Suraj olv all the time papa wants this person killed or to make this person bundua i always have to do the dirty work whilst the manhoorlaals r enjoying everything papa thinks vivaan manhoorlaal is more better at handling the office work and im here doing the dirty work which is damaging my reputation as everyone thinks im a goon?
Bhavan;;imli laal where r u i wanna see my fav daughter who will take over her papa empire…
Kaustri;i cant believe u 2 imli suppose to recive education instead all she cares about is guns…
Bhavan;kaustri just enjoy the guns and money forget the rest…and prepare for chakor she is coming back…
Kauatri;she wont be happy with whats going on..
Imli;baapu im here and iv got the info the rajvanshi are planning to buy the new gun powder but imli laal got hands on it before they can…
Bhavan;excellent imli excellent…
Chakor steps out her car by the azzadganj sign..
Chakor;thanks but i know my way around here..
Chakor steps in and breathes in the air of azaadganj…
Suraj reaches the factory…
Shop owner…sorry mr rajvnashi but imli laal took all the gun powder please dont kill me…
Suraj;? i really dont care im done with this!
Suraj drives of in anger … chakor walks slowly observing the air of azaadganj…
Suraj notices a girl and stops his car..
Suraj olv oh no what have i done!did i hurt her…
Suraj steps out his car and looks down to see..
Chakor;if you didnt stop the car then right now i would be dead!
Suraj gives his hand to help chakor get up and chakor takes his hand sukor shiver touching each other…mahiya plays sukor r mesmerized seeing each other a car horns past
Suraj;im so sorry i didnt notice seeing u r u ok shall we go to the hospital..
Chakor;its ok im alright and its good to see the people of azaadganj changed normally a person would run of…
Suraj;well iv had enough of azaadganj i feel like running away and starting afresh…
Chakor laughs…
Suraj;so where r u of to il drop u of please allow me for my mistake..
Chakor olv he is so cute!how can i refuse…
Chakor;ok?since ur saying it with love how can i refuse…
Chakor sits with suraj…
Suraj;so were have you come from..
Chakor;Lucknow…i was gone for 10 yrs but now im bk…
Suraj;woah 10 yrs u were better of there azaadganj is not a nice place living in there’s always fighting and bloodshed everywhere…and what way is ur route…
Chakor;the azaadganj i left was left with animals but seeing u i feel azaadganj has changed…mahiya plays…and take a right…
Suraj;this is the way to laal house…
Chakor;well u can stop now thank u il take it fron here and see u around bye
Suraj smiles bye…
Suraj drives off…
Imli olv what was a rajvanshi family car doing here i need to inform baapu…
Chakor;mai im back…
Kaustri;chakoriya both hug and cry im so glad by betiyarani is back i missed u so much imlu and bhavan have not changed u r the hope in all this mess…
Imli bhavan;so ur bk and please dont lecture us like ur mother does day and night if ur not with us then dont butt in our business…
Chakor frowns…
Chakor olv whatever these guys r doing is wrong ?
Suraj reaches bk to rajvanshi haveli and is angry seeing vivaan manhoorlaal getting a foot massage..
Suraj olv there’s me running around for a stupid gun powder…
Kamal;did u get the powder…
Suraj?no the laals took it…
Kamal;how dare u i told u to get it the laals won this battle becoz of u!
Suraj;fine then do it urself!im done?
Kamal;who r u ur suraj naryan rajvanshi hier of this rajvnashi empire…
Suraj olv more like the pauper of rajvnashi empire…
Suraj;whatever suraj walks of…
Ranjana;kamal still thinks suraj is the hier only my beta vivaan will get all this…
Suraj;im suffocating here!!! Suraj thinks of chakor and smiles..
Suraj olv that girl was like a breath of fresh air in this whole village whoever she is she is so special…
Chakor thinks of suraj and smiles..
Chakor olv he was so different azaadganj needs more people like him…
Precap sukor meet and bond even more…
8 Comments
Interesting start. Loved sukor first meeting. Sukor are wrong person in the insane family
Thank u im glad u loved it so much
Hey tippu, I am your silent reader. I like your fan fiction. I read many fan fictions about sukor. But for you I would be new. Awesome episode today. Waiting for the next.
Hey shanaya im glad u read sukor ffs and im glad u enjoyed and commented i hope every that reads my ffs the silent readers express thier views to and enjoy the ffs?
Awesome start! Can’t wait for next part.
Thank u im gonna update today?
Interesting update. Waiting Gordon sukor scenes. Update next part soon.
Thank u and i updated