EPISODE NO: 5 Sirf Tum Hi Ho(Jndsd)……
The episode starts with vividha and vidhita are driving toward School……. VIvidha informes Vidhita….
Viv: Beta will not be able pick up today… so sorry beta….. I have lot of work to do..
Vid: gets happy and pray Uncle please make meet with good please….. she smiles….
Viv: aare ye kya m tumko bata rahi ki will not will and you appear to be happy and smiling… bhut shaitan ho gaye ho tum..
vid: nothing mumma….
they reach school…….
viv: ok beta bye-bye or shaitani ok….( and smiles)
vid: bye maa…(gives smile back and leaves)
riya and atharv seen discussing over plant….
Riya: sir we have to stay for some more days regarding work…
Athv: Riya I’m thinking to shift head office from Mumbai to Delh…
riya: that a cool idea sir….. but you not replace me na…..(with innosence)
Athv: No never, you how impt you are…..(riya gets happy)
Driver stops car…. sir, impt call, athv nodes head in yes… he found himself near vidhita school…. and thinks about her…
Vidhita school gets over, she comes out look here there and finds Atharv.. she gets happy..
Vid: Thank U bhagwanji you completed my wish i will come your pakka and thank u…. (and runs towards him)
vid: hello uncle, how are you,
athv: hello(happy and surprise) aap yaha
vid: uncle mumma busy thi na isse liye nahi aayi, can please give a lift..
Atarv: why not (he open door and make vidhita sits)
they both look at each other with love and smile…..and driver comes..
drv: Sir, chale ….
Athv: why not whose call was it,
drv: Sir, girlfriend tha sorry….
vid: (to driver) uncle please say thank u to her from my side, because of her I was able to meet my friend…
they all smile at Innosence of vidhita…
vid: dost, may I ask you something (in cute curious tone)……
athv: what… why not ? ask me anything….
Vid: ye girlriend or boyfriend kya hota h.?…. with cuteness…
athv:(answer) girlfriend wo hoti, jo ladki aap ki bhut aachi dosti hoti wo girlfriend hoti or jaab koi ladka kisse ladki ka
aacha frnd hota wo uski girlfriend hoti, wo ssath m ghumtay ha, gift share kartey, apna kaha shre karey h…..
Vid: uncle m mere boyfriend bono gay…..
ath:(smile) aap ka kyu nahi, aap kitni payari ho, ok aap meri grilfriend or m aap ka boyfriend ok…
Vid: aunti aapko koi problem to nahi, you are staring at us,
riya: (get embrace) no beta… its okk…
Athrav thinks about Vivdha, ye bilkul aap ki jaise wo hi smile, innocent kuch attachment sa lagta aap se or choti bachi to dekh kr lagta hum
ek dusre se kisna kisi door se jude h…..meanwhile..
Vid:uncle aap mera lunch finish karnay help karo ge….aap ne bola tha, they food share….(athv smiles) say okk…
vid: see uncle jackfruit(kathal)… my mumma good…
ath: let me taste this,(he taste it, remember Vivdha his kathalwala incidence and smile spread over his face)…it is thank you….
meanwhile they reach home atharv give her a cool love wrist band, she gaves sweet kiss on Athrv chicks and runs( he smiles and leave)
later at Night: In vividha house in vidhita did finish your tiffin and how it was…
Vid: it was awesome, and do you know mere boyfriend ko bhi bhut aaya( she realise she spoke truth and everyone shock)
Vid: what? boyfriend when… ye band kisa tumhare haath m… jaldi batao…
vid: off oo maa… who many question will you ask me.( she narrate her everything) bas mumma
indu: ha nahi to, dekh aakhir poti kiss kin ha…. indumati ki, hum to dekh ladkay martay the.
all smile…… and other on dinnig table smiles and tells Sujata about vidhita complete story about girl and all smile….
