Abhi ended the song winking on the Mehra’s here screen shifted towards Pragya’s face which was more than irked by now as most of her knowing ladies were teasing her, here Abhi being in attitude said
Abhi: see I have done it
Ranvi: you have done it!!! Great!! But do you know how you will convince her?
Abhi: I have to do that too?
Prateek patting his head: do you have any mood of having dinner at night or not (tujhe raat ko roti khane ka shauk hai ya nahi hai)
Abhi: yes I do but why are you asking so?
Prabhas: because her face is telling that you will be punished tonight and that punishment will be no dinner tonight
Abhi: no, no my punishment is not that well she use to make me sleep in balcony in night
Ranvi: great!!!
Subhash: she resembles to mine because she always do the same with me
Yash: ARey you didn’t got her jiju she sends you out so that she could sleep on the bed alone after all she has such a big surface area and volume (arey aap samjhe nahi jiju wo aisa isliye karti hai moti so nahi pati hogi poore bed par to aapko bahar phek deti hai samjha karo surface area bada chahiye usey uska volume bhi to bada hai na)
Screen shifts towards Subuhi she was getting hiccups
Sakshi: What happened bua?
Subuhi: seems if someone is talking about me
Sakshi: nothing is like that you enjoy
Subuhi: Hmmm…
Screen shifts towards Yash again
Yash: The much she eats she is getting converted into the small elephant (Moti kha kha ke chhota Hathi ho rahi hai)
All blurted in laughing and there Subuhi’s hiccups got faster she said “today someone is missing me badly” screen flipped back to Yash
Subhash: don’t say like this otherwise she must be getting hiccups there
Meanwhile an announcement was made on stage and Pragya came to Abhi dragging him to side
Pragya: What happened to you have you drunk for the first time? (kya ho gaya hai aaj pehli baar pee li hi hai kya)
Abhi: nup just having fun
Pragya: fun!!! Li
ke this? (folding her hands)
Abhi: yup
Pragya: Mehta Sahab are you blurting that whats going on or shall I do something else
Abhi reminded every moment when she said something else that were sometimes breaking down car of Yash sometimes Driving the car madly having seat with him which was the most dangerous task he reminded the day when they were for his trip and he lied to her in same manner and then she drove the car madly at which every moment was RIP in advance he gulped his words and said
Abhi: No actually no I am telling you wait
He narrated the incident and then she said patting her head
Pragya: you go there and don’t try to do what they are doing you know their wives use to stop their meal for days and you are doing the same god what shall I do to him always he makes fool of himself (Arey idhar maro aap dimag kharab sai thara un ki lugaiyan te khana band kar de kare hai mai thara ke karun maharaj jad jaa hai popat ho ja hai thara ib na jaiye)
Abhi: but I was….
Pragya: no I was or you was just come with me and stay with me its time for Kaustuki’s surprise lets go
Here the announcement was made by Sakshi and Subuhi
Sakshi: so here we go with the life of 18 years of journey of her
Subuhi: the happiness and the sorrows included
Sakshi: here we go
Abhi came on stage as narrator and Bulbul dressed as Pragya and Purab as Abhi
Abhigya: Ye har nagri ki baat yaar ye har koochey ki baat yr (It’s a gossip of every lane every place)
Par kaun si nagri kaun sa koocha theek thaak maloom nahi (but which lane which place we don’t know propely)
Jo baat hume maloom wo ye (The fact we know is)
Ke rehte dono sath sath (they both stayed together)
Wo din ho ya phir raat raat (whether its day or night)
Par kaun sa din aur kaun si raat (but which day and which night)
Kuchh theek thaak maloom nahi (WE don’t know properly)
Jo baat hume maloom wo yeh (They fact we know is )
Ke sari duniya ke matwaley kehte unko cheekh cheekh (that every single person was saying to them screaming)
Ke mat raho tum saath saath (That don’t stay together)
Par kaun se log aur kaun sa saath wo theek thaak maloom nahi (But who were those people and what was that togetherness we don’t know properly)
Maaloom hai to bas ye itna ke (the fact we know is)
Chodi unhone ne ha saugat yaar (They refused every life by those people)
Paney ko ek dooje ka sath yaar (just to stay together)
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Abhigya shown towards Back and every moment of Abhi and Pragya was shown and Abhigya was narrating it from the front of stage and in back the drama was going on there then Divya also joined her
Abhi asked : did you planned this too
Pragya: no I am shocked too…. That how this all
Abhi: leave it, lets see its totally enjoyable
Divya narrated some part which was showing that both lived together after every taunt on her
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Arey ajab ghazab ye kudrat hai ya shaitano ki harkat hai (What nature is this, strange or the work of the deranged?)
Ke chot isey aur khoon behta hai uska behne (I strike his hand, but bruises she got and It’s her blood he feels it and He feels her pain?)
Hai jadoo tona anhoni (A magic spell, incredible!)
