Disclaimer-This story is completely fictional and has nothing to do with the original work of Valmiki. I’ve no intent to insult any of the characters of the epic.
Here we go..
The episode starts with alien doctor happily rushing to Boota Zora. Boota Zora asks him the matter. Alien doctor says,”Maharaj, I’ve a very good news. That Manthra will regain consciousness six months before the completion of twelve years; that is today! I finally found the antidote of your paralysing gun!”
“That’s great! But after hearing such a good news I can’t wait at all to see destruction of those four-Ram, Lakshman, Sita and Urmila. Everything will be destroyed! I’ll revenge my insult. My soldiers, go, go to the forest at the place where they lived and destroy them.”
In Panchvati, Urmila is searching for the berries in the forest. She finally spots red and purple fruits in a bush and starts collecting them. In another part of the forest Lakshman is sitting besides a lake, wondering which lotus to select for Urmila.
Alien soldiers come back to the planet. Boota Zora asks them,”So, what were those sanyasis doing?”
Soldier replies hesitantly,”Wh-we went there. B-but they weren’t there. The place w-was deserted and empty and it seems like they’ve left that place long-g ago. And…”
“Enough is enough!” Boota Zora stands up and says,”Find out the whereabouts of those sanyasis as soon as possible! They must be somewhere in the forest only because Manthra said they’ll stay in the forest for fourteen years. Scan the forest and find their whereabouts. I want my revenge! I’ve still not forgotten how they insulted me.”
Aliens go to a computer like machine and connect it to the forest using a scanner. They find Sita-Ram sitting near their hut in Panchvati, Urmila collecting berries and Lakshman staring the lotuses.
Manthra wakes up. “Where am I?”she asks to the doctor who’s standing besides her. “You’re in Alienlok,” replies the doctor. “You’re here from the past few years and our enemies are still in the forest.”
“Years?”
“Yes, more than eleven years. Lakshman had pushed you in front of our paralysing gun and…”
“I’m here from more than eleven years! And Ram is safe! That Lakshman who almost killed me is safe! What were you doing from these past few years of yours?”
“Trying to make you conscious, otherwise you were supposed to be unconscious for another six months,” says Boota Zora entering the room.
“Where’re my enemies? Where’re the obstacles of my path?”
“They are not where they-”
“They are in Panchvati, Maharaj,” interrupts a soldier. “We scanned the forest and found the place. Its name is Panchvati.”
“Then what are we waiting for? Lets go there and destroy those four nasty humans. Load the spaceship. We’re going right now!”
Lakshman says,”I’ll pick one pink and one blue lotus. Finalizing one between these is just almost impossible.” He forwards one foot to reach to the lotus, but it starts sinking down in the swampy region besides the lake. He tries to pull it out but his other foot also starts sinking. Aliens watch it from behind a tree and laugh. Manthra gets delighted. Lakshman shouts. Boota Zora says,”Leave him like that for some time, lets go to his dearest wife.”
Urmila takes her basket filled with fruits and vegetables and looks around. She turns her eyes round the forest, walking a few steps here and there restlessly. “Where am I,” she says. “I remember very well, there was a blue flower covered tree in the lane from where I came, but I am unable to find it. My eyes can’t be wrong like this. I had also seen that there was a sandalwood tree in my path. Why am I unable to find them? And the strong sunshine is adding to this uneasiness. What is happening here?” She holds her head, with slight feeling of dizziness and falls down unconscious. The basket drops from her hand.
“So how did you do this?” Manthra asks to the aliens delighted.
“That’s very easy for us.”
Flashback shows Urmila collecting some fallen flowers from the ground. She feels that some strange noises are coming from a shrub. She goes there to look. Alien shines some bright light in her eyes and disappears. All Urmila finds is some grass behind the shrub. Flashback ends.
“That was the special light we make at Alienlok,” adds the alien. “It hampers the eye’s ability to see what it wants to see!”
“Great!” Manthra replies laughing. “I’ve a strong feeling that my revenge will be fulfilled soon. Ram will see his beloved ones suffer before his eyes, and will eventually die. His life lies in Sita. Go and finish that Sita!”
The alien spaceship moves to Ram and Siya’s hut. Ram asks Sita,”What’re you cooking for food?”
“Mixed vegetables with rice,” Sita replies lighting the fire. “Raghunandan, can you please bring the rice from inside with the remaining firewood? I’ll light the fire till then.”
Ram nods with a smile and goes inside the hut. Manthra says,”Not the rice, you’ll cook yourself today Sita!” Alien shoots a firegun around Sita as she lights the fire. The fire takes form of a massive volcano and surrounds Sita. “Raghunandan! Swami!” She shouts and falls down. Ram comes out of the hut, completely shocked to see the fire around. He drops the firewood, picks up a pot and proceeds towards the waterfall. “Dry that waterfall at once!” Orders Manthra and the alien dries the waterfall using his firegun. Ram gets shocked to see the waterfall vanished from its place and drops the pot. “If I go to the river, It’ll take much time! What do I do to save my Siya?”
