EPISODE-4 Sirf Tum Hi Ho(JNDSD)……….
First of all for thanks support but still require more support and insipration from you all, still thanks to them who gave their valuable time. Yes sorry for bieng late.
The episode start with Vivdha is getting ready for abdul chacha’s home.
Viv: Maa I,m going to meet abdul chacha I will come soon.
Uma: hmm…okk, listen beta please can u bring my medicine while comming back.
VIV: ok maa… I will bring…Bye..
on the way speedy truck is moving toward Vivdha, she tries slow speed by putting breaks.
VIV: what happen, why this break are not working.
her bangs with truck….. BANG………she is severly injured everyone comes their.
Man1: catch the man…. he runs away…
Man2: ye to ek aurat…
Man3: let take here to hospital inform her family….
VIvidha is taken to hosital…. and everyone else reach there….
Rav: excuess abhi-abhi kissi lady laya h gaya unka accident hua h.
nurse: Emergency ward…..
every reach there…… and inquire doctor…
Rav: How is she….
doc: Sorry….
rav: sorry what? say clearly….please….
doc: we unable safe her….. when she was brouht here she lossed so much blood, during operation…. we were unsuccessful… Matlb she is no more… She is dead….
dead…..
Atharv:……. VIvidha (Atharv shots) oh that was just a dream.
he all sweat, and red teary eyes,….hearing atharv cry Riya enter(AS know MUnural thakur).
I will like to tell you that she gonna have very different role to play in upcomming episodes.
Riya: Sir, is there all right, (She bring water for him)
Atv: yes, and thanks for water….. (with grave expression on his face).
Riya is holding Atharv’shand and constantly staring at him with smile….
Rya: Sir tell me na what happened, in serious concering mode.
athv: riya please leave me alone and go.
But riya request repeatedly, Atharv gets Angry
Athv: Get the hell out of here amd leave me alone.
riya gets scared and started crying and leaves the room.
atrv: thinks for while and realise his mistake (and goes to riya),
Atrv: excuess riya….. (he cough) riya looks toward him.
RIya: (whiping her tear) sir, MR. Seth.
Athv: Ishhh…..(holds her hands) sorry riya, I shouldn’t have behaved with you in that way,sorry….
Riya : (shocked and stunned) its okk sir.
athv: ok leave lets go for coffee.okk
They both go for coffee and atrv once say sorry and gift her a new watch for her good work.
Vividha is shown…. getting ready, shouts vivdhita get ready we have for your aaj pata chale gya ki kitni Shaitan ho tum.
Ind: kya vivdha jaab dekho humari beti ko dhanti rahti ho. ha nahi to. todhi bhot to Shaitan ho gi akahir apany papa pr gayi h.
viv: bas dadi, no need to take his name, she is my daughter, from seven he never turn to see us.
then.
indu: iska matlb to ussey pyaar nahi karti, to kyu nahi shadi karti karle, kyu apna naam
vividah Athrav Sujata rakha tuney bole, ha nahi to. beta hum ko maat padao tumere maa ki maa h hum.
viv:(with tear in eyes) enough let me leave, usko bol day na ki, I’m waiting for her in car.
vivdhita comes down strairs and Indu direct her.They reach school.
At night……..
Athv: maa where are you….
suj: packing our clothes.
Athv: why?
Suj: bhul gaya na,phir we to go Delhi to see Abdul Chacha, remember.
Atrv: oh! my clothes I have to do my packing.
suj: uski fikar tu maat kar wo mainay tere phele kr diya.
atv: Thanks maa, tu kitni acchi maa, I love you maa.
Phone rings…… athav answer calls.
Athrv: h boliye riya kya baat h.
Riya: sir wo delhi m plant k liye land clear h ho gayi h. you have to leave tomarrow.
okk then book your ticket too okk…Atrv gives good news tom sujata.
In morning…………………….
They all take take their flight reach Delhi winds blows vividha turn feels something ye kaisa aajeb sa Eshaas h.
atv ye kya ho raha h mujhe pata nahi. riya aaj se nayi kal ki shurwat.
They go abdul chacha home but atahrv leaves due to urgent work
Vivdaha call her teacher ma’am can take to vidhita please….. vividha inform here that she would unable turn up to pick her
and suggest her to take a taxi for today. vividha smiles disconnect phone.
while cross road she she sleeps and man brakes,(who is he ATHARV)
Atv: are you allright…sorry beta.
vid: its ok Uncle, she smile.
Atahrv sees her wound elbow and knew takes her to his car.
