Shot 9
Hello there ???. I know I got missing again. I even got complaints for vanishing ???. By now if you guys call me “vanishing queen” I’ll totally agree with you guys. I just come, post something and then disappeare ??? like a ghost. What to do friends, too much to studies these days. So don’t mind me, but I’ll keep posting whenever I get time ???.
Dimple, Kanchan thank you for breaking your silence and commenting on the previous part ???.
So as I said in the previous shot, this is the last shot of this fs. You probably got that reading the title ???. Ok no matter. Lest go to the story. In case you missed the previous part or forgot it, check the link below!!!
Ok now let’s start. Previously on Soch Na Sake ( Can’t Even Imagine )……
That evening, she was crying in her hostel room. Pragya and Isha tried to console her but she was in a bad state.
“I don’t know why he’s being like this!! What did I do? Maybe he doesn’t want me in his life!!”
“Aisa nahi hai Sanchi!”
“I don’t know Isha! I hate myself for thinking like this. But what else should I think?”
She fell asleep crying. From the door, Riya was listeningto all this and had an unreadable expression. Next day she went to Kabir’s cabin.
“Good morning Dr. Kabir”
“Good morning Riya. Why are you here this early?”
“I want to talk to you about something”
“Ok what?”
“It’s personal sir”
He thought for awhile. “Ok, go on”
“Its about Sanchi sir. She-”
“I’m sorry Riya but I don’t want to listen to your complaints about Sanchi”
“This isn’t a complaint sir!! It’s important!! You see Sanchi is very sad because you’re ignoring her. She was even crying yesterday. We all know you love her as much as she loves you. So what is this?”
Kabir looked at her like she had horns ???. “Well Riya, I’m surprised to see your concern about Sanchi” he said honestly.
“I know sir. (She gave a sad smile.) Sanchi and I…. we were best friends before. Then somethings happened and I blamed that on her. You maybe know the story. And I did nothing but to hurt her ever since. But she never got angry. She was always there for me. But I didn’t see that. The day before the surgery, she told me the true story. I realized what a fool I was to doubt my friend. I always tried to snatch you from her coz I knew she loved you. I didn’t know about her sickness. No one told me about that. When I got to know that I was shocked. She’s my friend!! Then she asked me to take care of you if anything happened to her. God listened to all our prayers and she came back to us fine. I did many things to hurt her Dr. Kabir. I don’t want to let anything hurt her in the future. Not even you!! So please, whatever the problem is, solve it quickly!!” Saying all that she went.
“Now that was surprising. Who would’ve guessed she’ll change like that? Ok now it’s to much Kabir. You have to stop this and solve this. You’re hurting her”
***********************************************
……….next day……….
It was Sanchi’s birthday today. From the day she ran out of Kabir’s cabin, she had been ignoring him. And she was successful doing that.
In the evening there’s a party in Mishra Mansion to celebrate Sanchi’s birthday. Along with some relatives, Malhotra family, Negi family, Yadav family and last but not least…. Kapoor family are invited.
Sanchi just plastered a fake smile ??? to her face and greeted all. She pretended to be enjoying but she was torn ??? from inside. She saw Kabir with his mother. She took blessings from Kusum and not even a single glance for Kabir. Party went on with everyone talking about everything and nothing. Sanchi was with her gang. Suddenly lights went out leaving everything in complete darkness. Then a sopt light pointed to a direction. They saw an outline of a man, sitting on a bench, holding a guitar ??? with his head bent down. Sanchi’s heart suddenly started to race ???. She knew who it was. She could recognize him anywhere. Strumming the guitar, he played a familiar music. He began to sing his head still bent.
