Sukor-My love
My heartly thanks to all who are all encourage to me… i don’t want bore you all… I want to make this story long…that’s why my writing style like this…. Because of that I’m not get regular readers…
In chennai
Vivaan&Raj riding a bike which was brought before half an hour ago….
Raj: have you lost your mind?
Vivaan: why?
Raj: why are you bought bike instead of car?
Vivaan: why?
Raj: too much hot…
Vivaan: oh… come on… please…. Don’t nagging….
Raj: see there…
Vivaan: where? (He sees karthik who coming from hotel) karthik… right?
Raj: yes, he is….
Vivaan: we should follow him….
Raj: okay… but go slow….
Vivaan and raj follow karthik… karthik suddenly stops his car…. And walks towards the old factory…
Vivaan and Raj also stopped the bike and seeing karthik at far. He is trying to hear of what karthik is speaking with the unknown guy… but they can’t hear because of the distance. Vivaan is taking some photos of karthik in the old factory with other some unknown guy…
Vivaan: we have to inform this to grandma….
Raj: how? Do you have her phone number?
Vivaan: no….
Raj: then how can you inform her?
Vivaan take business card and calls imli’s office and get address of her home…
Raj: why do you ask address instead phone number?
Vivaan smiles…and reply to him imli is not in office….
Raj: did you get address to meet grandma or imli?
Vivaan: don’t ask many question… did you come with me or….
Raj: or… shall I drop you to hotel…. Correct?
Vivaan smiles…. And says exactly….
In Agra
Chakor sleeps in sofa and Suraj in bed….
Tejaswini comes to his room ask suraj… suraj… it’s almost 8:00 AM
Please wake up beta… wake up… wake up…
Suraj covers his ear with pillow…
Chakor pull her blanket to cover her face… and says 5 minutes ma please….
Suraj hears chakor words… and get up from the bed…
Suraj: mom. I am fully awake now… please go… and do you job….
Tejaswini goes from there
Suraj comes to chakor…
Suraj: Chakor… chakor…
Hmmm, ma… please 5 minutes…
Suraj shake her and ask wake up…
Chakor: what? Why are you wake me up?
Suraj: did you regain your memories?
Chakor: no, why are you asking?
Suraj explains her… I think you regain your memories…
Chakor gets sad and tells him no… I don’t know when will I regain?
Suraj: don’t get sad…
Vivaan comes to imli’s house….
Vivaan rings the calling bell…
Grandma comes and open the door…
Vivaan gets sad because he expect imli…
Grandma: vivaan how did you come there?
Vivaan explains how he got address…While speaking vivaan search imli
Grandma: what are you looking for?
Vivaan: imli…
Raj hits vivaan’s leg…vivaan smiles don’t know what to do?
Raj: he want to ask where others are. Right vivaan…
Vivaan: yes…
Grandma: bhuvan and kasturi in hospital… imli is in her room
(Vivaan shows the photo of karthik and 2 other person…)
Imli comes there… and see the photo in grandma hand…
Imli: what are you looking at?
Grandma shows the photo and ask her do you know any one of them other than karthik…
Imli: the one in left is our accountant and I don’t know other person…
Grandma: I saw other person in somewhere… but I don’t know where it is?
Imli: why are you asking?
Grandma: nothing… can you get coffee for us?
Imli: okay… (She goes from there)
Grandma: I don’t want imli know about this all. She already thinks chakor’s accident because of her…
Grandma: can I ask you a favor?
Vivaan: what?
Grandma: can you please stay here?
(Raj smiles… and think himself you are the one doing favor for him
Vivaan thinks oh my god!!! If I am stay here I will know imli has lover or not)
Vivaan: okay… said with smiles
Grandma: there is guest house behind this house… you two stay there…
Suddenly some sound comes from kitchen…
They all goes to kitchen and sees imli who faints and milk is burning in pan…
Grandma switch off the stove and vivaan take imli in his arm and take her to sofa…
Vivaan: are you okay? Patting her cheek slowly
Raj sprinkle water in her face… imli get conscious…
Vivaan sighs with relief… are you okay?
Imli: are you okay?
Imli nodded…
Grandma: are you okay? Don’t think all this because of you…. Don’t get stress… I think that’s why you fainted…
I’m sorry if I bore you all….
Precap: sukor trip to taj mahal… next ff only sukor scenes
13 Comments
Cool one but I’m thinking that ur ff is similar to movie yendhukante premanta right..?
Nice…
Nice ff n very interesting one….n waiting for ur next ff mala to seesee more sukor scenes….
love it
Your rocking dear I even expect more from you… Thanks a lot for writing ff on udaan.. Love u mala…
I love ur ff nd a regular reader plz write every day
Awesome
Nice dearrr. Waiting for next ff.
Nice one dear…Plz post the nxt part soon
Its great yaar,now I think suraj is with chakor helping her to gain memory loss!
*losed
I don’t ave any problem if u write it based on any movie.i love your ff and udan too.
It’s very interesting not boring ❤❤