“Now what’ll you do Ram?” Manthra says laughing cunningly. Ram gets an idea. He picks up his bow and gets a water arrow. “Do something to stop him.” Manthra orders to the aliens but they’re clueless. Ram shoots the arrow at the fire and it calms down. Sita is lying down unconscious in midst of the burnt area, but not a single sign of burn is visible over her body. Ram gets shocked to see the same, and so get the aliens and Manthra. Agnidev appears in front of Ram. Ram greets him. Agnidev says,”I’m sorry for this Shri Ram, but I was forced to do so. I was shot here by those creatures from Alienlok. I never had any motive to burn such a pious lady as Mata Sita. The absurd creatures from Alienlok have come here to seek revenge. Manthra is also with them. Your brother is also in danger. I can only tell you this much.” Agnidev disappears.
Ram looks at the dried waterfall and mutters,”Manthra..”with red eyes. Manthra scolds the aliens for not being able to stop Ram. Aliens shout at her in anger. Everyone starts fighting inside the spaceship, throwing things here and there. Ram tries to wake Sita up but in vain. He thinks of getting water from the lake and goes.
In Lanka, a lady is shown. She is wearing a white and pink dress, her eyes are shaped like those of a fish. She goes to the door and shouts,”Let me go,”in a very anger filled tone. “Sorry Rajkumari,”comes the voice from one of the soldiers,”But Lankesh has asked us not to let you go out .” The lady elongates her nails in anger and says,”How dare you stop Shurpankha! You’ll face it’s punishment.” The soldier trembles asking for mercy, but Surpankha kills him. Other soldier runs away to inform the same to Lankapati Ravan.
In Panchvati, Ram reaches the lake to collect water for Sita, but finds Lakshman sunk in the puddle. He gets shocked and says,”You! Here? What’re you doing here Lakshman? And how did you sink in this puddle? Where’s Urmila? Wasn’t she supposed to be with you?” Agnidev’s words echo in Ram’s mind..
So how was it? Do leave a comment. Thank you very much for reading. Have a great day ? Jai shri Siya Ram..
(And please see my comment in previous part if you didn’t see yet)
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This is the comment I posted in last part:-
HEY EVERYONE!! DON’T IGNORE THIS.
? WE ALL HAD STARTED OUR JOURNEY FROM SKR WRITTEN EPISODE UPDATE PAGE.. That used to b real fun. After seeing the epi on TV, going daily to the pg and commenting had become a real pleasure ?? express ing our views on the episodes, and those discussions gave us a chance to learn more. That lil thing is something we all miss, and I know ff can’t give that slight feeling of fun (esp. If its written by such delayed writer lyk me ?).. THOUGH SKR HAS ENDED IT LEFT US WITH SUCH MEMORIES WE WONT FORGET EVER, AND MOREOVER, IT GAVE US SO MANY FRIENDS AND SIBLINGS ?..
There are two more mythology (history) shows to start now, one is KrishnaLeela on &tv which will cum Monday to Friday, and second is MahaKali-anth hi aarambh hai on colours, which will b a biweekly show, mostly Saturday and Sunday.. And there will be written updates also. So… I.mi was thinking how would it be if we all also comment there lyk v used to do in skr pg… Plzzzz tell me ur opinions on this plz reply.. Sorry if I bored you..
Have a nice day ? jai shri Lakshmi Narayan
The show krishnaleela name is changed to ParamAvatar Sri Krishna and it’ll be starting from 19 June 8:30 pm.. ??
Sri krishna’s trailor is really good and kaali ma’s title itself reflect that the show will be awesome. So I am with you Vanshika. I will definitely comment on it.
Yup …u r right..i m with u
vanshu why do u always torture me with your ffs ?? why do they have to be sooooooooooooooo good!!!! i sware u always make me wait for your ffs again and again!!! i loved it a lot vanshu !!!!! a big kiss to my lovely sis!!! love u soooo much!!!
Awww my sista such a sweet comment thank you so so much dearie…. Will try to ‘ torture’ you again soon ?? love you too ? di ? and a big kissy back ??
Awesome but sis sorry I am not sure whether I would be able to watch the show or not so I would comment or not but I will try
Thank you very very much bhaiyya ? yep bhaiyya no problem ? no need to say sorry at all ? Have a nice day ?
I want to go to alienlok and I am sure you will take me few ff later. I just want to say it is awesome incredible and i loved it to the core Vanshi…..
Thank you very very much didu ? yep will take you to alienlok once that manthra goes away from there ??… And thank you very much for this sweet comment ? and for the ???? rply also ???
Hi vanshika di….hope you remember me ????
And coming to the ff no words…Its really superb.You always write great ffs. I read your ffs daily even I don’t miss a single one…
Awww my dearest bro!!!!! Where were you???? I missed you so much ? wow you read my ff!! Thank you thank you very very very much.. And kip commenting here dear.. Don’t vanish again.. Love you ? jai shri Siya Ram