Hey guys ..I am Tanya ….I am new but old enough to write ..ha ha ha
Now the story is simple with good twists and turns ..not complicated …and I am not an suspense maintainer like dolly …..and emotion writer like Saba
These two r my fave writers …and I do appreciate others who r writing their ff …..
No proof read ,
Laksh picks his phone …
@mm
@raglak room
Ragini : Laksh where r u …
Laksh : hmmm ….office meeting ….y
Ragini : no actually its late now ….its going to be 12
Laksh (angrily) : so what ragini …u should get used to it OK …now don’t disturb me ..I have some work…
Ragini (tears) : OK …bye
Laksh hangs up …
@Swasan room
Swara calls sanskar ..
Swara : sanskar when will u come home
Sanskar (serious tone) : I have work Swara ..it will take time ….
Swara (sad tone) : but sanskar ..the time …
Sanskar (irritated ) : its not new to u Swara ….so ….bye …
Swara (sad tone ) : OK bye …
Sanskar hangs up …
Swara : when I am not with him …then only he will regret ..
@dining hall
Swara comes down fast ….
Sujatha : Swara be careful …..something will happen to child …
Swara : OK ma ….(Swara is 4months pregnant )
Sujatha : where is sanskar …
Swara : he has work ma …that’s y he didn’t come …
Sujatha : this two na …..u r pregnant ..he should be with u ..but he ….Swara u go and sleep ..OK
Swara : ji ma …but I will wait for him ..
Ap : it won’t be good for child na ……you should rest Swara …
Swara : OK ma …I will
Ap : good ..now jao soja …(ap kisses Swara forehead )
(Sujatha and ap loves Swara …as she Is their pet and she is the elder bahu)
Swara goes back to her room …
While going …she goes to raglak room
Swara : hi ragini …
Ragini (sad tone ) : hi Swara …why r u awake u should sleep now
Swara : now u don’t start ….
Ragini gives a little smile
Ragini : jiju is pamparing u I guess
Swara (tears) : in ur dreams …
Ragini notices her tears ..
Ragini : again in office ..
Swara : haan ……where is Laksh …
Ragini gets tears ,.,
Swara : same …
Ragini nods …
Swara : I can understand ragini …..but Laksh is unfair …its been only 2month ..u both r married ..he should at least ,…
Ragini : leave it Swara …I think better he would marry his office ….but urs is more worse than mine
Swara : haan ….he doesn’t even care about me …I hate him …
Ragini : don’t worry Swara ..
Swara cries ..
Swara (crying) : its been two years of marriage …we only talk in nights that too rare …..he didn’t even come for check up ……
Ragini (tears) : don’t worry di …(Swara)
Swara and ragini chat …..and Swara leaves to her room
@swasan room
Its 2:30
Sanskar comes to the room
He finds Swara awake …..she was sitting on the sofa and watching something on the phone …
Sanskar : Swara y r u awake ..
Swara looks up hearing his voice …
Swara : why do u care …
Sanskar (serious) : y r u answering in this manner …
Swara : sanskar do u even know …u have a wife and u r going to become father ..
Sanskar : Swara I have work ..
Swara (angrily and shouts ): then y the hell u married …..
Sanakar (serious) : now don’t make an scene …Swara
Swara (shouts ) : do u really think ..I am making scene …..
Sanskar : haan ….
Swara cries
Sanskar : Swara plz …..don’t start that again …..
Swara : u r so mean sanskar .,,
Sanskar : I don’t care …,
Swara wipes her tears
Swara : OK I want DIVORCE ….
Sanslar was shocked ,..,
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Hope u all like it and plz comment
Tanya
16 Comments
nice
Wow amazing suspence plz make it long next time
superb dear
nice…something new
awesome please upload soon Tanya can’t wait
sorry posted wrong name
Nyc
Good start dear
Very different and amazing… Nice start
nice next part soon
nice next part soon n plz daily part upload karna
osum yr…super se upar…tanya r u aana?? sry if not
its me!! sry the email adress was different nah..so..im kritika..
osum tanya!! are u aana ?? if not sry
Kritika plz post ur ffs
Awesome