Na laana isko pass iske (Don’t bring her where he is!)
Inko door door le jao inko door door le jao (Take them far apart!)
Ye raah ghulam ka tona hai ya bhoot pret ki karni hai arey bula maulvi pandit ab kala dhaga bandhwao (It’s the work of gremlin, ghoul! Or the work of Dark forces, evil, foul call priest and tie the amulets, Tie the Maulvi’s amulets to their arms)
Inko door door le jao inko door door le jao (Take them far apart!)
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They remembered those days in which only blames of bad happening were with them from each other’s family but pain were equal of each other they were able to feel that pain which each of them were getting and everyone’s thought was to keep them far as Divya narrated it Pragya and Abhi understood that she is saying sorry to them indirectly and both smiled lightly he looked at her and then rounded his arms around her and the drama continued
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Abhigya narrated next:
Ab suno meri tum baat yaar (Now listen to me)
Par kaun si baat aur kiski baat (but what you will listen and whom you will listen)
Ye theek thaak maloom tumhe (you know it very well)
Un ki khushiyo ki baat yaar (this is matter of their happiness)
Par kaun si khushiyan kaun si baat (But which happiness what happiness)
Kuchh theek thaak maloom nahi (we don’t know properly)
Maloom hai to bas itna ke thi wo aisi raat yaar (the fact we know is that was night)
Jab khila phool ek raat yaar (when a flower bloomed in their garden)
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The day was dramatized when Kaustuki was born and both were too young doesn’t know how to take care of a child but still being alone and the only thing which was with them was Happiness and Happy Abhigya moments were shown where Abhi is holding Kaustu’s finger and she is learning how to walk then Basudha is swinging her in arms and Abhi snatched her and ran Basudha followed him and Kaustuki is laughing madly that time the role of Pragya was changed by Naira and Abhi’s role was changed by Priyansh
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Abhigya continued …
Ek baat rahi ek saadh rahi (only one thing was there only one fact was there)
Dono ki kismat sath rahi (that there destinies were together)
Baandh gayi ek dor se jo (they were bound by one destiny)
Woh dor humesha sath rahi (that destiny was with them)
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Abhigya sung in BG and Naira with Priyansh played their role
Hum Pe Sitaaron Ka Ehsaan Ho, Poora, Adhoora Har Armaan Ho (May the stars be benevolent upon us, may all our dreams become true)
Ek Doosre Se Jo Baandhe Humein, Baahon Mein Nanhi Si Ik Jaan Ho (May we have a little soul (young one/kid) in our arms that attaches both of us)
Aabaad Ho, Chhota Sa Ghar, Lag Na Sake, Kisi Ki Nazar (May our abode flourish, may no one’s evil gaze affect us)
And Abhi along with Pragya memorized Kaustuki’s childhood that with an unknown attraction they were attracted towards each other so strongly though it was an arranged marriage but wasn’t seems like love marriage and Abhigya continued…
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Divya continued…
Link of two lives joined to lives together
Joined two families together
Linked two hearts
Now she was growing with her speed
Abhigya: Naughty though
Divya: apple of her parents eyes though
Abhigya: star of her little baby though
Divya: second mother of her sister though
Abhigya: the time spent destiny took two hearts far from each others
Divya: but failed to take two souls away
Abhigya: the time spent and that bud bloomed into flower
Divya: But flower was more dangerous than the bud
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They got aside and Bulbul came adopting Kaustu’s attitude she started her act
Jugni o jugni Daude ji belagaam daude (Free spirited girl (Jugni literally means a female firefly), Runs around unrestrained)
Jugni o jugni Ambraan de taare tode (Free spirited girl, Breaks the stars from the sky)
Ambraan de taare tode Haan (Free spirited girl, Breaks the stars from the sky)
Jugni o jugni Aape apna bayaan bole (Free spirited girl, She says what she wants to)
Jugni o jugni Kitabaan dil diyaan khole (Free spirited girl, She opens the book of people’s hearts)
Maare Dhaayen dhaayen Naina di dunali Haaye (She fires the Double-barreled shotgun Of her eyes)
Ho Dhaayen dhaayen Naina di dunali (She fires the Double-barreled shotgun Of her eyes)
Ohdi har adaa Adaa niraali (Her every style is unusual)
Paanv hawa pe dharde Happy (Happy places her feet on the air)
Thaan le bas phir kar de Happy (She does whatever she decides)
Rang jahaan mein bhar de Happy Hoye Happy oye (She fills the colors in the world)
Naal Chenab de wagdi rehndi (She keeps flowin along Chenab (The Chenab River is a major river of India and Pakistan.))
