Hi guys… It’s an os… Well, it’s a simple os… No thrilling no suspense… Nothing… Just a simple os… I am asking sorry before only if you feel bore…
So let’s start…
He is sitting in mandap… In front of him one priest is chanting mantra… Not only he… But there is many guy… Who are sitting in mandap… Actually it’s a samoohik bibah…
The volunteers announced in mike to bring the respective brides… A man is announcing the names…
Rahul dhaban… Shakshi goyenka…
Aditya nayak… Hema kureshi…
And this way no. 10…
Sanskar maheshwary… Swara bose…
Sanskar slightly up his head to see his bride… He is 1st time seeing her… He sees a fair midium hight girl came there… Wearing simple red saree and some simple jewelry… She comes and sits beside him… Marriage complete… Sanskar looks at her who is seeing everyone standing beside him… Well they have no family so no bidai and no crying… They arranged for lunch… So after lunch they thank the volunteer committee…
Sanskar looks at her and with low voice : chale??
She looks at him with her big big eyes then nodes… Both comes out… Sanskar starts her motorcycle… Well it’s not that filmy type dashing bike… It’s a simple type hero Honda…
Swara was standing at gate when sanskar comes and stops in front of her… She sits on bike holding the back…
Sanskar : listen…
Swara : ji..?
Sanskar : hold my shoulder or you may fall…
Swara : ji…
She hesitantly hold his shoulder… Sanskar drives towards home… When they reach its almost 8 in evening… Swara looks at the apartment… Some ladies were there… They are staring like she is an alien… Sanskar comes after parking bike in garage…
Sanskar : chalo…
She nodes and follow him… Both come in front of his small flat…
Sanskar opens the door with key…
Sanskar : one… One minute…
He walks in then puts his helmet and key on table… He goes to kitchen… Swara is scanning the flat… Small flat… Drawing area… Where only two chair and a table… Open kitchen… And two bedroom… He comes in front of her holding a glass and plate… Where some vermillion, some turmeric powder, some petals of flower and small diya was placed…
Sanskar (placed the glass in front of her feet) : well… I… Don’t know rituals… But i attended some of my friend’s marriage so there i saw this… So…
Sanskar smiles seeing her curvey lips… He does her arti… And put tilak… Swara push the glass full of rice and enters… The flat is simple one… Simple furniture… Sanskar lead her to bedroom…. There only one single bed… Sanskar hand over her a packets…
Sanskar : i bought this… You can wear if you want…
Swara nodes and take the packet… There is 3 saree… And 2 shalwar suit… Sanskar goes to washroom… Swara takes the shalwar suit… And looks for mirror… But there is only one small mirror from where we can only see our face… She press her lips then sees whether it’s her size or not… She pouts as it quite big… She folds the suit and takes the saree… Then again problem with blouse… So she decide to wear the same blouse she is wearing… Meanwhile sanskar comes…
Sanskar : you go change and handover her the towel…
She nodes and goes to washroom… Sanskar comes to kitchen for making dinner… Swara comes out and sees him in kitchen…
Swara : ji… What are you doing…
Sanskar (while chopping alu) : making dinner…
Swara : you go i will make…
Sanskar looks at her then smiles : its ok swara… We both are tired.. You do one thing you make the roti… I will make alun sabji… And there is the flour in that jar…
Swara nodes and engross in her work.. Both help each other for making dinner… But then another problem came… There is only one plate… No no Actually 2 plates… But the other plate is sooo dirty that by washing with water the dirt will not go…
Sanskar makes a puppy face: sorry… Wo i was bachelor toh… One plate was enough… And yesterday i forgot to wash this…
Swara : it’s ok… You 1st eat then i will eat…
Sanskar: no… Look there is two boul… So we can keep our rotis on plate and divide the sabji in two bouls…
Swara smiles and nodes… Both done with dinner…
Sanskar scratches his head looking at his single sized bed… Thinks what to do… Swara comes there wiping her hands in her pallu…
Swara : ji what happened..
Sanskar : umm nothing… Just a small problem… I have single sized bed…
Swara : don’t you have any mat??
Sanskar : ya why??
