Hello friends Dheemahee here…
I m of 18 year and will turn 19 on 29 of this month … I m doing IT engineering.. Completed first year and now having vacation till July then 2 year will start .. I m from Gujarat…
If anyonemissed the intro then here is the link of intro…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/soul-siblings-intro/ (hope so link ai)
Here we go with our first part…
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A room is shown..Where a girl is shown crying…She is non other than ishana….She was crying and recalling here childhood days…
Flashback
A man is see scolding a girl who was just an age of 4 …Due to scolding she was crying badly (choti bachi he Yar dat padi gi to roa gi na…)man was saying tu AK kalank he hum PE..Tere ane SE meri Zindagi barbad ho gai he..tu kisi kam ki nahi agar pata hota ki tuj Jesi aullad peda hogi to kab ka Mar dala hota tuje…(Vo man aur koi nahi Mr Dev Mehta the aur vo choti bachi ishana thi)… Actually huva aisa he ki Mr. Dev Mehta has a great loss in his business and had a bank rupt…As he was carrying an old generation thinking he thought that this all happened because of ishana so he was scolding her like any thing…And this is the reason he never ever liked her….He Neve ever wanted a girl child but due to some confusion that time she was born so he had take her and gave her place into there family but failed to give respect to her…And also thinking about his reputation mr. Dev Mehta has accepted her as a daughter but never ever had given her the rights of a daughter…
Present
This all was noted down in her diary ..(. actually She has a habit of writing diary after that incident she shares each and every thing to her dairy to share or to be calm down herself)..Her chain of thought was disturbed by the knock on the door…She cleared her eyes and then opened the door as soon as she opened the door she saw a cute boy holding a plate of food for her…He was non other than ishaan her small cute bro…The only solo reason of her to live she was living only for him…He was her soul her life line her everything…Form childhood she didn’t got any love from her parents only the way she got love and affection was from ishaan and her friend’s who were more than sisters to her….She was happy and living life because of all of them…Once she tried to end herself but her friends and bro supported her and make her understand the meaning of life….Now though she has many reasons to break down but when she sees her bro her friends she gets courage and the Moto to live….She love all of them more than anything and can go to any extend to protect them….
After having her dinner she just kept her head on her brothers lap and gone into a deep sleep…This was there daily routine that after dinner she just sleep on her brothers lap and forgot all her wories and sleeps peacefully….And her brother use to care her forehead and make her sleep and then just adour her ……???…and both will convey many things with there silence and will understand each other.. and the time where ishana sleeps peacefully is the most peacefull time for ishaan too.. this is how they both r connected to each other i.e from Heart to heart ?.
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Here I M INTRODUCING NEW CHARACTER whom I m going to add into the FF and will be introducing soon into coming parts…. HERE they r….
RUDRA TRIVEDI… Classmate of ishaan…Same age…Fun loving..Same as ib he is our rudy the great …. Friend cum bro of ishaan and ishana…
Brother of Bhavisha TRIVEDI…
BHAVISHA TRIVEDI….. An independent girl..A director…. A Writer… Friend of kuhu ,mrunal,affa, ishana and many more…Very kind hearted..But if something comes to her family or friends u will face her bad avatar..(sso type avatar)…
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Here I have just potrated some flashback and bro sis moment…
Thank you everyone for your support on mine intro part and hope so it will continue for all the parts …. Love u all and once again thanks..??
Do tell how do u all feel about this part…Do comment and tell…Love u all…
~Dheemahee
23 Comments
Awesome dheemahee…
But this was a short one…
I appreciate your efforts in writing this….
I know you are writing for the first time…
And I am eagerly waiting for next part…
And of course for the story to unfold…
Luv u to infinity…
Chalo now post the next part soon…
Ya I know this one was a small one but will try to make somewhat longer one sorry for this and thanks a lot … Will post soon..till than tc dear…love u too.???
Hey dyuti I am here to comment first of all you rised 2 important topics old thinking and the birth of girl child this is such a topic which touches soul… Being a girl I can surely feel it…. But we say na that every bad has a good in it.. Ishaan is the good fact in her life… I am loving what ur trying to portray… Bro sis moment’s ?…. I love it but last me I was not expecting my entry to this ?sso wala avatar… Kafi tareef kar Di tumne… Jiski I guess zarurat nahi thi..
Try to remember one thing that we have all kinds of Readers who knows Hindi n don’t know Hindi try to write in English for them…. Moreover the efforts are appreciated ???????
Love you dyuti
Thank you so much didu. And ya u very well deserved this place infect is SE bhi zadya… So don’t talk such a way.. and I m happy u liked this part and ya will try to write mostly in English… thanks for the support didu.. love u..???
Amazing
Thank you.
It is awesome dear
Thank you so much..
Amazing update dear.. loved bro-sis bond.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. plz post soon..
Thanks.. will post soon
Wow!!! Awesome update dear…..
& the brother-sister bonding was fantastic….. I just loved it to the core…… Eagerly waiting for the next part dear……
Post asap….
Love you dear…
Tc….
Thanks di… I m happy that u liked the bond of the bro-sis.. thanks for the support.. love u too di ?
Awesome Diyu u did great job with and the way u portrayed bro SOS bonding was amazing ??????
Thanks poo di.. glad u liked it.. love u di?
Hey, dear..this is excting episode
Loved ittt a lottt
Awesome bonding
Nice job..
If you have ti9me..do read my FF too..LOve ya!
Thanks dear.. if u don’t mind can u please send me the link of you FF.. so I can read it out…
Sure, I will PM you! ???
Nice one dhee. Going to read the next now ?
Thanks dear… Glad u liked it
Great work young girl its realastic
Thanks devang
Mahee… I knw m super late. First of all apologise for that?.. but yaar ur epi is driving emotions?.. ishana has faced a lot.. nd i jst hope she gets all happiness she deserves.. the epi was fab❤❤.. vil read the nxt?
Thanks di… Koi nai atleast u read it and also commented it’s much more then late… Vese lagta he kuhu NE Sahi likh he D3 me ????… I m glad u like it …