Border ohnu takdi rehndi (The border keeps peeping her)
Haal apna khud kehndi oye (She herself speaks out how she is feeling)
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She went a side and then the face where Kaustuki was humiliated was shown that how she did what her heart wished and she had to pay like that which resulted in her distance with every relation, if she had shared it with anyone then she would have been blamed for the same
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Ki jo dil ki usne Toh duniya roothi (When she followed her heart, The world got angry with her) Haaye saathi sangi chhode (She had to leave her near and dear)
Karaar chhoota (She had to leave her promises)
Bahaar chhooti (She had to leave ths springs(Probably referring to the place where she grew up and passed most of the spring seasons),)
Khushiyaan huyi jhoothi (The happiness became a lie)
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Abhigya entered the stage saying and Bulbul acting as Kaustuki reacted after coming out from the trauma:
Arey sun lo zara kahaani (Listen to the story Of the willfulness)
Uss Jugni ki manmaani (of the free spirited girl,)
Koi laakh laga de rode (No matter how many pebbles are thrown its way,)
Rukta nahi behta paani (The flowing water does not stop)
Use behna tha wo beh gayi (She had to flow, so she did)
Behte behte yeh keh gayi (While flowing, she said)
Ishq mushq nahin chhupte hain (that Love and stink cannot be hidden)
Aur darti nahi jawaani (And youth has no fear)
Paanv hawa pe dhar de Happy
Thaan le bas phir kar de Happy
Rang jahaan mein bhar de Happy Hoye Happy
Oye Naal Chenab de wagdi rehndi
Border ohnu takdi rehndi
Haal apna khud kehndi oye
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The drama was going on well the narration was stealing Kaustuki’s heart when one voice diverted every mind and when turned back it was Verma ji Basudha’s neighbor who was the real victim of Kaustuki as she and Ganga had never let Purab and Rohan stay in piece he sung
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Ho baaghi aanchal udd da badal Akhaan vich shaitaniyaan (Her rebel cloth flies like a cloud There is mischief in her eyes,)
Tufanaan de ishaare (There is a sign of storms in it)
Ohdi chadhi jawani aafat laani Ishqan di nishaniyaan (Her youth will cause trouble There is an indication of love)
Sher ghazal sab haare (Poems, ghazals all have lost)
Ae taan lagdi ae zaat ruhaani hoye (It feels like she is from a spiritual family)
Ho lagdi ae zaat ruhaani (It feels like she is from a spiritual family)
Labhdi phire yeh dil da haani (She is searching for the love of her heart)
Paanv hawa pe dharde Happy (Happy places her feet on the air)
Thaan le bas phir kar de Happy (She does whatever she decides)
Rang jahaan mein bhar de Happy Hoye Happy oye (She fills the colors in the world)
Naal Chenab de wagdi rehndi (She keeps flowin along Chenab (The Chenab River is a major river of India and Pakistan.))
Border ohnu takdi rehndi (The border keeps peeping her)
Haal apna khud kehndi oye (She herself speaks out how she is feeling)
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At the end of it the lights turned on and there was the cake in front of Kaustuki where it was written Happy birthday Kaustuki the Don and reading the word Don Kaustuki understood it was none other than Bulbul who did it she blew the candles and cuts the cake in pieces Ganga jumped in mid
Ganga: didi you know how we celebrate birthdays In schools!!
Abhi: How dear
Ganga: just lift me up I will tell you
Abhi moved to lift her but she said
Ganga: No, no didi you bent down I will tell it to you in ears
Kaustuki bent down forgetting Ganga’s prank and then that happened which was shouldn’t Ganga held her neck and without giving her time to escape made her eat the cake and her mouth was opened in shock and her face was now tasting the cake
Pragya shouted: Ganga is this any way to behave
Naira coming ahead: of course not!! You must have took her neck like this (holding Pragya’s neck) and then you had to apply cake like this
Pragya being shocked: Aisa kaun karta hai bhai
Abhi giggled: My sister
He was laughing at her face when someone from back rubbed his face with the cake and said “Bete itni jaldi bhi nahi bachte itne white white kaisey jaoge bhai sahab when Yashika is here Naira didu no need to be fear (Bete why so hurry in escaping when everyone is getting make up then how can you stay clear)” Yash said holding his neck “ARey isko to aisey pakdo aur aisey de maro cake me (hold him like this and burry in the cake like this)” Abhi being irked took the glass of juice which was kept near him and threw on Yash and Yash searched something but he got only water so he threw it on him but unfortunately it poured on Shreya and she being irritated threw a spoon full of desert on him which didn’t hit his face as he bent down but in result hit Abhigya’s face she glared at Shreya and she shown oops expression then asked sorry but Abhigya was in no mood of forgiving her so she searched for something and found some water there which she threw on her but Shreya got aside and that water hit on Pabhas’s face now this was a challenge coz Abhigya and Pragya were in front of each other and Prabhas didn’t thought once he found some vine and threw the glass full on Abhigya and Abhigya being irked took the ice cream which was kept aside in hurry and threw on him Prateek tried to stop them but PRabhas threw him on Abhigya saying “hold your husband” and she pushed him aside and as a result Prateek was now buried in the cake in which Abhi was earlier here Abhi and Pragya are shown seated under the buffet table Abhi said “Is this a party!!!” Pragya said “Now they wont stop until they take revenge from each other” they both patted their heads and screen flipped back towards Abhigya and Prabhas they were on full swing there Yash thought some mischief and poured a glass full of juice on Subuhi but it resulted so costly for him because Shreya pushed him in the desert which was there then she fought with