Part 2-
Outside Raheja Mansion (RM)
Mansi shouts gopi to come outside……
Scene shifts to MM
Gopi who heard her name says to everyone now what does she want why she not letting us to leave peacefully….huh?….
Sona worries but kinjal holds her hand✋and asks her to be calm….Sona nods….Gopi again heard her name??? and says let’s leave then….
Gopi goes outside her house….
Scene shifts to outside
Gopi angrily looks at Mansi??and says….
Gopi:Soo Mansi why u shouting my name??…What u want now??….
Mansi:Ohh..Wait a minute Gopi….Let me first call everyone?…..
(Mansi calls everyone means every passerby too and starts her drama…..)
Mansi:Ohh….Gopi Modi now what were u asking me…..Why did I call u…..Can’t u see?….
Gopi:What to see…..Hmm….Ur face??……For that u called me??….
Mansi:Ohhh….Stop ur drama…..Ur saying as if u can’t see?…..Let me tell u then……What u did…..See there……
(She points towards her car ?which is shown slightly damaged from front side as if someone has rampaged her car?…..)
Some lady discusses this with another lady…..
Lady 1:See what they are doing….Soo funny it is??….
Lady 2:Yaa see naa….It’s there everyday…..All day they are doing the same thing fighting with ….It’s there routine??….But atleast we are getting some drama to see in ur usual boring life?…..
Lady 1:Ohh yaa…..Let’s see then??……
Gopi:Soo u wanted me to see this…(Opens her mouth in a ?….)
Mansi:Yes….And u explain me why u did this…..Or are u waiting for auspicious time to open ur mouth?…..
(Sona who heard all this noise comes outside and shouts what’s all this and why u are making soo much noise??…..)
Mansi:Ohh….Hello Sona welcome…..See for urself what ur pyari maa did….
Gopi:Don’t u dare to bring Sona in this….Its between us and should be between us only….U got that…..
Mansi:Ohho Gopi…..What to say about u….U naa….Let it be?…..
Gopi(in her mind):I do not no what to say to about ur car…But it looks funny though??….
Gopi:Listen one thing clearly I don’t know who did this with ur car….But I can definitely say it’s not done by me….Do u got that….It will be better than?…..
Mansi:Ohh….No….I accused wrong person then….Ohho now what….Finished Gopi u know u should be in some movie u act soo well even I too got convinced…U should try that rather than doing cafeteria business?……Right Mom…
Pramila:Hmm?…
Gopi:Ohh Pam aunty u too…
Mansi:Stop ur nonsense???….
(Sona was about to say something when kinjal comes and stops her…)
Kinjal:Let’s go inside gopi we shouldn’t give her any explanation….She won’t be understanding it?….
Gopi:No bhabhi…I won’t go inside before saying her…I don’t want to drag this matter….
Mansi:Soo gopi…Say me now atleast??….
Gopi looking at her car? is about to laugh but controlles herself…..
Gopi:See I am telling u one last time….Listen clearly?….i dint do it…Ok…U got that…..It could be anybody else too?….
(Gopi in her mind says wish I did that??….)
Mansi is about to say something when someone says let it be…..Everyone looks at that sound….A boy is shown his face covered by a hat? and he is shown resting on his bike….He slowly removes hat? from his face….His face is now shown clearly and he none other than Sahir…..Some girls are shown saying how handsome he is….Ohh…My…My….
He comes down from his bike and walks towards Mansi…
Ude Dil befikre
Ude Dil befikre
Sahir:Mom u know naa they can never change…..
Mansi:That’s my baby☺….
Sahir(Looking at Sona):Mom we have soo many cars take some other car?….Do not get u mood spoiled by them…..They are very cheap people…Will never except there mistake??….
Mansi:Yaa baby ur right….Why should I spoil my mood of these people??….
Gopi:Even I don’t want to spoil my mood talking to u?….
Kinjal:Gopi that’s what I was saying to u….Now come….And u people go to ur work…Chalo…
Mansi,Pramila are shown going to there house while Sahir follows them looking at Sona?….
Kinjal takes Gopi inside and Sona follows them looking at Sahir?….
Both giving each other angry Tashan look?????….
Sona(In her mind):Cheap naa…I will definitely give u back ??….
Scene shifts to MM
Gopi,kinjal, Dhawal,Sona are shown talking….
Gopi:God knows what she wants now….Can’t she let us live in peace?….
Kinjal:Let it be gopi…I think we should stop this now and concentrate on are evening party?….
Sona:Actually mom…..When we were coming home from the contest that time I pleaded mammi to let me drive….And…..
Kinjal(Cuts her):And nothing…..Sssshh?…..
Gopi:What ur doing…..Tell me properly what happen….Bhabhi tell naa…..
Sona:Actually I lost my car’s control and rampaged in her car bymistakely?…..
Gopi:What?…..But why…..
Kinjal:No gopi….Sona dint do…..But I it was my mistake…..Don’t say anything to her…..
Gopi:I won’t….But I know it’s not u bhabhi but Sona only…..But I am saying not take her side next time she has to learn…..
Kinjal:Hmm…..No matter what I will definitely save her or help her?….
Gopi:As u like then?…..
Gopi suddenly starts laughing????….Everyone looks in surprise…..
Gopi:Sorry everyone but I was thinking about her car?….Suddenly that scene came in my mind….
Kinjal,Sona,Dhawal too laughs???…..
Afternoon….
