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for reading my story….
I know my story didn’t recognize in telly updates…. But I write this same story in wattpad with some changes in the name of My love-Sukor….
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/l1VaZMZEjz
It’s the sample story part..
Chakor caught suraj’s ear and squeezed it….
You did so wrong today…. So you have to punish for that… chakor snapped him…
What? Leave me… pleaded chakor…
(Exorcist runaway from room)
Raghav: are you okay? Please tell me whom are you talking to? Is there anyone in room other than us?
Suraj nodded… bro…there is a ghost in my room…
What? Raghav tries to runaway….
While chakor run towards door and closes it…
Oh my god… how can this door suddenly locked… he stammered…
I’m not dead yet… don’t say like that… chakor snapped suraj…
Hey suraj tell your friend don’t try to runaway… I won’t harm him… if he is friend of yours then he my friend also…
Bro… just calm down… nothing going to happen… suraj soothing raghav
Raghav: Is it male or female?
Suraj: What?
Raghav: The sprit…
Suraj:Ohhh… her name is chakor…
After sometime
Chakor and angel sits in one side…. Suraj and Raghav sits in opposite side…
Suraj take the paper and pen in your hand and write whatever I tell… she ordered suraj
What? I won’t do anything you ask… Suraj tells her…
Chakor hits his head…. Do what I say… she commended
Contract
I, Suraj do whatever chakor ask… and make chakor always happy…. And never ask chakor to leave me… and never talks about chakor to anyone…
and sign it…
What? I won’t sign it…
Chakor closes her fist and shows to him….
Suraj signed it…
Give this paper to your friend… and ask him to write…what I tell…
what’s your friend name?
Suraj: his name is Raghav…
ask him to write… I, Raghav do always whatever chakor ask… and helps suraj in the matter of chakor… and never talks about chakor to anyone… and Raghav also signed it….
Angel you are the witness of this contract… please sign here…
Angel signed as white…(Raghav sees only pen moving and get scared…and holds suraj’s hand)
Chakor: Is your name white?
No… it’s a code word… Angel replies to her…
Hey chakor… whom are you talking to? Suraj asked chakor…
Angel… wait… what? She sits beside me… is angel not visible to your eyes?
Suraj nodded…
I’m only visible to only your eyes like you only visible to suraj’s eyes….
Don’t even try to violate the contract? Chakor ordered him…
What if we are abiding the contract…?
It’s the contract drawn by me in front of angel… it’s equal to heaven promise
If you are violating it… you will die in next moment… and directly go to hell…
What? Suraj get shocked
Don’t get tension… chakor laughed
Devil… Suraj mumbled…
What? I don’t hear anything… can you please say it in little more loud?
Heee….heee… I said you are look like an angel… lied to her…
Oh… really… thank you… chakor smiles
Don’t scare them… Angel told chakor…
Otherwise he won’t help me… chakor whispered to angel…
SURAJ: I have a doubt…
What… my sun
how can you feel paining?
I don’t know… may be angel knows it… I will ask her…
Hey angel, why am I feeling pain when something hit me?
Because you are not dead yet… when something hits you….surely you will feel pain…
Oh… I will try not to get hurt again…
Oh my god… how can I forget that? Chakor shouted…
What?
Your punishment… chakor replies to him…
What? Why do have I to punish?
Because you are doing mean thing to me
First clean the room with your friend raghav…
I won’t do anything… Suraj shakes his head in no…
Chakor blows her hair… and waves the contract
Are you threatening me? Suraj tries to snatch contact from her hand… chakor take the contract above her head…
Are you again tries to fight with me? Chakor asks him…
Chakor hits his leg with her knee…
Suraj screams… you devil…
Suraj rubs where chakor hits…
Are you going to clean the room or not?
Raghav saw all this… and think himself… oh my god… this is hell… in this young age what I going through….
Bro… that devil ask us to clean my room…
Why do we have to? Call maid to clean room… Raghav asked Suraj…
Chakor hits raghav in head… why? don’t you have hand
I’m going to stop writing here…
I know my story didn’t get fan to read there…. Sorry you all guys…
My story part didn’t read by 10people but in there in some part more than 70 people read…
Sorry guys to trouble you