❤ Tenu itna main pyaar karaan
Ek pal vich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chhad me
Maut da intezaar karaan
(He lifted his head and looked at one person directly……)
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
(Everyone was admiring his song but he was lost in her eyes……)
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
(Lost in her eyes, he was singing automatically like music was flowing through them……)
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan
Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri
(With each word he was trying to tell her something. Something that connected them together……)
Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin
Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
(He remembered how devastated he was when he got to know about her sickness. How he died every second begging for god to give her life……)
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Aankhon ke hai yeh khwahishein
Ki chehre se teri na hatein
Neendon mein meri bas tere
Khwabon ne li hai karwatein
(A tear drop fall from her eyes remembering all their time together……)
Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake ❤
All were clapping as his song was finished. Then instead of all lights coming back the spot light kept pointing Kabir. He kept his guitar aside and walked. His eyes still locked with hers, never looking away from her for even a second. Guests moved away and let him pass without disturbing. They saw him stop right in front of the birthday girl. Standing in front of her, he took both of her hands in his.
“You, Miss. Sanchi Mishra, do you have any idea what you did to my life? Before you come to SDCH, I was doing completely fine. Then you came as an intern. That too being my student. Well not completely my student, but still, some form of a student. From the very first day I saw you, you always tortured me with your stupid filmy dialogues and crazy songs!! I was very annoyed. But soon those stupid things became a part of my day. If I didn’t hear those, if I didn’t see you my day would be incomplete. Little by little you made me miss you whenever you weren’t around. It made me crazy, I couldn’t understand why I felt like that!! You made my normal life upside down. Then I realized I’m falling for you. Falling so deep that no one can save me. Not even god. You invaded my mind, my thoughts everything!! Admitting this in front of this whole crowd isn’t easy. Because 1) there’s your father listening to me and he’s probably going to kill me for trying to take his princess and 2) your father is my boss and he can throw me out of my job anytime. But still I’m telling you this. I wanted to tell you how much I love you…. but then…. you were going to leave me! I was angry with you coz you didn’t tell me before ehat was bothering you!! Very angry at the same time I felt my whole world crumbling down. By God’s grace you’re fine now. Then when you got conscious, I didn’t know what to tell you. I was confused wether you would regret confessing me. I was scared you might say you just said you loved me because of your sickness and when you got fine, you’d change your mind. I know it sounds stupid but I was scared. So I decided to give you time and space to decide. You thought I was ignoring you but I was hurting myself from that too. Every time you came in front of me, I thought you would say it was a mistake. But in reality, it was my mistake to think like that. I’m so so sorry…. Sanchi…. I love you….. I love you so much….!!
“How dare you thought like that? How dare you thought I’d leave you and regret? You know I love you Kabir!!” She was crying ???.
“I know!! I admit I’m the stupidest idiot in this whole world!”
“Of course you’re the stupidest idiot in this whole world!!” She exclaimed loudly not caring about anyone who was listening.
Making everyone gasp in shock, he bent on his knees in front of her.
“Exactly!! So would you like to take care of this stupid idiot and make him less stupid? Will you marry me, Sanchi?”
“Nope”
Every single person was shocked.
“Kyu nahi?”
“Kyun ki, if I marry a stupid person, I’ll turn stupid too!!” She said intelligently ???.
“But you’re already stupid na!”
“What? ??? you insulted me!! Now I won’t marry you at all!!”
“Soch lo… if you don’t marry me… I’ll marry Riya!!”
“Go on… see how your life turn to hell after marrying the chudail!!” She huffed annoyed ???.
“I know my life will turn to hell. But not because of marrying her. It’s because you’re not with me. Now tell me sweetheart, how long do you want me to stay on my knees like this? Should I stay forever like this or…. will you let me get up by giving me an answer?”
“……”
“Sanchi…… will you marry me….?” He asked again so softly, with so much love holding out a ring ???. His sincere passionate gaze went through her soul.
A unstoppable smile that said millions of words, made its way to her face. “Yes…!!”
The hall erupted in to a loud noise with clapping ??? and yelling in happiness as Kabir slipped the ring to Sanchi’s ring finger. Hugging her, he lifted her twirling her around.