Next day morning……. vividha finds Vidhita ready….. she request mumma please take me to temple I want to meet and thank bagwanji please…she agree..
she finds car tyre puncture and decide to take auto….. on way they meet Raghav(siddarth arora as many of you know)
rag: vivdhaji where, may drop you
Vid: No, thanks Raghav ji, I’m will manage..
rag: please sit na, please…….
they sits at back seat of door… she drives away… vivdhita request to play Eshass song….he plays…
Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein haye
Nainon mein haye
Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise nain yeh tere
Nainon mein bansiya jaise nain yeh tere
viv: don’t why every time Iisten his song I feel atrhrv near…
rag: adjust his mirror to see vividha: kya bataye hum aapko, ki bas taakte rahayte hum aap ko….
kitna chaite h hum aapko… kaise baataiye… song continues………
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain
Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain……… (imagine it)
OTHER SENCE: Riya talking to her sister….in skype….
riya: hello di how are you… or what about jiju wo kaise h….. or aap ki delivery aab h, bua dubara bua kaab bano gi mujhe…
riya sis: I’m and you are jiju is with me, is week kaabhi good news aa skati, or tu bata kaise h meri priccess…… sister..
what about your boss kuch hua kya…ye itni beautiful watch….
riya: i’m good di but sir ko kuch bolni pati m, or unhone mujjhe gift kiya…. or guess what i’m in delhi bas todha busy hu.
sis: waaa… waise aapnay jiju ka bare bata sayyad manyae dar ke….
riya: ok di bye sir aage,we to go for meeting or choti jiju ko mera hello…. bye love diii…. (call disconects)
they reach temple and sujata also comes vividha talking to raghav and thanks and turns sujata cross strairs…… they pray to god In temple….
vidhita goes for prayer where sujata was doing parikarma, they collided with each other…. and pooja thali falls..
Vid: haaa… TU PAGAL H KYA….. kya kr diya….opens eyes and finds sujata….
suj: shock, and start picking up thali……….
Vid: sorry,aunti galti se ho gaya…..
suj: koi bata nahi, it happen sometimes…..
vid: waise aap ka naam kiya h aunti
suj:(smile) sujata….why? what is your name,
vid: Suji aunti…..(make pagalwala athrv trade mark sign… victory symbol and teeth wide open…. Sujata looks shock….
sorry mera naam h vivdhita….. Vidhita Athrav Sujata….
sujata is shocked hearing this ask again….. she conforms VIvidha Athrav Sujata, her eys fill up tear and immediately hugs her….. vivdhita shocked……and sujata ask about her
mother she point toward vividha…says she is vividha athrav Sujata…..Vividha also sees her walk toward her sujata filled yp with happyiness….she comes and ask vivhita to take
her blessing and they take their blessing…..Sujata hugs with vividha…..
vid: mumma ye kon h…..
viv: wipes her tear, she is your dadi beta….or beta you go now please… (she leaves)
suj: ye meray atharv ki beti( mix happy and emotional)
viv: nahi chachi ye meri beti, meri vidhita, usnay to ssat saalo tak nahi dehha mujhe…. to usko kaise haak……
suj: per Vividha aap samjh nahi rahi wo mujbur tha…..
viv: kaisa majbhur m bhi to janu ki apni patni ko wahi shadi ki mandup pr chod aaya mujhe…..
suj: (gets angry) about but remember Athrav words, I can’t tell you.
viv: waja ho gi to aap bolo gi na chachi…..bas ye aapki poti ho sakti pr sirf beti meri h…. or ha chachi aapko vidhita ki kasam aap usko kuch nahi batay gi…..(about leave)…
suj:(interupt) aap kitna bhi unko door rakh lo ye pass aa.. jaye ge aap dekh lijiya ga vivdha…. she leaves….
She goes back……….in her car and vividha in shock got stuck, vidhita interupt……. and leave..
AT night while making her sleep she thinks about Sujata words and goes to flashback and remember his moments….. jana na dil se door plays(sad vesion)…..
sujata also thinks to unite athv and vivdha and vidhita….. was unable to fall sleep……
EPISODES END……….. with all are in one frame and jana na dil se (door plays sad version)
PRECAP: RAVISH FAMILY and VIVDHA family waiting outside hospittal “as if waiting for board results”……
ATHARV SEES VIVIDHA…………… Step forward toward her………… vividha feels someone hands over her shoulder and turns………
her eyes fill with tear and happiness and Athrav sees also fills up with tear seeing vivdha happy…………. she hugs……. and smile………Athrv so smile….
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40 Comments
Nice
thanks for support…. keep reading
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ya I will keep this in mind will writing next time…thanks for support.. keep reading
Nice
Please next part upload as soon as possible…. I can’t wait
hey thanks ragini for support… keep reading…..
Perecap.. they are gonna meet each other soon
wait for twist there milan gona be epic one……
thanks for support and keep reading
I will like to say sorry for hell lot typing error……. my keyborad is regularly troubling me….. but I will try not to repeat it again……… thanks everyone for your support…..