Swara : give me that… I will make my bed on floor…
Sanskar grins widely : aaahhhh…. Right thats a great idea…
Sanskar fold the Quilt of bed and put it down… Swara looks confused… Then he up the bed and makes it stand vertically on floor with support of wall…
Sanskar spread one mat… Then place the quilt on it… Actually it’s a double bed sized quilt which was folded in a single bed sized…
Sanskar : arey why are you standing… Help me na…
Swara who was looking at him surprisingly… Comes in sense : han??…hmmm… But i thought…
Sanskar frowns: what…
Swara : umm nothing…
She hold the other 2 hem of the Sheet and both place it on quilt… Sanskar gives her the pillow and takes his bolster and makes it as pillow… Both are lyin6side by side… Facing the roof..
Sanskar : you work at a kids school right??
Swara turns to him putting both palm beneath her head… : yes… I am a music teacher there…
Sanskar turns to her same way : sorry… 2 months before only i got my new job… But promise slowly slowly i will give you everything… A big flat and furnitures…
Swara : it’s ok… We will do everything…
Both smiles…
Sanskar : where is your school…
Swara : xyz place…
Sanskar : oh ho… It’s quite far from my office… But don’t worry… We will leave from house quite early only…
Swara : no its ok… I will go buy bus…
Sanskar : no no… I will drop… Now sleep… Good night…
Swara : good night…
Next morning…
Swara and sanskar…
Both are in kitchen… Swara is washing utensils… While sanskar is packing their lunch box…
Sanskar : swara… Are you done??
Swara keeps the last utensil for drying… : yes…
Sanskar : oh ho… You didn’t finish your juice…drink it…
Swara drinks… Sanskar puts both lunch box in his and her’s bag…
Both come out and lock the door…
One lady : arey sanskar beta… Is she your??
Sanskar : my wife masi…
Swara takes blessings…
Both left…
Sanskar comes home being tired… Swara opens the door…
Sanskar smiles…
Swara gives her lemon water…
Sanskar : wo i give order for a double bed…
Swara nodes…
Swara : i have bought some things…
Sanskar : oh… Ok…
Swara : i am making dinner… You go freshen up…
Sanskar nodes… And then freshen up… He comes with some files and sits near kitchen…
Swara : arey… Ji… Why are you sitting here… Go inside…
Sanskar : why don’t you like my company?? ?
Swara blush slightly : no nothing like that… I just…
Sanskar : you know… When i found my 1st job i took this flat on rent… I used to feel like this walls are coming to eat me.. I felt so alone… So now if you are here… So why to be alone…
Swara smiles…
At dinner time…
Swara has washed other plate so both are having on their plate only…
Sanskar : swara… Why you decided to marry??
Swara looks at him… : 1st you tell…
Both gets up and walks to kitchen… Then starts to wash utensils… Sanskar is applying soap and swara is cleaning and drying….
Sanskar : i was an orphan… I come out from orphanage before 2 years… When i got my 1st job… Salary was low… And i told right i often feel alone… One day my orphanage aunty came and asked me to get married… But i denied cause of salary… Then before 2 months i got my new job… And for blessings of God this time salary is quite well… So just thought to marry…
Mean by both come in bedroom… And as usual both sleep on floor… Both are facing each other…
Sanskar : now what about you…
Swara : before 1 year my mom died… I never saw my father… He was an army and got death during some fights…
She sighs with a sad face… Sanskar slowly put his palm on hers which was placing on the mat… She smiles…
Swara : my mother last wish was to see me married… I took one year cause… I was searching for job… Before 6 months i got that… Then also no big family wanted to make me their daughter in law… Then i saw the add of samoohik vivah and i gave my name…
Sanskar : thank god… No one wanted to marry you… Warna… Mera kya hota…
Both giggles…
This way one months passed… Both are adjusting with each other… Knowing new new things about each other… Swara got to know sanskar play violin… While sanskar got amazed to listen her melodious voice…
After one month… Sanskar comes from office… Swara with smile welcome her…
Sanskar : hi… How was day…
Swara : good… Yours??
