Hello everyone
I m back with last shot of A SIMPLE LOVE STORY…
Sorry for late….
Sooo let’s begin…..
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Let’s continue
Next morning
Swara and sanskaar came down and he was just teasing her secretly and she was blushing like hell.
Then swara came in kitchen and started preparing breakfast . suddenly sanskar came and started his drama cum romance as sujata was also there.
SANSKAAR- dost please make halwa … please
SWARA- no not today
SANSKAAR started crying sitting on a chair next to her.
SWARA (thinks)- such a dramebaaz…huhhh
Seeing him Ragini and Sujata were laughing because it was his routine when swara says no for something but Swara was shocked and numb because sanskaar was silently caressing her waist under her saree… (what a shameless creature mami or sister in law k samne romace..)
SANSKAAR (holding her bare waist and caressing it seductively ..) please na dost
SWARA- han han ok I will make halwa you go (in a low voice) sanskaar please leave me …. Please
Seeing her pleading he smiled and left..
Like this time passed…. days turned into months and both were living happily with eachother.. their love increased day by day .
After 5 months
There is a function going on in MM.. it is the birthday party of SANSKAAR’s DADI.
A beautiful girl in blue saree is welcoming all the guests… and everyone is praising her…..
LADY 1- sujata ji your daughter in law is very sanskari.
LADY 2-han ji see how she managed the whole house warna kon ladki without husband k support k rehti h aaj k tym m.
SUJATA ( overwhelmed )- hmmm I know that my SWARA is the best.
Like this everyone was talking and on the other side
SWARA- I m feeling hell tired today and very restless too … ohh god help Sanskaar to reveal the truth safely.
SUJATA- swara beta where is sanskaar..
SWARA (Stammering )- wo ma wo…yaah he is sleeping he was feeling tired
SUJATA- ok beta..
Swara signs in relief
Now its cake cutting tym and everyone was clapping suddenly Swara faints
SUJATA- ohh god I told her to eat something but no… she is such a careless girl. Hey bhagwan laksh chore swara ko utha or room m le chal or ragini tu doctor ko bula…..
Suddenly a girl comes in front and says- I m doctor let me check her
She checks swara and comes out
Doctor- sujata ji congratulations .. ur going to be a dadi soon Swara is 1 month pregnant .
Sujata and all family members get shocked in mean time swara comes out and was about to go
SUJATA called her.
SUJATA- SWARA (shouts) chii today I m ashamed to call u my daughter
SWARA( shocked)- ma.. par hua kya..
SUJATA- ma mat bol… u did this with us .. chii we thought that u sacrificed ur life for sanskaar but u r doing ayashiyan ( profligacy) with ur lover…
SWARA ( on a verge of tears )… ma ye aap kya kh rhe ho..
Everyone started gossiping .
SUJATA ( with disgust )- kiska ganda khoon paal rhi tu … tell me
SWARA ( still not getting anything and crying vigorously )- ma I m not getting anything.. someone please tell me ragini tujhe to pta hoga( ragini made a disgusting face like she did a crime ) laksh u tell na
Before she can ask someone else she felt a burning sensation on her cheek ,,,,, yes Sujata slapped her…
SUJATA (angry)- just get lost from my house … I said get out ..U don’t deserve living in this house .. what u thought haan that we will never come to know that ur pregnant with someone’s child …you played with us … are mujhe to tabhi samajh jana chaiye tha when u said a yes for marriage ..
Swara gets happy as well as shocked ….. happy because she is pregnant and shocked because of there thinking …
SWARA ( still crying)- ma believe me ..its not any illegal child … ma its ur
Suddenly Sujata pushed her and she was about to fall but someone save her in the nick of time … he is none other than ACP SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI
SWARA ( with a relief )- sanskaar
SANSKAAR- ( cupping her face) swara why are u crying …
SWARA (still crying and sobbing like a kid)- sanskaar see na what ma is saying ….she she is saying that our baby is illegal and its not your ( this line made her cry vigorously ).
SANSKAAR ( happy because of her pregnancy )- shhh …. No jaan don’t cry ….. mera bacha why are u crying han calm down ( hugs her and she sobs)
Everyone gets shocked seeing Sanskaar in his uniform …
SUJATA (shocked)- sanskaar beta ur fine…
Everyone questions him the same but he just ignored everyone ..
SANSKAAR ( rudely shouts)- constable … arrest ms. Janki ( sanskaar’s bua)
Listening him everyone gets another shock that why he is arresting her.
ms. Janki- what I did..
SANSKAAR- what you did.. u tried to kill me my mother oh no sry my soo called mother and tried to defame us and take our property ( everyone gets shocked listening to this revealation) I have proofs against you .. and even arrest warrant … rest we will talk in police station .
Constable arrest her….
The police takes her and he takes swara and was about to go
SUJATA- beta what are u doing… THIS GIRL…
SANSKAAR ( shouts)- maaaa.. THIS GIRL have some name and that is SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI ….and yaah one last thing whatever she is saying is true…
And now she is tired and need rest..
He leave with a stern face
SUJATA- I m sryy beta… she cries
All the family members left to there rooms being ashamed because they knew what is there mistake
Time takes a leap of 8 months and the screen shifts to a hospital.
A lady is seen holding 2 babies in her hands and a man is just admiring 3 of them or we can say his small family…
SANSKAAR- thank you swara for these two beautiful gifts to me..
SWARA- but still I want something
SANSKAAR- why are u asking ..tell me ..
SWARA- sanskaar I know that u can’t forgive them but just talk to them.. we will live separate but please include them in our happiness please… its there right too
As we know he can’t deny her …so he just talked to them …( guys I don’t want to forgive them sryy)
AT HOME… THEIR SWEET HOME
In night.. on bed
SWARA- thank u soo much I love u..
SANSKAAR- I know and I love u too
And they were about to kiss but the twins started crying ….
SANSKAAR- ha ha ha mere romance k dushamans abi se hi jealously start and yes my babies
BOTH TOGETHER – WE LOVE U TOO
AND SCREEN BLURS ON THEIR HAPPY FACES …
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DONE… AS U ALL KNOW IT WAS MY VERY FIRST ATTEMPT AND I COMPLETED IT…SO PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES
AND IT WAS THE END EVERYONE PLEASE COMMENT LAST TIME .. IF U R NOT ABLE TO COMMENT JUST MESSAGE ME PERSONALLY .. ONLY ONE SMILE WILL BE ENOUGH FOR ME…..
now tata bye bye take care ….love u all and ,,,,
THANK You for ur support
Your~ simran
42 Comments
Awesome dear I loved it. Do come with new story I will be waiting??????
thank u soo much dii
will try to come with a new story
Nice dear
thank u soo much dii
Awsm
thank u soo much dii
Awesome
thank u soo much anu
Awesome dear…..
thank u soo much dii..
Awesome..tc..
thank u soo much dear
awesome dear
thank u soo much dear
awesome come with new story
thank u soo much dear
will definitely try.. thank u once again
Awesome ??
thank u soo much dear stg
Loved it
aww thank u soo much dear Independent
Awesome …..loved the story….do come with a new story
Would be waiting???
thank u soo much dear vanisha
will definitely try.. thank u once again
Loved it dosth. At last swasan got a sweet cute family.
haha thank u soo much dear friend ezra…
i love their cute family only ..
not that dozen people
Nice
thank u soo much Tani
Awesome….
thank u soo much dear Yamee
Awesome dear loved it come up with another swasan story
thank u soo much dear Chaitu
will definitely try.. thank u once again
Sorry for such late cmnt, I was stuck somewhere that’s why not get time. By chance when I opened my Gmail I got to know that you posted it not only but also ended it whyyyy you end so soon see I am angry from you now I wanted more and more…. Waise I can okay if you again come with new story but yes only you have time.
About this story it’s just fabulous and we’ll written. The way you presented each and every thing was perfect. Specially this part Sanskar’s naughtiness, and Swara blush just superb. Glad Sanskar didn’t forgave anyone they should ask Swara before blaming her but no just character certificate.
its ok dii don’t be sorry….
haha as u know it was a ss so due to my exams i thought why not to make it a six shot
so i did it ..
don’t be angry di .. sorry
and i will try for a new story..
and omg thank u soo much for praising me but its because of u only warna m to post karne hi nahi wali thi 2nd part ……
so thanks to u..
haha it was my wish to not to forgive them warna sanskaar to dyalu hi h.. glad u liked it
Awesome….
thank u soo much dear
just suprb yaar
thank u soo much dear anu for being a part of this journey
superb nice ff
thank u soo much dear
Rini
Sorry for veryyyyy late comment dear.
Fabulous story…..I loved it. This part is awesome….lil cute Swasan’s romance….Sanskaar’s support for swara….Sanakaar’s decision……lovely part dear!
Don’t know if u started another story or not….if not then come back soon.
its ok dear … i can understand …and thank you soo much
no no i haven’t started another story …but i will definitely try
loved this cute story
it was not that simple girl… but u rocked it