Hiii guyzzz fizoo back wid boring chappy asual….. Guyz do u all not likinggg it i got less cmnts in previous but its alright cuz i m stopping this ff for sometime due to exams n family wedding sooryy guyzz n yupp thanks to al of yewh who supports n silent readers alsooo hope u like this one love u alll
Chap-9
The episode starts with swara reaching hotel she pays the driver n headed towards entrance she goes to reception
Voice and swara at union: i need one room
Both recognized their voice n looks at eo n passes a smile ofcourse its laksh
Rec:sorry mam sir only 1 room is vacant
Swa:ok give me the keys
Laksh looks at her amused
Lak:noo give me
Swa:no laksh i came first so i will stay
Lak:no i said first soo i will stay
Swa:i said na i will stay(anger)
Lak:and i said na i will stay(anger)
Now both bcm angry n starts arguing over the room all looked at them amused when one person come n takes the room key but they still arguing
Lak:ok enough i just want to stay here at 1 night we can share a room
Swa after thinking:ok
Both turns towards the reception n get a sweet smile in return n direction to go
Both inocently smiles n headed outside
Swa:its just bcz of u…. If u dont start arguing na then i will b staying here
Lak:oo hello ms its u who started u can talk polietly also na but no its against ur rule right
Swa:urghhhh first done mistake n blame other huh
Lak:whenever i commit mistake i have guts to accept that also
Swa:ooo really
Lak fakes smile: yes n now without wasting tym on arguing u can think also where to go cuz its late night u will not get any place to stay also
Swa: u think na cuz u wanna go
Lak:really n u planning to stay here on road
Swa:there is one more hotel i m going there n holds her luggage n starts to leave
Lak:i came from there only n no room available
Swara makes a irritating face n huffs n starts thinking n after sometime she see laksh trying to making some call
Swa:i have one place to go if u want u can come wid me u can go from their tommorw
Laksh after sometym thinking nods ok
Both swalak leaves
Scene shift
Sanskar enter in his house n throws all his bags on floor frustratedly n put his off his tie n throws on his bed n goes to washroom to fresh n up
He comes out of room wearing casuals shirt n pajama n goes to kitchen n make coffee for himself
San to himself: wooow the great sanskar maheshwari is making coffee for him self first time in his life huh (again ragini eyes flahses infront of her n his coffee splits on his hand)ahhhhhhh my hand(he hold his hand) What the hell y that stupid girl stupid eyes coming infront of meee urghhhh if i would have seen her face na then today she will b gone lucky one who got save huhh but y should i bother about her to hell with her n sanskar never ever things affected on u got that n frowns n goes n applies ice on his hands n pour coffee in cup n sips it
San:not bad u can make a gud coffee n smiles
Scene shift
Ragini comes in a house which is given by kamal to stay she stands outside the house n remember something
Fb shows
1 man and women with 2 girls are shown stepping out of the car
Women:are u sure he will understand
Man:yes mishti i knw my frnd he will understand me
The man n women reveal as shekar and shomi and 2 girls are swaragini who r 6 years old n sharmishta is shown 4 months pregnant
Shehkar hold misthi hands n swaragini hand as well n rings the bell….. A man wearing suite open the door n look at them amused
Shek smiles: kamal
Kamal looks away and walk inside
Shehkar enters along with misthi n swarag
Kam: y did u come here
Mishti is about to say when shek hold her hand
Shek:dont u meet ur best frnd
Kamal laughs
Kam:best frnd who u…. The one who take my bride n marry her on my wedding day shehkar gadodia
Shek comes n holds his hand
Shek:if i know it was u then i will never do that pleads understand mee
Kamal jerk his hands n looks away
Shek bcm sad n his eyes bcm moist
Swarag notice this n release their hands from shomi n goes to kamal n pulls his shirt
Kamal looks down n finds swarag glaring him
Swa:how u make my papa cry
Rag:yes how u do that i will not leave u…. U bad uncle
Shekshom and kamal looked at swarag confused cuz they are looking at kamal in anger n glaring him
Kamal smiles n kneel down infront of both
Kam:ooo so u both are angry that i make ur papa cry han
Swarag nods angrily
Kamal laughs n pulls both of their cheeks