Sanskar shrugs his shoulder : as usual… Ummmm… Smell is good… What are you cooking…
Swara with a wide grin : a new recipe… One of my colleague told me…
Sanskar : that’s great… Umm swara here take this…
He gives her an envelope…
Swara while taking the envelope : what’s this…
Sanskar while going to room. : salary… You keep the amount of your house work… Rest give me i will keep it in bank…
Swara slowly : but why are you giving me… Keep it with you only… If i need i will ask…
Sanskar turns Immediately : no… You keep… I will ask from you… It’s your sansar… You only decide how much you will spend and how much to save…
He smiles and goes for freshen… Swara press her lips looking at the envelope and then sighs…
Next day she give her and his salary to sanskar to deposit it in bank…
After 3 months…
Sanskar : swara… You know i got some bonus… I am thinking to take you out for somedays… What say??
He asked her while entering in kitchen with a big smile ..
Swara : really?? But i don’t wanna go out now… Let’s buy a place where we can make our own house… We can go out at anytime… But we should make our own house 1st… Kab tak hum dusro ki ghar mein rahenge
Sanskar smiles looking at her… Thanks to god for sending her in his life…
Again months passed…
One day… It’s a fine Sunday… Both are at home…
Swara keeps a bucket full of clothes in bathroom… Sanskar goes there and smiles widely… He takes some soap studs and apply it on his face like full beard and some on his head… Then looks at the bathroom mirror…
Sanskar (mocking Amitabh bachchan) : rishte mein toh hum tumhare baap lagte h… Naam h sahenshah… Haiin…
Suddenly he hears some laughing sound… And sees swara laughing like hell holding door frame… Sanskar’s cheek grew red… And quickly turns and washes his face…
Swara : ji aaaappp????
Sanskar : han toh… What is funny…
He makes a puppy face…
Swara : i should took your photo… Oh god… I miss the chance…
Sanskar : swara (with fake anger)
Then smirks naughtily and apply some soap stud on her face also…
Swara : hawww…
She also apply… Both laughs… Then sanskar comes with his phone and takes their selfies…
It’s been one years they got married…
Today is their anniversary…
Early in the morning swara did puja and wakes up sanskar…
Swara : happy anniversary…
She makes him eat a laddu… Sanskar smiles with sleepy face then makes her eat the same laddu…
Sanskar : so what you will do for me today..
Swara : ummmm…. It’s a surprise….
Sanskar : a66a… Then i also have a surprise for you…
Sanskar : toh when you will give me that surprise??
Swara : ummm… At lunch time… And what about you…
Sanskar : after lunch…
Swara : ok…
Both hugs each other…
At lunch…
Sanskar : wow swara… You make this all… Oh thank you much…
He squalls happily… Swara all his favorite foods with a big cake and ice cream and also sanskar’s favorite khir kodom… (bengali sweet)
Swara knows… Sanskar only like this sweet from xyz shop… She 2st time try it in home…
She was looking at his face stopping her eating…
Swara : how is it…
She asked with a cross finger in hand…
Sanskar : more delicious than that shop…
He said with that sweet filled mouth… : thank you so much…
Swara laughs happily…
Sanskar : now you get ready… We have to go somewhere…
Swara nodes happily…
Sanskar stops his bike… Swara looks at something and gasp… She is having happy tears…
Sanskar park the bike and hold her by shoulder…
Swara with tears looks at him : sanskar ye…
Sanskar nodes : our house… Our dream house…
Swara : but one week before only you told its not completed…
Sanskar : i wanna give you surprise…
She smiles in tears and hugs him…
Sanskar : chalein??
