Hi guys I m back from saudi arabia so here is the next part of my ff hope u guys will like it
Recap:vivaan and suraj waits for imli and chakor.suraj and chakor starts fighting on seeing each other
Chakor:BROTHER?
Suraj:SISTER?
both suraj and chakor look eachother in a shock
Chakor:vivaan say me what I heard is not true say me that this donkey is not your brother
vivaan:suraj is my own brother chakor and u r imli’s sister and my friend too so I respect but please stop calling my brother donkey…….
Chakor:oh god why it always happens with me only u always gives me a lot of happines nd then suddenly u will snatch it
Suraj:oh drama queen stop doing this drama
Chakor:what!! U think I m doing a drama ?.oh now I remember human beings can only understand others feelings
Suraj:what do u want to say ?? U want to that I m an animal
Chakor:even animals can understand others feelings only drakula’s r not having feelings for others
Suraj:accha me drakula or tum kia ho? Tum to khoon choosne wali ek badi moti makhii ho
Chakor:kia kaha khoon choosne wali badi moti makkhi! Or tum kia ho? Tum to insaan or janwaron ko zinda chab ke kha jane wale aadmi hoo
Suraj:dekha vivaan dekha imli see this chipkali is fighting with me like Hitler
Chakor:what I m hitler but u r also fighting with me like gabbar singh
Imli:stop it didi what’s wrong with u two.why u both can’t be each other’s dance partners.u both r dance partners then u both should try to understand each other
Vivaan:yah imli is right if u both will fight like this then how u people can prepare for dance competition
Imli:I think u both should accept each other as dance partners
Vivaan:not only dance partners u both can also become good friends like me and imli
Suraj olv:good friends!! We can only become good enemies
Chakor:what good friends ?? I always make friends like me who r so sharp nd intelligent.not at all interested to do friendship with losers
Imli:didi again u started
Suraj:what do u mean by started she never stop then how come start
Vivaan:bhaiiiii
Imlk:I think now you both should try to forget everything
Vivaan:only 2 days are left for the party bhai try your best
BELL RANKS
Imli and vivaan move to their clas room and suraj and chakor comes to practice hall
Chakor:I think they were right we should stop fighting nd accept each other as dance partner then only we can move forward
Suraj:finally u r talking some sensibly
Chakor:what did u say something??
Suraj:did u hear something??
Chakor:I didn’t hear something that’s y only I m asking to u
Suraj:u didn’t hear something it means I didn’t say anything
Chakor:fine now shall we start our practice
Suraj:yes of course
Suraj and chakor start their dance practice.
AT RAJVANSHI MANSION
The telephone rings tejaswini goes and answers the call
Tejawini:what after 3 days u r going to come I m glad to hear it…….
After sometime tejaswini ends the call
Tejaswini:vivaan and suraj will be more happy when they will get know who is going to come to our home.i will not inform this good news to them.my sons will be surprised when they will see the guest.oh I m so excited?
AT COLLEGE
BELL RANKS
vivaan and imli comes out of the class. vivaan sees imli
Vivaan:what happen imli you are looking so tense
Imli:nothing.i was just thinking about di and suraj
Vivaan:oh till now you are thinking about them only.i think u should stop thinking about them see when time passes they will become good friends like us
Imli:sure??
Vivaan:yes
Imli hugs vivaan.vivaan feels for imli
SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND CHAKOR
Chakor sits at a chair and drinks some water
Chakor:haaaaah am so tired of this dance practice
Suraj comes and clicks his fingers in front of chakor
Suraj:u chipkali tomorrow come on time. tomorrow u don’t say me I was busy in eating my breakfast that’s why I m late suraj
Chakor:if I m late for one day it doesn’t mean always I will be late
Suraj:what ever.keep it in mind tomorrow u should be on time
After saying this suraj moves from there
Chakor:huh what does he think of himself.i really hate hate this guy a lot
ON THE WAY TO HOME
Chakor thinks about suraj and his words while suraj thinks about chakor and her words
Imli:di what happen to you why are you driving this much of fast
Chakor didn’t replies to imli’s question as she is lost in some another world
Imli:di..di..I m talking to you..
Chakor comes to her senses
Chakor:what??did you say something
Imli:whats wrong with u di..where have you been lost
Chakor:where have I been lost!nothing im here only
Imli:I know you are thinking about suraj only
Chakor:suraj??
Chakor laughs and says
Chakor:why will I think about that donkey I was thinking about dance competition that who will win it
Imli:really??
Chakor:yes
Chakor and reach their home and enters in it
SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND VIVAAN
Vivaan drives the car suraj sits beside him.vivaan sees suraj and asks
Vivaan:what happen suraj what are u thinking about?
Suraj:nothing
Vivaan:nothing?I know you are thinking about chakor
Suraj:chakor!!no I m not thinking about her why will I think about her. i m having lots of works to think about
Vivaan:fine
The boys also reach their home and they enter in it
AT NIGHT
Both the families sit for dinner
Suraj:what happen mom??today you are looking so happy
Vivaan:yes mom today you are looking so happy.why today is their anything special ??
