AT PRATIGYA’S HOME
Saxena : That means doctor a speech therapy will work ?
Doctor : See this is just an attempt as you both told that after hearing those words in radio NehaJi show a sign of progress and I can see it as now she is responding. Apart from medical science there are certain healing therapies which can influence a person. Some people who got paralaysed and bed ridden for months gets recovery through healing music. It’s proven as true. May be it will work.
Pratigya : Doctor so what we should do now ?
Doctor : Only that RJ’s words bought a progression, neither yours nor Saxena ji’s . So you need to bring him here. After that I can say what exactly we need to do.
Pratigya : You think it will work ?
Doctor : Pratigya, when a bullet stabbed at your body as a doctor I tried with a hope that I can remove it and you will be cured. I have attended so many cases and still at each day I keeps hope in mind and also pray to God for saving that patient. Because human life is worthy . Some times bad things happened and some times medical miracles also occured . From each case I get to learn so many things and I never lose hope. That’s what I need to say to you also. Your hopeful face will bring inner peace to your Mom. And please bring that RJ soon.
Pratigya : Sure Doctor. I will bring him.
Doctor : That’s good. Saxena Ji mein chalta hoon, Namaste.
Saxena : Ji
Saxena : Pratigya you really think Krishna will agree for this ? How will you bring him here ?
Pratigya : As doctor said I am keeping a hope. Paapa I am leaving at next train.
Saxena : But beti
Pratigya : Paapa we tried to give every best tratement to Maa and trust me this time also we will give that to Maa. As doctor said I am also hoping for the best. I am going to Mumbai for bringing Krishna .
Saxena : But what will you say to him ?
Pratigya : I will say Truth , because I trust him. I assure you that Maa will speak again.
Saxena : Fine , I won’t stop you. Go beta….Be confident like these always…..
Pratigya turns to leave
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gd3z4x1jK5c
AT RADIO STATION
Krishna : Pratigya Tum Yahan ?
Pratigya : Krishna , I need a help from you. You can save my Maa.
Krishna : I didn’t get you.
Pratigya : My Maa lost the capability of speaking few months back . We tried every possible ways of treatment but nothing is working. She is staying as an idol only. She doesn’t shows any sign of emotion at her face also. Paapa and I were highly disappointed and we were thinking what we can do. Last day when I switched your programme while you was speaking on Smile My Maa literally smiled Krishna and we all felt that finally darkness of our days are ending as you have became light of our lives. She show a sign of positivity Krishna, We discussed this with doctor and he said a possibility of speech therapy may work . For that you have to come at my home. Please Krishna come with me .
Krishna : Pratigya it’s true my programme motivates many people , but I am not capable of doing these much big things. If a dcotor is not able to do anything how can I ?
Pratigya : Please Krishna don’t refuse me. I promised my Paapa that I will bring you with me. It’s my Maa’s life, please…..Please Krishna ……Please…..Mein haath jodti hoon
Krishna : Stop it, Pratigya …..I need some time to think
Pratigya : I don’t have that much time Krishna. The more we became late My Maa’s silence will trouble my Paapa . I can’t see him suffering no more. Please Krishna
Krishna : Pratigya I can’t see your tears . But …..Okay…At least give me some time , just to pack my bag and inform my dad that I am leaving. Please
Pratigya : That means you agreed, Really ?
Krishna nods his head and looks her
Pratigya : Thanks a lot Krishna , thanks a lot.
Krishna : Please stop crying Pratigya.
Pratigya was unable to control her tears. Krishna suddenly kept his palms on her face. Both of them looks emotionally.
Krishna : I told you that I am coming, now I assure you that your Maa will speak. She will call you Beti again .It’s my promise.
He wipes her tears and takes his hands away.
Pratigya : Krishna what you said now ? Please say it once again .
Pratigya holds his hands
Pratigya : Please Krishna
Krishna : Your Maa will speak , she will call you as Beti.
Pratigya ; I trust you Krishna , Thank you so much .
Kriya share an emotional eyelock
Haan hasi ban gaye…Haan nami ban gaye plays….
SCENE SHIFTS TO TRAIN
Pratigya : This is my diary Krishna , Have a look
Krishna : Why are you giving this to me ?
Pratigya : I am going to take you at the question of life and risk , I can’t always scream my heart’s pain in words. It’s been written as scattered memories here. As I trust you I believe nothing should be hidden from you, Krishna .
