Hiii friends….I hope u all remember me…. sorry is a small word….and I don’t want to say any excuse….plzzz I am sorry….I am here with an os…I hope u all like this…
Let’s start
A house is shown….small but beautiful….
A lady is shown talking to some one…
L:ji pandith ji….haa…this is his kundli…plzz search some good match for him….
B:maa…yy maa…yy do u want to make me paraya soooo sooon….
L:karan!!!stop ur drama….since 4 yrs I am tired of listening the excuses….now u have to listen to me that’s itt…
(The boy is revealed to be our hero karan and lady is nirmala)
K:mom I applied for higher job….in a good company….I got a call…if I get it then ur wish…
(He felt bad for his mother and walked to his room leaving smiling nirmala)
N:heyy god!!!don’t know yy if I talk about marriage what happens to him…please make my sons life better
(Scene shifts to a beautiful mansion)
A women is walking here and there
G:ohhh myy goddd…not again….
Mooooom….
W:yyy r u shouting naina???
(Yess she is our heroine and the women is sharadha)
N:mom how many times I told you not to wait for me…mom when will u understand u r a diabetic patient. U should follow timing’s and take medicine….
S:(dramatically)yy should I take medicine… for whom should I still be alive…when my own daughter is not listening to my words…its better to die…
N:moom!!!
Plzzzz mom don’t say like that…I can’t live without you…I will do whatever u say….plzzz
S:I love u naina…I am sooo happy…now only I will talk with grooms mom…
(Sharadha goes from there…naina walks dejectedly to her room)
Fb
A school is shown…
All students were busy in chatting with their friends….
A girl is shown sitting in last bench….sadly
Teacher enters the class…. And starts teaching…
Peon :mam he is new student….
Teacher:come in…wats ur name???
B:karan
T:good…go and sit some where
K:searches whole class and walks strightly towards girl and sits beside her….
K:hiii…I am karan…u???
G:……
K:I am asking u something….
G:…..
K:can’t u speek???r u dum???
G:glares angrily
K:okk I know how to make u talk
Miiiiissssss
T:what karan?what happend?
K:miss… she is poking me with pen miss…
T:naina what is this…
N:noo miss I dint do any thing…really miss…he is lying…
K:sorry miss actually yes…I lied to you she did not do any thing plzz don’t scold her…
T:karan…first day of colz only u r doing mischeif…come here…
K:walks forward
(Teacher beats on his hand with stick)
T:don’t do it again
K:okk miss
After clss…
Naina goes to karan
N:is is paining???
K:nods his head
N:yy did u lied first and then admitted it???
K:I lied because I wanted to make u talk to me…and admitted bcoz I couldn’t see u sad…
N:friends!!!
K:karan
N:naina
K:karan smiles broadly…
N:naina gets hiccups badly seeing karan smile
(All the people around there panic and hiccups stop after a long time)
Scene 2
At naina home
Nirmala:hello…namasthey…
Sharadha:ji namesthey
N:I came to join my son in tuition at u
S:ohhh okk…
N:can he join today
S:yeah sure…what’s ur name little boy?
K:I am not little…I am big boy…
S:haha…kk big boy!!! What’s ur name?
K:karan
S:okk karan go and sit inside…
N:I will leave now…at what time should I come to pick him up?
S:ji…come after an hour
N:okk then…
After some time…
S:cheeku bring some water for me…
N:mom water…
Karan and naina see each other…
K:smiles broadly seeing her
N:get heavy hiccups seeing karan smile…
(All gets worried)
Scene 3
Its a festival….
(Guys…they r grown up)
At temple….
Naina is looking gorgeous in dark velvet blue lehenga…
She is praying to god
K:comes and stands opposite to her in next row…(He wearing same color sherwani)
Pandith:naina beti open ur eyes and see god…y r u closing ur eyes…
N:smiles and opens her eyes…takes prasad and turns her face…
She is shocked to see karan
K:smiles looking at naina
N:starts getting hiccups….
(As usual)
Present….
Both naina and karan smiles thinking all this and sleeps…
Next day…
N:maa I am going to office
S:I will send groom to ur office…meet him and decide carefully
N:mom do what ever u want
And leaves from there
S:ohhh god y r u troubling my daughter…when she is born she lost her father…and she lost her sis in childhood…and karan too…yy always her???
At karan’s house
K:maa bless me
N:karan beta today u decide it…my heart is saying some thing good is going to happen
K:maa don’t worry…I will definitely marry…
Saying this he leaves from there…
N:I know karan but I would be happy if it’s naina…
At naina’s office…
Karan comes and gives call letter at reception…
R:sir u please wait…mam is at meeting
K:yeah sure
N:is some one waiting for me???
R:yeah mam
N:ohhh god u must inform me right…send him in…
R:sir u can go… Go straight and take right…second cabin
K:sure thanks
Karan knocks
N:come in…(Naina is looking at other side)
K:comes and sit at his chair(he is looking downwards)
N:composes herself…uffffff hii I am naina….ur good name???
K:hearing naina’s name he raise his head and smiles broadly
N:starts getting hiccups…
K..ka…karan…
Karan will go and hug her…
All the office…all members are panicked…
R:gets call from sharadha…
S:tell naina mam that groom is not coming…
R:mam…naina mam is getting high hiccups suddenly…
S:cuts call and smiles happily…thank u god….
(Some times words r not required when heart is connected)
If u donk like this then I am sorry…just got this thought sooo….plzzz tell me if am worth writing or not…if not then I’ll stop…about my love life ff….I lost its track completely…sooo I will write some new ff when I get a good story…till then I will write some os…if its okkk…plzz let me know…
Lods of love:chandana
4 Comments
Wow! Awesome.. Superb.. I love the you have written.. Hope you write ff also.. Take care.. Baye…
Thank you aafia…I am happy u liked it…but I can’t contiue with that ff…but surely I will write a new one…love youuu
It was very nice…im totally enjoy. N yeah u will write more. Loads of love❤
Hi!! It was really good! I loved it a lot! It was really different from other ones and I enjoyed it a lot!
And coming to the ff , I will be happy if you start writing one as your old one was also really good..
Keep writing. Loads of love. ❤❤