Hlooo guys!!! This is mars here.I know I have many stories to handle but still writing new one.Actually my new found friend on telly updates Sumayyah darling ask me to write such a story in which swasan should hate firstly and even this concept was going in my mind so here is three shots.Hope so u will like it.
STRUGGLE (swasan ts)
SHOT 1
CHARACTERSKETCH:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 27 years old most popular and rich businessman in Mumbai. Media people crave for his one news.He lost his parents in car accident two years back.He is married to swara since one year but hates her to the core.He never talks with swara much and has no interest in her.He likes and respect shomi alot and always obey her.
Swara Sanskar Maheshwari:22 years old very stubborn.she is crazy to become top actress of India but her mother shomi wants her to be doctor.She drop her university in second year and came to Mumbai. she hates sanskar.
Shomi Bose: swara’s mother. Her wish is that swara should be doctor but don’t like her daughter’s stubborn behaviour. she never want swara to be actress.She loves sanskar alot even more than swara bcoz according to her he is perfect son.
Plot:
Shomi and sujata(sanskar’s mother) were best friends from college time but sujata got married in Mumbai but still they were in contact. shomi always want sanskar as her son in law.she has talked about it to sujata even she was not having any problem with it. But then sujata died suddenly but she has always told Sanskar to obey shomi.After sujata’s death shomi is like mother to sanskar.Shomi asked Sanskar to marry swara as she don’t want her to be alone in big city.sanskar married her just for the sake of shomi. He Hates Swara bcoz she never listens to shomi and is very stubborn. Above all he does not like her being actress.on the other side when swara was stubborn to go to Bollywood then Shomi put condition that she will allow her only to go after marrying with sanskar.Swara can do anything for her Carter so she married sanskar.Finally they got married.Shomi lives in Kolkata only and visit Mumbai sometimes.
swasan live in same house but in different rooms. They hardly talk with each other and come home at night only bcoz whole day they remain busy in work.Sanskar has established his industry very well while swara is still struggling in Bollywood. She has done few roles in films in this one year but her role never exceed more than 10 mins in whole movie.She is looking for the big break.
let’s see whether Swara will be successful in her career and love will blossom in swasan?
Mumbai
Night
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar entered inside the house fumming in anger.He was holding some book.He directly went to Swara’s room
Swara’s room
The room was not locked so Sanskar rushed inside the room without any prior permission. Swara who was sitting on bed got startled seeing him.Before she could react, Sanskar threw magazine on her face and shouted
Sanskar: what the hell is your problem.How many times I told u that till u are my so called wife don’t do all these things.
Swara (angry): just shut up.First u learn manners that u should knock before entering my room.
sanskar(chuckles): wow now this mannerless girl will teach me manners.
swara: why u came here?
Sanskar: see that (point to magazine)
Swara picked it up and saw that on cover page her highly exposed pic was published now she understand why he is angry.
swara:then what’s problem.(normally)
sanskar:this your stupidity is my problem. Why u did all this when I warned u not to do it
Swara(smirks): why are feeling jealous that your wife is exposing infront of world.
Sanskar (annoyed): damm with jealousy. I don’t care about u.its just your name is attached to mine and it effect my reputation.
swara: but all these things are necessary for my career.Till now I was listening to u and not doing all this no producer director approach me.
sanskar: I don’t care about your blo*dy career. it doesn’t mean to me whether u get any movie or not.But I m saying last time don’t u dare to do all that again otherwise u will see worst side of me.
saying this he left the room swara moved her hand in her hairs in frustration.Then only her phone rings she saw caller id and picked up immediately as it is from famous director sahil sengupta in whose movies she has worked earlier.
Swara: hello Sir
sahil: hi swara. if u r free may I talk.
swara: yea sure sir.
sahil: actually I have one movie and I m thinking to take as lead in it.
Swara jumped in happiness bcoz to be lead in big production movie will be turning point for her career.But she control herself and said
swara: yes sir it will be my pleasure.
sahil: ok then come to my banglow now then will tell further.
swara: now?
sahil: why any problem ?
Swara: no sir I m coming.
sahil: ok then I m waiting.
swara cut the call and saw that it was 10 pm.
she don’t want to go at this time but she can’t let the opportunity get wasted.
so she changed her dress and took her bag and left.Sanskar was working in hall on laptop He looked at her going but reacted as if he don’t care.
To be continued…..
precap: sahil asked Swara to spend night with him to get the lead role.Will Swara accept his offer??How will Sanskar react when he will get to know.
Done with first shot.
i know now I m disturbing u a lot.But as now I m free so enjoy my stories bcoz once I got busy then I will vanish.
Now plzzzz leave your comments and tell me whether u liked it or not.What are your opinion about swasan characters.
waiting for your feedback.
Thank you
bye
take care.
74 Comments
Awesome dear… Swara is really stubborn
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