Hellllo guys! This is mars back with second last shot of this ts.Thank you so much for your valuable comments.
Let’s begin:
SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots)
Recap:swara give one chance to sanskar and shekar ask swara to marry laksh.
SHOT 9:
Maheshwari House:
Shekar:swara plzz think u know laksh from long time and he is nice boy.
Swara:baba I can’t do this.
Shekar: I know its not easy for u and I don’t want u too hurry.U can tell me tomorrow.
Swara just look at him and said
Swara:but baba sanskar..
Shekar:don’t take his name.now I m going I will wait for your answer.
Swara nodded. Shekar left.
Swasan room:
Sanskar is playing with avni sitting on bed.Swara came inside and Sanskar saw her and asked
Sanskar:swara baba went?
Swara:hmm
She came and sit on the edge of the bed and got lost in thoughts.Sanskar observed her so put pillow on sides of avni to prevent her from falling.He got up and sit beside Swara and said
Sanskar (put his hand on her): swara what happened?
Swara looked at him feeling him.
Swara shook her head in no.
Sanskar: u can tell me.
Swara(took deep breathe): baba has fixed my marriage with laksh.
Listening her sanskar withdraw his hand from her hand.Swara looked at him who was breathing heavily. Sanskar was feeling restless.
Swara: u are ok Sanskar?
Sanskar immediately hugged her tightly while sitting and said
Sanskar(crying): plzzz don’t leave me swara.I can’t live without u and avni.
He broke the hug and cups her face with his shivering hands.
Sanskar: u can punish me Swara I will accept it happily but don’t leave me.
I will never get angry on u and will always be with u.
Swara was shocked bcoz it was the first time when she saw him in such devastated state.
She wipes Sanskar’s tears and said
Swara: plzzz don’t cry I will say no to baba tomorrow.
Sanskar(childishly): pakka.
Swara: yes.
Avni who was seeing swasan started crying seeing Sanskar
Swara: aww see she also started crying seeing you.Both father daughter are cry babies.
Sanskar look at her and smiles. He took her in his lap
Sanskar: why my babu is crying.
Avni tried to wipe his tears from cheeks.He hugged her tightly feeling her love.Swara went to them and hug them both and said
Swara(pout): how can u both leave me.
Sanskar chuckles.
Next day
Swasan and avni are going to gododia house for making shekar understand.
Sanskar is really worried and was moving here and there in his room.Then only Swara came and said
Swara: Sanskar let’s go.
Sanskar held her hand and said
Sanskar: baba will agree na plzz try to tell him that u don’t want to marry laksh(teary eyes)
Swara:just relax now let’s go.
Gododia house:
Swasan came inside after shekar opened the door.Swara hugged him and sanskar took his blessing but he didn’t reacted.
Hall:
All were sitting on sofa. Avni as usual in her papa’s lap when shekar said
Shekar: so what u thought swara.
Swara looked at sanskar who seems to be tensed.
Swara: baba I don’t want to marry laksh.
Shekar (look at Sanskar): did he said u something.
Swara: no no actually I and sanskar want to give new start to this relation.
Shekar: are u mad swara?
Swara: trust me baba he is changed.He is really regretting for his behaviour.
Shekar: but…
Swara: u had only choosed him for me so plzz let me give it a chance.And he loves avni alot.
All the time sanskar was looking down.
Shekar: okay if u r saying then I know u will take right decision.
Sanskar’s eyes shines.
Later they were going when Sanskar said
Sanskar: I know baba its not easy to forgive me for what all I did.but even today I will also not ask sorry bcoz first I will prove myself as good son in law, husband and father.
Shekar nodded sternly.
Then they left from there.
After two days:
Sanskar is in office and swara in kitchen.She has made avni sit on sofa with pillows around her.She was playing with ball then only her ball fell down so to take it she bend forward and was about to fall on floor but two hands hold her and she is sujata.
Sujata: can’t u sit at a place.
Avni look at her and giggles.Sujata made her sit.
Sujata: now why are u showing me your few teeths which u have.
But still she was giggling. Sujata sit beside her and said
Sujata: na u tell me what makes u laugh.
Avni look at her.Then only swara came from kitchen and sanskar from office.They both were shocked to see sujata with avni.Sanskar went to swara who was standing near dinning table and said
Sanskar: what is all this?
Swara: I don’t know even I m shocked.
Avni look at ball on floor and then said to sujata
Avni: di bol(ball)
Sujata(shocked): I m not your di.
