Thanks Parichary, Isuri, Mansi di, Sowmy, Tia, Jyoti, Riana di, Jasmine di, Nandhini di, Orchid/Nafisa and all who read and give their amazing feelings to this fan fiction. Sorry for being late, I was very overwhelmed by studies, please, if possible then try to forgive me. Don’t know when I’ll get free next time, but will try to update. So, Let’s start part 12. Hope you all will like it. Give your valuable reviews below in comments.
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Priya: I saw that a girl is sitting on plane..Girl’s face was blurred…A woman was sitting with her…she ask the girl her mother’s name..Girl says Mine/Priya name…suddenly.. Plane door opens and woman pushes the girl..
@Ishra’s Room
Raman stands…
ISHITA SMIRKS….
she takes out a dagger n stabs Raman…
Raman falls on floor…
He bleeds…
Ishita: its my hobby to wipe the thorn out……
@Hall
Moulvi: kill the devil inside you..
Tanvi shoots him: But to kill the devil..I’ve to kill you first….(Laughs)..
Tanveer: Zoya or you Asad..?? tum mai se phele kise mout Qubool hai..??
Zoya: mujhe yeh mout Qubool hai..
Tanveer ups the gun…
A bullet being shoot is heard…
SOMETIME BEFORE….
@Modi Mansion
Tej: Jhanvi..what happened.? why you shouted so violently…??
Jhanvi sobs: Tej..I saw a very horrible dream…Raman is on plane and suddenly the plane blasted…See..my heart is worrying greatly..please call Raman…Tej…
Tej: Calm down..(gives him water glass)… He will be in plane…and you know mobiles are on flight mode in plane.. First you considered me ghost and now this..??
Jhanvi is crying still..
Tej: don’t cry(wipes her tears)… we’ll call them in morning…hmm..??
Jhanvi nods and lays…
Tej switches off the lights, Thinking: Old woman spoiled my sleep… (irks)..
@Raya’s room
Ram keeps the glass nearby after Priya drinks it…
Ram: Now tell me ur dream..!!
Priya: I saw that a girl is sitting on plane..Girl’s face was blurred…A woman was sitting with her…she ask the girl her mother’s name..Girl says Mine/Priya name…suddenly.. Plane door opens and woman pushes the girl..
Ram: Girl could be anyone… Did you..??
Priya: I’ve belief that she is mine Ishu..
Ram wipes her tears…
Ram: it may be signing to a good event…let’s hope..today’s morning has some special thing for us..
Priya nods…
Both sleep…
@Mansion
A Woman is shown..
Two kids{1 on left and 2 on right} are shown…
she shouts waking…
Kids Girls wake up…(kids were of 4 years)..
One girl: Ta hua?
Woman: Nothing Seher and Sanam… you both sleep.. Hmm..
Girls nod…they sleep..
Woman in her mind: Hey Khuda, was this dream true?? my heart is worrying..has that Tanveer returned..?? No..No..If this happens… it’ll be a big storm for us..
IN AIR..
3couples are shown..
Asad to Zoya: Mrs. Farooqi..How this happened..I mean how Tanveer got to know that were coming back to Agra through plane…
Zoya: See..I’ve said before also that Tanveer faked her death..she’s alive…can’t say anything…
Sid: Roshu… can’t believe..we’re saved in so many people…
Roshni: Hey don’t call me Roshu.. Call me Roshni.. Is it..?. And all credit goes to me as I bought Chips packet from Bombay..!!
Sid: Don’t be old fashioned…Bombay is old name of Mumbai…Currently.. its Mumbai.. so let it be…and I know you’re creditor…
MERE ROOBAROO…PLAYS(SIDNI MUSIC)
Raman: Ishita..when we’ll be on earth..its so boring to be in air…all’s looking so strange…
Ishita: Yeah..Ramoo…
Raman: You called me Ramoo…that’s our gardener name…
Ishita: yeah Gardener ji…(laughs)
Raman: laugh laugh…Ishu ji…
Ishita: so cute na Raman..ISHU..
Raman: aagaye na line pe Ishita…BTW…what’s down.??its like blue color..!!??
Roshini: Is it River gangs..??
Sid: Its whale’s belly… Lool..
Ishita: guys…its polar bear…
Zoya: Ishita…
Ishita looks at her…
Zoya signs her to do something.. and asks WILL SHE DO by eyes..
Ishita replies in yes through eyes….
Roshni by eyes: What happened…??