Swara nodes…
It’s not a big house… It’s a small but enough for them… 3 rooms… One kitchen with dining… One drawing room… One balcony… Out side of the house… A narrow path leads to house door… There is enough place in either side of the path to make garden…
Swara is so happy…
Sanskar : swara… This is our house… I know now it’s empty…
Swara : but slowly slowly we will fill this with furnitures and other necessary things…
Sanskar smiles… Both shifted to their new house…
Both are cleaning and arranging things…
Sanskar :
Ei bhalo ei kharap
Oo prem mane mishti paap
Cholo mane mane diye pheli dobh
Tumi ami mile
(this only good this only bad
Love means sweet sin
You and me together let’s sink in this)
Both arrange their bed… Keeps pillow and cove the shit… Then sanskar holds swara’s hand…
Swara drags him while singing : Dujone mon take
Oo bendhe feli saathpake
Cholo choto khato kori vul chukh
Tumi ami mile
(let’s bound our heart in 7 vows and let’s do some small small wrong things together)
She drags him to kitchen and arrange their utensils and spices on proper shelf… After finishing that…
Sanskar back hugs swara and attach their cheeks while wrapping her tightly and push their head : Sajiyechi chotto ekphali sukh
Raji achi aajke brishti namukh
Tumi ami vijbo dujone khub
Vorsha dile
(i agree if rain comes then we will drench together in that if you give me faith)
Swara turns and join their head… Suddenly she heard thunder… She runs out and shivers as the cold rain drop fall on her…
She extend her hand to welcome… Then looks at sanskar who is watching her with smile… She drags him out : Dekho na ei akaal shrabon
Nemeche aaj hazar baron jene
(look at this non timer rain… It’s comes even after knowing thousands of interdiction)
Swara gets afraid for thunder and hugs sanskar tightly due to fear… Sanskar takes her in the house.. : Ho awaaj shune amay dako
Dhako chador amay kache ene
(ho call me after listening those sounds
And cover the sheet after bringing me near you)
He cover their drench body with a sheet… Both looks at each other… Both have an sweet smile conveying their love..
Sanskar lifts her in arm…
Swara palms his cheek : Ronge ronge voriye diyechi ghor
Vije gechi brishti namar por
Tumi ami ghor thekeo jajabor
Jachhi chole
(i have fill this house with colour… Drenched after rain… You and me are still nomad… Even after we are in home… We are still walking)
Sanskar places her on bed… Then comes close to her…
Sanskar : manzoor hai??
Swara : manzoor hai…
Sanskar smashed his lips with her… And they consumate their life…
After one year…
Swara and sanskar is gardening…
Swara : you will see… My flower will come 1st cause i know it’s a boy…
Sanskar : no… My flower will come out 1st… It’s my girl… Papa’s girl…
Both swara and sanskar wait for 9 months… Swara’s tree 1st gives flower… She squalls in joy looking at it… While sanskar makes a pout… Swara peck his pout…
Swara : i told..
But suddenly…. Aaaaaaaaahhhh…
Sanskar rushes to hospital with swara and she gives a birth of baby boy…
Aditya sanskar maheshwary…
Again after 3 years…
Sanskar laughs in happiness : yes i own… Look at my lili…
Sanskar bent down to reach hee tummy… : Princess come 1st… Papa is waiting…
Aditya : choti choti…
Swara laughs… This time she gives a birth of baby girl…
Samriddhi sanskar maheshwary…
This way… They decorate their life with happiness… They don’t give any expensive gifts or expensive surprises… But small surprises and gifts like making dishes… Doing ice cream party… And all… They ate happy with their simple life yet happy and sweet life…
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A/N
Some days before i was watching swasan vedio their helicopter ride and all… I told my didi… Kash… I also get a hubby or lover like him… Then she told me ‘ you should then marry ambani’s son… Cause none will waste their expensive money like this’
I thought yes… She is right… It’s all can suits only films and serials only… Expensive gifts… Decorations and all… In real life… What we do… I then look at my parents… At us… At our family… I am from a middle class family… We have own house… In our special days ma cook delicious food and we whole family eats them enjoying… Papa bought sweets some ice creams… Some time go for a movie… That’s all… We don’t need extra decorations extra surprises… Expensive gifts… We don’t have huge car… Mansions… But we are happy… So from that… I received this concept and just wrote…..
Sorry if you feel bad… And now for bengali song… You all know na i am a bengali… I can’t find any appropriate hindi song… So i use it .. Sorry
47 Comments
Fabulous loved it ???? sweet yet practical life…
Superb dear superb. Do write more. ?
Loved it…
Simple yet beautiful
Awesome
beautiful concept..sweet and simple..
loved it..and what u said in d A/N is very true..
im also bengali..stay happy..tc..
This is really sweet and beautiful story like real ….. Awesome
its fabulus
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It’s awesome dear??????????? so close to reality… I appreciate ur thoughts???
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???? so sweet. Loved it.Awesome.
Loving your works!
Its so real feels like its not any fiction story istead its a story of someone at our neighbour or near one
Awesome..loved it.
It’s simple and realistic.