So the story begins here i as a narrator is in the story as jiyana mathur so lets begin,
morning 8 am :-
mathur villa : so this is’nt 90’s bt u know as every mother even mrs. sharmishtha shekhar mathur
is a mother who dreams dat one day her daughters wud behave responsibly bt this seems impossible
“subah k 8 baj rahe hai par dekhiye apki ladli betiyaan ab tak nahi uthi”
and the father the eldest in the house mr.shekhar mathur is blamed again. bt wait he has a saviour
“ohho badima kyu gussa krti ho uth jaengi na dono “so dis is mathur khandan ki sabse badi beti
roshni digvijay mathur “subeh subeh apna aur badepapa ka bp mat badhaya karo ”
“haa jiji waise bhi 10 baje ka colg hai woh dono toh phir bhi time par pahunch jaengi”
and comes mathur’s ki dusri bahu mrs. astha digvijay mathur.
well before their convo continues lets have a luk at the other characters too.
so here comes ragini and swara mathur’s room blue and pink everywhere and the centre of attraction the large potrait of the four sisters in the centre of the room and many more family pics on the walls near beds… ohh the bed’s ! empty i guess dey got up. me”woah watchout”
“maaaaaa!” swaragini urf swara shekhar mathur and ragini shekhar mathur the twins of the house “aaj phir late ho gaye ohh nooo!!!”
rosh”dn’t wry aaj meri car le lo ”
rags”dii u are the sweetest” swara” luv u dii”
roshni “luv u 2 bt driver tumhe drop” and the girls frown “toh thik hai badepapa drop kr denge”
shekhar” thik hai chalo”
swara”papa wwe luv u” rags”bt hume time pe colg pohunchna hai ”
shekhar “toh mai ..” swra “driver uncle chale ”
and the leave in a hurry swaragini”byee”
sharmishtha ” arrey nashtha toh kr lo” shekhar “rasthe mai kuch khaa lengi (teasingly) aap hume toh kuch khilado” roshni giggles
astha “jiyaaaaaaa !” arrey how can we frget the last and youngest member of the house jiyana digvijay mathur. “hey bhagwan, yh ladki na kabhi nahi sudhregi”
lets enter her room ohh pink room all four sisters pic 2gether they luk cute pics all over and hey sumone’s still sleeping. the door opens
“j get up aaj na mumma tujhe sach mai ” roshni lifts the matress and hey deres just pillows she turns around and luk wat the windows open and has a ladder the other side
for the readers to inform dis story is totally different from swaragini just took the names cos i lyk dem and any suggestions in comments wud be luved frm me hope u guys lyk it my frst attempt in writing
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interesting. .
pair’s. .?
well fr dat u’ll hav to wait a bit there are many entries pending yet
Nice start nidhi. Idea of 4 sis is awesome. The way u described things is very nice. But try update longer. It seems the story will get very interesting but hope its not another SWASAN ff. Plz don’t make swasan. Make it swalak.
thanq so much and yea it’s definitely not swasan !
Nice
thanq
Pls can u write all in english cos i am a nigerian nd if you write in hindi how will i enjoy it…and try to arrange ur writings..tnx
i’ll definitely wrk on aranging the writings and language in my nxt part thanq
just go ahead dear..it seems very interesting..if possible make it lil longer..all the best for ur ff
n plz tell us acters whom we can imagine for characters other than swaragini serial according to their rol in ur ff..
my suggestion for other sisters is that.. roshni can be played by Drashti Dhami and jiya by sanaya irani..what’s say ?
i’ll definitely make it longer and the imagination part well it’s ur choice cos i hav selected sum wich i’ll introduce in the next part wid a brief intro of the gals
and yea drashti dhami has a character here too so keep reading and suggesting
thanq
Amazing nice start dear
Bike scene was funny
thanq so much keep reading 😉
Fabulous. It is a mind blowing start. I’m waiting for the heroes entry.keep it up nishu. Waiting for next episode.
thanq
Nice
thanq
english pls!!
sry and my next epi is in english hope u yk it
Very good yrr. Nice start
thanq
its really nice…waiting for our prince charming sanskar…hope its swasan…..
thanq