it was a lovely day with a great weather . the flowers ..the beach ..the garden …everything thing around was having a different glow in them…the Sun seemed to rise early as the whole oberoi family was awake though it was quite early..the dulled quality of the light ,like the sun is being filtered through orange paper mache . birds ofcource -going about their early morning business sailing from the branches . deep in conversation of their own sort ..the chill that comes after a warm yesterday and before a warm tomorrow . the few remaining stars blinking out of existence in the sky still hazy and swirled with a light spattering of clouds……..
the grand and the luxurious mansion of the oberoi’s was filled with excitement and happiness of course…
there was a great hustle and bustle in the hall ….and SHE..she herself might not be knowing that how many times she has ascended the stairs ..going and checking everything in a perfect manner was not truely an easy task…
on being melted for the amount of love SHE has given to the oberoi family and not to forget his son ….
she said rather showered the love she has for HER..”annika beta ..it’s the 20th time you have mounted up and down …i understand your happiness but this doesn’t mean that you’ll keep your health at stake …i am saying no.. I’m ordering you to sit and have something…you didn’t had breakfast as well ..donn know how many times I have told you to take care of yourself like you do of others…”sighing she said these words of her..
“offo maa…how many times i have also na that i do care for myself and that’s the only reason I’m doing all this “said SHE winking to her very lovely mother in law ..
“ya I knows ” replied HER MIL (mother in law) in her extra flourished English …..
here in the …most crowded place of oberoi mansion..the two very great supporters of HIM were doing the job which they like the most I.e. cooking …cooking for someone truely special and that was HIM …then came their lovely wife’s as understanding as none could be ……they came ..took their positions at extreme left and right of the kitchen corner ..gauri on left and saumya on right and amid them were the OMRU ..who were preparing something for him …
SHE came to have a look and check the kitchen corner of oberoi mansion but was already pre-occupied by other 4 very important family members and those were omru and their dutiful wives ……..
“is everything on track”she asked omru with a raised eyebrow …”yepp…as expected bcz obros”….”are best”SHE completed the half spoken sentence along with gauri and saumya in chorus….
every one was waiting for the main pillar of the house,for HIM ..but where is HE???..
beside all the hustle and bustle in the house..at that very corner ..were a boy with a pair of blue no green no with a hint of grey or kanji eyes …a lad of 4 years of age along with her most senior member of the oberoi family and that is none other than kalyani devi or the Dadi.. or the mentor of ishqbaazi in the mansion…
the two of them were discussing about some one very special and that is none other than HIM ..but again where is HE and who is HE ????…..
one of the most immature couple or the tejhanvi (tej and jhanvi) were too Missing HIM …
the time when everything was done and as expected in a grandiloquent style .
…each and everything seemed just perfect..arranged in a theme of baby pink and lavender and the addititon of white and vine shades enhanced it’s beauty in an extra aesthetic way…..
“hmm….so finally done..perfect “..is what all she muttered after having a glance of the preparations done in oberoi mansion which appeared as newly wedded bride…no one could say that the empire was running since 50 years back…
it was when that 4 year lad came and gave a bone crushing hug to HER ..
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heyy guys ..this is Sairish here …this idea was there in my mine but I never paid heed to it ..but now thought to give it a chance…
don’t know how bad it is but I have tried my level best to cope up with the kinda amazing writers we have here….few of them which I personally like are Jerry di..vhm di.. priyadas di..kanfi aapi..abbi aapi..fati aapi..and many more are there but my chhotu sa brain doesn’t remember much ?????…
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plzz comment your views and opinions by writing them in the comment box below..I’ll be waiting for them
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WHO IS HE AND WHO IS SHE..WHO IS THE 4 YEAR LAD AND WHY SO MANY PREPARATIONS…??……this was a kind of precap..
plzz read the next part too that ‘ll be uploaded afterwards …and if have time read my ff ..AN ISHQBAAZ FF~ BY SAIRISH ..if want i can provide you the link …
TILL THEN
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LOTS OF LOVE
YOUR YOUNGEST WRITER HERE
SAIRISH ❤❤❤??????
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37 Comments
Awesome
thanks lisaaa❤❤❤
Awesome interesting start
thanks fffan1234 for commenting….
the next part has already been uploaded…check it out if have not read it yet..
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The shot is cute and awesome. Waiting for the next.
thank u di…for your valuable comment
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Interesting…Amazing
thanks niriha di…for being a patient reader
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It is awesome dear.. Please post soon….
heyy Nikita di…
thanks for commenting my my work..it means a lot to me ..thanks for being a regular reader and comment of AN ISHQBAAZ FF ~BY SAIRISH..
lots of love
Sairish
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Superb update
thanks Alekhika20 ❤❤
Amazinggggg
thank you so much Lauren for commenting….??⚘⚘??
awesome
update nxt part soon
heyy aashi darling
thanks for commenting dearr
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I have uploaded the next shot too plzz read if haven’t read it yet …
thanks
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Awesome!
thank you so much pui di for commenting…
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Awwwsmee??
heyy kanfi aapi…
thank you tons for for commenting…
it really matters to me
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Sairish
Soo beautifully written..looking forward for next part .
thanks for commenting navz dear …
glad you found it worth a read ??❤❤
Sairish !!
