Hey guys im piyal iv been a silent reader ever since udaan came on iv watched every epsiode and love this serial alot and guys i hope u enjoy me my ff plz comment and support me love u all
Baghya does the aarti.
Bhagya; arjun!!!! Chakor!!!!! Arjun!!!!! Chakor!!!!!! This father daughter duo never listen. Chakor i know yesterday was the biggest day of our lives you have won the mumbai national marathon but also remember you are starting collge today.
The slaves polish arjuns shoes and leave. Arjun comes downstairs.
Bhagya; red roses!!! Arjun kisses bhagya on the cheek.
Arjun; bhagya good morning by beautiful wife and why are you screaming you are 7 months pregnant and that is not healthy for our child.
Bhagya; im shouting cuz u and chakor never listen to me finally ur awake now where is chakor she is getting late for college…
Arjun; honey, let her sleep last night she was awake celebrating her jeeth and today ur sending her college… what is this yaar… chakor arjun khanna deserves the day of she been working day and night as her father i have the power to make sure that all colleges are closed today.
Bhagya; no not at all arjun you need to understand chakor needs to finsh her education too.
5 slaves were standing outside chakors room the first slave is holding chakor dresses. The second is holding her shoes the third is holding her towel the 4th is holding her makeup and the 5th slave is holding chakor accessories. Chakor wakes up and opens her door.
Chakor; piya, riya, munna, patel, and bhoola has papa sent u guys again.
Slaves; yes chakor beta.
Chakor; papa is too much yaar… chakor takes a shower and comes downstairs…
Chakor; mumma im here!!
Bhagya holds chakor ears, what time do you call this its been 1 hour.
Chakor; sorry mumma i was getting ready.
Rajvanshi house..
Kamal; suraj!!!!! Suraj!!!!!!! Get up now its time for your college…. for real this boy is gonna make me mad. Kamal opens suraj door room…
Suraj; papa 10 more minutes.
Kamal; olv oh god what am i gonna do with this boy he is drunk he always parties late at night and comes bk home one hour before college.
Suraj; papa im suraj rajvanshi if i dont go for one day nothing will happen what is the ookahad of people to stop suraj rajvanshi.
Kamal; tejswani!!! U come make ur son listen oh god what have u been raising??
Suraj; papa dont blame mummy u left me for manhoor chacha family go go i bet vivaan is all ready holding his books and waiting downstairs in his car. Well suraj rajvanshi is not sitting with that nerd.. papa go by vivaan manhoor rajvanshi and ranjana kamal naryan rajvanshi sinceyou left us for them go.
Tejswani; kamal jee dont take notice of suraj u know his drunk and utters complete nonsense wen he is drunk vivaan can go il make sure suraj reaches on time.
Imli; mai baapu im going college its my first day wish me luck.
Kauatri, bhavan, good luck imlu and make sure you study hard even though we are a middle class family we worked hard to see this day. Imli smiles and leaves…
Arjun mansion.
Bhagya; arjun, chakor hurry up eat ur cearal and go!!!
Chakor; papa i think mumma wants to get rid ofus.
Bhagya; chup chakor hurry. No time for jokes.
Arjun chakor stuff thier faces and bhagya drags them outside.
Chakor kisses one cheek and arjun kisses another cheek of bhagya all 3 hug.
Bhagya; chakor whereis your driver??
Mumma; i dont know??
Arjun; my diamond doesnt need a driver anymore becoz my diamond now has her own car surprise… arjun buys chakor a Lamborghini
Arjun; a car that suits my daughter’s swag.
Chakor; papa… thank u so much i love it!!!! Chakor hugs
Bhagya; arjun … u know what both leave now!!! Chakor and arjun leave.
Chakor drives her car and on the way she picks up aditya. Adi!!! How are u they both hug.
Adi; im so proud of u chakor uv won the biggest marathon ever…
Chakor; thank u adi
They both reach college… everyone stares at chakor car.
College people; omg i cant beleive chakor khanna is coming to our college. Chakor steps out her big bouncy curly hair fly and chakor stands smiling…
College people; look at her s*xy midi dress and her Louie vittion limited addition handbag omg….
Chakor walks past and sits down in her class. Chakor; see u adi after class….
Everyone stares and chakor and drop thier jaws.
Chakor olv i hate this so much!!! Im just as normal as these guys this is why it was better wen i was home schooled my only friend is adi every1 else is either interested in my winning streak or how arjun khanna is my papa.
Chakor feels upset and looks down as she does not like the attention.
Tina; comes in and frowns at chakor cuz chakor won the mumbai marathon. Hey cool people only sit on this side and ur a newcomer…
The whole class drops thier jaws. People in the class olv omd how can she talk to chakor khanna like that chakor is royalty where is tina isa middle class girl who cant be compared to chakor khanna.
Chakor olv this is a typical stupid college yes all the clever quiet people aka for these snoobs the nerds on one side and all the popular people aka the stuck up stupid ignorant people on one side.