Krishna starts reading her diary
He gets to know about Daksh’s truth. Krishna looks Pratigya’s face. She was almost fallen asleep. Krishna takes the blanket from his bag and covers Pratigya . Then he makes her to sleep at the sleeper berth, mean while accidentally Pratigya keeps her hand on Krishna’s chest. ” Maa…maa…..Mujhse baat keejiye Maa…..”Krishna slowly kept her hand back and looked her
Krishna : Pratigya
As Pratigya had fallen asleep she didn’t heard Krishna .
Krishna : Pratigya, I felt you as special always. But from today I felt you as mine. I don’t know why but I think Bhagwan Ji has bought you to my life. You penned the incomplete lyrics and then we meet. I thought it as a co-incidence only. Then we meet at Mandir where our hearts conveyed so many things. And now you rushed towards me and taking me with you. Is this also a co-incidence or this is what Bhagwan Ji has written in our destiny that I have to be with you in your struggle ? I don’t know after that what will happen . May be you will tell me to go back because you consider me as a friend and I don’t know apart from that did you feel anything for me , even if it’s a No also I won’t feel bad. Because my eyes always see you everywhere I goes and that’s enough for me.
Krishna takes his seat and looks her . He fells asleep and sees a dream
Krishna : Pratigya , I have decorated the whole room with full of lights , you liked it naa ?
Pratigya : Krishna my heart’s light is always you, your each touch, your healing words and your eye sight can do wonders.
Krishna : You really think so ?
Pratigya smiles
Krishna : I also want to feel the same
He keeps Pratigya’s hands at his face
Krishna : Your hands are doing magic, Pratigya I feels to hold you like these all over this night.
Pratigya : Then keep me whole night at your arms and let me feel your love forever
Krishna lifts Pratigya in his arms
They share a romantic eyelock
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5j_b68S-uiU
Karam khudaya hein plays…..
Suddenly Krishna opened his eyes and realised that it was his dream only .
Krishna takes Pratigya’s diary and writes something.
AT VIVIDHA’S HOME
Sujatha : Toh abb yeh rishta pakka samjhun , Yeh lo beti chudiyan . Yeh shaadi kaa shagun hein
Bade bhaiya : Lo Vividha, Atharv accha ladka hein. Vivdiha bhi job karti hein. Donon ke pasand abb hamare bhi pasand hein
Vividha : Thanks bhaiya.
Sujatha ; Hum chalte hein
Vividha and Atharv looks each other and smiles
As soon as they left Vividha goes to terrace for picking clothers. Meanwhile some one lifted her in his arms and it was none other than Atharv
Vividha : Atharv , tum gaye nahi ?
Atharv : Mujhse abb intezaar nahi hota Vividha. Isliye toh chori chupe yahan aaya hoon. Waise tumhein uss din mere birthday ka pata kaise chala?
Vividha : Class 10th- do you remember your ID card was missed ?
Atharv : Chor kahin ke, toh tumne churayi usse ?
Vividha : Mein bass roz tumhein dekhna chahti thi, isliye woh card churayi , Kyunki 10th ke baad pata nahi tum mujhe milne aayenge yaa nahi. I have kept it as precious. You was so cute that days
Atharv : So now I am not cute
Vividha smiles
Atharv : You are always so cute and I must say you have a beautiful heart. It’s full of love for me. Now I need a symbol of love at my cheek.
Vividha : Mujhse nahi hoga.
Atharv : If you won’t give it then I will scream
Vividha : Okay- okay
Vividha and Atharv gets closer. She slowly kissed at Atharv’s cheek
Atharv : Ek aur de do
Vividha : It’s enough for today .
Atharv : But it’s not enough for me
He passionately kissed at Vivdiha’s lips
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5idrqN1PME
Tere sang yaara plays
7 Comments
I really liked the doctor’s dialogues.i am surprised that they decided to approach krishna for the treatment of pratigya’s mom.pratigya requesting krishna to help her mom n finally krishna agreeing was emotional. The sleeping pratigya keeping her hand on krishna’s chest n talking to her mom was emotional.krishna thinking that he felt that she is his was touchy. Krishna’s dream…kriya’s dialogues were poetic n romantic. Atharv saying symbol of love on the cheek for kiss was unique.kiss was very romantic. Nice vm.perfect pics.
Thanks a lot
I asked a reader of bookworm.she says that the writer hasn’t written any ff on niram.are you sure that niram is written by her?or is it some other writer?
I am not very much sure about the name, Sorry. Read it one year back.
Do you remember the other rikara writers you followed on wattpad?actually I am dying to read a rikara ff on niram as one ff on it got unpublished by the writer.thats why.
I have posted can we get out lost love back and ghost bungalow too.
Will read them surely