Can’t beleive sweetie, I inspired you !!! Thank you so much for the credits, couldn’t thank you enough !
Coming to the chapter, yes its definitely different from others and just unique in its own way, loved it to the fullest sista !
Post soon, waiting for the mysteries to unfold, love you❤
heyyy Jerry di….
first of all thank you loads for commenting..i really means a lot to me…the reason you know very well…
yepp you , your story truely inspires me a lot
glad you found it different but i was not getting a correct title for this..i think I’m bad at unlike you …
I really some some of your titles which I remember now..
“it all started with cycling “.”my destination:cafe coffee day” ..from Where do you get these amazing and cute titles ???
next part posted quite long….do check it out if you haven’t read it yet..would be glad if u’ll comment on the next one tooo..
lots of love
Sairish
Hey Saiiirrrrrriiiiiiiiiissssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh……….
I just opened TU IB page …though opened it before to send you the link and reply to other private messages……
And i was very much surprised to see something from you….
the first paragraph that you wrote describing the nature impressed me so much that …i felt i should go back to school and learn English in such a way that my language matches atleast 50% of your language….
Trust me and mark my words you are no ordinary writer and if you take this as profession i am sure you would reach heights…….
Now coming to the concept it is really SOMETHING DIFFERENT……..and i am looking forward to read the next episode…..and since i know you are busy i should and will wait………
Lastly it was a surprise and shock for me to see my name in the list alongside the best writers in TU …well i am not sure whether i deserve to be beside them or not….but thank you for mentioning my name in your favorite list…..
Way to go dear…kudos to you and all the very best !!!!
ohhh myyy godd..
first of all thank you tons for such a long comment ..i can’t believe that a person like you appreciated my work..
the first paragraph…yeahh..even I loved it??but some credit goes to the Google baba as well …i not at all good at writing thing u know…your language is way more better than Maine no doubt in that….and to write as a profession ??my God such a great compliment it is for a girl of 13 …i can’t believe it yaar…
SOMETHING DIFFERENT..i was not getting an apt.title for this…I’m bad at guessing titles for the story unlike you ….
and yesss…you are a great writer and a describer of course..you deserve it ..
have a great day ..
lots of love
Sairish
Wow!!! Sarish it’s AMAZINGG dr…. U describe evrything soooooooooooo beautifully….. Just luv it 2 d coreeeee….. Waiting 4 nxt one dr….
thank you so much banita di..for commenting..and those beautiful words of yours….plz read the next one tooo..
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Heyy our youngest writer SAIRISH…ur writing is awesome… at this age u r writing extra ordinary… just loved it… wishing for a happy and prosperous future…keep smiling..stay happy…
Nd yeah I love ur name..my 2 year old cousin has also this name…
hiii..zaveesha di..
yeahh..I’m the youngest one here i feel so cause I’m just 13 ????
thanks for your extra ordinary comment ????
glad that your chhotu cousin and me share the same name ….
lots of love
tak care
Sairish
Sorry meri sweetie. I didn’t get time to read this one? but it’s awesome. U know I read the second part first and then open up the link to first part?… I love u too, itna sweet likhti ho❤ Keep writing when u get time. Load of Love?
heyy aapi..
I’m so happy that you commented …
hahaha.. .it’s great that u read the 2nd one before ✌✌…
I’ll be surely posting the 3rd shot maybe till night…so plzzz do read that one…
lots of love
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Sairish
Its really cool
impressed with the start only Nature description.
Different itself.
Good u inspired by my frd Jelly and kanfi.
I would like to read but for that u have to send me links.
Love u
Fenu here
heyyy fenil di/aapi
I’m so happy that you find it worth a read ..i really meant a lot to me…
glad that you commented
I’ll surely send u the links either it be for this TS or my ff …
and ya ..i have read some works of your and trust Mark my words YOU ARE AMAZING ????
loads and loads of love
take care
Sairish
Hey Dear Sairish (I think u r girl)
I’m Boy not girl…in this its not your fault because my name has confusion because this name belongs to both gender male and female.
Now don’t say sorry.
Glad that u like my work also.
I am truly very sorry for that bhaiyya….
literally sorry ??????…
at first I thought you are a bit but then I rejected the idea …
once again sorry…
no now I have got a male reader as well…
once again sorry and thanks for commenting
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Really amazing start,
will read the other parts also soon,
you indeed are an amazing writer