him with pillow and as he was sticky all the pillow furs were stick to his face and he was looking like hen now so Subuhi said “Now say my brother Kuk-du-ku” but before she can think anything else she felt something cold in her which made her shivering it was Subhash he poured a bucket full of ice on her and she being irritated poured him in the ice bucket itself and now Bucket was on his head then screen shifted towards Priyansh and Gaurav they were also escaped by hiding in the kitchen and here screen shifted towards Kabir who was fully covered with cake and Divya also they were seated on the floor and looking all the mess which was created in the party some were getting slaps some were getting punches some were getting back to back cakes some were getting deserts and some were getting ice and juice along with vine it was turned out to be a zoo when someone entered in the Villa it was Randeep he was shocked to see the scenario and before going in thought to ring the bell and with that voice of door bell everyone stopped and stood in same position in which they were and when he came in he saw one red fairy (Abhigya who was bathed with vine) one cock (Yash furs were stuck on his face) one yellow and blue lagoon (Prabhas as all the desert was on his face and clothes) three white rabbits (Kabir Divya and Prateek as their faces were buried in cake) two frozen fairies who were shivering (Subuhi and Subhash) two blue and red capsules (Yashika and Naira as they were looking like same after getting bathed with some sweet drinks) and two normal people who were stood aside they were none other than Abhi and Pragya
Randeep hesitatingly said: sorry for disturbance but I was being told that there is a party tonight at this place
Pragya from back: it was but now it is over but you can talk with her
Randeep was still confused because he was unable to see Kaustuki in this creatures land but no need of search as Kaustuki found him and shouted “What is he doing in my party” he silently moved towards her and said “I was here just to ask forgiveness from you for whatever I did am sorry for that I know it cant be rectified but you can give me a chance right!!” Kaustuki didn’t said anything she was just glaring at him and he again said “Look you don’t want to forgive me so don’t do it but at least give a chance to rectify my mistake” Kaustuki was still glaring at him and here screen shifts to Naira same sound came from back and same statement “I also need a chance to rectify myself” all of them turned back it was Sidharth with Manav a million dollar smile formed on Naira’s face and she rushed towards them without saying anything just Hugged Manav and Sadharth smiled looking at them saying “Sorry Naira sorry for everything” Naira nodded in don’t say with tears welled up in her eyes and then screen towards Divya and Kabir they also said “Forgive us too and come back with us” Abhi and Naira just hugged them back in forgiveness as they can’t keep their parents sad the messy moment turned out to be happy but when suddenly Abhi heard a voice from back it was Koyal who was arrived late said “won’t anyone welcome me!!!” Abhi looked at Basudha and said “Basu do you know how joker do make up” Basu replied in No so he said “see it now” he took a small cake which was left now and buried his face in it Basu gave a mouth opening expression and Yash being irked said “Koyal didi let me welcome you” Koyal being happy went ahead but to her faith Yash who was hiding cake in his hand he rubbed it on her face and said “Happy holi didi you know its long time we played holi!” all the cakes were on everyone’s face now nothing was left then Kaustuki said to Randeep “you want a chance!!” Randeep nodded in yes Kaustuki said “then promise you will leave your ego and anger today!” he nodded in yes she said “lets check it” he was confused including others when Kaustuki went out and took one rod which was kept back the door then started hitting his car and broke every glass of it punctured every tire Basudha was shouting again and again to stop but she never heard and destroyed it then after that she said being smart “how was it!!” Randeep being confused said “what was that”
Kaustuki: I broke your car
Randeep: I didn’t came here by car
Kaustuki: then whose car was this (being shocked)
Randeep: I don’t know
Kaustuki looked back and Basudha was glaring then she understood that the car was of Basudha and everyone were just looking what will happen next keeping hand on their mouth then Kaustuki said
Kaustuki: Bulbul Randeep have you ever raced with Mom’s slipper specially when it is more than the speed of 180 (Bulbul… Randeep kabhi Maa ki chappal ke sath race kari hai jab wo 180 ki speed se jiyada ho)
Bulbul: think of yours I have even done with utensils (apni soch maine to bartano ke sath bhi kari hai)
Randeep: maine nahi kari (I never did it)
Kaustuki: to bête bhaag lo kyuki meri maa ka ab danda uthega aur humari arthi (then run from here because my mother will raise her stick now and our funeral)
They started moving and Kaustuki went towards Pragya holding the rod and handed over it to her then saying “Go for it mummy” she ran in full speed and Basudha holding stick rushed towards her but stopped as all were escaped out then Yash was laughing “hahahahahahahahaha episode one se episode 99 tak bachayi hui gadi last me toot hi gayi kya baat hai maza aa gaya (hahahaha the car which was saved from episode 1 to episode 99 now it is looking beautiful hahahhaaha)” Basudha glared at him and got extremely irked on his laughter then giving a force smile to him treated his bike in the same manner and he was like “What the hell you done to my new bike” and she said “Tit for tat mama now laugh as much as you can” Abhi went near her and said “Are you mad you seriously!! You broke a bike right now!! Like mother like daughter” she smiled and keeping that rod on her neck and resting her hands on it said “So am I” BG played re lakk dhak lakk dhak jaaTni ke haav bhaav mein teji..( there is strong headedness in the way of the Jat lady.)
