Fan Fiction

Sukor ff-Nafraton me chupa pyaar (part 10)

Hi guys I m back from saudi arabia so here is the next part of my ff hope u guys will like it

Recap:vivaan and suraj waits for imli and chakor.suraj and chakor starts fighting on seeing each other

Chakor:BROTHER?

Suraj:SISTER?

both suraj and chakor look eachother in a shock

Chakor:vivaan say me what I heard is not true say me that this donkey is not your brother

vivaan:suraj is my own brother chakor and u r imli’s sister and my friend too so I respect but please stop calling my brother donkey…….

Chakor:oh god why it always happens with me only u always gives me a lot of happines nd then suddenly u will snatch it

Suraj:oh drama queen stop doing this drama

Chakor:what!! U think I m doing a drama ?.oh now I remember human beings can only understand others feelings

Suraj:what do u want to say ?? U want to that I m an animal

Chakor:even animals can understand others feelings only drakula’s r not having feelings for others

Suraj:accha me drakula or tum kia ho? Tum to khoon choosne wali ek badi moti makhii ho

Chakor:kia kaha khoon choosne wali badi moti makkhi! Or tum kia ho? Tum to insaan or janwaron ko zinda chab ke kha jane wale aadmi hoo

Suraj:dekha vivaan dekha imli see this chipkali is fighting with me like Hitler

Chakor:what I m hitler but u r also fighting with me like gabbar singh

Imli:stop it didi what’s wrong with u two.why u both can’t be each other’s dance partners.u both r dance partners then u both should try to understand each other

Vivaan:yah imli is right if u both will fight like this then how u people can prepare for dance competition

Imli:I think u both should accept each other as dance partners

Vivaan:not only dance partners u both can also become good friends like me and imli

Suraj olv:good friends!! We can only become good enemies

Chakor:what good friends ?? I always make friends like me who r so sharp nd intelligent.not at all interested to do friendship with losers

Imli:didi again u started

Suraj:what do u mean by started she never stop then how come start

Vivaan:bhaiiiii

Imlk:I think now you both should try to forget everything

Vivaan:only 2 days are left for the party bhai try your best

BELL RANKS

Imli and vivaan move to their clas room and suraj and chakor comes to practice hall

Chakor:I think they were right we should stop fighting nd accept each other as dance partner then only we can move forward

Suraj:finally u r talking some sensibly

Chakor:what did u say something??

Suraj:did u hear something??

Chakor:I didn’t hear something that’s y only I m asking to u

Suraj:u didn’t hear something it means I didn’t say anything

Chakor:fine now shall we start our practice

Suraj:yes of course

Suraj and chakor start their dance practice.

AT RAJVANSHI MANSION

The telephone rings tejaswini goes and answers the call

Tejawini:what after 3 days u r going to come I m glad to hear it…….

After sometime tejaswini ends the call

Tejaswini:vivaan and suraj will be more happy when they will get know who is going to come to our home.i will not inform this good news to them.my sons will be surprised when they will see the guest.oh I m so excited?

AT COLLEGE

BELL RANKS

vivaan and imli comes out of the class. vivaan sees imli

Vivaan:what happen imli you are looking so tense

Imli:nothing.i was just thinking about di and suraj

Vivaan:oh till now you are thinking about them only.i think u should stop thinking about them see when time passes they will become good friends like us

Imli:sure??

Vivaan:yes

Imli hugs vivaan.vivaan feels for imli

SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND CHAKOR

Chakor sits at a chair and drinks some water

Chakor:haaaaah am so tired of this dance practice

Suraj comes and clicks his fingers in front of chakor

Suraj:u chipkali tomorrow come on time. tomorrow u don’t say me I was busy in eating my breakfast that’s why I m late suraj

Chakor:if I m late for one day it doesn’t mean always I will be late

Suraj:what ever.keep it in mind tomorrow u should be on time

After saying this suraj moves from there

Chakor:huh what does he think of himself.i really hate hate this guy a lot

ON THE WAY TO HOME

Chakor thinks about suraj and his words while suraj thinks about chakor and her words

Imli:di what happen to you why are you driving this much of fast

Chakor didn’t replies to imli’s question as she is lost in some another world

Imli:di..di..I m talking to you..

Chakor comes to her senses

Chakor:what??did you say something

Imli:whats wrong with u di..where have you been lost

Chakor:where have I been lost!nothing im here only

Imli:I know you are thinking about suraj only

Chakor:suraj??

Chakor laughs and says

Chakor:why will I think about that donkey I was thinking about dance competition that who will win it

Imli:really??

Chakor:yes

Chakor and reach their home and enters in it

SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND VIVAAN

Vivaan drives the car suraj sits beside him.vivaan sees suraj and asks

Vivaan:what happen suraj what are u thinking about?