So……. all got happy and they got blessings from everyone. ??? Even from their friends. The thing is…. Riya made Sanchi take her blessings ???.
“You’re 8 months younger than me Sanchi, so technically I’m your elder. Besides, you said in front of everyone that living with me is like hell and you called me chudail ???. Now if you want me to forgive you, you have to seek blessings from me!!! ???”
Sanchi bend down laughing ???.
“Jeete raho! Khush raho!!” ??? the gang laughed.
Sanchi and Riya hugged each other.
“It’s good to be friends again!” – Riya
“We never were enemies. Love you yaar!” – Sanchi
Veer exclaimed. “??? bhai Kabir!! Sanchi said she loves Riya. ??? lekin you two just got engaged na!! So that means-”
“SHUT UP VEER..!!” everyone yelled at once, making him quiet.
“Okay!!” He stopped innocently.
After that they cut the cake ??? and while everyone’s busy in talking, dancing???, Sanchi dragged Kabir to a side where no one can see them.
“Why are we here? Everyone’s there. C’mon let’s go!”
She suddenly held a chocolate to him. “Yeh kya hai?”
“Yeh chocolate hai” – Sanchi
“I know but why?” – Kabir
“This is from the chocolates you brought me from Switzerland. You kept it on my bedside table when I was in hospital. I promised myself that I won’t eat them until you talk with me. And I wanted to share with you. Today is a happy occasion. You proposed me. So mithai is necessary na!!” She made him eat it. He bit on half of it and made her eat the other half. They were lost in there eyes. Cupping her cheek, he was leaning closer but a noise broke their moment.
“SANCHI….!! KABIR BHAI….!! WHERE ARE YOU TWO? Apni chori chori chupke chupke prem katha baad mein karlo..! Come from wherever you disappeared to!!” It was Veer who was yelling.
“Yeh Veer bhi na!! Meri pyaar ki dushman ???” Sanchi was mumbling lightly.
“Come let’s go” Kabir said abruptly.
She kept one of her arms around his shoulder and ran a finger on his face. “What’s the hurry, hone wale patidev?”
“Um everyone must be looking for us. We should go”
“Hay bhagwan!!! ??? Yeh kaise insan hai yaar? He’s with her fiancee alone and he wants to go to where everyone else is!! Just my luck to get such a boring unromantic life partner!! Okay then let’s go!” She started to pull away.
But too bad or let’s just say good ??? he grabbed her by her waist and pulled her to him. “Boring and unromantic? Me?” He pinned her to the wall. “If you want me to be too romantic, then you’ll have to wait till we get married. Then you might even complain I’m being too romantic!!”
She blushed as he huskily whispered. So she looked away. He made her meet his gaze by holding her chin. “Lo.. Now I’m being romantic and you’re looking away? Hmm… not fair hone wali wifey… oh ho!!! She got shy… Now how will I give her a kiss?”
“Kabir what’re you saying? We should go”
He had a naughty smirk ???. “Arre na na na meri jaan… were not going anywhere. It was your idea to be romantic na? Now why are you backing away? You know it’s a tradition to share a kiss after proposing”
“What are you saying? There’s no such a tradition and even if there was, I’m not gonna be a part of it!!” She tried to get away from him but he was holding her to close.
“So…. you don’t want a kiss? But I want na…” He leaned closer to her little by little. She closed her eyes instinctively and waited for him to take away their distance. But it never came. She opened her eyes to see him trying to contain his laughter. Seeing her death glare he couldn’t help but to laugh ???.
“I hate-”
Before she complete what she was about to say, he quickly pressed his lips on hers giving her a sweet kiss making her lose her senses for a while. After they broke apart, he kept his forehead touch with hers and looked in to her eyes. “Well…. that’s all you get for now. But after we get married……..”
She slapped his chest lightly, blushing to a deep shade of red that even tomatoes might get jealous of her.
“I’m surprised!! You didn’t sing for past few days. Don’t you have any song in your mind?”
