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SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots)
SHOT 4
Morning
Gododia house:
Swara is packing her and avni’s things when shekar came
Shekar: swara r u sure u want to go to that house again.
Swara(looked up): yes baba
Shekar: but beta
Swara: baba don’t worry now I m no more that scared Swara.they will not be able to do anything.
Shekar: but u will tell me whatever happens there. Promise me.
Swara: ok promise. And baba have u talked to that centre head.
Shekar: yes that only I came to inform I had told him about your need for job so he accepted and u can go from tomorrow.
Swara: that’s good I will be busy from tomorrow only.
Shekar:but beta why u want to do job at child care centre only ,when u can get better one.
(Child care centre is playschool for children of 1-5 years.Actually this is for those parents who do job and leave their child here.this is only imaginary)
Swara: I know baba I can get better but u know I love children and moreover avni can also come with me there as I don’t want to leave her alone.
Shekar: okay .I m always there with u.
Swara smiles.
Afternoon:
Gododia house
A car stops outside the house and sanskar came out of it and went inside.
Swara and avni were ready to go.
Sanskar: namaste(to shekar)
Shekar just nodded.
Sanskar: swara let’s go.
Swara was carrying avni and was going to pick her bag when sanskar said
Sanskar (taking her back): I will have it.
Swara nodded.
Shekar: (to sanskar): listen u, if u even dare to come near my daughter I will come with police only.
Sanskar: I won’t give u chance for that.
Shekar: hope so.
Swara hugged shekar.
Shekar: take care of yourself and avni and don’t hesitate to call me at anytime.
Swara nodded and went.
During the whole journey there was silence in car.Avni was sleeping, swara was looking out and sanskar looking straight.
Maheshwari house:
Swasan came inside with avni.Sujata was in hall.She got angry seeing swara with avni.
They came near her.sanskar kept her bag near sofa and Swara went near sujata.
Swara: hello mom(bend little)won’t u bless your grandchild and dil.
Swara said with a little smirk on her face.sujata’s anger reached peak.
Sujata: eh you, is this the way to talk to your mil.
Swara: but I had learned this way only but don’t worry I will show u many new ways.
Sujata looked at Sanskar who was busy in Mobile.she got angry seeing her son’s negligence.
Sujata (angrily): and u think that this is orphanage that u will bring anyone.
Swara(shouted): just shut up.she is my daughter. And don’t force me to open my mouth otherwise u also very well know your this dear son (point to sanskar)can’t be father.So u should be happy that I m giving u pleasure of being grandmother.
Sujata got mini heart attack seeing her mute dil shouting at her.sanskar was also shocked.
Swara was about to leave when sujata said
Sujata: so u r taunting me and my son.
Swara(turns): huh! no I m saying directly.
Saying this swara went to guest room and put avni on bed and surrounded her with pillows.she came back to hall where sanskar and sujata were confused that why she went to guest room.swara picked her bag and was about to go when Sanskar said
Sanskar: why u went to guest room?
Swara: bcoz I and avni will live there only.
Sujata: (loudly)why don’t u know u should be with your husband.
Swara moved towards sujata.Sujata got little afraid that now what she is going to do.
Swara(point her finger at her): don’t raise your voice and I m not interested in living with my so called husband.understand (said slowly but dangerously)
Sujata nodded being scared.
Swara took her bag and went to guest room leaving behind fuming sujata.
Sujata was about say something to Sanskar but he went to his room
Sujata(irritated): ok god! What is happening in this house.
Night:
Swasan room
Sanskar is sitting on bed lost in thoughts when sujata entered inside bringing him to reality.
Sujata:may I know Sanskar why r u ignoring me.?
Sanskar(normally): I m not.
Sujata: I don’t understand what is going in your mind.How can u become puppet of that girl just within few days.
Sanskar (angry): mom I m not her puppet.
Sujata: then why r u changed?
Sanskar: who said I m changed.
Sujata: I had observed u r listening to her just bcoz she should not give u divorce.
Sanskar: yes bcoz I have reputation and if I and swara will get divorce than it will dark spot on my respect as everyone will get to know about my weakness and above all u r mistaken that anybody will marry me bcoz no one will be interested in marrying a man who can’t be father.Its only Swara who can be my wife so its better if u adjust with her.
Sujata: have u seen her attitude how we r going to bear all this.
Sanskar(chuckled): her attitude…don’t worry she is just angry and her this attitude will vanish in few days just wait and watch she will be back to normal.
Sujata: and what about that child?
Sanskar: oh god why u r tensed when I m there.I will think about her also so just relax and sleep .
Sujata go out and sanskar started drinking and smoking.
On the other hand, Swara had already slept with avni peacefully.
