Hi… Guys I am back with an os..I will try to finish this in 3 to 4 episodes..this is a short prolouge I am giving…
We can see a girls eyes welled up…and some people are badmouthing her…
Lady1-pata nahi kyun yeh kisi ki galti mere bachhe par dal raha hai….
Lady2-look she still doesn’t have any shame…chiii..
Lady 3-yeh najayaz aulad ki zamidari koi nahi utenge…
Lady1-why are u still standing here for. .ohh to trap my son again..
She didn’t feel affected by their words but then er eyes were continuously staring at on man for his response…
Lady1-beta you itself tell this is not your child know…
Man-stammering….I don’t know who’s child this is…
The girl closes her eyes and let her tears fall from them..
She gives a painful smile to him…
Lady1-get out of the house…
She goes from there…….
Over with the prolouge….I will try to upload part 1 soon….please comment and tell me if its boring…..I will stop it…
Guess who that boy and girl is…
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the boy & girl r our swasan?
Amazing prologue….plzz upload the os soon!!!
Thanks dear!!!will try…
Wow it’s so interesting. I think it’s swasan n sanskar is saying all that in misunderstanding. Hope so will be waiting
Thanks….but I am sorry to say this story is not like that….stay tune to know what’s happening…
Nice
Thanks dear…
is that girl is swara? just continue its interesting. And yeah please upload a next part soon. I m waiting for it.
Yes she is swara… Thanks..
nice continue soon
Thanks Mariya…
shekhar and shamishtha
No dear its our swasan…thanks
Awesome
Thanks Shan…
Please upload soon.
.I like it… Waiting for u….love you ?. Thanks for ff
Thanks Sam….??
Please upload soon.
.I like it… Waiting for u….love you ?. Thanks for ff
Thanks…I think u commented twice…??
Ready with popcorn for next part…
update soon SRSL…
Thnk u… :0 *Sanskar speak up u gonna regret otherwise… *my dream..
Then di bring a huge dabba of popcorn and get ready for my entry with part 1…let god fulfill your dream??
Obviously,swasan???.. Interesting concept dear.. Plz continue.. Waiting for the part..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thanks dear??
nice
Thanks anu…
Amazing……… Continue soon……
Thanks purvi dear….
Nice..
Thanks Soujanya….
Nice one dear…. Continue
Thanks vidhi dear…
I hope it is swara and sanskaar. Nice
Yes it is… Thanks
Wow loved it
Thanks dear..
Awesome dear…..
Thanks hemu di….
Plz update soon. It’s amazing ……
Thanks tiya..
Wow.. Interesting dear.. ?
Eagerly waiting for the first part.
Thanks Pramudi…
Ohk its swara n sanskar… bt how can sanskar do dat??
Or
Swara or some1 else n sanskar gonna marry her n accpt her child ??
Its intrstng… continue soon
Ohoo.a lot of questions…just wait for part 1 all your doubt’s will be cleared…thanks..
Interesting.. . Pls try to post soon…
Thanks…pikachu…
nice…y did sanskar do like that?
Thanks.u will come to know it in the next episode..
nice..continue soon..
Thanks…
awesome..!! Are they swasan??!!
Thanks dear…
Awesome dear….
Thanks…
Super amazing