Avni(shouts): diii
Sujata pick ball to her and said politely
Sujata: say dadi not di
Swasan looked at each other in amusement.
Avni(shook her head in no): di
Sujata made her sit on lap and said
Sujata: see I give u ball and will give u chocolate also plzz say dadi(pleading)
Avni ignored her and got busy with ball.
Sujata looked at swasan who were smiling seeing them.
Sujata: what u both are laughing?
Swasan shook their head vigorously.
Sujata: swara sanskar plzz tell avni to say me dadi(pout)
Swasan were having high time in controlling their laugh seeing sujata’s expression.
Swara: she will say ma.
Sujata: but when.
Swasan sit with them.
Sanskar: ma give her to me she listens to me.
Avni as soon as listened Sanskar’s voice she shouted and jumped in his lap.
Sanskar: baby see she got sad(to sujata): she is your dadi call her dadi plzz
Swara: may be she is feeling difficult to speak it.
Sanskar: yes avni speak after me ok
Avni nodded.
Sanskar: da
Avni: da
Sanskar: di
Avni: di
Sanskar: now dadi
Avni: vow(now) dadi
Sujata; not now dadi only dadi
Swasan were biting their lips to control their laugh.
Avni(shouts): dadi
Sujata jumped from sofa and hugged her and said
Sujata: see swara Sanskar she called me dadi
Swasan smiles with tears that finally she is changing.
Avni then took names by pointing to sanskar she said” papa” then to Swara ” mamma” then she remain silent for sometime and sujata got sad but then only avni pointed her and shouted ” dadi”.
All laughs seeing her teasing sujata.
After two months:
Many things changed in this two months. Sujata is changed and spend more time with avni.Now sujata and avni become best friends and show their tantrums to swasan. Sujata behave well with swara also and she also forgave her. Everything was going well.Sanskar used to visit gododia house after every week to meet shekar.Swasan had came much more closer.They share everything with each other.
Tomorrow is swasan fourth marriage anniversary so sanskar had planned with sujata and avni to tell his love to swara.So sanskar took all of them to dinner and intentionally came back at 11:50pm to surprise Swara.
Avni went with sujata to her room. Swara entered inside the room but didn’t find Sanskar.She saw a chit present on bed.
She went and read it which states” come to terrace….. I m waiting”.
Firstly she got confused then thought to go.
Terrace:
Swara entered on terrace and got surprised to see the whole terrace decorated beautifully.
She saw Sanskar standing there. He came near her and said
Sanskar:I know u must be confused that what is all this then let me remind u Mrs maheshwari today is our marriage anniversary as it’s 12. I know it was not special day to u but trust me from today onwards I will fulfil your all dreams which u want to fulfil with your husband. I will try to vanish those worst three years from your life.Will u accept me plzz once forgive me.And I want to say that I love u.I realized it when u were near me but I was not able to talk to u, say anything to u.Then only I realized your importance in my life.
Tears make their way through swara’s eyes bcoz she always had dreamed that Sanskar should propose her like this.She tightly hugged him and Sanskar also tightened the hug.
Swara(whispers): I love u too.
Sanskar was on cloud nine.They broke the hug and shared intense eye lock.
Sanskar saw her glossy lips and lean closer and whispers
Sanskar: may I
Swara slightly nodded.
Sanskar placed his rough lips on her soft one and started kissing her softly.Soon the soft and gentle kiss changed to passionate and hungry.
They broke the kiss to breathe.
Sanskar: I love u
Swara: love u too.
Again Sanskar capture her lips and shared a passionate kiss.
To be continued….
Precap: swasan romance Last shot.
So only one more shot is left.
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95 Comments
hey marsuu amazing dear so nice
Thank you so much dear
Hmm nice but m wating for betterhalf and u ??????????
Thank you so much dear and my better half will post soon
Marsuu!!!!
sufferings’s journey was so beautiful and it has a lesson also .I loved it to the cote .
precap is amazing
waiting for next
Thank you sumu dear and I will post next part soon
Awesome
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Awesome
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Wow yaar it’s too good yaar just superbbb….
I loved it…and it’s good
Thank you dear
awesome but plzzz show in last shot they will become parents..of their own child..n swara tantrums also…
Thank you dear and swasan will have their own child also.
lovly dear
Thank you dear
Awsm marsuu…..loved it actually my phone is damaged so I m commenting from another phone and currently not logged in……
Loved it soon much …..sorry can’t comment on naughty billo cause my phone battery Is very low…….
