Hey everyone im back with a short story i started writing on wattpad this is why i dont update here anymore but i decided to write a short story…the story starts wen suraj falls in love with imli and sends vivaan and chakor out and the other half of the family to the mandir leaving suraj alone to express his love and guys suraj will only love chakor towards the end! So dw about imli!
Here goes
Perfect vivaan has left with chakor mummy and ranjana out in the mandir and i gave all the slaves a day of i love imli so much i cant live without her she has my child in her and i only belong to her i free chakor as soon as she is back i will grant her a divorce i dont want money power or being cruel to people i only want imli i did so much wrong with chakor but not anymore she didn’t help me win imli it doesn’t matter i dont need her il get my imli my own way these scan photo’s of my child remind me the bad things i did to imli i should have accepted her and my child instead of doing a bridal swap damaging not 3 but 4 lives i even damaged my own life…oh wow has vivaan baabu set this up for me i love vivaan so much more than my life he accepted me and my child he gave my child a name and gave me a name saved my dignity i can’t believe suraj bridal swap has done wonders in my life i got to meet my true love vivaan i even burned suraj name and replaced it with vivaan name only thing i regret is that i made this buchua with suraj and not vivaan but only vivaan has the right to this child it’s not suraj child it’s mine…i wonder why suraj got rid of everyone and sent me with vivaan…wait a minute my imli!chakor if suraj does some cheap thing i wont be accountable for my actions…vivaan calm down…no if he tries it on with my wife im gonna kill him this time im going stright back to the haveli…chan chan my.love is coming…wow flowers lights candles vivaan baabu loves me to? I can here her payals walking towards me i lean down to salute my love…she comes with her eyes closed….imli i love you!
Wait this isn’t my vivaan baabu its suraj who is leaning down with his arms opened…suraj! What is this i dont loveyou…imli no dontsay that im all yours! Suraj it’s to lateu have done unjust to me and my buchua but i love vivaan not u i have forgiven u forur sins but i dont have love for you i love my vivaan baabu…my heart shattered in billionsof pieces…oi! You cheap bastard leavemy imli! Imli areyou ok did he harm you…no vivaa he has only expressed he loved me…i heard laughter…please stop this suraj rajvnashi stop acting like a teenage lover boy imli is my love…vivaan you love me to…ha imli i loveu…vivaan i love you to…he stood up and started to punch me but the rejection was thr biggest punch for me! If you touch or i see u near my imli or my child again i will kill you! And stop ur drama about being a lover now dont u dare eye my wife…vivaan!dont touch suraj if imli is your wife then suraj is my husband leavehim…imli let’s go these2 deserve each other tit for tat…how can vivaan leave me so quickly he forgot our love to? All im left with is suraj my husband who’s heart is bleeding for another woman my sister…i fell right next to him he leaned against me and sobbed his heart i was the crying shoulder of my husband who is sobbing for my sister
Precap suraj realises the importance of chakor
3 Comments
Interesting concept. Glad that imvan confessed their love in front of sukor, there will no confusion onwards. Feeling sad for sukor though . I have not watched suraj’s love for imli part of serial. Let see how you will take this further
Interesting start. Felt sad for Sukor. Looking forward to the next part.
Wooowww