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SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots):
SHOT 5:
Maheshwari house:
Evening:
Hall:
swara came back from her work and had made avni sleep. She was going to kitchen to prepare dinner for herself when sujata called her
Sujata:swara
Swara looked at her and saw that she is ready to go somewhere with a bag in her hand.Swara turned back but didn’t speak anything.
Sujata: I m going to my Sisters house for two days So kindly tell this to Sanskar(make faces).
Saying this she left.
Swara also went to kitchen and prepared dinner.
After that she went to guest room and saw avni awake and looking here and there she went near her and picked her from cradle.
Swara: my baby doll woke up.
Avni held her hairs.
Swara: oh god I think u love my long hairs alot.When u will be big girl na then u will also have long hairs.
Swara started changing her clothes and talking to her.
Swara: now my baby must be hungry right.
Avni smiles.
Swara: okay then mumma will boil tasty milk for u.
Swara went and kept the cradle in hall and then put avni in it.so that she can directly see her from kitchen.she went to kitchen and avni was playing with the toy attached at the top of cradle.
But after sometimes avni started crying as she must be hungry.
Swara: avni baby just wait. I m coming.
But still avni was crying.swara can’t leave and go bcoz her milk will boil.
At that time only Sanskar entered inside the hall and saw avni crying.He went near her.Avni looked at him and extended her hand as if asking him to pick her up.Then only he listened swara’s voice
Swara(shouts): plzzz avni don’t cry I m coming in two mins.
Avni looked at sanskar and was crying .
Sanskar was not able to see her like this so he picked her up in his arms.Avni stopped crying and started playing with Sanskar’s shirt button.
Sanskar was having different feeling bcoz it is the first time he is carrying baby in his lap.He was staring avni the way she is playing
Later swara came with milk bottle and was shocked to see sanskar holding avni.Sanskar looked at her .
Swara went near them. Sanskar forward avni towards swara.she silently takes her and feed her milk.
Sanskar was about to leave to his room when swara said
Swara: your mom had gone to her sister’s house for two days.
Sanskar (didn’t turn): hmm
He left to his room.
Sanskar was feeling unknown happiness after picking avni.
Night (11pm)
Swara after having her dinner went to guest room and slept with avni.
Swasan room:
Sanskar closed his laptop after finishing his office work.Then he felt hungry and realized that he had not done his dinner.So he went to kitchen but didn’t find anything.
Sanskar (mumble): swara didn’t made dinner.
Then he remembered an incident when he came at late night after party and swara was still waiting for him in hall and offered him dinner but he humiliated her and didn’t had it.
But today situation is different. Swara is near him but still he feels as if she doesn’t exist.
It is said that we often realize the importance of someone when that person goes away.
Sanskar (took deep breathe and whisper): I should ask Swara whether something she had made or not.
He went to guest room.
Guest room:
It has been few mins since sanskar is standing outside the door hesitating to knock it as there was pitch dark inside the room.
Sanskar:I think she slept but I m starving here.
Finally he knock at the door twice.
When swara opened it.She got confused seeing him standing there.
Sanskar:wo actually I want to ask that u didn’t made dinner.
Swara didn’t said anything just simply went to kitchen. Sanskar went after her.
Kitchen:
Swara opened the fringe.Then sanskar realized he didn’t checked there. It was not merely his mistake bcoz he was totally stranger in kitchen.
Swara put the food bowl on shelf and said while leaving
Swara:heat it in oven and eat.
Sanskar looked at her but she had already left.
Now sanskar was left with no other option rather than doing himself.
Finally after the struggle of one hour he ate his food and left to his room.Today he realized that it is very easy to take out lackness by sitting on chair but it is very difficult to do themselves.
Maheshwari house:
Swara was getting ready for her job after preparing breakfast and making avni ready.
Then only door bell rings.
Swara picked avni and went to open the door.sanskar had also came to hall ready for office.
Swara opened the door and saw a man in mid twenties is standing with a smile on his face.swara smiled seeing him.
Swara(surprised): u here laksh.
Laksh: so how was my surprise.
Swara: amazing btw from where u get my address.
She asked entering inside.laksh also followed her.
Laksh: actually I went to gododia house then shekar uncle told me that u r married and gave me your address.
Swara: ok.
Laksh(look at avni):so she is caretakers daughter whom u adopted.
Swara nodded.
Laksh then looked at Sanskar standing in hall confused.
Laksh(went near Sanskar): hmm if I m not wrong then he is your husband swara right?
Swara: hmm. Sanskar he is laksh my childhood friend.
Laksh; yes we did schooling and college together. But then 5 years back i went to USA for my carrier.
Sanskar (shake hand): this is Sanskar maheshwari .
Laksh and sanskar got sitted on sofa.
Swara: I will bring juice for u.
Laksh:swara u give avni to me till then .
Swara: ok
Swara handed avni to laksh and left.
Laksh made avni to sit in his lap facing sanskar.
Avni looked at Sanskar and smiles and extended her arms towards him so that he should take her as she recognized him due to yesterday.
She was leaning towards sanskar and laksh was trying to hold her but she started shouted. Sanskar got up and took her in his arms.Avni stopped shouting.
Sanskar’s happiness has no bound bcoz he felt special that avni wants to come to him.He started playing with him.
Later swara came with juice and snacks and offered to laksh and then put on table.she saw avni busy playing with Sanskar’s shirt sitting in his lap.
Swara went to take her but she got irked as if she was disturbed in her game.Sanskar was going to give her to Swara but avni buried her face in sanskar’s chest.
Sanskar: wo leave her here for sometime.
Swara:hmm
Swara sits beside laksh and talked about their life and all.They were enjoying and laughing remembering their school days.
Sanskar was playing with avni but was taking glances of swara and laksh also.
He was getting irritated with their closeness.First time he is feeling possessive about swara may be bcoz now he has fear of losing her and till now he had taken her only for granted.
Silence is the best punishment.Here also swara is near sanskar but still very far.Fews days back on whom he was dominating, today not able to speak with her.Only he knows how much suffocated he is feeling in the house but now he got a very good companion in the form of avni who is his legal daughter.
To be continued…
Precap:avni injured and sanskar donate his blood for her.
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