re anpaDh angaDh jaaT uThaave iske to nakhre ji.( the illiterate, unsophisticated Jat (her husband/guy) bears her tantrums.)
He nodded his head in disbelief and All said in chorus “Basudha ab to sudhar jaa (Basudha please understand now)
And she winked turning back Abhi nodded his head in disbelief and then smiled crazily at her.
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SO this was the end our meeting are now ended here with this episode as this is my ever last episode understood or not!! well if not let me tell you clearly that this normal writer whose stories were without any romance will never come back again here to present her stories among you, you people supported me alot and i wrote alomost four stories here with different styles and now no more as am done with KKB and no more Abhi Pragya please so it was my last writing and last episode from tomorrow you wont wait for any surbhi or narrator here there wont be any writer who will write freely with so casual language and lol you people have to read one ff less well silent readers be happy coz one writer got eliminated from your list now you are silent for very less and my commenters just one thing for you ‘Chalti hu Dua me yaad rakhna” bye bye guys will miss you but believe me am not going to return back 🙂
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WTF how can u just leave us like this di I am sorry I was a silent reader butvthis is not fair like totally leaving the abhigya fandom di Pls don’t go away like this we love ur stories and this one was my favorite I love ur style of writing di pls don’t we will miss this ff a lot and it’s ver hard to know that ur leaving abhigya fandom Pls di come back we love ur ffs di ??????? loved it di
first of all congrats for your completion of 100 episodes di… You’ve have done a great job. And sorry for not commenting as I busy with so many tests, assignments, project even now I am reading all the updates in a single day please accept my apologies…
Coming to the story the great epic ended I m going to miss this story so much one of my favorite and well narrated story and ending I loved the mehra family entry and randeep heart change is too good.. Miss you so much di… Sad that you’re not going write stories anymore but I accept your decision Best wishes for your future plans stay blessed keep smiling…
Hey its not fair yaar…we r crazy fan of your writing…pls yaar…
Congrats for 100?
But pls try to come back
First of all,Its Not A SURPRISE…..Its Something SHOCKING……Anyways You Decided it! So we can do Nothng in it…..Its So Sad To Know That You R Not Going To Write Anymore…….Its Kkk….& Coming To SOF……….3 SEASONS! You Started to Write “KB Story Of Faith” From January 5 2016……Now the Journey Ended in April 30 2017 With “STORY OF FAITH KB SEASON 3″…….Such a Long Journey……..I Think You Completed 4 Fan Fics & Nearly 11 One shotS In the Name Of “NARRATOR”………Your Stories R Always Realistic……..Dont think that Im Just Praising you…..Its Truly What I felt for You…….Every One Says That ,”One’s Thoughts Influences Their Writings Too”……I think thats what Attracted Me Towards You & Your Writings…….Im Not Going To Forget Your Writings Never Ever……..& In My View,The Most Precious & Bookmarked Epi Will Be “KB Story Of Faith Season 2 Second Last Episode”……..& This SOF SEASON 3 Started In a Different Aspects……You Showed us A Worst Phase Of Such Filthy Rituals……..Wrote About Female Foeticide,Relationships,Molestation,…….Much more……..Those Emotions Which You Described In Your Writings Can Never Be Replaced…….You Made us Feel It……..Thankss To You For Writing for us Even You Got Less Comments too……You Showed Us A Different Perspective of Romance……& Some Heartly Felt Family Moments,Funny Challenges,Music……..So on…………..& This Last One Too Filled With So Much Of HAPPINESS & CRAZINESS! & This One Have Much More Funny Dialogues Too…….Especially The One Which,Stick Have Meeting With Legs????????????I Really Dont Know What To Say Further More………….ITs My Last Comment In Your FF Na……..I ADORE YOU & YOUR WRITINGS DUDE! I GOT A SIS CUM FRND IN YOU………..GONNA MISS YOUR WRITINGS DUDE………..LOVE U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH????????????????????????????????????????????????????????This Ones R for ur Writings??????????????????????????????????????????????HATS OFF TO YOU DUDE???
