So friends how are you all.today i came with a os which is related to our girls life and also about social concern.this idea is not only mine this idea give me by my sweet sis and bro.s o thanks to my bro and sis.
No start the story
“Please sanchi stop this nonsense.when ever i touched you or going to do some romance.you say not now after marriage.”say virkant with angry tone.”for one time I want to kiss you before marriage my darling” hearing virkant talk sanchi shiver.sanchi is a simple girl who respect her family so much.she brought up a typical family.she is so much scared with her father.she is the only daughter her father and she had a brother. she is a relationship with virkant who is a business man.though she know that her family not accept her love relation.in her family everyone do arrange marriage.one example her brother married four year ago with a girl chosen by his family though he don’t like the girl.sanchi think that she didn’t involved herself in love but her destiny planned something.one day before 2years she meet with virkant in her friend’s wedding party.then they became friends and after that they feel for each other and proposed each other.now they are in a relationship since 2years.now sanchi read in the university.though they are in relation ship but sanchi didn’t get permission virkant touched her.because she thinks before marriage this is not right.in public place when ever virkant hold sanchi’s hand.she felt embraced.
“Sanchi today I don’t hear anything.today is my birthday so mom dad organised a party and I want you present there and today I wants to meet you with my mom,dad and colleagues.”say virkant.”i also want to go this party but Viki mummy papa don’t give permission to go anywhere after evening.please try to understand”say sanchi in a requesting way.
“No sanchi,todau i don’t hear any word.today you will came that’s final.if you will not came then I thought that you don’t love me.”say by virkant.”please Viki don’t say like that.ok i will try to come”said sanchi.ofcourse they are talking in phone.
now sanchi in so much tension how would she go virkant house.her mummy,papa don’t get her permission and if she don’t go the virkant feel so much bad.s he going her papa who is sitting on breakfast table and reading newspaper.
Sanchi:papa today I am going to my friend house for some notes after my singing class.
Her papa looking at her first and say
Sanchi’s papa: what is the name of your friends?where did she live?
Sanchi:ishita…….when sanchi speak lie then she feels some nervous ness but she speaks well.
Now her father give her the permission but say her came home before 9pm.
So sanchi wear a red saree(virkant say her wear saree,so she manage her mom my say something lie.)she is looking so so beautiful in the red saree.after her singing class she going towards virkant home by taxi the taxi stopped in front of a big bungalow and virkant waiting near the gate wearing a black suit.he took sanchi inside and meet her with his parents.his parents are very happy seeing their daughter in law and sanchi is also happy seeing her in law family.b ut she can’t meet virkant friends because it’s became so late if she waited for them.virkant itu to stop sanchi but sanchi say sorry and say meet with them next time.
Sanchi returned home from virkant house by taxi but in mid way the taxi disturbed.s o she start walking .she thought walking something then she will get other car.the road is lonely.After walking some distance she lose her conscious.w hen ever she gets conscious she feeling so much pain in her boby and see some blood spot on her red Saree.a nd only see her mummy papa face which is looking so much worried.now sanchi understand what is happening with her.she locked herself in her house.she don’t talk to anyone.she also saw her photo in newspaper.who ever click her photo in those stage.noone didn’t came to save her from that situation but they didn’t forget to click her photo.e ven media also came outside of her house.she didn’t care anything.she only try to call virkant who does not response her call from those day.one day virkant sms her
“Sorry sanchi i didn’t continue our relation.
because my mom,dad and other s saw your photo in newspaper and they told me that they didn’t accept you.so i think we stop our relation.r one think please sanchi don’t try to call me again.”
Reading this sms Sanchi’s whole world shut down.she loves that’s person who only wants her physical purity .he don’t think about her feelings.now see understand that everyone showing sympathy on a poor girl but no one wants to marry her.she is so much mentality depressed.so her father took her to a psychiatrist.
In the psychiatrist cabin
Sanchi and her father sitting in front of the doctor/psychiatrist.he looking at sanchi for 2 or4 min then say…..
:”Sanchi,what you think about rape?rape mean that anything doing with you against you feeling or heart or mind.”said the psychiatrist
Sanchi just noded her heads in a yes way.
P(psychiatirst)-then I wants to ask you one think.can you tell in your life stil now nothing is not happening against
S(sanchi):ha.happing some thing against my wish.
P-which thing
S- I wants to became an engineer but my mummy,papa say me to take english.so i take english honours.
P-so that case sanchi this is not tell rape…. because this is also happing against your wish……… everyday you wants to eat one thing s but tumko khana par ta hae kohi or chess…….this also against your wish sanchi.
Sanchi just looking at the psychiatrist whose age is 34 or 35 but he is look good in this age and most important thing is his smile which is like sparkle of mountain stream.sanchi saw the name plate of the psychiatrist which is written Dr.kabir kapoor in block letter.
Kabir:sanchi it is the wounds of your mind.if every difficult wounds is recover then definitely your wounds is also relief.
Sanchi didn’t like to talk with anyone except dr.kabir who give her inspiration for struggle with society and her minds wounds.they always talked with each other on phone.day by day sanchi feel for dr.kabir though she know he is 10years older then her or most important thing she didn’t know that is dr.kabir is married or he have any child.b because kabir didn’t discuss about any of his personal life.
after some months Sanchi’s final year university exam started and her exam happen well.its all credit goes to dr.kabir.because of you she gets so much strength.
One day kabir in an important meeting so his phone is on silent.t hough sanchi know that he is in a meeting.she called him but he didn’t picked up the phone.now she understand how much she loved him.but one thought disturbed her that if he had a family then what is she doing.
