Hai…….I guess u all forgot me…… Never mind…… It’s ARS with a ss…….maybe of 5-6 parts…… Now I’m giving a small intro…..pls give ur suggestions and support……….
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Girl:(crying)….badepapa….badimaa……pls….believe me……I’m not lying……. How could you think that I’ll cheat him…..u know he’s my life…….mom….pls tell them……
An elderly women in late 40s:…(sad):..haa bhaisab…… Why are you blaming our daughter for this unknown..??? I’m sure……
Dp:BAS….Sujatha……..NOT a word for this girl……. She will leave this house….that’s it.. … Did you forget what he told……no more discussion….
Ap:but….ji….let him come back……
Dp:..I told…NO MORE DISCUSSION………guards……..
Two men in uniform comes……
Dp:…throw this girl out…….and….. I don’t want any of her belongings in my house…….
One of them takes the bag and other hold her….
Girl:.(crying miserably)…..noo…… I won’t…..leave….mee…… Mom……pls……badepapa…….pls…….
Sujatha:…ji…..Why are you silent….do something….
Rp: whatever happening is right………and you Sujatha…..if you want to support this girl…….then forget that l’m ur husband……..
Girl π broken voice)….Mom…dad……pls don’t fight for me………. If you all want me to leave….then…. I’ll………
Suju :beta…..I’ll also come with you….. I know u can’t cheat anyone……
Girl: it’s ok mom….. I know u believe me……but….(a voice rings in her ears…”I don’t want to see even ur shadow…..”…..dad….when I come back pls…I don’t want her in my house..) I can’t let u two fight for me…… You have given the love of mother for which I was waiting in my whole life……. And…. I don’t want you to sacrifice ur happiness for me…..ur life is with dad and ……sa…ns..kar……
Bye mom….. Take care………
She took her bag and walks out……
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A handsome young man is shown sitting in the rock near a cliff….. His dark chocolatey eyes are filled with tears……tears of feeling betrayed…… There was a battle between his heart and mind…….(yeah… I know u would have guessed…..it’s our sanskar)…
Heart:…so…. U think she has cheated you……
Mind:…no….it’s not just a thought…it’s the truth….
Heart:…. Soo…the love and care she gave…???
Mind:.all fake……just acting….
Heart: really……do they seem like acting????????
Mind:…whatever he saw doesn’t look fake….
Heart:…that can be a plan…did anyone gave her a chance to explain??????
Sanskar jerks away all his thoughts…
Sans:( to himself)… Did I really hear her….I didn’t even let her explain…. No….. She won’t cheat me…… I have to talk to her…….
He calls to his mansion..and gets to know that she has left…..
Sans (to himself):……god…. She left……no…….How could she leave me…….oh….even I told her not to show her face to me….but…..why did u leave without explaining…..no…..I can’t sit like this……. I know where you will be……just wait for me dear……if I’m wrong I’ll do whatever you say…..
Sanskar hurriedly take his car and goes……..
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A broken bridge……. We can she the same girl staring to the depths…… Tears still found its way down her milky cheeks that had sign of 4fingers…..
She says to herself:…..Why didn’t you trust me sanskar…..was our love that weak…..you didn’t even let me talk…….its only you that lives in my heart…..my each heartbeat is for u…… But…… now my reason to live also left……there is nothing for which I should live…….
She takes a deep breath and looks to her folded fist……she stares at the broken piece of mangalsutra.. Fresh tears moves down…and then begins to move forward……
Suddenly she felt a hand stopping her….she turns……
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Hai guys….hope u like this introduction……
I’m confused about the pairs…….. I like both swasan and ragsan…. What to do????
Guys pls do comment and give ur suggestions…….
41 Comments
Its amazing!! definitely swasan!!
Swasan please….although there are many swasan ff…because they are made for each other
swasan
Swasan
Awesome dear
Dear it was fantastic tremendous phenomenal loved it please swasan as it suits more for your storyline just a guess anyways post asap love you loads tc byeee
Awsm concept dear…Plz continue….And pairs are swasan…
Take care
Keep smiling?
Nice
Intrstng…. only swasan ?
Nice !!! I prefer SwaSan :)))))
Super interesting