Tejaswini:no nothing beta
Suraj:say na mom like this u can’t hide anything from your sons
Tejaswini:no beta nothing happen to me when tym will come u will know everything
SCENE SHIFTS TO CHAKOR’S HOME
Chakor:hey mom pass me that dish
Chakor eats everything so quickly.imli notices chakor
Imli:hey di what are u doing??
Chakor:what do you mean by what are you doing can’t you see I m eating
Imli:di…don’t eat this much…otherwise u can’t dance properly
Imli teases chakor. chakor holds imli’s ear
Chakor:now a days u r talking so much . don’t you think so
Imli:sorry di I was just joking.now leave my ear.its paining
Chakor leaves imli’s ear.after dinner they both tease each other alot and went to sleep
MORNING
Suraj:? vivaan what are you doing why are you driving this much of slow
Vivaan:bhai I m driving fast only but what happen to you??see already we r late if I drive more faster then also nothing will happen and why are u getting so tense??
Suraj:yah u r right bro already we r light?now that chipkali will kill you suraj.oh god save me
Chakor waits for suraj in a dancing hall.suraj arrives their.both suraj and chakor see each other
Suraj olv:don’t know now what this chipkali will say.but I know one thing she will start fighting with me like a hitler
Chakor:u finally u came but u r late
Suraj:yah…..
Chakor:what happen y r u so late . I think u were busy in eating your breakfast.right
Suraj:wo…wo…me
Chakor:now I don’t need any explanation.now only one day is left so common let’s start our practice
Suraj:today will u not fight with me??
Chakor:yes did u say something??
Suraj:no
SCENE SHIFTS TI IMLI AND VIVAAN
vivaan:imli what r u thinking
Imli:nothing I was just thinking that what should I gift di as her birthday is coming soon
Vivaan:oh!so gift the things which she loves the most
Imli:huh my di only loves puppies not only puppies but all the animals but puppies are her favorite
Vivaan:oh what’s your favorite animal
Imli:puppy only
SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND CHAKOR
Lecturer enters the hall and asks them to select their dresses for the competition.every one starts selecting thrir dresses.chakor selects a purple satin colour frock of off shoulders its and suraj selects to wear a black T-shirt with white coat
Chakor wears the dress to check whether it is proper or not.she goes to see her self in a mirror but falls down in suraj arms.they both share a cute eye lock.after a while they both realise in which position they are.suraj releases chakor.
Suraj:can’t you see and walk
Chakor:I was walking properly only but u came in my way
Suraj:what! I came in your way! U think ki me tum jaise moti makkhi me interested hoon. no way baby
Chakor:when did I say like this
Suraj:u didn’t say like this but u want to say this only
Chakor:just shutup now move from my way I need to look my self in a mirror
Suraj:why should I move?u r coming in my way.I will not move from here
Chakor:fine if u don’t want to move then don’t move but see I m also having legs and I can move and go there
Chakor moves from there looks herself in a mirror
Chakor:wow!wow!chakor u r looking so so beautiful hope tumhe kisi ki nazar na lag jaye especially this donkey
Lecturer calls every one and asks them to show their costumes to them to show their costumes.every one shows their costumes to lecturer except chakor
Lecturer:chakor where’s your costume
Chakor:this one only mam
Lecturer:what! I asked u guys to show your costumes not to wear it
Chakor:oh! Sorry mam
Lecturer:fine.but don’t repeat this types of silly mistakes again and again
Lecturer moves from there.suraj starts laughing at chakor
Chakor:suraj laugh as much as u can see when lecturer will scold you na I will also laugh at you like this only
AT NIGHT
Suraj:what mom day after tomorror there’s a party in our home
Vivaan:but y??
Tejaswini:u both stop asking me questions! And I was just keeping a party only na what will happen if I keep a party
Vivaan:yes mom u can keep party but without any reason??
Tejaswini:beta now its too night u both just go and sleep
Both suraj and vivaan comes in their room
Suraj:vivaan don’t u think mom is hiding something from us I mean why will she keep party without any reason
Vivaan:yah seems like that only.may be she is not telling us the reason because she wants to give us surprise
Suraj:what ever it is.i m feeling so sleepy.good night
Vivaan:good night bhai
To be continued……
4 Comments
Awesome update. Finally sukor are concentrating on dance competition. Waiting for next
So funny! Loved Sukor nok jhoks. At least one eyelock already. And they are thinking about each other. Matches the title Nafraton Mein chupa pyaar. I think Teju and Kasturi are friends and Teju is organising Chakor’s birthday party.
Keep going Doll and update soon
Ur beloved Sanu
Welcome back!
Awesome update! loved Sukor bickering and how they’re thinking of each other. Eagerly waiting for next.
Awesome story please put d next update as ap