Kam:ok i will not make ur papa cry but if u both agree on making me ur frnd then
Swarag look at shekar who smiles through his years n happily hug kamal
Who caresses both swarag hairs with a evil smirk on his face
Kam break the hug
Kam:do u want choclates
Swarag happily nods yes
Kamal smile n brings choclate n gives swara who happily eats then he go to shehkar n hug him
Shek(moist eyes): thank u sooo much kamal thank u sooo much for forgiving me
Kamal smiles
Kam:let the past will b past u both sit i will bring something to bring
Rag goes behind him to ask water n sees him angrily eyeing the knife infront of his hand with rage
Kam: i will destroy u Shehkar u n that durga snatched everything for me now its high time to pay back n evily laughs
Rags sees him n got scared n goes to shekshom n sits scaredly btwn them
Shehkar caresses her hairs
Rags look at kamal with fear while he looks at rags n smirks
Fb ends
Rag is standing at dehleez of the same house with moist eyes
Rags sarcastically laughs on herself on her fate who bring her again where its all started from where that evil enters in their lives to destroy their lives to snatch their childhood from them to kill her family to ruin his father…. The days of her childhood and the wounds of her childhood still refresh in her heart whenever she tries to forgot them its hurt its hurt her soul her heart which is a soul reason of her revenge…. Yes she came back to that evil house the same place which she enters years ago n that evil plan to destroy them now she will plan in his own house to destroy him to make him tooo begg for that like she begged years ago like he make her family begged her parents for their childrens live her sister which is her heartbeat her reason to life n her small brother who makes her smile yah her brother who makes her fight with her soul sister her better halves the memories of her childhood still in her heart to give her strength to fight for right n now she will fight for right n make them bl**dy people to show their real places which is worst then that seems Ragini Gadodia is back u devil “she smirks n wipes all her tears n steps inside the house with determination to destroy him ”
She arranges everything n then take her mobile n call kamal
Rag:yes sir i have reached ur house is perfectly fine yes i have no prblm here dnt worry….. Yes sir i knw what i have to do tomorrow u dnt worry i planed everything n will give u update when eveything is done ok bye sir gud nite sleep well
“Sleep well” yeah he should sleep well cuz from now onwards his sleep will b snatched just like my childhood is snatched she smirks n lays down on her bed n closes her eyes ignoring the tears which is continuously flowing n telling her she is NoT her but she least care n dozed off
Scene shift
Swalak are standing at entrance of house … The house is small and enough of 6 people to live peacefully it has garden n some rides n a bench to sit….. Swara look at everything with moist eyes and sees a name plate ‘Gadodia house’ yes its their kolkata house where they live in childhood where she spent the best time of her life she caresses tha nameplate n remeber something
Fb shows
Swarag are shown sitting at bench with lots of colors markers n papers swarag are shown writing on wood peice with colorful marker
Swarag:Done says swarag smiling widely n look at wooden piece in which ‘ Gadodia house’ is written with beautiful colors both swarag gives hifi to eo n runs inside n sits on shehkar lap n closes his eyes
Shek:aray princesses whats thiss
Swarag: Surpriseeeeeeeee shouted swarag n show them the name plate
Shek smiles n caresses both hairs
Shek:its so beautifull who made it
Swarag:weee
Shek stands
Shek:ok now we will fix it at outside ok
Swarag jumps in happiness
Shek goes n fix the nameplate beneath bell
Swarag smiles widely n holds eo hands n kisses shekar cheeks n runs to play
Shek:arayyy shehkar look at duo n smile shaking his hand n goes caressing the name plate
Fb ends
Swara eyes are moist n she looks at name plate wid pain…. Laksh notice this n fake coughs…. Swara jerks n hurriedly wipes her tears n hurriedly take out keys under the carpet n opens the door
Swa:come
Laksh is kept looking at her and enter inside the house
Laksh analyzed the placed while swara keep standing at entrance looking at name plate
Laksh look at her n says
Lak:nice place
Swara jerk n look at him n weak smile
Lak:soo its ur house