Oh Dude,Teri Shock ke Chakkar Mein Bataai dena bhooli hi gayi……..Mein bhi na…..100 EPISODES!CONGRATS DUDE??????????????????????????????????????????YOUR FIRST FAN FIC THAT COMPLETED 100 EPISODES & SADLY LAST ONE TOO…………Gonna Miss This One……Kaustus Alarm clock,Abhi & His Silly’s(BASUBHI)Moments,Sissy’s Wafers Love,Kaustu’s Yo Yo Honeysingh,Papa ~ Daughter Mischievous,Their CHILL PILL Moments,Yashika & Naira’s Broomstick Treatments,Basubhi Family Moments (Those TV Fights,Garden wala sequences in UK Trip,Beach Walk….),Papa ~ Daughter Teaching Sessions,Kaustu’s Variety Answers,Basu’s Childhood Moments in those CD’s,Their UK Trip,Basu Meeting Her Family,Basubhi’s Seperation,Abhi finding so Many Ways to talk to his Silly,Their Confession,The Old Mehra Mansion & Hidden Secrets,Renewal of Old GOLDEN MOMENTS,Entry of Ranveer,Remembrance of Pulkit,Old Flashbacks,Kirti’s Wedding Fun,Abhi~ Yash Challenges,Yash’s Pranks,Abhi’s Singing,Basubhi College Flashbacks,Breaking Cars,Grown up kaustus Masti,Gangu & Kaustu’s fights with Purab & Rohan,The Courageous Basudha,At last The variety Party & Basu’s Car…………Such a Beautiful Chain Of Memories……Its All Had Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh of Funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Gonna Miss This for Sure………Feeling Emptiness Somewhere Dude…..Dont know why………LOVE UUUUUUUU
I am rosy I looked both the stories of kkb faith
I liked abhigya’s bond in both the stories and also it made me realise that love is not just physical but it is something which we should feel and live and seriously u made me to feel that
And also I liked the way you showed abhigya are bring up their children
But the most memorable part in your story is when pragya was not able to speak and pregnant and how abhi cared for her, abhi’s bonding with pulkit and last but the story that touched my heart is pulkit’s death
In this season I liked how abhigya cared for each other that is though they got arranged marriage but the bonding they had for each other is pure love
And I liked the way how ganga and kasturi pulled abhi’s legs in their pranks
But whenever abhigya are separated in your story you gave a clue also that they will be together soon which this real kkb fails to give the audience
And at last I liked the way of your narration for your story which is simple but superb
I want you to come back but I won’t compel you but if you are coming back I will be the first person to read your ff
One more I am one of your silent reader
Oh My???????????????????? THE CAKE FIGHT?????????????? maray gi kya hasa hasa kar????????????????????????? your wife has more surface area and volume?????????? transforming in small elephant??? kitni tarif karo tumharey humour ki bhai???????????? so finally Basu’s car is broken????????????????? and poor Yash ????? his bike????????????????? kasutu’s expressions after knowing that car is of basu???????????????? My God?????? buht hasati ho tum???????????? Okay let me control now… Coming to the narration of basu’s and abhi’s story?????????????????? It was splendid???????????????? Awesome????????????? so perfectly written???????????????? Which ever episode you have written till now is beyond perfect! Seriously awesome!
And now as you are leaving and not going to write i am feeling like: “Tery bina guzara Ae dil hai mushkil”?? it is because for me SOF has not only been a story but an addiction my obsession! I remember clearly that it was episode 5 of season 1 when I randomly started reading SOF but it casted such a spell on me that i went back to read the previous 4 episodes and from that day I started admiring you and your writings I didn’t knew who you are but your writings made me fall in love with you! I am not only a crazy fan of you but also a crazy admirer of you❤️❤️ You present even the most sensitive topic in such a great manner that words become less to praise you! Each and every episode of SOF and even GOD is fresh in my memory! These stories are bookmark for me! Yes they are! You are different from all the other writers! Your way of presenting is unique and fabulous!????? the Second last episode of SOF season-2! I still remember how amazing it was! You depict every emotion let it be sadness happiness humour heartbreak or anything else, so awesomely! SOF 3 seasons and GOD! This journey was the most beautiful journey filled with every kind of emotion! You don’t drag anything you always manage it in such a way that readers interest develops by himself/herself. And in this season you have chosen such a sensitive topic (village one) so in my opinion your story should be published on a large platform! Minds of many people can change through this! Here i have something for you:
Chehra ik phool ki tarh shaadaab hai
Chehra us ka hai ya koyi mahtaab hai
Chehra jaise ghazal chehra jaan-I ghazal
Chehra jaise kali chehra jaise kanwal
Chehra jaise tasawwur bhi tasweer bhi
Chehra ik khaab bhi chehra taa’beer bhi
Chehra koyi alf lailawi daastaan
Chehra ik pal yaqeen chehra ik pal gumaan
Chehra jaisa ke chehra kaheen bhi nahi
Maah-ru maah-ru mah-jabeen mah-jabeen
Husn-e-jana ki tarif mumkin nai!