Ishita tells her through indications…
Roshni rejoices…
Boys worry…
Girls ask boys to close their eyes…
Boys do same…
Girls remove parachute…from boys…and ask boys to open eyes…
Boys get shocked seeing no parachute…
Le compte à rebours de l’amour
Le compte à rebours de l’amour
Le compte à rebours de l’amour
Le compte à rebours de l’amour
dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
cinq, quatre, trois, deux… un!
they do different things,stuns, kits in air…
Ude dil Befikre
Ude dil Befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre
Ude dil Befikre
Ude dil Befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre
Raat bhar jhoomenge
Aasmaan ghoomenge
Chaand ye choomenge
Taaron ke maarenge phere
Ude dil befikre
Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre
Un!
dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
cinq, quatre, trois, deux… un!
Girls act to fly in air…
Dandana, jhanjhana, sansana jaaye saansein
Jagmaga jaayein aankhein milte-milte-milte hi
Ishita: Time for Air Groupie…
Dagmaga, khankhana, hadbada jaaye saansein
Everyone gathers…
Ishita takes out her phone and clicks AIR GROUPIE…
Tadpada jaayein baahein milte-milte-milte hi
Aag ke raile hain
Barf ke dhele hain
Baazi pe khele hain
Thode thode dil ke tukde
Ude dil befikre, ude dil befikre
Angaaron me nikhre, ude dil befikre
Un!
they act to walk in air..
Rokna tokna thaamna na maane
Tairna yeh jaane dariya dariya dariya mein
Jeetna haarna chheen’na naa jaane
Doobna ye jaane dariya dariya dariya mein
They clicks their pics in different styles…
Dard mein ye nikhre
Haath mein jo pakde
Banke rooi bikhre
Armaan hai roohon ke nakhre
Ude dil befikre, Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre…
Ude dil befikre, Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre
They fall in pool…..
Ude dil Befikre…
Befikre… udey…
Water splashes out of pool.
They even enjoy in pool and play in water and splash water on each other…
Befikre… Befikre…
dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
cinq, quatre, trois, deux… un!
@Gohem car
Gohem are shown…
Ahem: Gopi..our first proposal is so memorable…
Gopi: Are you planning for second one also..??
Ahem: Not so..!!
Gopi: But I’m up to make it more memorable!!
she nears her head with his head….
She clicks their pic….
Ishq hai aansun
Ishq hai daghma
Ishq sukoon hai rahat hai
Ishq hai sehra Ishq hai daariyan
Ishq junoon hai sehmat hai
Ishq hai aansun
Ishq hai daghma
Ishq sukoon hai rahat hai
Ishq hai sehra Ishq hai daariyan
Ishq junoon hai sehmat hai
Both smile..
@Mansion
A woman comes running to pool…
Her face {Shalini Kapoor Sagar} gets cleared.
Asya,SidNi and Ishra worry…
Woman appears…
Zoya: phoopho…
Asad: Ammi..
{So Guys, Woman is Dilshad bi}
Couples come out of pool..
They’re wet…
Dilshad: Zoya… Asad..who’re they..??n how all of you directly landed in pool..??Why is door made..?First of all, You all go…and change ur clothes…Zoya/Asad..You give them ur clothes…
Asya leads two couples and take them to 2 rooms respectively…
Zoya gives clothes to IshNi..
Asad gives clothes to SidRa….
@Mansion’s hall
Dilshad is shown sitting on Sofa…
Asya and Sidni come…
Roshni: Ishita and Raman are just coming..
Dilshad: Asad Zoya…. Now tell me how all this happen.. and you were about to come one hour later..??
Asad: Ammi….Actually, Its all happened because of Tanveer…
Dilshad: What..??
Zoya: Yeah Phoopho..!! Mr.Khan is right…
Dilshad: Oh mere Allah!!
Zoya elaborates the whole incident to Asad….
@Ishra’s room
Raman is shown in yellow shirt and black pants…
Window is opened…
Ishita I’d shown in yellow shalwar-Kameez…. With yellow duppata…
She is setting her duppata….
Wind blows…
Her duppata blows….
It falls over Raman..
Ishita runs to Raman..
Her hairs were open…They blew…
Suddenly Ishita shambles….
Duppata blows up…
Ishita falls on Raman…
They fall on bed….
Duppata fall on them…
DIL KAHIN RUKTA NAHIN
DIL KAHIN RUKTA NAHIN
CHALTA HI JAYE TERI AUR
DIL MERI SUNTA NAHIN
OOO..SARI FAZAON ME HAI
MEHKI HAWAOAN MAI HAI
TERA AUR MERA FASANA
OOO..JANNU MAI BHI YEH
JANNE HAI TU BHI YEH
JANNE YEH SARA ZAMANA
KABHI KAM NA HOAN GI YEH CHAHATEIN
PAL PAL BARHI HAI YEH MOHABBATEIN
They had a sweet eye lock…
Ishita stands and shies…
Raman caresses her hairs….
