Hey lovely people I’m back with One more FF on Sukor. Hope you like it.
Suraj’s friend’s marriage
Suraj: o hello uncle….kaise hai aap….chaliye chodiye aap Ye bataiye k dahej k paise laye hai ya nahi aap
{o hello uncle……how are you…ok leave it you tell me wether you have brought money for dowry or not}
Man: haan laye hai….Ye lijiye pure 1 crore jaise aap ne kaha tha
{ yes I’ve brought….take this full 1 crore as you said }
Suraj saw a beautiful girl coming towards him and started saying
Girl: o hello Mr. sharam nahi aati hai tumhe Aaise dahej maangte hue. Pata nahi hai dahej lena jurm hai….siddha police case karke aandar karwa denge tumhein
{ o hello Mr. don’t you have sham for asking dowry like this. Don’t you know that it’s a crime…I’ll do police case and will get you inside }
Suraj was just mesmerized seeing her. He didn’t had any senses and was smiling looking at her.
Chakor: Aaise hans kyun rahe ho…hum tum par chilla rahe hai aur tum aaise hanse jaa rahe ho…aapni saari sharam kisiko bech k aaye ho kya
{ why are you laughing…I’m shouting at you and you are laughing…have you sold all your shame to someone }
Suraj was still smiling and lost in her beauty. He was still standing there like a dumb.
Chakor: what the blo*dy hell don’t you understand Hindi or English or should I tell in French you blo*dy fool
He was still standing and smiling this time she lost her patience and gave him a tight slap on his cheek. With that slap he came to his senses.
Suraj: haan tumne kuch kaha
{ Yaa did you tell anything }
Girl: o just shut up and the hell did you take this dowry I’ll kick your ass
And she turned and went from there. Suraj was just mesmerized seeing her.
Suraj: Kya ladki hai yaar…muskurte hue jitni khoobsurat lagti hai gusse mein aur bhi zyda khoobsurat lagti hai bilkul kisi junglee billi ki tarah….Aree Shikhu hum uske pass jaate hai photo lena humara dekhe to kaise lagti hamari jodi
{ what a girl….when smiling she looks beautiful but while being angry she looks even more beautiful just like a wild cat…Shikhu I’m going to her you take a picture… let me also see how we look together }
And he went there but she was talking with a girl.
Suraj: hello
Girl: kya hai
{ what?? }
Suraj: aapko pata hai aap ne humein thapad maara na to aaisa laga jaise kisi gulab ne hamare gaalon ko chua ho
{ do you know when you slapped me I felt like a rose has touched my cheeks }
Chakor: to kya ek aur maaru
{ so should I give one more }
Suraj was just going to say something when 2-3 ladies came to her and she started talking with them ignoring him. So he went to the stage and got a mike and started saying to get her attention.
Suraj: Aree kaisi shaddi hai Ye…na nachna na gaana na bajana…hum bhaut bore ho rahe hai…Aree kahde kya ho tum sab bajao na
{ what kind of marriage is this…no dancing no singing no playing…I’m getting very bored…why you all are standing like this play na }
He said to the musicians and started singing and dancing.
Jo bhida tere..
Jo bhida tere naino se tanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Jo bhida tere naino se tanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Everyone started dancing to the tunes. Chakor was standing there and was give him a smirkitude (smirk with attitude)
Tune sharma ke window se jhanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Aa sun o ri gori
Mohabbat mein tohri
Na jaane kab June se December hua
She turned and started walking from there. But he came infront of her and continued to sing and dance.
Tune English mein
Tune English mein jab humko danta
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Pyar se maara gaalon pe chanta
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Chakor turned away and signalled all the girls there and then started dancing to show her attitude to him.
Hey look mera ye awesome
Adayein beautiful hai….. oye!!
Hey look mera ye awesome
Adayein beautiful hai
Jaanti hoon main tujhe
Tu kitna blo*dy fool hai
Jaanti hoon main tujhe
Tu kitna blo*dy fool hai….
Are shadiyon ka season
Na April Fool hai
Kaise hum keh de
Ki haan ji haan qubool hai
Innocency se face maine dhanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Jo bhida mere…
Jo bhida mere naino se tanka
Toh aashiq surrender hua
Surrender hua…
When they were dancing together Shikhu was taking their pictures as Suraj told him. The song finished and they all stopped dancing and went to the dinner area to have dinner.
She was standing and taking food from the counter when Suraj came there.
Suraj: vaise palak paneer bhaut aacha hai…khana zaroor
{ by the way the palak paneer is really good…surely eat }
Chakor: haha tumhe ittna hi pasand aaya to thooso na aapne moo mein
{ haha it you liked it this much then stuff it in your mouth }
She turned and went away. Suraj was going behind her but his dad called him so he had to go.
The wedding was over and everyone started leaving. Suraj searched for her but she was gone.
Suraj: Shikhu zara pata kar kaun thi vo
{ Shikhu find about that girl who was she }
He said this to Shikhu still dreaming about her.
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So guys this is my new story hope you liked it. And plz comment your opinions.
18 Comments
Interesting start
thank you.
Awesome shanaya. You are really great. I love your ffs. Fabulous.
Thank you so much for loving my ffs.
Wow afa. Amazing ff. Chakor was really funny and her dialogues were bang on. Suraj tho surrender hogaya hai Chakor ki nazaara mein. Keep going. Update soon
Thanks.
Wow it good but please tell me in this ff suraj is good or bad and thank again because I don’t know Hindi and u r writing in English tooo
Thank you so much. And yaa Suraj is good here.
Its nice..sukor takkar
Thanks
Great start, loved their first meeting. So it’s love at first sight for Suraj, eagerly waiting for the next update.
Thank you. I’ll update soon.
Really enjoy this new ff its amazing
oh this kinda funny n the song top ?
Nice.
Update soooon
Wowww….awesome Dr….loved it……eagerly waiting for d next part dr…..
Thank you so much.
Excellent start yaar….can’t wait for more update… Pls update soon…….plzzzzzzz