started pacing towards his room just when he heard shivay say
“Om, at least eat your breakfast….”
“No, shivay…My hunger died…”
“Par puttar….” dadi started
“Dadi please…”
He had no strength to talk to anyone and slowly he trotted to his room.
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[About an hour later]
Om was still in his room leaning on the couch immersed in his thoughts and his mind wandered back to the day when he went into ishaana’s ward.
For people to understand here is the link to the prologue:
{ https://www.tellyupdates.com/alone-shot-1/ }
He entered the room to find ishaana lying on the bed with tubes connected all over her body and she lay like a lifeless body. He din’t know how she would react if she gets to know that her baby died even before breathing its first breath. Slowly he went toward her and laced his finger in her hand and slowly tightened his grip on her hand. He was shocked when he heard her say
“My surprise is no longer a surprise which you wouldn’t get…!”
Her voice grew extremely slow and her face looked pale. It seems that she is speaking those words for Om.
“Om will you miss me…?”
“Don’t say that…understand. If you die, I’ll die with you.”
“Now, you don’t do that…promise me…whatever happens to me you will stay strong and not take a refugee in drugs but help shivay bhaiyaa in business and don’t forget your passion and do keep smacking rudra for his silly jokes and antics..”
Now he smiled at that…
She continued…. ” and mere lame baal vale praani please find someone better than me and marry her ok…!
Om broke his silence and said
“I promise this to you because i believe that you are inseparable from me. I believe that you will be safe and i believe that god can never take you away from me. I trust you and the god. I know that nothing will happen to you and maybe that’s the reason I’m promising you.”
She smiled at him with tears in her eyes and said
“Will you go get me my favourite tulips….for me…!”
Om stood up and said “I’ll be back”.
“Om I love you and take care…”
He kissed her forehead and said “You too take care…”
“Oyee…say i love you too…”
“Ok baba I LOVE YOU SO MUCH”
And both of them hugged each other tightly and departed and after a few second Om left ishaana’s ward to get her tulips somewhat feeling better.
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[AFTER A HALF ANHOUR]
Om came back to find shivay and Shakti waiting for him. Helplessness and sadness was written over thiere faces while he saw Shakti speaking to the receptionist. The atmosphere was absolutely still, Om could hear his own footsteps and except for the woman at the receptionist desk they were all for themselves. Om rushed towards shivay because he was afraid of the nearest possibility ahead of him.
“Shivay….What happened…?”
Shivay took long breaths and held Om’s shoulder tightly and said
“Ishaana’s dead”
These words shook Om and the tulips in his hands fell off. He suddenly stumbled and started to cry helplessly repeating the words
“She cheated me…she left me all alone “
He was brought back to the real world by a knock at the door. He turned to around to see his Anika bhabhi with a tray in her hand waiting for him.
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So here is it, the second instalment. Hope you guys liked it.
Many of you had doubts about the pairing. I seriously support gauri-omkara rather than ishaana-omkara. But i liked to watch them together on the screen. They were eternal. I din’t like the way the CV’s ended her character and not giving a proper justification to her role. So that’s what made me write his one. After ishaana’s death om will be living a life with no interest and that how i will introduce gauri.
The way om and ishaana were married will be revealed in the upcoming episodes.
Hope you guys loved it. Please do comment and continue your support.
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Wonder3112.
13 Comments
Emotional one.. You know what.. I’m also writing ff with this concept.. but I’m writing on ishkara..
Fabulous one.. update next one soon..
Very emotional. Feeling sad 4 Om. Upload nxt part ASAP
Wonderful….I loved it….N thx for a justified ending to Ishana….I wanted to see it in the show so badly….
Superb and emotional episode
It was really nice….read both the parts of dis ff….waiting 4 nxt….
Om was superb….nd episode was superb…..do post next part soon….
Awesome…loved it waiting for next update soon
Awesome
Excillent epi..
It is awesome dear friend
Amazing and emotional… ishkara.. ??
I felt bad..reading the end part…your emotions reached me
Amazing
Awesome?
AWESOME EMOTIONAL? INTERESTING NICE SUPERB???
Sorry for late comment?