JISM KE SAMANDAR MEIN EK LEHER JO TEHRI HAI
USS MEIN THORI HARKAT HONE DO
SHAYARI SUNA KE YUN
DO NASHELI AANKHON KO
MUJHE PASS AAGE BARHNE DO
ISHQ KI KHWAISHOAN MEIN
PHIR UNN BARISHOAN MEIN
AO NA…..
@Hall
Ishra comes..
Sid stares at him…
All looks on…
Raman: What happened..?? Any prob..??
Sid: Lipstick mark….
Raman smiles..later shocked: What?where its..??
Asad sees and shies..
Ishita sees the mark on Raman’s face and smiles….
Zoya: So romantic…
Roshni: OMG!
Dilshad: Wait amin…
She asks Raman to clean the mark…
Ishita: Zoya, Now tell us what happened actually..why Tanveer was after you..???
Raman cleans the mark….
Asad: Its a long story…
Sid: that’s why tell us…
Dilshad: Story started when Asad was in college…Asad Tanveer were friends… Asad’s relationship was fixed with my bro-Zoya uncle’s son…Tanveer’s friendship changed into love…But she was shattered knowing about Asad Zoya relationship….It was Asad n Zoya’s Nikah. when….
FLASHBACK..
Asad’s Father-Rashid{Vaquar Shaikh} is shown talking to Dilshad…
Rashid: Dilshad…Have you seen my phone..??
Dilshad: It’d be in room… Go and see there…
Rashid leaves..
He comes to his room…
he sees his phone on bed….
He goes near bedside…
Someone turns him n stabs him…
She was Tanveer…..
RE BOOOS SA…TUNE FROM QH PLAYS…..
Tanveer: Forgive me Rashid Miyaan! go to ur heaven journey..!May God bless you..!!
She stabs him again..!!
Rashid screams…
Tanveer: And now..its turn of Razia bi-Zoya mom…
She laughs evilly…
OTHER ROOM
A woman is shown in room….
Razia’s face gets cleared{Alka Kaushal}
She in her mind: Today…my Zoya is gonna start a new journey of life….Aae Khuda/God….Help my child to get successful in fulfilling the responsibilities of wife….
SOMEONE FROM BEHIND: BUT IT IS GONNA BE VERY SAD…THAT UR DAUGHTER-ZOYA WILL DIE BEFORE FULFILLING THE RESPONSIBILITIES OF WIFE..!!
Razia turns…
AND IT WAS TANVEER….
Razia: Who’re you..?? and who let you enter in this house..??
She sees dagger in her hand and gets shock: why it is red..??
Tanveer: Because someone has been killed….
Rashid is shown…
He was bleeding continuously….
Razia: What..??
Tanveer smiles evilly….
Tanveer stabs Razia…
Blood falls on Floor….
Tanveer: You’re zoya’s mother na…so you should be treated specially…..
She stabs her again and again….
Razia stumbles.. n falls…towards door side….
A man enters…
Man got shocked seeing his wife being killed….
He was Gafur Ahmed Siddique {Tej Sapru}-Zoya’s father…
Tanveer: Oh Oh..!! Why the hell you came here…Now I’ve to murder you first…
She takes vase…
She comes near him…
She hits vase on his head…
Vase breaks into small pieces….
Siddique manages to push her…
Tanveer falls…
he closes door…
Asya’s nikah is going on….
Moulvi: Zoya Farooqi… your nikah is gonna be fixed with Asad Ahmad Khan..!! KYA AAP KO YEH NIKAH QUBOOL HAI..??
Zoya: QUBOOL HAI…….. QUBOOL HAI…….. QUBOOL HAI……..
Moulvi: Mubarak ho….Nikah mukammal hogaya…..
Dilshad distributes sweets among guests…..
Guests congrats her…
Siddique come running downstairs…
He falls from stairs….
Zoya runs to him…
Zoya shouts….
Siddique: Zoya Beta… Asad’s friend Tanveer is here…. Get Sa…..ve…..
BUT HE DIES…
Zoya: Mr.Khan..Tanveer is here….Do something….
Asad calls police….
Someone shoots up….
All looks at her….
And she is Tanveer….
Tanveer: Old man closed me in door and tried to save you all but. his luck…. He himself died…Otherwise…I’d’ve murdered him….
Zoya: Why you did this..?? ur enmity is with me….then why..??
Tanveer: What enmity…..it’sn’t just enmity… its revenge…war…n basically… every thing is fair in Love n war…so…I killed 3 people…-Razia bi…Your father-Siddique sahab….and Asad’s father-Rashid Miyaan..!!