“Don’t worry, you’ll hear my songs your entire life. But for now, I only have to say….
Main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon yeh tu kabhi Soch Na Sake……” She whispered to him.
Looking at her with overflowing love, he hissed her forehead and whispered back.
“You Can’t Even Imagine how much I love you……”
***********************************************
THE END
……………………………………………………………………
“So this is the end of our story” – Sanchi
“No it’s not the end, it’s the new beginning of our lives. But your author is ending the story coz she’s so stupid and can’t think of anything to write!!” – Kabir
“Kabir!!! Don’t call her stupid!! She so nice!! You should be greatful to her coz she didn’t kill me!!” – Sanchi
“Yeah!! You’re right!! Our miss author is so nice. I won’t say anything against her!! Otherwise, she’ll take my Sanchi away from me!!” He said hugging her from behind.
“Kabir!!! Kya kar rahi ho? They can see us!!” Sanchi was frantic.
“So what? You love me, I love you. We’re getting married, so what’s the problem? In fact, this miss dumb author should’ve known to drag this story and write some romantic scenes!!”
“Kabir…. You’re insulting her again!! Now she’ll definitely separate us!!”
“Thank you for giving me that idea!! If this person continued to be rude, I’m definitely pairing you with someone better than him and not rude!!…. oh hello mister doctor!! Stop glaring. Do you honestly think I’ll get scared? If you thought like that, then you’re the one who’s stupid here!! Oh wait a sec!! You admitted that you’re so stupid when you were confessing your love…!!! Now if you two don’t mind, let’s end this conversation. My readers might be thinking I’m completely crazy” – Me
“Duhh…!! You are crazy”
“Shut up Kabir!!”
“What? It’s true!!”
“Chup!!”
………………………..
Well seems like he already started to listen to his future wife ???. Ok that was bakwaas. I know. So forget it and tell me what you think of this story. ??? Personally, this was my favourite to write and this story was accepted all of you well. I gained many readers through this. So it’s your last chance to give your support to “Soch Na Sake ( Can’t Even Imagine )”. If you like this whole story as well as today’s part, press the like button and if you don’t like it press the dislike button and give me your reviews.
I don’t know when will I post next but I’ll try to post as soon as I get time ???. So until we meet again with the next part of “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”, stay safe, all of you and love you loads ???.
31 Comments
Mind blowing nd I love the proposal scene??? it was awesome now I can’t describe how it was bcz I don’t have words…..from where u got these ideas??? Anyways I just wanted to say our teacher was right “God gave brain to everyone nd gave it equally but the real thing is we have use it not to waste it??” hope u understand my compliment??
Ooookayyyy….!!! I think I got what you meant but not entirely sure what I understand was correct though ???. So thinking what I understood was what you said, I’m giving you a big thank you ???
What an amazing episode ruch, smile crept on my face while reading this, thank you for such a beautiful story nd such a nice end .
Thank you for such a sweet comment Samidha ??? I’m happy that you liked this story ???
seriously i hve no words to say hw mch i lvd dis epi…dis epi is my favn most close to my heart….i will read this fs again n again…i em sad coz it ended in 9 shots bt nva mind coz 9 is my roll.no n my lucky nn too…plz come vid another fs or os for me plz its my humble request to uh…lv u loaaads…by…tc
Thank you Sana ??? I’m happy that this story could get in to your heart!!! Thank you for the support you gave throughout this fs. And in the future, stay with me and my posts ??? love you too dear ???
Amazing….write more and come back with new one….
Thank you Anhsaa ??? sure I’ll definitely come. But for now I’ll have to finish my other ff ???
Amazing and fabulous episode… Proposal scene was mind blowing..
Thank you Aafiya ??? the support you always give me, means a lot to me. Glad you liked this story ???