It’s night time 11pm
Now she can’t wait any so she called him.
Sanchi(in mind):still he is in the meeting or he is sleeping with his wife and child.every ring of the phone increased her hearts beat.
After few min
Kabir pick up the phone in sleeping stage.
Kabir:sanchi what happened ……why you call me in this time…….
Sanchi:dr. I wants to said you something
Kabir: ofcourse……
Sanchi:nothing
Kabir:i know sanchi what you once to say…….you once say that you love me……. perhaps I am also love u but……..I am much older than you sanchi pura 10years…….
Sanchi: that does not matter dr.kabir…….you are10years older than me ……….but today I understand with out you 10sec is impossible for me dr.kabir…………I love u dr.kabir……..
Kabir:i love u too sanchi ……….Sanchi i am an orphan.when i am 7years old my mom dad died in an accident.from that day my aunt,kusum took my responsibilities…….
.then they discuss about their personal life.after some months they got married and lived happily with each other. Sanchi fulfil Kabir wish make a happy family.sanchi join as an english teacher in a school.
After one year of their marriage one evening sanchi came from somewhere by her car when one lady came in front of her car wearing a red saree.but luckily the car stopped before hitting the lady.some boys are chasing the lady so the lady running.seeing Sanchi’s car they are gone.the girl fainted due to panic.sanchi help with her driver took her in kabir’s hospital.kabir treated her.sanchi standing besides her bed.then her goes to the door of the ward where she saw a man coming towards the room hurriedly.the man whom he see last in that night birthday pa.he is none other than virkant. came inside and hugged the lady.h thanks kabir for saving her wife,riya life.
Riya: virkan please say thank to this di who is Savior for me……..if she didn’t save me then all my respect destroy by those boys…….(point ing towards sanchi)
Virkant gets 440volys seeing sanchi and also her hairline filled with vermilion.
Sanchi:no need to thanks me it’s my and my husband duty to save people life(holding kabir’s hand). virkant just looking at them with a shocking look .
After 2years our kanchi is blessed by a beautiful girl,they took her name “DURGA”.now their’s familly is complete.
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Lots of loves,kisses and hugs for all my dear friends . take care yourself friends
25 Comments
I don’t have words to describe this……i am totally spellbound.Just loved it to the core.???And the story was a inspiring one nd loved the way how Kabeer become Saanchi’s strenghth.???
The way u described everything is really appreciatable.
Anyways…don’t forget to appreciate ur bro-sis for giving such a wonderful idea.
Keep writing dear.
Thanks dear for such a beautiful comment………ha yaar mera di or bhai ko toh mae appreciate karungi……..love u dear……..you also post your writing soon dear……..
Amazing awesome di……even words r less to describe this??……really inspiring…..really wonderful…….nd also ur bro-sis thanks to them for such a mind blowing idea….bye tc luv u???
Thanks a lot dear for such a sweet comment………love u to dear…….I like your writing so so much deae
Thanks a lot dear for such a sweet comment………love u to dear…….I like your writing so so much dear
Osm and heart touching story ….. Ur thinking is really great…… Keep writing…. Tc anu dear
Thanks a lot chandu for such a nice comment………. it’s all credit goes to my sis and bro yaar…….love u dear
I’m speechless right now, it’s amazing dear, keep writing such stories. Take care.
Thanks a lot dear so so much……..I am so happy that you like this………lots of love for you yaar
amazing dear
the issue that you brought up from the OS was also commendable
loved it
keep writing
It’s really pleasure for me that you like this story yaar……… Thanks dear………love u dear…….
Such a beautiful thought dear. It’s such a shame that despite advancing in teach ology, education and all other things, our sisters and daughters still have to face such crimes. Rape is the only crime in which the victim is the one to bear the punishment in her life. It’s such a shame that in most cases even our law doesn’t do much for the victim. I just finished reading the news about an Assamese fifth standarder. A woman is no man’s asset. She is everybody’s responsibility. Respect woman!!!
Thanks a lot dear for such a beautiful and sweet comment………. eagerly waiting for your innocent steps…….. please post soon yaar……..
Wow Anuuu Beautifull story..such a nice concept u adopt for your story….Hate of you for your thinking…going keep Rocking…Love you…tc
Thanks dear for your sweet comment yaar……..love u to dear
Truly a stupendous OS Anu… ??? hats off to you!! You described a social crisis that is a threat to whole womankind in all ages. It was beautifully written ??? loved it ???
Thanks a lot dear for your amazing comment yaar……..this social crisis destroy many life yaar…….. Ruchu dear i am Eagerly waiting for your ff yaar post soon dear………lots of love for u dear
Its so beautiful
Thanks a lot dear??
Lots of love for you dear………..??
It has such a galvanizing plot. I’m sure it acted as an incentivize for many readers. Such a meaningful story and it’s laudable the way you shaped the plot line. Stupendously written. I had a relishing time reading this story!!!❤️
Thanks a lot yaar for such a beautiful comment………lots of love for u dear……..
What an amazing story..
The way u plotted the story with a beautiful concept… It’s commendable… I love ur writings…I’m sorry for not commenting regularly as I’m really busy these days… Keep writing n take care…
It’s ok yaar whenever you get time you comment this is enough for me yaar………. Thanks dear so so much for such a sweet comment……….lots of love for you dear…….
Thanks a lot to all the readers for supporting me this much……….I am so so happy seeing yours response……..rape is a big problem not only in our country but also in our whole world………we should more protective on this thing and also changed our mentality about a girl………we want a society which respect and care for a girl in every situation………once again thanks to all for like and comment on this story………..lots all loves for all????????take care friends