Athv: Beta where do live, (She informs him his address) they drive toward her house.
Atrv: riya please first aid pass karna please.
he apply dettol her wounds slowly.
vid: uncle may say something.
atrv: smile say yes khaiye, but tell me your name.
vid: do know you are really smart and handsome.
atrav and all in car smile, he thanks her.say you are also like a cute doll.
atv:riya keep it(first aid) in his place.(she takes it).
vid: uncle, aunti bhut preety h.
athv: she is my secretary, but do know your preetiest girl I ever made.
on the way she talking with athv…..non-stop
atv:(in hs mind) bikul Vividha jaise ye. unki jiase inoscence, cuteness, baate.
vid: uncle aap mujhe se frndship karo gaye.
athv: aap okk pakka.
they shake their hand and mean while reach they reach her home. ok Vidhita syas bye they leave.
At Night………………
vividha sees her wound beta how did this happened. she smiles and narrate her coplete incidence.
viv: okk have to say thanks to him okk.
vid: no mumma, he is my friend and in friens there no sorry and no thank you… she smiles along with vividha
on other side Atharv also smiles and sujata enter and see him smiling and thanks to god.
PRECAPE: SUJATA in temple praying to good, taking parikarma of tree holding pooja thali she collided with some some………
TU PAGAL H KYA( sujata shocked)………. where is your mother……… she sees her and mixed reaction happiness and tears and lady and take sujata blessings…….
sujata appoloze to lady………….. Riya with her sister talking………………
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Please do tell me where did I go wrong and my mistake please motivate and inspire me and if it ennui please do tell me.
thanks for support and encouragement keep reading Sirf Tum Hi Ho(JNDSD). and enjoy JNDSD
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22 Comments
Nice
thans for your time.
story line is very good…
keep move on…
@nikh thanks for your support and time.
Nice story…???….
precap…..?
Vidita& atharv…dialogues …superb???..
Unite athrv & vivitha soon..
U have good talent in writing…keep writing..
We are here to support u…
Plzz…post next epic soon as possible..
thanks @sweety for continues support yes for this made story because they created mess here, yes definately I will try bring them back but for some twist yr.
Awesome story RAone
I like vidita dialog & her character so sweet
Keep going… Bye
@ ragini thanks for your time and support. Keep ejoying
nice plsssss try to update fast
@aisha thans for your time and support yes will try to update it soon as possible.
Keep reading.
I hope that u were d writer of jndsd ….
Awesome creativity yaar
Excited for d precap
Gud skills , keep going…
@sandy this such big compliment for me from your side.
thanks for support and time.
Thank u keep reading and enjoy.
Your way of story writing is awsome ?. Keep going on . I hope atleast in ur story vitharv will unite forever without any drama .And one request pls let Riya to realise the fact of vitharv soon.bcz can’t see any other girl so close to atharv other than vividha. OK. All the very best???
@xyz ya thanks for your time and support. ya riya has to play an important role in upcomming episode. please keep reading for twist and lot of spice.
It’s very good.. Perecap is interesting update sooner
thanks for your time and support, ya will try to update it sooner as possible, keep reading and enjoy jndsd and my FF Sirf Tum Hi Ho(jndsd). Thanks @anonymous.
Hii,RAone i like ur ff very much..its so nice.. I am not a fan of jndsd till i read ur stry..bt now i am so attracted to this stry…& i decided to watch this serial..to see their onscreen chemistry…i read ur ff just for timepass…after reading i can’t stop me from commenting.. Any way ,
ALL THE BEST???& update soon..
MAY GOD BLESS YOU ..
thanks for suport I reallyneed that…. ya but watch it first phase…..
and keep reading…..
Yae i am watching first phase in hot star..it is superb..no words..???..i know that current track is dragging…but i like the acting of vikram & shivani …as vivitha & atharv…they are super onscreen jodi…??
If i didn’t see ur ff…may be i will not watch jndsd…bcz..i had not seen any promos in the channel about this serial…such a beautiful serial..how can they avoid it!!!??? Kamaal hai….?
Actually mujhe serials pasand nahi dha..lekin mujhe jndsd bahut bahut pasand aaya
Thank you goes to you
ya same here I don’t like to watch serial but because my maa I watched it, also watched it and suddenly liked it. this is first drama, love serial which liked because of there on screen chemistry and dialogue…. and more reason is Shivani because of her cute and killing smile, after strech drama I stoped watching it just reading daily update…. Glad that you like that…… once again thanks for your appreciation.
thanks for suport I reallyneed that… watch phase this that is good