Hello!! Last chapter.. I hope u enjoy it. Last chapter was so shocking.
So, Let’s start-
The maid calls at chauhan’s house. Naina picks up call.
Naina-Hello..
Maid-Hello.. Naina beta.
Naina-Sorry, I did not recognize u.
Maid-Beta.., I am the maid of ur house.
Naina-Oh..Namaste aunty..What happened. Why a phone call suddenly?
Maid-Ur maa..
Naina(doubtfully)-…what happened to maa. Where is she?? Tell me…
Maid cries and tells her everything. Naina was having her life big shock. She drops the phone. Meghna and everyone looks at her.
Meghna-Cheeku,, What happened??
She was froze.
Meghna makes her shake.
Kunal-Naina, Say something. Why are u in shock?
Naina cries and tell everything to everyone.
Meghna was taken aback. Kunal holda her. They rush to city hospital. There see Sharda in room. The doctor cames.
Doctor-She is…
Naina-What she is…???
Doctor-I am sorry…She is dead now. We can’t rescue her now.
After listening it Naina faints. Everyone gathers around her.
Karan-Naina..,,Pls.. wake up. We have not to lose hope..
Meghna(cries)-Cheeku….Wake up.. First maa left us now u are making us feel sad..
They take her to the hospital. Doctor tells.
Doctor-Don’t worry. She is fine, she faints becoz she was having a big shock regarding her mother. Excuse me!
Doctor went. After 2 hours, Naina gain consciousness. Everyone meet her. Karan cries. Naina hold his hand.Meghna was also crying. Kunal hugs her.
After 1 year:-
A scene was shown, which was decorating for marriage. It was marriage of Nairan. Naina was standing at the window and looking at the sky. Someone come hug her from back. It was Karan.
Naina-Karan…
Karan-Hmm..
Naina-Karan, Maa is not with us. But …
Karan-But..her blessings and memories are with us.
Naina smiles and hugs him back. The marriage ends and Nairan lived as happy couple. And Meghnal too.
…….THE END……..
I ended it so fast naa…Don’t worry i will try to write OS next time. I hope everyone are fine. Again sorry for delay. Please…apologize me.. Please comment…Thank u for reading my FF and commenting…!!!
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You are crazy yaar you ended it so soon! Shocking and sad news of Shardha’s demise.. Naina fainting as she couldn’t bear it and Karan holding her hand..That scene was definitely cute! A year passed so early but it was sweet of Karan to say that cheer Naina! It was really cute! Please try and write an OS as soon as possible!! ????
Lack of time, I ended it so soon…It was necessary to take a leap becoz, After the demise of Sharda things should be recovered like feelings and memories.. Thank u i am happy u like it. I will try to write an OS as soon as possible. Thank u…Loads of love to u..❤Keep up ur work also. I love it very much..
I’m sorry…I know I should be criticizing but i had a question…
Was it necessary for Sharda to die?
I am sorry but I didn’t see any part of the ff which had it’s significance related to Sharda dying…
I felt it was quite unnecessary for Sharda to die…
Could you please explain to me why Sharda’s character had to die?
Let me tell you that you have ended your ff very nicely…
When Karan says that Sharda will always be with them in their memories…
Please don’t feel hurt reading my comment…
I don’t mean to hurt you in any way and I sincerely apologize if you feel hurt reading this…
But please reply and answer my question…
*should not be criticizing
*but I had a question
Dear,
It was necessary to Sharda die becoz the main theme is about the Mother of two daughters ( Means Sharda). And The title is too about it. ‘Struggling for maa Swabhiman’ At last the main supporting character should die ( as per my perspective). It was a tragedy about the life of Nairan and Meghnal so it was important to leave to the end…I hope u understand. I am not hurt at all. I was waiting someone to ask question, I knew that everyone should have different taste. Thank u for asking question i want questions for mistakes. If it was unecessary then sorry. I hope u understand. Thank u for comment..
Thank you so much for replying back…
Just wanted to see if there was a reason behind Sharda’s death or if it was just a sudden move…
I totally understand your perspective…
Felt so relieved reading your comment…
I spent the last two days thinking whether I should have posted the comment or not and whether you would get hurt or not…
So happy you aren’t hurt!
Please continue writing and I truly hope you will start another fan fiction on Swabhimaan when you are ready…
Loads of love!???
Thank u very much. Just like u humble people ask the questions in ehich they have problem. Some people did not tell it clearly ( Not u) but only insults. U are so nice….Loads of love to u also?
I loved it.It was really a good ending though emotional.I love you and will love you.Hope you write the os soon.Bye.I want to see your os soon promise me that.Hope you get all the happiness in life.Loads of love.Forgot to say I will miss you alot.It is a short comment as I am not having time.But mind it I am really sad that one of my punctualest ff writer will go.You will come back soon I have a strong feeling.Loads of love.
Thank u so much…I am feeling proud that u loved it. Thank u so..much..I promise u that i will write an OS soon. I will try ahead to my punctuality. Loads of love to u.?
An intriguing dusk to a lovely tale in all. This twist in the story was something entirely unexpected and unawaited. But as they say, life is all about un-expectations. And so was this, a hugely dramatic end to a fabulous story. Sharda passing away but still living on in the thoughts of her loved ones was a truly endearing scene. Naina’s trauma after her death followed by the long time interval and karan’s consolations were exemplary. A beautiful story..
Thank u di…I hope that u liked it. Thank u so..much. It was unexpected becoz the theme is about Maa swabhiman so i had to add this. A leap was so long…To recovery of emotions. THANK U SO…MUCH SHIVANI DI…
Arya!!!!… U ended the ff… Not fair…… Ah… Leave it… But l really expect another wonderful ff or os from u…. Pls wrte…
Lovingly-Seyal ????
Thank u Seyal di…I will post soon OS..
This serial dialogue writers are either ignorant or do not match their stories/ episode write up!
They think viewers will enjoy whatever they write.
They do not connect incidents which normally do not happen.
Since it is useless story, we have stopped viewing this slow going serial- simply awful and insipid .
Sorry if u have problems…Just tell it simply that’s its a boring and stupid story. But…always insults. There are many who read it and reply too..I not want only ur satisfaction. Roshan lal i know u are hurt after reading my FF. Just reply it simply. If there is any abnormal thing which i am not getting just tell me. I have not any problem with ur negative comment.