Hiii guys!!! I m here with next shot of sufferings.Thank you so much for your amazing response.
Let’s begin:
SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots)
SHOT 8
Maheshwari house
Morning(7:30pm)
Sanskar is already ready to go somewhere. He was talking things in hurry.Soon he left to the hospital to take his report.He didn’t informed anyone. Swara and avni are in guest room and sujata is also in her room.
Hospital:
Sanskar entered inside and asked from receptionist that Dr khanna is there and getting positive result he went to his cabin
Sanskar: hi Mr khanna I hope I m not late.
Dr kkanna: no no u r on time I m going to leave at 8’o clock as my duty will end at that time.(he is at night duty)
Sanskar: okay plzz tell what is in my reports.
Dr khanna: just relax I will show
He got up and bought the reports
Dr khanna:well the treatment is successful.
Sanskar (happy): really it means I can become father?
Dr khanna: yea u can try now I can’t give 100% surety but chances are much increased. So good luck.
Sanskar(hug him): thank you so much.
Dr khanna(smiles): its ok but don’t leave your medicines still.
Sanskar: sure
After taking reports and discussing further Sanskar left from there.
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar came rushed inside the House. He was running with reports in his hand as he can’t wait to tell this news to swara.While going to guest room he colloid with sujata and she said
Sujata: from where are u coming in the early morning
Sanskar: I was having some work.
Sujata: what work and what are these papers?
Sanskar(annoyed): its not necessary to tell u everything mom
Saying this he left from there and sujata went to kitchen angrily seeing his rude behavior.
Guest room:
Sanskar knock the door loudly in excitement.Swara came running and opened the door and said
Swara: slowly avni is sleeping
Sanskar : ohh so sorry.(he said looking at avni)
Swara give him look that why r u here early morning and then Sanskar see reports and said
Sanskar: i want to say u something.
Swara:come
Sanskar came and closed the door. Swara looked at him suspiciously.
But before she could have said anything Sanskar hugged her tightly astonishing Swara. Observing that she is feeling uncomfortable he broke the hug but the smile was not leaving his lips.Swara got confused and asked
Swara: what happened?
Sanskar: woo actually my reports came.
He was really not knowing how to initiate.
Swara: which reports??!
Sanskar mentally slapped himself that she don’t know anything.
Sanskar:six months back I had started treatment that if I can become father.
Swara looked at him shocked.
Sanskar: and doctor said that I can become father and Swara we can have our own baby.(few happy tears fell from his eyes)
Swara don’t know how to react at his sudden revelation Sanskar saw that Swara didn’t reacted as the situation in them was so complicated and then to talk about all this ,seeing her silent he said
Sanskar:swara u are not happy?
Swara(teary eyes):no I m happy for u.
Congratulations.
Swara remembered sujata saying that any girl will marry him and now he don’t have any weakness also so he can marry anyone. Just thinking about this swara felt like dying.
Sanskar:Swara where are u lost?
Swara: no I mean now u can marry anyone u will be happy.
Registering her words in his mind Sanskar got hell angry like how can she say like that.
Sanskar (angrily): what u mean?
Swara got little scared seeing him angry but still said
Swara: now u no need to be in this unwanted relation…
Sanskar (pin her against wall): just shut up.how much happy I was to share this news with u but I never thought u will react like this.U seriously don’t feel anything I mean how can u say this so easily.
Swara jerk his hand and said sternly
Swara: then what wrong I said. U and your mother were saying this only that any girl can marry u.Now go why u r here even u don’t have any fault also.
Sanskar stood numb listening her bcoz she said truth.How much he try to begin everything once again but the past is still piercing his heart at every step.But today he won’t back off and will surely talk to Swara
Sanskar (cups her face): u know why I did this treatment so that I can become perfect for u and only u did u get it.
Swara was not looking at him.
Sanskar: Swara look in my eyes. Don’t u feel that I m changed.trust me I m no more that devil.I really want to start our relation once again where I will never dominate u, and will listen to u, respect u.plzz believe me once.
He joined his forehead with her and tears were continuously flowing from their eyes.Making her breathe stable she said
Swara: it’s not that easy Sanskar. I tried alot to forget everything after seeing u changed in these months and your care for avni but I can’t forget those three years.Its not less time.