Morning:
Guest room:
Swara got up and get ready.she wore simple suit instead of saree and didn’t wore vermilion and mangalsutar.When she was setting her hairs avni wake up.
She looked at avni and went near her.
Swara:(picking up her): oh my baby got up
Avni smiled at her.
Then Swara made avni ready and put her in cradle and went to prepare breakfast.
Sujata saw her and got shocked seeing her dress and said
Sujata: u r married then what r u wearing.
Swara(casually): I m comfortable in this.
Saying this she went to kitchen.sujata thought at least she will make breakfast and sat on sofa and started reading newspaper.
Swara came out from kitchen with milk bottle for avni and feed her.
Then again went to kitchen.
Sujata was resting thinking that she is making breakfast.
After half hour:
Sanskar came down ready for office.
Sanskar: mom breakfast.
Sujata: just wait.Swara(she called her).
Swara came out and said
Swara: what u want?
Sujata: bring breakfast for me and Sanskar.
Swara: but I didn’t prepared for u.
Sujata: then
Swara:I had made for myself and already ate.I didn’t make extra otherwise it will be wasted(said innocently).
She left for guest room.
Sujata: see Sanskar
Sanskar: it’s ok u only prepare.
Sujata (crying face): now I have to prepare breakfast.
She unwillingly went to kitchen and sanskar sat on sofa when he saw swara coming from room with avni and a handbag.he got confused.
Sanskar: where are u going Swara?
Swara: I already told I will do job so there only.
Sanskar: but why u r taking avni with u?
Swara: do u think I will leave her with your mom.?
Sanskar: where u r going to work?
Swara: at playschool(normally).
Sanskar (angry): r u mad u r wife of richest builder and doing such low class job.
Swara got angry listening him
Swara(shouts): shup up its my choice which job I have to do and I don’t have cheap mentality like you.
Saying this she left while Sanskar stare her angrily.
To be continued.
Precap:Sanskar picked avni first time in his lap and he started accepting his mistake.
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79 Comments
I lyk this independent Swara
nice going
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Make some jealous also …
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Amazing dear….update next part soon
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Awesome dear…
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its really good one dear
i really like it you haven’t made sanskar drastically change, u know have seen many persons who become mother’s puppet and don’t respect and give attention to wife and to do anything which mother said him to do.
Sanskar was mother child so need to see each and everything and how she is manipulating him.
I like it how swara used sanskar weakness and how both mother son become quite.
Sanskar will change but slowly and that is very nyc but i don’t know about sujata becoz she is jumping just becoz of Sanskar and the day Sanskar will not listen her useless talks then she will become quite.
Thank you dear and even I had seen many cases where son listens to her mother and neglect his wife.And yes no one can change suddenly it needs time and soon he will realize the importance of swara
Super episode swara took her stand now time for sanskar realisation. Post soon
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Awesome
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Nice
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Awsm Dr…update soon next part
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Please bring sanskar on right track and realise his mistake
Thank you dear and soon sanskar will realize soon.
AWESOME
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Nice waiting to see some season scenes and please make sandpaper realise his mistake too….
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Amazing yaar Mars….
It’s superbbb I like Swara’s rebel attitude
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Loved it…. waiting for next part..!!
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loved it..continue soon
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Awesome. Post next one soon.
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Indeed,a great work once again..!!li….Jst loved the precap.will hope to see our bold swara n darling avni changing sanskar soon…!!!♡♡
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Yaar…I got my comments uploaded twice unknowingly…sry for the inconvenience!!:):)
Hey its ok dear not a problem
Nice..ur story is going good..tc..
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nice
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Nyc..can u give d link of prvs chaptr in ur every ff..so it wll be easy to read every chappy when we got any one of ur chapter..
So plz try to also include the link of prvs chptr on ur current update..
And ng to stry i liked it..we dnt get see the proper bonding of avni and swara..show smthng like swara playing with avni and sanky admiring dem..and also want to see sanky realising his mistake and his bonding with swavni..i knw u alrdy thought the plot..bt its just my rqst
Thank you dear and I will try to give link and I will show swara and avni bonding in further episodes.
nice dear
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umm love this side of Swara
seems like Sanskar is changing
poor sujhata
come soon
tc
Thank you dear and I will post soon
Love this side of swara… Superb chapie…
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Great work once again!!loved the precap…jst waiting for our bold swara n darling avni to reform Sanskar!!take care dear!!♡♡
Wow loved it
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Amazing dear
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show swara avni bonding also update soon
Thank you dear and will show swara avni bond and will post next part soon
Awesome….. Loved this Swara!! I want some Swara-Avni scenes! Plz dear…
Thank you dear and will surely give swara avni scenes in further episodes.
loved it dear..cover pic is so cute..
Thank you dear and even I love this cover pic two cutie in a frame.
Nice……
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