Seriously nai mumkin hai tumhari tareef! Alfaz kam haan tumhari tareef k liye! With this an amazing journey have come to end a journey i will never ever forget! Best story i have ever read! I can’t accept the fact that it has finished… but everything has to be finished at some point! Once again i am saying “Tery bina guzara Ae dil hai mushkil” for not only a story has come to end but my addiction has come to end! I will miss this badly!????
Aur haan iss sab mein tumhey 100 episodes k liye mubarak tu dena bhool he gai?
So congratulations for 100 fantastic and amazing episodes????????????❤️❤️❤️?????????????????????? and i want to say something about SOF cause this is going to be my condition now “mujhe azmati hai teri kami meri har kami ko hai tu lazmi” i know i have gone crazy???? but it’s you who have made me crazy???? bhai mujhe lagta hai commented zara lamb hogya right???? sorry for that??? toh ab mein chalti hu??? i will miss this a lot! Love you???? and yes thank you for giving such an amazing story❤️❤️❤️ Ab jabke yeh khatam ho gai hai mein bhi TU nai aney wali???? sirf SOF k liye ati thi? Ok now byeeeee????
Awesome update.. its sad to read that u will not write at abhigya plz di come backk why dont u reply us
First of all sorry again for being a silent reader, either I am lazy to comment if not it comment doesn’t get posted. U said surprise in one of the prev episiodes but this came as a shock like Reshu said. I have a lot of fond memories for this ff. I used to wait for it like crazy and always refreshing the page to read it. Whether it is season 1, 2 or 3, all have the same effect. But lately I had been busy and also unwell which made me not to read your ff on time?. That made me comment irregularly too. Whatever it is u always have the perfect narration to express the issues and this season had highlighted a lot of social issues which always makes me surprised and shocked at the same time. Surprised as in how easily u write them and shocked how this kind of things still happen. The past few episodes were like so engaging that I had to find time to read it in one go.
Of course as a narrator u had given wonderful shots that makes me read them again n again. I always feel your writing is from the heart not from the mind. And its so realistic!!! Now where will I get to read the kind of narration that is realistic and heart touching? Very sad….I will miss u and your writing here badly, do come back if possible. While typing this itself it makes me feel that I am having a void of something. I have only one thing to say which is your writing is always something that I will cherish it as it always gives wonderful feelings, thoughts and beliefs that remains in my heart forever. Will miss u! All the best for your future endeavours! Do tell me if u are writing any book! You have all the capabilities to be an amazing author?. Sorry again for irregular commenting/being silent reader.
Hello Wat is this? U cant do this to us… U r unique writer u should have to come back with the new story… Pls yaar… Coming to the story,its really a happy ending…. Thank u so much… I ll miss this lot…
Congrats on century
oh my! is this the surprise that u told u r giving us? i dont know whether u will read this cmnt or not…but if u read, then read it carefully…
and like r u serious didi? what’s gng on eh? i never thought u will give us such a shock? did u mean this by ur surprise? not at all fair…
but this epi was one epic thing…just and awesome epi…ah! the way abhi irritated prags and without a way surrendered to her…the drama as kaustu’s bd surprise…the reunion…the cake, desert fight…randeep come back…and the end…it was juz …mind blowing superb no words…
from the beginning itself this was an awesome fairy tale…it was juz a diff depiction of ur own style di…a very practical way of how life is and will be…loved every epi of this…will surely miss such a lovely writer who makes things simple in every possible way…who depicts infinite love with zero words…who brings limitless happiness in just a single line…who moves everyone in emotion…who can actually bring solutions for probs that is thought to have no sol…who can deliver everything in a natural language and still make a great impact…
all these are not juz praises…but true words that must be spoken…i am sorry, i was angry initially…but as u hv decided, i know it cannot be changed, not by me! all i can do is to bid u an adieu… but i will not do it with a sad face…
may u take all the lovely, happy memories with u di… happy leaving di…
i know, every exit is an entry somewhere else…so, all the best for ur further plans…will always remember you…coz u were more like a friend nd sis…how can i forget u?
so, bye bye…take care…stay blessed…
love u so much ????????????????????
Sych a long journey frm a long time dnt knw if i can cme back frm the world of ur craziness and reality in ur ffs but cant frgt u fr sure gonna miss u loads tq fr such a wonderful pleasure of tis ff and othr ffs cant evr frgt u sis love u loads muuaahh pls dnt frgt us????????
Oye Jugni! not fair not at all fair I wanted to read another mystery story written by you I thought of telling that after you finish this. I thought you wouldn’t go but you….! Ok no problem as you have decided go ahead but if you write something somewhere please do let me know I want to read those. Let it be My wife’s Murder, SOF 2 seasons I am yet to read season 1, Games of Destiny, few humor filled one shots, ‘That girl in a veil’ how can anyone forget that awesome story and many more to go! Please please do inform me if you are writing elsewhere or writing for some other series. With love – PRATHI!
