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A Story of Love and Revenge (Naagin+Kawach) Part: 16 Last Part {Diwali Special}

Thanks Siddhi,Lucky,Jasminerahul,RSTHEFFWRITER and all to giving love to this fan fiction. its last part of this fan fiction, even then thanks to everyone that you read and give your amazing feelings to this ff. If someone wishes to read previous parts then can read here;

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So,Let’s start last part/part 16.

Recap: Rivanya’s imagination,Swalika’s truth, Janki is alive,Swalika being Roshni, Hera and Bhaironat dies,Malisha dies and Guru Maa dies,Rajbeer’s face changed,Suri stabs Rithik and shivanya save rithik and kill Suri, Tanvi dies.

Rainaa comes in her big bee form with shesa sitting on her to Raheja house. Shesa comes down from Rainaa. Rainaa turns into human. Pari too reaches. Rivanya also comes. All goes to Yamini.

Shivanya says Maa! Yamini sees Rithik and hugs him. Rithik says Maa! please tell me truth. Yamini tells him. Rithik says how much you bear due to us but never say a word. Yamini says Mother can do anything for child. Rainaa says aunty, I’ve a doubt in my heart, can is ask you? Yamini says yes. Rainaa says are Divya,Aangad and Amrita are your and Ankush’s children? Yamini says No! They Are sangram and my children, my blood. Shivanya sees Aangad,Amrita and Divya and says you! Trio comes to Yamini and hugs her. Shivanya says today our family will be happy forever. Rithik says now,we’ll live a happy life. Shesa says those evil spirits story will end today! Rainaa says use. Rithik says who evil spirits are? Shivanya tells him. Rithik says you bear all this and not utter a word even. But not now, there story will end, we’ll finish them. Pari says yes. Janki comes and says this will help you to fight against them and give a trishul to Shivanya.Shivanya thanks her.
At Night,
All comes in garden. Pari says why don’t they come till? Shivanya says when daughter will come,Mother will come automatically. She says Manjauliaka, come in my body, in your house.

Screen shifts to Saudamini’s cave, Manjauliaka says Maa! what happening,I’m get blowing with air. She gets blowing with air. Saudamini follows her.
Manjauliaka comes in garden. Saudamini comes. Shivanya says I say na! they will come. Manjauliaka says Maa! I’ll not spare her. Saudamini says I’ll not spare all here. Rainaa comes and says First,fight with me. Manjauliaka ignores her and strangulates Shivanya. Saudamini says why Kali/Black naagin isn’t saving her sister. have she lost her powers? Saudamini strangulates rithik and says Lobe will complete after death. Shivanya diya Saudamini leave her. Rithik falls and dies. Saudamini says he die and laugh evily. Shesa stabs Manjauliaka with Trishul and says if I’ve lost my powers then it doesn’t mean that I can’t help my sister. Manjauliaka turns into ashes. Saudamini shouts Manjauliaka. Pari says I’ll not spare you saudamini. She try to change into naagin but can’t.

Rainaa says Saudamini! Saudamini says my daughter powers will. of mine now and I’ll not spare you all. Manjauliaka powers transfers into saudamini. Saudamini says Rainaa,you’ve torture me a lot. She throws fire on her. Rainaa falls and says Maa Kali! evil is winning and you can’t let this happen. Come,to destroy evil. Saudamini try to do something. Rainaa close eyes and then open. Rainaa stands and says Saudamini!I’m ichadari Makhi/bee and however we’ve 2 lives but after first one we lost our powers. Now,you’re winning but evil can’t win. Saudamini strangulates Rainaa and says Your tongue is working more and more. Saudamini pushes Rainaa. Rainaa falls. Rainaa says Maa! evil is more winning ,come! otherwise good will lose. Saudamini laughs and says She’ll destroy me.’

Suddenly Saudamini looks in Shock. Wind blows fast. Maa Kali enters in Rainaa and sees at Saudamini. Saudamini says Maa! Leave me,forgave me, I promise,I’ll leave,I’ll become good. Maa Kali looks in anger. Saudamini shakes. Maa Kali beats Saudamini repeatedly. Saudamini shouts. Maa Kali throws Saudamini. Saudamini turns into ashes.
Rainaa falls and turns into her real form. Shesa says are you OK,Rainaa? Rainaa says yes.
Shivanya comes to Rithik and says Rithik opens your eyes. Shesa says your powers can give Rithik one more life. Shivanya says yes and spells something and her eyes turn red. Shivanya powers transfer into Rithik. Rithik wakes and hugs shivanya. Rivanya tune plays. Pari says let’s thank God. Shivanya says yes. Rainaa and Shesa was to leave but Yamini stops them and says where are you both going? Rainaa says work is finished, now we’ve to leave too. Yamini says No! from now you’re part of our family. Shesa and Rainaa hugs Yamini.

All comes to their house mandir. Pooja starts. Pari touches his womb and smiles. Rajbeer sees and says really. Pari nods. Pooja ends. Pari says All of you, have a good news, I’m to be a mother. Rainaa says Congratulations pari! All congratulates Rajri. Shivanya says Pari, you’ve lost your powers. Pari says what? Shivanya says Yes, its rule of naaglok, that if Human and naaginvanshi give birth to their child,Naagvanshi will lost their powers. Pari says I’ve no pain of losting my powers. We’ll live like humans now, all sisters are human now. Shesa says yes shivanya, pari is right. we will start a new life. Shivanya says OK! Yamini says its till late, you all go and take rest. Rivanya comes to their room. Shivanya says Rithik ,I was ignoring my love. but I can say now that I love you. Rithik says I too love you. .

pal bhar thair jao
Dil ye sambhal jae
kaise tumhe roka karoo
mere taraf aata
har gam phisal jae
aankhon me tum ko bharoo
bin bole bate tum se karo
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho
rah be rah be
nahair nagia se tere duniya me
mere duniya ha tere cahaton mai
mai dhal jatee hoon there aadton me
agar tum saath ho

Rithik touches Shivanya’s shoulder.

tere nazron me hai tere sapne
tere sapno me hai narazi
mujhe lagta ha kai batain dil ke
hote lafzon ke dhokebaazi
tum saath ho ya na ho kya farq ha
bedard thi zindagi bedard ha
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho

Shivanya shy.

Palke jhapakte hoon
din ye nikal jai
bhaite bhaite bhage phiroon
mere taraf aata
har gam phisal jae
aankhon me tum ko bharoo
bin bole bate tum se karo
agar tum saath ho
agar tum saath ho

Rithik say will you? Shivanya says yes I’ll.

tere nazron me hai tere sapne
tere sapno me hai narazi
mujhe lagta ha kai batain dil ke
hote lafzon ke dhokebaazi
tum saath ho ya na ho kya farq ha
bedard thi zindagi bedard ha
agar tum saath ho

Both consummate.

dil ye sambhal jae
agar tum saath ho
har gam phisal jae
agar tum saath ho
din ye nikal jae
agar tu saath ho
har gam phisal jae

4 years later,
Raheja House is seen. Rithik and Shivanya hugs a girl and says Happy Birthday Shivangi. Shivangi says Thanks you Mama and Papa. Rajri comes downstairs. A boy runs to them and says have you forget my Happy Birthday? Pari says no and wishes him. Rajbeer too wishes him. All comes. Rainaa says family pic is must. Shesa says Of Course.

* Story ends on family pic*

shakaib

He said that we belonged together because he was born with a flower and I was born with a butterfly and that flowers and butterflies need each other for survival.

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