Hlooo guys!!! This is mars here.I know I have many stories to handle but still writing new one.Actually my new found friend on telly updates Sumayyah darling ask me to write such a story in which swasan should hate firstly and even this concept was going in my mind so here is three shots.Hope so u will like it.
STRUGGLE (swasan ts)
SHOT 1
CHARACTERSKETCH:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 27 years old most popular and rich businessman in Mumbai. Media people crave for his one news.He lost his parents in car accident two years back.He is married to swara since one year but hates her to the core.He never talks with swara much and has no interest in her.He likes and respect shomi alot and always obey her.
Swara Sanskar Maheshwari:22 years old very stubborn.she is crazy to become top actress of India but her mother shomi wants her to be doctor.She drop her university in second year and came to Mumbai. she hates sanskar.
Shomi Bose: swara’s mother. Her wish is that swara should be doctor but don’t like her daughter’s stubborn behaviour. she never want swara to be actress.She loves sanskar alot even more than swara bcoz according to her he is perfect son.
Plot:
Shomi and sujata(sanskar’s mother) were best friends from college time but sujata got married in Mumbai but still they were in contact. shomi always want sanskar as her son in law.she has talked about it to sujata even she was not having any problem with it. But then sujata died suddenly but she has always told Sanskar to obey shomi.After sujata’s death shomi is like mother to sanskar.Shomi asked Sanskar to marry swara as she don’t want her to be alone in big city.sanskar married her just for the sake of shomi. He Hates Swara bcoz she never listens to shomi and is very stubborn. Above all he does not like her being actress.on the other side when swara was stubborn to go to Bollywood then Shomi put condition that she will allow her only to go after marrying with sanskar.Swara can do anything for her Carter so she married sanskar.Finally they got married.Shomi lives in Kolkata only and visit Mumbai sometimes.
swasan live in same house but in different rooms. They hardly talk with each other and come home at night only bcoz whole day they remain busy in work.Sanskar has established his industry very well while swara is still struggling in Bollywood. She has done few roles in films in this one year but her role never exceed more than 10 mins in whole movie.She is looking for the big break.
let’s see whether Swara will be successful in her career and love will blossom in swasan?
Mumbai
Night
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar entered inside the house fumming in anger.He was holding some book.He directly went to Swara’s room
Swara’s room
The room was not locked so Sanskar rushed inside the room without any prior permission. Swara who was sitting on bed got startled seeing him.Before she could react, Sanskar threw magazine on her face and shouted
Sanskar: what the hell is your problem.How many times I told u that till u are my so called wife don’t do all these things.
Swara (angry): just shut up.First u learn manners that u should knock before entering my room.
sanskar(chuckles): wow now this mannerless girl will teach me manners.
swara: why u came here?
Sanskar: see that (point to magazine)
Swara picked it up and saw that on cover page her highly exposed pic was published now she understand why he is angry.
swara:then what’s problem.(normally)
sanskar:this your stupidity is my problem. Why u did all this when I warned u not to do it
Swara(smirks): why are feeling jealous that your wife is exposing infront of world.
Sanskar (annoyed): damm with jealousy. I don’t care about u.its just your name is attached to mine and it effect my reputation.
swara: but all these things are necessary for my career.Till now I was listening to u and not doing all this no producer director approach me.
sanskar: I don’t care about your blo*dy career. it doesn’t mean to me whether u get any movie or not.But I m saying last time don’t u dare to do all that again otherwise u will see worst side of me.
saying this he left the room swara moved her hand in her hairs in frustration.Then only her phone rings she saw caller id and picked up immediately as it is from famous director sahil sengupta in whose movies she has worked earlier.
Swara: hello Sir
sahil: hi swara. if u r free may I talk.
swara: yea sure sir.
sahil: actually I have one movie and I m thinking to take as lead in it.
Swara jumped in happiness bcoz to be lead in big production movie will be turning point for her career.But she control herself and said
swara: yes sir it will be my pleasure.
sahil: ok then come to my banglow now then will tell further.
swara: now?
sahil: why any problem ?
Swara: no sir I m coming.
sahil: ok then I m waiting.
swara cut the call and saw that it was 10 pm.
she don’t want to go at this time but she can’t let the opportunity get wasted.
so she changed her dress and took her bag and left.Sanskar was working in hall on laptop He looked at her going but reacted as if he don’t care.
To be continued…..
precap: sahil asked Swara to spend night with him to get the lead role.Will Swara accept his offer??How will Sanskar react when he will get to know.
Done with first shot.
i know now I m disturbing u a lot.But as now I m free so enjoy my stories bcoz once I got busy then I will vanish.
