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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA

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Hi guys, I am not new here. I used to comment in ffs, mostly in Raglak ffs. That time I wasn’t a registered member. Anyways here I am presenting a TS on Raglak. This is my first attempt so hope you all will like it. So here is the intro of my TS.

Ragini-She is a beautiful girl, has moral values. But she is really very modern and very outspoken. She is really very rich and pampered by everyone of her family. But she is not spoiled, she is brought up in USA.
Laksh-He is really spoiled and pampered by everyone of his family as he is the only son of his family. He has too much ego and he doesn’t let anyone to insult him and if anybody does so then he is ready to give harsh punishments to them.
Annapurna-Laksh’s mother. Here she is a biggest goon and a business woman. She is very cruel and everyone calls her as ‘Annapurna Devi’.
Daksh(played by Naman Shaw)-He is elder brother of Ragini and he is an IAS police officer. Laksh and Daksh are enemies because Daksh loves Laksh’s younger sis Uttara.
Shekhar-Ragini’s father. He is a best business man and is really very famous.
Janki-Ragini’s mother. A simple woman. She is house wife.
Ramprasad-Annapurna’s brother. He is very loyal to Annapurna.
Sahil-Ramprasad’s son.
Nikhil-Ramprasad’s other son but he is really very nice.
Mansi-Ragini’s best friend.
Sneha(played by Krystal D’Souza)-Ragini’s sis and Sahil’s girlfriend.
Uttara-Laksh’s sis.

Guys how was the intro of my first story? Should I continue this? Please tell me through your comments. I want you all to comment. So pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee shower your comments.. I am waiting…

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89 Comments

  2. Bela on

    Hello, this was an interesting start. I am having a rough time trying to think of sweet AP as a ‘goon’ ???
    Really looking forward to your story?

    P.S. Is Sahil negative?

    • Riya_Mitra on

      Hi Bela, Thanks a lot for commenting. I’ll try to post the first shot soon. And about Sahil then I have not yet decided about his character dear.

  6. Fairy on

    Riya tu hai …omggg?????wow wow wow…frst of all thnk god tu registered ho gai???????..wohoo!!!!? Superbbbb storyline dear…issh!!! Ap devi??? by god;!!really interestng…..hehe let’s see how laksh n rags wl meet up n fall in love????m soooo happpy to see u yaar sacchi? waitng eagerly for ur update..keep rockng n stay blessed sweetheart???loatz of love umaaah???????

    • Riya_Mitra on

      Haa hum hi hai. At first tell me how are you? Kitne barso baad humlog baat kar rahe hai haina? And yeah I’ll update the first shot as soon as possible. Love you too my di and thanks a lot for commenting

    • Riya_Mitra on

      Thanks for commenting. And yes I am totally shocked after seeing your comment in my ff.

  8. mahavir on

    hey chotiii….!! its really nice to see u writing dear…!! keep it up..!! nd all the best..!! love u :-*

    urs maha di,,