Swa:how do u knw
Lak:ofcourse the way u r looking at this place seems its connected to u
Swa smiles: yes its my house where i spent the most valuable days of mt life she smile through her tears
Laksh feels pain looking at her like this n tries to enliten mood
Lak:do u have something to eat cuz mice are running inside my stomach he said holding his stomach n makes a puppy face
Swa smiles seeing his face
Swa:emmm i dnt knw cooking but u w8 here i will b back till then fresh n up n she leaves outside
After sometime she returns holding food in her hand n see laksh roaming here n there holding his stomach she smiles n goes to her n tap her shoulder
Laksh turns n sees food he grabs n goes on table n serve on plate n come near swara…..swara look at him confused……. He make a morsel of. Food n put it near her lips
Lak: its bad to avoid food when u r upset
Swa:i m nt hungry u eat (calmly)
Lak keep the morsel at same place
Lak:my hand is paining i also want eat…. But if u dont eat then i will also not eat (he look at her sadly n keep at same place)
Swa look at him n then morsel she goes n sit on couch…. Laksh come n sit next to her n keep the morsel….. Swara irritadely sighs n looks at him while he smiles n eat the morsel
Lak holding his hand n do exercise to reduce pain
Swara take the plate n make a morsel n keep infront him
He smiles n eat after sometime they both finish their food swara makes herself n laksh eat like this n laksh kept staring at her n smiles
Swara washes the plates n swalak dust the whole house n set all the rooms
Lak:done says laksh setting room at downstairs
Swa:u keep ur bags here n take rest i will bring coffee at neighbour house for u she starts to leave when laksh hold her hand
Swara turns n looks at him
Lak:vo u take rest i will go
Swa:no its ok i
Lak:i said na u go n fresh up
Swa nods n smiles
Lak smiles back n leaves
Swara goes to her room n sees the walls where swaragini picture was hanged before she goes n touch that place n remebers how shehkar throughs all her pictures from house n she theft one picture from that n hide with herself n whenever she feels alone she kept talking to that pic to reduce her pain but its gives her more pain…. She wipes her tears hearing laksh voice n hurriedly goes n fresh up n changes her dress n comes out wearing simple pajama n tee
Swara goes downstairs both swalak sit on couch n drinks the coffee while laksh starts blabbering about of his life without any pain n worries…. Swara kept listening t0 him she knows he is lying his eyes are showing his pain while his voice is telling how happy he is……. Swara just kept silent n listens to him
Lak: don’t u think i talk alot
Swara smiles nodding no
Lak:pakka na
She nods yes
Lak: gud but u can answer by talking also or feeling uncomfortable
Swa:vo nothing like that just feeling tired
Lak:hmm mee too lets sleep its late
Swara nods
Lak:gud nite
Swa: gud nite
Both goes n sleeps
Swa: i knw u r alive n soon u will b with us with ur family i miss u
She dozed off with hope
At laksh
Lak:tomrw is big day for u Laksh n for that maheshwari also i will not leave them who insult my father
He dozed off with destruction in his eyes
Next day
Swa wakes up n gets ready n goes downstairs n amazed too see breakfast ready on table she looks here n there n did nt find laksh
She goes n sees a chit
‘Good morning…. Dont worry i have gone out for some work eat breakfast n i will return at evening…. Laksh’
She smiles n eats the breakfast after sometimes she goes out
@evening
Sanskar is driving his car angrily suddenly someone comes infront of his car…. He stopped his car with a jerk
San:Damnnnnn n hit his hand on staring n comes out of his car
San:r u blind or what cant u see he roared n seee a girl lying on floor unconscious he goes n remove the dupatta from her face n mesmerized to see her he feels he knw her her face looks familiar to him….. He taps her cheeks n pick her up in bridal style n make her sit on car n drives his car… After sometime he reaches at his homr n picks her up n make her lies on bed n calls the doc
Doc checks n informs she faint due to shock…. Sanskar thanks n doc leaves
Scene shift
Laksh comes home n finds swara he finds every where n makes call but no respond…. He become worried n goes for finding her
Scene shift