Sanskar: I m really sorry. I was stupid to do all that.I did big mistake no no sin by hurting u.Every one deserve forgiveness. Plzzz once forgive me I will never repeat it.If unintentionally also I hurt u then also u can give me any punishment.
He said crying.Swara look in his eyes and said
Swara: when the wounds are deeper it takes more time to heal them.
Sanskar understood she is not able to
forgive him so he said
Sanskar (wipes her tears): don’t worry. U take your time. When u will feel comfortable then u can forgive me I will wait for it but plzz give me one chance and come to our room with avni.I really feel suffocated there alone.plzz I need u both.
Before she could reply avni got up and started crying. Swasan look at her.
As sanskar is standing in front of her so she said wiping her tears
Swara:plzz move aside.
Sanskar moved back and let her go.
Swara went to avni and sit on bed and picked her up.
Swara:my baby wake up very good.
Avni stopped crying seeing swara.But next instant she jumpled in swara’s arm and shouted in happiness as she saw sanskar in their room
Avni:paaaa
Sanskar who was smiling looking at them moved towards her wiping off his tears.Avni held Swara’s hair in her fist in excitement.
Swara: ouchh avni
Sanskar quickly went to them and opened avni’s tightened fist and free swara’s hair and picked her
Swara(setting her hairs): I don’t understand why this girl always attack on my hairs.
Sanskar chuckles and said to avni
Sanskar: see mumma got irritated(kiss her cheeks)
Sanskar and avni giggles gaining glare from Swara. Soon sanskar felt that his shirt got wet.When he saw and he make yukk face as avni had done her work.Swara look at him, firstly she didn’t understood but then she saw avni’s dress also wet and realized what has happened and started laughing loudly.
For a second, sanskar got lost in her angelic smile but feeling his gaze swara control but still someone was laughing then swasan look at avni
Sanskar:huh!how happy she is feeing after doing all that.(make faces)
Swara:(smiles and got up):give her to me I will change her dress Even u go and change your shirt.
Sanskar handed avni to Swara. He stared at swara for sometime may be to know the answer that whether she give him chance or not. But seeing her busy with avni he signed and moved towards door.
As he reached at door swara said
Swara: I will pack my and avni’s things take them to our room I can’t carry heavy bags(said showing her tantrums)
Sanskar jumped in happiness and ran back to her. He firstly kissed avni’s cheeks and then
Sanskar (kiss swara’s cheeks): thank you.
Swara got shocked before she could react sanskar ran out of the room.
Swara(put hand on her cheek and mumble ): from when he became like this.
She unknowingly smiles and then got busy with avni.
Evening:
Sanskar is bringing Swara and avni’s things to their room.Sujata saw it and asked
Sujata: what are u taking all this?
Then only Swara came carrying avni and said
Swara: this is my and avni’s things we are shifting to sanskar’s oops our room.
Sujata(shocked): what but why?
Sanskar: what why?? It’s their room also so what’s problem.
Saying this he left followed by Swara and avni leaving behind shocked and annoyed sujata.
Swasan room:
Sanskar firstly came then swara entered. Swara got shocked seeing the room bcoz each and everything was changed. He has arranged many teddies and other toys for avni.Swara was not able to find single same thing.
Seeing Swara looking at the room sanskar said
Sanskar: I don’t want anything which remind u about past and Hurt u.
Swara smile genuinely.
Avni is super excited to see new room with so many toys and got busy in playing.
Night:
After dinner swasan came to their room and avni was already sleeping in the center of the bed. Sanskar said
Sanskar: dinner was tasty.
Swara (looked at him):u r saying as if u had eaten my hand made food first time.
Sanskar:yea it was first time when I tasted with love.
Sanskar was looking at her lovingly.
Swara was not understanding what to say so she mummers
Swara:I will change.
She went to washroom leaving Sanskar smiling.
Later she came out and saw Sanskar lying on couch so she asked
Swara: why r u lying here?
Sanskar (look at her): u sleep with avni on bed I will sleep here.
Swara: its ok Sanskar u can sleep on bed avni is there only.