Scene shifts to RM
Sahir is shown in his room when someone enters in his room via window….He turns back and is surprised to see Sona?……Sona picks a pillow from the bed and hits him with it…..Sahir catches it and stops her….
Sahir:Hey cool down…What happened…..
Sona:U saying as if u don’t know?….
Sahir:Yes I don’t know…
Sona:If we are soo cheap….Then why did u choose me…..All girls are after u….U could choose from them….Why me then?….
Sahir:Yes I could get anybody….But what to do it’s said u hate that person only who u love…..And how can hate another person and love another…Huh?….
Sona:Hmm….
Sahir:And u could also get someone nice….Afterall u are a beauty queen then why me?….
Sona:Ohho….Only u could say that….Even me too?….
They both hugs each other….
Sahir(In his mind):For destroying everything…..To ruin our happiness…..
Sona(In her mind):To give u back my mother’s insult…..
They heard someone’s footsteps soo Sahir told Sona to go….Sona goes via window…..Someone opens door…..Sahir says Dadi u??…..
Pramila:Yes….I think I heard some noise from this room that’s why…..
Sahir:No Dadi here is no one….See….
Whole room is shown….Pramila finds no one there….
Pramila:Ok…Ok…..
She goes from there….
Evening……
Scene shifts to MM
Whole house? is shown decorated with flowers?? and ballons??…..Guests are shown coming…..DJ is shown….Gopi,Kinjal and Dhawal attends to guests…..
After sometime….
Some are shown drinking juice?…..Some are shown mingling with each other….Some are shown dancing ??to the tunes of DJ…..Just then Sona is shown coming downstairs…..She is shown wearing a brown knee length one shoulder dress, medium size round brown earings,a kada….Everyone turns their direction towards her?? and congratulates her…..
Gopi:My princess is looking soo beautiful☺…..
Kinjal:My baby is looking soo lovely☺…..
Sona comes forward but just then lights goes off….Everyone wonders what happened…..
Lights goes on but gopi gets shocked??……
Precap:Sona in disguise of a man goes towards her home from RM…..Mansi stops her asks her/him to turn face in her side….Sona turns….Mansi says why do I feel I have seen u somewhere???…..
22 Comments
Awsomw ep…but i am feeling like its lot like Tashan e ishq…now i am getting sure that u adopted n edited this story from Tashan e ishq right naa????
Thanks a lot Riana☺☺nope actually there they both loved each other like crazy…Here they love+hate each other both at the same time….here many things are different which u will soon get to know?
Hey Guys from this all actresses who will look good with Samar???Choices-
1)Eisha Singh
2)Madirakshi Mundle
3)Abigail Pandey
4)Nutan Rai
5)Keerti Nagpure
6)Kanchi Singh
7)Sonia Balani
8)Rhea Sharma
Its vry difficult to select from these actresses all r cute….my one is Madirakshi,Abigail,kanchi singh
Thanks Riana☺
Mansi Gopi fight n conversation was damn funny.Also Gopi wishing that she damaged her car.i was laughing through out.ur writing style is also like Raina..lots of humour.never expected that d person who damaged d car was Sona.Sahir’s entry was superb.SaKshi scene was cute.surprised to see them in luv.loved Sahir saying that we love d person v hate.shocking to know that they r pretending to luv each other to take revenge.I hope like the movie Hulchul they will really fall 4 each other.Y did u make Gopi single in this ff?Why did’nt u give her a husband?
Thanks a lot Jasmine☺☺?u will soon get to know that?
Hey Jasmine as I wanted to show both gopi n Mansi as a strong willed bold brave independent women not bogged down by anyone?
i was craving to read this ss.was really excited to c the update
Thank u soo much Jasmine☺?
Ur poll is very tough as all r good actresses.But no Nutan Rai plz.bcz of SNS she looks like another vamp 4 me.Eisha,Madirakshi,Keerti,Sonia r too good.Kanchi n Abhigail r also cute.
That’s what I was too confused on choosing whom from this….Nutan Rai won’t be coming….As u said I will make a poll on IF too…Thanks?
Precap is awesome and when Gopi and Mansi had an agurement.It was funny!
Thanks a lot Rani☺☺
why don’t you choose either shivani surve or radhika madan opposite samar.. it will look interesting. isn’t it??
Thanks Rahul☺radhika madan will look little old I think for Samar….
Awesome update! The fight between gopi and mansi was really sooo enjoyable!! It reminded of my neighbors fight?? so sona and sahir are just pretending to love each other but they are taking revenge against each other…
Thanks a lot Nandhini☺☺yep Sona and Sahir are pretending but actually taking revenge from each other….
Wow..awesome update mansi di..love it a lot. MaGo fighting…funny..?????Sakshi pretending to love each other????on the show.. They love each other at starting but when Anita brainwash UV, he get against tanejas. But what made you to choose mansi as Anita here..Rashi would have suited the role more.???In my opinions, actress for smar.. Hmm.kanchi Singh..?????she is awesome actress for Samar. Sona was looking damn pretty in the dress. On the show,,, she has only dresses of her sanskars’ choice…. Waiting to next update????????
Thank a lot Shakaib☺☺MaGo??yep ur right in that show they both loved each other in starting n he gone against tanejas because of Anita but here they knows what they are doing n no one is brainwashing them….Rashi should be sweet always n who better than Mansi will suit this role?on the show she wears only saris…Will update soon?
For which role Rashi suits better?U mean instead of Sona Rashi was better?
I want to say that Rucha suits role of Mansi/Anita(Tei) in this ff more. That’s it di. But mansi(Kajol) also suits the role.