Ragini wakes up n find herself in lying on bed she sits n holds her head which is paining n remove blanket on hers n starts walking but due to pain in her leg she is about to fall when sanskar comes n hold her from waist both n ragini holds sanskar shirt tightly prevent from falling both looks at eo eyes n lost world seems stops for them……
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Bann gaye silsile (plays in bg)
Both shares a deep eyelock suddenly ragini remember something n she breaks the eyelock n sanskar comes in reality n makes her stand
Rag(widout eye contact):vo i m sorryy
San:hmm its ok
Rag again starts to move but again she is about to fall when san hold her n make her sit
Rag:how did i come here (slowly)
San:vo u came infront of my car n bcm unconscious n i brought u here (he said calmly without looking at her)
Rag look at him amused n then say
Rag:Thanks sir now i think i should leave n about to get up
San:w8 no need to get up u can go tomorrow morning u can inform ur family
Rag: i dont have family(she painly says)
San look at her n for the first time in his life he feel bad for someone with his heart
San: sorry (calmly)
Rag:its ok
After few mins silence
San:what is ur name
Rag:ishika
San: i m sanskar btw y did u come infront of my car (with some changing tune)
Rag:vo i
San:say fast (coldly)
Rag: actually i m running behind goons they stole my bag
San:ohh so just for ur bag u r running like mad n come infront of my car to die (coldly)( he dont want to talk like that but his ego want)
Rag:no sir i just come from mumbai today for job my whole documents money n appointment letter was in that bag (she said n her eyes are moist)
San:youuuuuuu he is about to roar at her when he sees she is literally crying he stops n his heart pained looking at her he dont want to shout or talk in that tune but the way he is used to b did not let him to talk to her calmly
Rag stands with difficulty
Rag: thank u sooo much for helping me i cant take more help from u n starts walking when san hold her hand both feel current throughout their bodies san look at her n she does the same
San:i m sorry i dont want to talk in that tune sorry…… The great sanskar maheshwari apologize to someone for
The first tym in his life
San:rest today go tomorrow
Rag slightly nods n sits
San: i’ll just come
Rag again nods after he leaves rags messages someone n smiles
Sanskar come back with food tray in his hand n places infront of rag
San:u eat something n have this medicines also n take rest n if u need anything else do tell me
Rag smies n nods
Rag:dont u eat (polietly)
San smiles unknowingly:i will have it later u take rest
Rag nods while san goes out
Rags eat food n eat her medicines too n put the tray aside n sleep
@outside
Sanskar who is having his food is lost in his own thoughts first they eyes of rags at temple flash infront his eyes n then her face when she is unconscious flash n then their eyelock flash infront his eyes
San:what the hell is happening with me y i m thinking that both girls are same y i m attracted towards her eyes even thought i hate her…. Y did i not shout at her even thought i want to when i see her eyes moist i bcm calm dont knw y what is this feeling n y i m doing this…… NO sanskar no u cant attracted to any one especially some ordinary girl u r not her servant dont give them too much hope that later she will fly later i will show her real place to her now…. He stands up in anger n goes to her room n stops at the dooor seeing her sleeping peacfully
He is about to shout when his heart stops him
San:no sanskar not now she is sleeping let her sleep today tomorrow i will show her real place n goes to her n pick up tray which is kept next to her n goes out without making any noise
To b continued……
Precap: Ragsan
Is this ragini plane or in real she is hurt???
Y sanky is driving angrily what had happen?
Will laksh got to knw about past?
Y kamal narayan blame shek?
Heheheh guyx slippers vegiess evrything is acceptable i knwww i m lateeeee n lazzyyy what to do my sisters influence heheheheheh sooorrryyyyyyyyyyyy guyzz bear me n one more bad news i wrote my story ‘My desi girl’ at my laptop which is now have some issues n not opening till my laptop dnt get fine i cant write my desi girl cuz its contain 10 chappy of this ff sorry guyzz n nxt will b heal my wounds get ready for excited chappy lovee u all tckr
N last but not least how was the chappy i knw u all want ragsan so b ready n do cmntss plz
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