Awsm epi loved swara update naughty billo next part soon…..
And sumaya urf suma…..
Journey to love 1st part was awsm….loved it a lot…update next soon…
San ek hi mai comment Kr diya kyunki phone ki battery bs 2% bachi hai….kya kru bachpan se hi jugadu hun……
Thank you harshu and don’t be sorry its ok.vase jugad acha lagaya keep it up hehe.
Awesome dear…post next one soon
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon
Superb dear
loved it
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post next part soon
hve a nce day
Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.
Amazing one. And u are excellent writer dear.
Thank you so much dear
Aww my sujju became good ??????????. Thank you for this…???????.
Little baby so cute… Di ????????
But this Shekhar is still khadus?????? leave him?
Sanskar live confession???????????????????? and kiss ?
But is ending??? every story has to end?
Bye love u
Thank you dear and even I m feeling bad to end it but still every story comes to end.Don’t worry I had already thought new one after this hehe.lovvee uuu tooo
Yepiiii????? new SwaSan ff????????
Hihhihi
Awesome ??
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Awesome dear
Thank you dear
Sujata changing behavior and their bond with avni so lovely
Thanks for liking suju avni bond.
superb
Thank you dear
oh god finally sujatha is changed…super chappy
Thank you dear
Im new here so you must have not seen me in previous part but i just now completed reading all the parts of this story and they’re really amazing ….. Swara sufferings made emotional n then sanskar changing behaviour ….. He being guilty but if you dont mind i think he deserve punishment after all long there years Swara suffered even she forgives sujata very easily ….. Its just my point of view …. Sorry if you felt bad ….. But the story line is awesome …. Thank you …. Tc
Thank you dear and Sanskar has suffered for whole year when swara always behaved rudely with him.
Don’t be sorry dear btw thanks for giving your POV.
soooooooooooooo good
Thank you dear
Amazinggggggg marsߘʰߘʰߘʰߘʰߘͰߘͰߘ͠a child changed everyones life into harmonyߒհߘ܀`
Thank you dear and well said child can change anyone.
Awesome..tc..
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Loved it dear
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Awesome dear
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Superb dear..now cmpltd readng the prvs chaptrs..superb dear..i loved dis alot..sanky changed alot frm d heartless fellow to a good fathr..just bcz of swavnj..and sujatha also changed..such a lositivity..and i also want to see swara bcm pregnant..and everythng hav to be end..bt miss dis ff..such a lovely stry
And i also read ur other wrks uncontrollable feelings and break up patch up and struggle alao..all of dem are diff and intrstng concept..also loved
And i especially loved the character of naughty chatter box swara in uncontrollable feelings…waitng for furthur episods..srry for not cmmntng der..i m soo lazy but i love ur works ..hehe..love u dear
Thank you so much dear and Swara will have her own child also.
Thanks for liking uncontrollable feelings will post it soon.
Marssuuu Amazing dear… Finally Suju also changed! Lovely Avni – suju bonding. Sanskaar’s confession is super…. Eagerly waiting for next part dear….
Thank you dear and will post next part soon
aww avni teasing sujju was soooooooooooooooooooooooo nice yaar….
really loved it….
the story is going to end but it was a beautiful journey…
loved it dear….
Thank you dear and will post next part soon
Awesome dr
Thank you shan di
Siso, mindblowing fantastic update. Finally, Do pyaar karne waale ek ho gaye. Tumne mera dil khush kar diya. Love you lots siso. Waiting for the last dhamakedaar shot.
Thank you sisso and will post soon
Lovvveee youuu sissso bhul gayi likhna
Superb dear… This journey was incredibly awesome… From hate to love… Try described everything properly….
Just loved this…. Soon come up with new one… ❤❤
Lots n lots of love from me ❤❤❤❤
Thank you dear and will come with new one after this and will post next part soon.
Hey bhagwaan itni sarri stories kaise likh leti hai……..abhi to ek new story start ki na tune “break up patch up ” ab ek aur…….
Ram ram ram……koi mughe bhi inti shakti deta…..mai to ek ff likhne ke baad at least 15 days break leti hun …..par ye ladki bs likhe hi jaa rhi hai..,
Mahaan hai tu bhi….
Keep it up marsuu
Hats off to you
Hayeee harshu etni tareef mat kar mere se sambal nahi rahi hihihi
Aur agar tujhe b Jada stories likhne ki coaching leni hai come to me I will train u well hihi