So it ended. Serious hone se pehle hans lun? ???????????????? yeh ladki jaate jaate bhi jaan nhi choregi. Bhen m kya ab ek ek dialouge ko highlight kr k hansne wale emojis dun, tu ne itne ache tareeqe se likha h k ?????????? banda bhoole se bhi na bhool skta yeh update , bhen full form wala update likha h tu ne ?? seriously, amazing. The narration was perfect, everything from start to the end was so perfect that I am spell bound seriously awesome , kastu , yash, yashika, basu, abhi, kabir, divya, prabhas, abhigya, gangu, bulbul. Meri jaan maar k dum legi kya, seriously this was book mark for me.
Now coming to end of this: Isn’t this irony, that the girl who doesn’t believes in love , fell in love with most aesthetic story at first sight and has been following it since very begginnig, I believe in fate thou. Because reading and becoming crazy for these series is what I never thought. I am a girl , who restricts herself to get crazy for characters like abhi and pragya but you made this girl crazy, you want to know how? So why am I crazy? What makes me crazy? Stupid questions they are ???? Because 25-26 (may be) updates of SOF season 1 , 63 updates of SoF season 2
60 updates of Game of destiny
10 shots of Murderer of my wife
100 updates of SoF season 3
And One shots starting from What’s the big deal to Shoot. ? in all these, you highlighted the social issues, the family issues and most importantly you showed the values of relations. You got these updates book marked by me because of constant flow of humor, emotions, feelings. I am seriously always left spell bound for your these updates, see how you have made us crazy that still non of us have forgot the PULKIT. You made each of these characters lively and that’s what I love about you, the most beautiful thing was you never treated us as readers, you made us live in the update, we used to feel everything , you almost got me in tears either by heart wrenching updates or by humor. And to be honest you know, at the start I was also your silent reader and now you have made this silent reader go crazy!! And credit goes to you for these beautiful updates, at certain times I had my bad day, but your updates always drove a smile at my face , you are one of the best writers. People say nothing is perfect but I guess in your case this sentence doesn’t suits. Because for me in each your update, you were perfect. What can be more perfect than GOD gang? What can be more perfect than pulkit, abhigya and prabhas? What can be more perfect than Gangu, yash, yashika, naira, saakshi, ranvi, basu, abhi, kabir, divya, subhui? Subhash? Richa? This Somiya has got crazy, the whole 2016 was best for me, because I started to read your writings, and it’s 2017 april! This journey was beautiful, at certain times I was so illogical in my comments due to craziness ? I won’t even say sorry. It is you who made me so, it is you who shaped each thing perfectly, and now I am like Tareef karun kya uski jis ne tujhe banaya. Your intellectual power got your writings the beauty , it is very hard for a writer, to make the reader feel the emotions, but you did that in perfect way. NO, today there’s no one to stop me from commenting Man. This is the last time ever I am commenting at your TU writing , you know this reader ?? I never read your updates as a friend , i always came here as a reader who was always astonished to see these beautiful updates, you know what today I won’t even dedicate any song to you, because today all songs failed and this journey left me spell bound, I always had a fear this ending but actually this ended with most aesthetic way. You know you’ve always got me Inspired, you are truly best , and my favorite. You can call this praising but not buttering ? I am truly typing what my heart says. You know what were my favorite dialouges or words when I used to comment; 1)hatss off 2) husn e jaana ki taareef mumkin nhi 3) you have not got the humor but humor has got you. And now In akki’s style I want to say Bache ki jaan legi kya be ??? i don’t want to end the comment but I have to right? So , hatss for this amazing journey, thank you for making us read your valuable writings, thank you for making us feel your writings, thank you for making us smile, thank you for the lessons of life that you gave through your writings, thank for portraying a soldiers life, (Sof) thank you for shaping the situation of girl’s (sof) , thank you for showing that supressing voice is not just the solution, thank you for showing that obsession for something can be dangerous(GOD) , thank you for shaping the beauty of friendship and thank you for the suspense story, thank you for the one shots you wrote, thank you for making us feel how Ignorance can be worst for fellow person (OS;first Ignorance) Thank you for your writings , Thank you for making us smile and laugh at same time, Thank you for giving us goosebumps, thank you for these writings. Thank you ? i hope, at a bigger plat form you can show these amazing skills, whenever you’ll write something, I’ll be there standing still to be reader of your updates , doesn’t matters if i m first reader or the last one, but always I want to have the oppertunity of being the reader. And yup Thanks for reading my illogical and boring coments ? hatss off, now somiya is going ? Tata.
(This is second time I am submitting this, I hope TU gets it posted)
I enjoyed ???ur FF’s alot……..They r fabulous ???……………I will miss u ??,………..All the best for your future ???…….. Love u ???
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THANK YOU FOR GIVING US SUCH LIVELY STORIES. Thank you thank you thank you. We’ll definitely miss this Beautiful writer. Love you Rockstarrrrr – Riya.