Sanskar just nodded but only he knows
that his heart is dancing inside.
So swasan slept on either side of avni.
Morning:
Maheshwari house:
The door bell rings so sanskar move to open it by carrying avni in arms as swara is busy in kitchen.He saw shekar standing there and said
Sanskar(smiles):namaste baba plzz come inside.
Shekar ignored him and wished avni
Shekar: how is my little princess.
Avni smiles. Shekar move inside and called Swara’s name.Listening her baba she came running and hugged him.After that all sit on sofa.Sanskar tried to speak with him but he totally ignored him.
Later shekar said to swara
Shekar:swara I want to talk to u.
Swara:yes say baba
Shekar(look at sanskar): alone
Sanskar understand and said
Sanskar:swara i will take avni to room. She nodded and he left.sujata is already not at home
Shekar: swara I want to say that I had fixed your marriage with Laksh.
Swara(shock):what? But baba I m married.
Shekar: I know u r not happy with sanskar and I can’t let u spoil your life.
Swara:but..
Shekar:if u love me and trust me then u will listen to me.
Swara starts fidgeting her fingers.
Now what she will do???(twist for sus dear)
To be continued….
Precap:Sanskar confessed his love to swara.
Kindly ignore mistakes.
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Bye
Take care
Lots of love.
61 Comments
Superb mars…i am loving this story…kya jatka diya last mein…precap was nice…waiting for next episode
Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon
awesome u have have taken a great pace of the story
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Marsuu plz don’t separate swasan….and if you do so then let it be a small separation……ok ?
Update soon
Thank you so much dear and there will be no swasan separation so relax. I will post next part soon
Awesome ??
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Hey Mars!
I am commenting for the first time but I have read all of your stories!
The shot was as great as usual! I would like to make a request to you. I have started a type of food which is named as Swasan : A Wall of Happy Memories , where there are only short and sweet memories of them. I have even asked other authors to write some and would be glad if you too write one as you always write happy things and make people happy!
Thank you so much dear and I would love to write on swasan on the wall of happy memories but plzz its request that message me personally and give me all details regarding it.
Thanks.
amazing..tc..
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Kamal ka epi tha…….
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Awesome
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Happy to see them together
How can u do this shekhar uncle
Sanskar do it fast and make her urs completely
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iss shekoor ki toh……. jab saadi karwai thi Sanskar se… pehle na dekha tha uska behaviour…. aab jab change Ho gaya….. ekk haddi laa raha hay….. isko ek…. huh awesome epi…..
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Amazing dear loved it
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Amazing dear…. Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Amazing .awesome .. Its really wonderful dear
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Wow loved it plz dont seperate them ❤️
Thank you so much dear and swasan won’t be separated.
ohho that shekher had gone mad.. anyway it was toooooo lovelyyyy….
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Awesome ❤❤❤❤
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Wow!!! Superb loved it
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As always WONDERFUL!!!!
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It was awesome marsuu
Why sujata is so irritating ???
Sanskar is really changed
Now Swara what would be her decision chal an jldi se inkar ker day laksh k proposal ko …
Come soon
Thank you so much suma and I will post next part soon
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loved it
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superb
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Superb update.. Really happy to see an understanding sanskar
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Is Shekhar k problem kya h????? pehle to serial mai SwaSan ko pareshan kia aur ab ff mai bhi pecha nahi chodhta…????
Mars I read all the part today, love u a lot…??????????????????
One more thing, u made Sanskar good but u forgot my sujju. I love chulbuli sujju like in show… Kya hamari Sujata ko bhi akal ayegi. Ya phir woh typical sasu ma he rahe GI…??????
Now coming to my Sanku??? aww ladka sudhar gaya… Suruwat mat cruel Sanky imagine karna muskil ho raha tha… But this Sanky I love?????
Please post soon….
Kuch Jada he bakwass kar di Maine… ?????
Love u… And take care?
Thank you so much dear and khoi ni shekar ka khel jaldi katam ho jayega.
Aur sujju ko mai akal dene ki try karugi agar usne lai li hehehe.I will post next part soon and loveee uuuu tooo.
loved it…finally read all chapters of this ff?
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read the whole story in a go..
it is very very very nice..
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