Now plzzzz leave your comments and tell me whether u liked it or not.What are your opinion about swasan characters.
waiting for your feedback.
Thank you
bye
take care.
74 Comments
Awsm Dr…. Update soon
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Nice story …i am eagerly for all of your stories…especially sufferings…plz post it soon
Thank you so much dear and I will post my others stories soon and sufferings too.
Awesome… Post soon
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
nyc dear
Thank you so much dear
Seems interesting..story is different from ur other stories..continue soon..and Plz don’t vanish like other writers..I’m loving ur stories..tc..
Thank you so much dear and don’t worry I won’t vanish that easily and will never left my stories incomplete.
I will post next part soon
Awesome mars I loved it??? and looking further to read more that how will love blossom between them
Post soon
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Interesting dear…continue soon
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Superb mars?? hmm selfrespect is needed hope so she wont do that.. Bcz i have heard many doing dat!!! Sanskar reaction as usual big fight… May b unexpected things can happen ??
Thank you so much dear and wait to know further.
Omg both r sooo damn angry
Swara r u crazy
Sahil chiiii such a cheap man
Swara dont do anything like that ur dignity is far important than anything
Thank you so much dear
Aaww thank you Marsuu I loved it
Swara is such a stubborn why don’t she agree with her hubby
come soon
or humare dimagh khaati raho hamesha or don’t think to vanish Verna hum aapko kahen se bhi doondh Len gay
Thank you so much suma dear aur tume tho mai baad mae dhekti hu thanks kese bola huh!!
And I will not vanish so soon. Aur vanish matlb i won’t leave it but etni active nahi hogi.
Marssss…..this is really u? Can’t believe this! Different concept dear… Can’t tell anything about Swasan’s character. Eagerly waiting for next part dear. But plz don’t vanish from TU!!
Firstly this is me only haha.Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon. I wil not leave telly updates but will be less active.
Marsuu how you do it….i mean so many stories at a time…..and that too with different concept …….hats off to you yr…..????
Swara should give that cheap a tight slap………
Will be waiting for next part
And marsuu agar vanish hone ka socha bhi na to..to… To mai baat nhi krungi…katti ??????????
Katti
Katti
Katti…????
Aur phir mai jab tumhe dhoonh laaungi na then you have you write double stories……….
Mugh bechari dukhyari ki koi nhi sunta atleast tum to sun lo…..plzzzz…
i know thodi overacting ho gye but what to do love your ffs a lot….plz dont go…
Ab kya maasum ki jaan laekar maanogi tum…..?
Thank you so much dear and I m extra smart to manage all stories (huh!! Self praising haha) I will post next part soon.
Aur gussa mat ho I won’t leave TU but will be less active.don’t cry harshu baby. I will not go. Hehe.
Awesomeeeeeee re… post nxt part of suffering soon re
Thank you so much dear and I will post sufferings soon.
Nice
Thank you so much dear
Verreeyyy interesting ?? pls post next part soooon ?
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
nice
Thank you so much dear
Awww!!! I love hate love stories ??awesome plot????
Thank you so much dear
Amazing dear….interesting….
Thank you so much dear
very beautiful …have u written any os with title like rakshabandhan if yes plz give link…
Soo sorry to disappoint u but I had not written any os with title raksha bandhan.
Thanks
very beautiful …have u written any os with title like rakshabandhan if yes plz give link…
I love your stories so much.
Thank you so much dear
Awesome, awesome wonderful, mind blowing words r not enough… But loving it… I’m sure u will rocks… SwaSan fight…????? and this Sahil ??????????? cheap
Thank you so much dear
lovely concept dear would love to read further and please do continue it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Interesting dear. Plz continue. Would love to read further. ?
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
Awesome dr!!! But y in all ffs writer makes sahil as negative???
Thank you so much shan di and may be bcoz sahil was negative in serial.In this story I didn’t got any name so just wrote.
Ab to tumhari tariffo ke pool bandte bandte thak Gaye…….apna kabhi koi book likhna to jaroor inform…..
Hahaha thank you so much dear and mai apni life mae ek book tho zarur likugi and I will surely inform u.
Yaya….. Will be eagerly waiting for your book……
Thanks hehehe
awesome update next part soon continue
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
superb
Thank you so much dear
This is like a real new concept i m loving it
Thank you so much dear
nice….i want swara to punch dat sahil when he makes dat offer
Plz dont disappear..i really look forward to ur works
Thank you so much dear and I will not quit it but will be less active.And I will not vanish soo soon.
Awesome dear. Eagerly waitung for next one
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon