Hi … am nive@lav ,
Am a huge fan all the ff here , I have read all the ff , this is a great inspiration of me to write here I may not be good as u all write but hope u all will like my ff and accept it … do comment guys should I continue or not ..
Intro
Arjun Mehra- a handsome hot tycoon of the city . most eligible bachelor , a dream boy of every girl , but he is arrogant and he can bend anything according to his wish either by crook or hook. He runs a chain of hotel… and has a huge empire of business from construction to fashion industry … his empire is known as A.M group.
Radhika Mishra- she is a cute and bubbly girl ,she is simple an elegant by her own way .. she is always caring and belives love is the only reason to live a happy life ….
Neil Malhotra – handsome and hot guy a dream boy… he is cool and makes other happy always .. he is the only person who can bring smile on Arjun’s face .. he also a chain of hotels …….
Samira khana – she is beautiful enthusiastic girl and best friend of Arjun and Neil.. A part from Neil Arjun show his inner feeling is only with sam . sam dad is business partner with Arjun .
@A.M hotel , france
“Neil come fast we are getting late for flight “ Arjun said to neil . “ya bhai am here lets make a move” saying this neil patted Arjun’s shoulder ..
They reached the airport and boarded the flight to India.
@ airport
Sam is waiting for Arjun and neil .. she gets a call , she attens it an keeps talking to the person over the phone saying than the flight has land and the must be here ang tie .. and turn to find neil waving to her .. she immediately jumps in happiness and run towards them and hug them and said she missed the so much .. and enquires about the trif , this was a usual business trip..
Sam – its getting late we must reachthere in time …
Neil come babe we will …
Arjun a bit confused asks where but sam and neil told its surprise ………..
And this for now guys let me know if u like it or not………
42 Comments
Wowwww another mmz i just loved it
thank u dr..
Wow plzzz continue….I loved the intro….eagerly waiting for next update…. Ur writing skills r very good…keeep it up buddy….love u…???
One lovee?
ameena lov u dr , thank you so much dr ..sure u will get it soon …
very nice .pls continue
maya thank you dr ..
Wow nice…please continue
thank you roshini dr
MMZ ff. thank u so much. superb intro. loved it. so trio friends bond is really gud. ok where is our chasni yaar. don’t worry abt writing it is super gud. update fast n really fast. waiting…… loveee u. and thank u once again.
HAPPY NEW YEAR.
manha thank you it means a lot … afcourse yar she is my super cutie pie next part is for her …… hope you will enjoy that tooo … lov u ..
happy new year ..
intro is gud.i din understand te part abt sam.does arjun or niel love hr????????????or did u tel tat tey share with hr??????????plzz tel mre abt rads.u oly tld abt arjun,niel n sam……
sure my darling aastha u will understand in the upcoming chapters , for now the trio are good friends , about radz you will get to know in next part
tanku 4 clearng my doubt………..u ll update regularly????????????
shall i cal u nive?????????tats mch easier tan nive@lav……………
Wow !! Very nice.. I love the intro … Plz post soon… Love you loads
shree thank you so much … lov u too … sure will update soon ..
HEY NIVE DEAR WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
i AM VERY MUCH HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY NOW
AS THERE IS VERY MUCH LESS FFS ARE HERE NOW IN MANMARZIYAAN SECTION AND YOU START WRITING ITS ACTUALLY AWESOME LOVELY DEAR i LOVED IT YOUR NARRATION IS VERY MUCH SUPERB . i LOVE THE INTRO OF THE AND THE AIRPORT SCENE
yOU SHOUD CONTINUE MERI JAAN. iTS A PLEASURE TO READ THE STRANGE FEEING WHICH CHANGE INTO LOVE FOR SURE.
lOVE U NIVE .IT WILL BE A PLEASURE TO READ UR MANMARZIYAAN DEAR. lOVE TO BE UR FRIEND TOO LOVE U BY HEART
KEEP SMILING ALWAYS
oNCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND.
HELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY LOVEEEEEEEEEEEES.
HAYATHI DEAR, MAYA HELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ,
HEY AMMUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU MERI JAAN HOW R U
HEY ROSHNI HOW’S KAVYANJALI DEAR WAITING LOVE U BY HEART KEEP SMILING ALL MY LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES.
oNCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND.
hey nisha am so happy the you read my ff an liked it am a big fan of you dear .. you are so expresive and you are amazing , i like wat u said “ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYAS A FRIEND” am glad that i hav a friend like you dear, and lucky tooo ….. happy new year wish you a wonderfull year ahead………
Itz really awsome
thank u sammy
Good one…. Continue..
ananya thank u dr
nice
u should continue
manju thank u
Wow superb intro n ur writing skills also nice .Continue ur story …eagerly waiting for next update.
thank u lakshmi ,,,
Heyyyy Nive….suuuuperrrrb dear..thanks for another Manmarziya ff…..
Loved the intro…nd continue this …
Waiting eagerly…
Keep SMiLiNG..
Love u loadZz?
thank you hareem lov u dr
Nice
thank you devi
Ur story is nice . Plz continue dear.Tc
advaita thank you dear ,,
Wow. . .its a gud plot dr. . . Updt nxt part dr. . . Hws rads gonna entr to the scene. . .? N updt it regularly,k 🙂
Am sry, am takng dis space for a request. . . Pls pls pls pls pls Thena, Tanya, kriti, nisha, ameena, kfar n evry other ff writers on manmarziyan. . . Pls updt ur stories dr. . . Am dying to read the stories on mmz. . . Pls pls pls dr. . . :-/
thank you liya .. and am going to update it regularly .. am also missing all the mmz ff so guys plz update soon yar …
Hurray….another MMZ FF..
Intro..was good..wen is radhika’s entry…can’t wait…to c it…update sooon..!!!!
vivi thank u so much dr
Hyy nive !! Really ur story seems different n very interesting !!
So I m looking forward to read ur story dr !
Love u dr !!
Update d nxt part !!
am glad u found m story different .. hank you so much and love u ..
hey nive luv u dear. its really nice and smiling that u update regularly . I am very much happy dear. keep smiling happy new year to you too meri jaan.
keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend.
thank u nisha… lov u meri jaan….
Awesome intro nive dearrrr, loved it very much. ..it’s really superb storyline n plot…eagerly waiting for ardhika face off…plzzz continue dear. Keep it up. Love you loads and very very tight warm hug
thank u soo soo much roma ..lov u … and a warm hug …