Suraj:nothing

Vivaan:nothing?I know you are thinking about chakor

Suraj:chakor!!no I m not thinking about her why will I think about her. i m having lots of works to think about

Vivaan:fine

The boys also reach their home and they enter in it

AT NIGHT

Both the families sit for dinner

Suraj:what happen mom??today you are looking so happy

Vivaan:yes mom today you are looking so happy.why today is their anything special ??

Tejaswini:no nothing beta

Suraj:say na mom like this u can’t hide anything from your sons

Tejaswini:no beta nothing happen to me when tym will come u will know everything

SCENE SHIFTS TO CHAKOR’S HOME

Chakor:hey mom pass me that dish

Chakor eats everything so quickly.imli notices chakor

Imli:hey di what are u doing??

Chakor:what do you mean by what are you doing can’t you see I m eating

Imli:di…don’t eat this much…otherwise u can’t dance properly

Imli teases chakor. chakor holds imli’s ear

Chakor:now a days u r talking so much . don’t you think so

Imli:sorry di I was just joking.now leave my ear.its paining

Chakor leaves imli’s ear.after dinner they both tease each other alot and went to sleep

MORNING

Suraj:? vivaan what are you doing why are you driving this much of slow

Vivaan:bhai I m driving fast only but what happen to you??see already we r late if I drive more faster then also nothing will happen and why are u getting so tense??

Suraj:yah u r right bro already we r light?now that chipkali will kill you suraj.oh god save me

Chakor waits for suraj in a dancing hall.suraj arrives their.both suraj and chakor see each other

Suraj olv:don’t know now what this chipkali will say.but I know one thing she will start fighting with me like a hitler

Chakor:u finally u came but u r late

Suraj:yah…..

Chakor:what happen y r u so late . I think u were busy in eating your breakfast.right

Suraj:wo…wo…me

Chakor:now I don’t need any explanation.now only one day is left so common let’s start our practice

Suraj:today will u not fight with me??

Chakor:yes did u say something??

Suraj:no

SCENE SHIFTS TI IMLI AND VIVAAN

vivaan:imli what r u thinking

Imli:nothing I was just thinking that what should I gift di as her birthday is coming soon

Vivaan:oh!so gift the things which she loves the most

Imli:huh my di only loves puppies not only puppies but all the animals but puppies are her favorite

Vivaan:oh what’s your favorite animal

Imli:puppy only

SCENE SHIFTS TO SURAJ AND CHAKOR

Lecturer enters the hall and asks them to select their dresses for the competition.every one starts selecting thrir dresses.chakor selects a purple satin colour frock of off shoulders its and suraj selects to wear a black T-shirt with white coat
Chakor wears the dress to check whether it is proper or not.she goes to see her self in a mirror but falls down in suraj arms.they both share a cute eye lock.after a while they both realise in which position they are.suraj releases chakor.

Suraj:can’t you see and walk

Chakor:I was walking properly only but u came in my way

Suraj:what! I came in your way! U think ki me tum jaise moti makkhi me interested hoon. no way baby

Chakor:when did I say like this

Suraj:u didn’t say like this but u want to say this only

Chakor:just shutup now move from my way I need to look my self in a mirror

Suraj:why should I move?u r coming in my way.I will not move from here

Chakor:fine if u don’t want to move then don’t move but see I m also having legs and I can move and go there

Chakor moves from there looks herself in a mirror

Chakor:wow!wow!chakor u r looking so so beautiful hope tumhe kisi ki nazar na lag jaye especially this donkey

Lecturer calls every one and asks them to show their costumes to them to show their costumes.every one shows their costumes to lecturer except chakor

Lecturer:chakor where’s your costume

Chakor:this one only mam

Lecturer:what! I asked u guys to show your costumes not to wear it

Chakor:oh! Sorry mam

Lecturer:fine.but don’t repeat this types of silly mistakes again and again

Lecturer moves from there.suraj starts laughing at chakor

Chakor:suraj laugh as much as u can see when lecturer will scold you na I will also laugh at you like this only

AT NIGHT

Suraj:what mom day after tomorror there’s a party in our home

Vivaan:but y??

Tejaswini:u both stop asking me questions! And I was just keeping a party only na what will happen if I keep a party

Vivaan:yes mom u can keep party but without any reason??

Tejaswini:beta now its too night u both just go and sleep

Both suraj and vivaan comes in their room

Suraj:vivaan don’t u think mom is hiding something from us I mean why will she keep party without any reason

Vivaan:yah seems like that only.may be she is not telling us the reason because she wants to give us surprise

Suraj:what ever it is.i m feeling so sleepy.good night

Vivaan:good night bhai

To be continued……

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