Awsm ending dear n update next story soon
Thank you Risu ??? yeah I’ll update soon ???
ruwani i just love you for this superb……mind blowing story…….and off course tomatoes will be jealous to seeing sanchi’s redish chicks………………how cute……….the way kabir confess his feeling to sanchi is sooo cute ………….i just love it and last part is so cute……………tc………………love you…………….come back asap and please no i’m ordering you please post unwritten love story……………..
Wow…..amazing but i m sad u r ending this .This is one of my fav ff but no regretion u have to post ur another ff and i m a big fan of tht too……and come with another ff too….and also write OS. U r a very good Os writer tooo
wow Ruwani dear it was superbbb ending and that proposal was ewwww lovely thankx dear for share this story with us….i remembered each and every scene of this story…and that was my fav too…..Love you dear….bye tc
Mind blowing..the proposal part”you r already stupid na!”wala part was hilarious.u nailed it dear..it’s just too good..and the last part was superb..but I’m a bit sad bcoz this is one of my favourite FS..but koi ni I hope ki tum jaldi kuch Naya aur dhamakedar leke aaogi..now finally ek request Hain pls post the next part of unwritten love of destiny..Bohot miss karrahi hoon Yaar us story ko.achha bye aur ekbar phirse..this story was ?
Hey my dear cute dinu… loved it from the core of my heart ❤… amazing.. mind blowing.. fantastic.. fabulous… awesome… yaar now what more should I write but definitely yaar my words will be less to describe… even I’m not eligible to comment… yaar such an amazing proposal n end it was super duper hilarious ???. … Actually I read in the evening only but as u know how I read somewhere I’m commenting now…. n yaar but I’m sad.. why u ended so soon… infact I’m with kabir u should have written more episode showing kaanchi romance with their nok jhoks… u know I was remembering u only today that when will ruwani post.. it has been a long time n when I saw ur post i was so happy…. anyway I talked enough… Lots of love n do post unwritten love of destiny soon as u know that’s my fav.. take care n don’t forget to post soon ???❤❤❤
God, this is crazy. If after disappearing for a long time you come up with such super episodes, then please do disappear occasionally. We wouldn’t mind.
No words to describe your beautiful episode. It was worth the wait. Got goosebumps when reading Kanchi romantic scenes. And the proposal,that was the longest proposal ever?
…love you dear. Tc. Hoping to see your new FF soon…
incredible
Thank you Vanu ???
So amazing….. Loved it very much…… I am sppehless after reading it
Speechless*
Thank you so much for the support you always give me Amnaa ??? glad you liked thus story ???
This is an awesome ending. Very nice episode
Thank you so much for commenting Sandhya ??? glad you liked it dear ???
literally no words dear…the way he proposed and the song omg just loved it…
O God. U r the craziest romantic dear. I luv the proposal scene and I never heard such romantic proposal in my entire life. Oh God. U always steal my ♥. If I m a boy I will definitely fall for u and sing the same song. Oops yeh ho Nahi Sakta. Luv u soooo much. Keep it up. Pls. Keep a try on writing book. I know I will be number one fan of u. U will definitely beat Chetan bhagat, Jane Austin
Superb amazing outsatnding i think the it was the best confession of kabir i mean the proposal qas different unique an all together it was the best and the last part of ur and kabir chating was just so funny nice thought of clearing out the story was just perfect
Superb amazing outsatnding i think the it was the best confession of kabir i mean the proposal was different unique an all together it was the best and the last part of ur and kabir chating was just so funny nice thought of clearing out . the story was just perfect and the song u choose and the story corelates with each other
Ru , the proposal is just wow …..so romantic episode …..loved it to the core ….Love u dear
????????????????…ye kya tha dinu why u end this so soon…this is one of my fav. Fs i willl cry continously untill u post ur ff and came back with new one???..btw epi is super duper chartbuster.. .jhakkas bole to fadooo…plzzz plzzz post ur other ff asap ..lots of lovvv to u??.. Nd miss gayab aatma kabhi to ig p bhi darshan de diya kar…bye milte h phir tab tak tc???