Asad is shocked…
Dilshad shouts: Rashid…
She runs to her room….
Guests there worry…..
Dilshad comes to her room….and gets shock seeing Rashid’s Dead body….
She sits on floor crying……
@Hall
Moulvi: It’sn’t right thing beta..!!Don’t be mad in your love….
Tanveer: Moulvi sahab… khel tou Abhi shuru hua hai….Why i don’t kill you firstly..??
Moulvi: You’ve lost ur first personality… which was good personality…kill the devil inside you..
Tanvi shoots him: But to kill the devil..I’ve to kill you first….(Laughs)..
Tanveer: Chalo! His game ended…. now you turn Zoya Asad….. but whom to kill first..?? Zoya ur you Asad..??
Zoya: If death is in my luck… then kill me first….. not Mr.khan…..
Asad: Don’t be mad…ur life is more important…Let me fulfil my husband ‘s duty..duty of protecting you..!!!
Tanveer: tum mai se phele kise mout Qubool hai..??
Zoya: mujhe yeh mout Qubool hai..
Tanveer ups the gun…
Cops enter and shoot on her hand….
Gun falls from her hand…
Cops arrest her….
Tanveer shouts: Asad and Zoya ..I’ll be back for revenge soon..!!
FlashBack ends.
Asya and Dilshad ‘ve teary eyes….
Ishita wipes Zoya tears…
They hug…
Raman consoles Asad…
SidNi Comforts Dilshad….
Zoya releases from hug: After going to jail…Tanveer started acting to be mad…she was shifted to Mental asylum.. but she was watched all time critically by mental asylum staff…6 months ago….We got news that Tanveer had jumped from terrace…her dead body was also buried but actually.. it was someone else body…..n in plane…we only got to know that she is alive… and had faked her death….
Dilshad: Now…I think you should go and take rest….
Everyone goto their rooms….
@Asya’s Home”Khan Mansion”
Asad n Dilshad are shown sitting on dine…
Zoya is cooking food…
@Ishra’s room
Ishita wakes up…
She sees wall clock…
She hurriedly stand and runs to washroom…
She gets ready..
She comes outside…
A CAMERA IS SHOWN CAPTURING THRR VIDEO….
Raman wakes up..
He stands…
Ishita smiles…
Raman smiles….
Suddenly…ISHITA SMIRKS….
she takes out a dagger…
She stabs Raman…
Raman gets shock…
Ishita: Forgive me If possible…Its necessary… you’re thorn of my life….
Raman falls on floor…
He bleeds…
Ishita: and its my hobby to wipe the thorn out……
@Dine
Zoya serves food to Asad and Dilshad…
Zoya: I’m going to Call Ishita n Raman…
Asad nods,…
@Mumbai-Modi Mansion
Jhanvi comes out of MM..
she is in a green designer saree… green long earrings…. little makeup….
Tej stares….
Jhanvi: What..??
Tej: I was seeing ur beauty…
Jhanvi: OMG!
Tej: Beauty..MY foot…We’re already late for meeting them…
Jhanvi: Cafe…MY FOOT…I’m more important to me…. Got it..??
@Cafe
Raya reaches at cafe….
Ram purchases a popcorn packet…
Raya share popcorn and wait for Tejhanvi….
@Agra-Khan Mansion
Zoya opens Ishra’s room door….
Ishita is smiling to see Raman being on floor bleeding….
Zoya runs to Ishita …
She Raman n gets shocked…
She looks at Ishita….
Ishita worries….
Precap:
Zoya: Ishita: What had you done…?? Are you in senses..??
Ishita gets angry and stabs Zoya….
Zoya shocked…
@Market
A man{Mahesh Thakur} is shown walking with a kid(Around of 5-6 years)..
LATER…
Man is bounded by ropes on chair…
He to Kid: Beta…If they do some to me then you’ll’ve to take care of Your mom and bro from that man….
@LATER
Ahem in shocked voice: Hello Gopi..!!
Gopi: Ahem..why ur voice is looking so disturbed..??
Ahem: Nothing Actually!!
@Cafe-Near Washroom
Tej: No one can even think that,..I’m FAKE TEJ…..
Dramatic tune play….
He turns…
He gets shock seeing Raya…
LATER
Mr.Khurana comes…
He: Mr.Modi…
Raya turns and gets shocked..
DITA TATA TUNE PLAYS….
@Middle-Class House
A man is shown lying on bed…
He was paralyzed…
His face{mahesh thakur} gets clear…
Collage-
| Raman | Zoya | Ishita |