Hloo RAone…
Its going good yaar..??..I expect so many twists will be in next part..Is it???…dialogues are awesome….exited for pre cap..??..
I know how much you work hard…and also know our comments will boost you up….??..
Our support is always with you….God Bess you with these skills….so use it maximum….we expect…more and more from you…you ff is better than current track..??
Keep writing…update soon
All the best???
thanks swetty for ur regular support…….. thanks for reading MY FF…… thanks for boasting my cofidence……..
Srry a mistake…* bless….
its all cool this happen somtimes……. once again thanks……..
Hi raone, its so nice story… plz update soon as possible..I can’t wait for next part…so excited…I really like ur ff…
Any way..where r u from???
thanks for your support actually I live in lko but…………. me and vikram hails from the same land i.e. uttrakhand but diffrent region…… keep reading the My ff……….
superb no words to say
thanks for u your support dear…. thanks and keep reading….
Oooo its soooo nice
Vidhita atharva part was d best
Excited for d precap
Do u write short stories or novel if not start writing yaar ur creativity is awesome…
hey thanks sandy for your words it means lot to me….. thanks for your support and encorgement…… I do like to write….. drama, plays story but my little is little wek so it trouble me somtimes…… but yess write short story or drama or plays(somtimes changing the original one to humourous and funny)….
I’m also thinking to write another fan fiction on atharv and vividha with new begining and fresh start……. but thanks for your support….. sandy……
Ooh u r writing another ff
It’s a pleasure news ..
Gud luck
yes yes yes plssssss go for it it is much needed for we vitharians for a new fresh start of jana na dil se door plsssssa go for it and plsssssss and telll when will it start then there will be two things first the golden 100 jana na dil se door episodes and then yours plsss go for it
ya I’m working over the story and I’m try to elease its promo by tomarrow but thinking for the title of the story what should I keep so that I reaches your heart…..
1-dil h tumhara or something else………… do help me please……….
Raone dil hae tumhara. …………???
Aur kuch socha tum title ki barae mein.
CanIsay one title
Tumare aur mera rishita janam janam ke liye
How is it? ?????
Happy to hear about your next work….
You have the potential..come on …
All the best..Raone??
Hi raone…Its a good news..??
Dil hai tumhara…Ye achhe hai..
lekin thodi attractive title socho..iss se ache…
Hloo simran…HW abt this….? PAGAL HAI KYA…!!!!!?????????
this dialogue is familiar to jndsd viewers..???… & also this is very attractive as you said..?
U are right….??????
hey simi why don’t you join jana na dil se door family by commenting on page of jana dil se door…….. please come ha….
hey simi why don’t you join jana na dil se door family by commenting on page of jana dil se door.
Now I am seeing phase 1 episodes… I am just started…and I am not fully aware of the current track …that’s why I am not commenting there…I will soon join there
Anyway Raone how abt sweety ‘s suggesion..??.I like it…
Its so funny and attractive… I just suggested…
Ur choice is the best one…socho..me bi soch ti hoon ..abhi tak ache title nahi mila…If i got one I will share with you..
How about …*** pyaar ki jaadu***????..?
Are you want a long or short title????
not too..short nor too long….. middle length…..
dewaana dil/tera, tu hi meri manjil……
pyaar k jaadu hmm okk but good….. try more yr
ya tu jaane na.
tera honay laga hu…. song
ajaab prem ki gazab kahani
dil h tumhara……… which you like if think it good than do tell me….
Prem ki kahani & dil h tumhara is good?
Pal pal dil k pass…
Kaho naa pyaar hai….
Tujse hi shuru tuj pe hi khatam..
Dil KO kya hogaya…or dil to pagal hai…
Jo tumhare mann Mai aate vo title rakho..no more confusion…
I just try to help you..
Dil h tumhara..is better than others…
Dil h mera tumhare pass..small correction…HW is it??..
I am also thinking…??..if I get better one I will tell you
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hey sweety, simran, aaisha and sandy please attention my new FF fiction will soon publish so do tell me how it is thanks for your support yr…………
Happy to hear this news…more & more excited…hoping a fresh start…a pure love story…only vitharv..??
Our support is always with.you..keep writing…
I wil try to comment regularly on your ff’s …
All the best yaar…???
thanks for your regular support sweety………….. thanks for your appreciation and I’m glad tha You liked my work………