Chakor gets up and sits with the quietest girl in class. Everyone drolls over chakor.
Tina; thats right now i cant wait till the rajvanshi boys come!!! Cant wait to see suraj…
Chakor to the girl; hi im chakor and whats ur name.
The girl; my name is siya
Chakor; nice to meet u and don’t worry im not stuck up ignorant or think to highly of myself. They both laugh.
Tina; she may be chakor khanna no1 in everything but in class she will always belong to the loser side. Imli walks in and stares at
Imli olv omd chakor khanna, her entire outfit costs more than my house.
Tina; imli come come u can sit with us. Imli gets really pleased and greets tina.
Imli; chakor khanna hear!!!
Tina; who cares lok where she is sitting first she took my seat but now look where she ended up.
Siya; so chakor how many siblings do u have.
Chakor; im gonna have 1 soon im so excited. Siya and chakor make a conversation.
Chakor; siya ur one of the only people that iv had an actual conversation with every1 else is obsessed with my name chakor khanna. They both laugh. Hey siya u wanna come over after collge.
Siya; sure they both shake hands.
Collge class; omd no1 even knows siya and now she has become the bestie of chakor khanna.
Araav laaksh ram and anurag come in they all stare at chakor and get lost in her beauty… wow who iz this hotty shes making me sweat so bad. They all open thier mouths and sit behind chakor desk.
Tina; u guys come here we are here. Tina grabs them and they all stare at chakor. Vivaan comes in and tina runs and hugs vivaan but she tries to lokk for suraj.
Tina; where is suraj??
Vivaan; u know last night party left him in a hangover he Will be here soon.
Vivaan walks past chakor and drops his
Chakor picks the pen. Here u go u dropped somthing vivaan loses his sense and stares deep into chakor’s eyes.
Chakor olv every1 does this… hello….
Vivaan; snaps out urrrrrrrrr….
Tina grabs vivaan and makes him sit next to imli…
Someone from reception collects siya as she has an appointment…
Siya; oh shoot i forgot i have an appointment i have to go chakor see u after college.
Chakor gets upset and looks around every1 is stareing at chakor and no1 is sitting next to her all the desks were filled except chakors.
Chakor takes out her notpad and pen and starts preparing for wen the teacher comes. Tina smirks.
the wind howls chakor feels the breeze some1 walks towrds the classroom and takes thier sunglasses off Suraj rajvanshi is here every1 gets up and chakor looks on.
Tina hugs suraj and all the class girls follow araav and laksh drag suraj and welcome him….
Arrav; yo suraj last nights party was the best yaar and today we have collge…. arrav whispersto suraj( dude chakor khanna is here she is so darn fireee) these girls dont have what it takes to be like her she is so hott..
Tina; suraj sit with me iv saved u a seat…. suraj sees every1 standing who then sit down aftet tina tells them to. Suraj sees all the seats filled and notices no1 next to chakor…. suraj approches chakor the wind howls…. suraj sits next to chakor….. every1 stares at them….
Araav; whistles at suraj. Suraj frowns. Chakor moves up and looks down.
The teacher comes in every1 sits down..
Imli; suraj babu looks so hot iv always loved him he is the one to convince kamal that every1 has the right to education…. imli day dreams about suraj….
Chakor stands up to greet the teacher every1 laughs…
Chakor; turns around its not funny to greet the person who is going to teach u knowledge. Every1 shuts up and the teacher smiles.
Teacher; hello every1 and today i will make you all work in pairs for the next project which is about fiance. The teacher pairs every1 up and lands by chakor….
Chakor; is it okay if i work with siya…
Teacher; chakor im only putting u in pairs that have already been listed you will work with suraj rajvanshi….
Suraj looks at chakor…. suraj; hello chakor….
Chakor; um hello …
Suraj; im suraj and i run this collge every1 hear listens to what i say….
Chakor olv great another snoob….
Chakor; save it i dont wanna hear the rest…
Teacher; the class is dismissed and guys by next week ur project should be done….
Chakor gives suraj her number for the work…
Chakor; since we need to team up call me to discuss the project….
Chakor walks of and the whole class follows….
Chakor gets in her Lamborghini and tina arrav suraj vivaan and the popular kids in class get stunned. Suraj opens his mouth and is unable to say anything….
Chakor frowns and drives off. Tina steals the paper with chakor number and gives it to every one
Laaksh; suraj not fair u wernt gonna share the number with us they all laugh…
Suraj; its only for the work…
Every one phones chakor number….
A lady picks up; hello this is chakor personal assistant and advisor if you are calling chakor for work related then il book an appotiment that fits with madam slot… hello… every1 gets shocked
Every1; she has a pa and guys only siya has her personal number…
Precap suraj throws another party and invites everyone chakor beocmes adamant that she want to get home schooled
Guys i hope i didnt bore u all
9 Comments
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Hi dear it sounds so so soooooo much intresting thnks for this lvly ff.m egrly waiting for next part.ples try to post asap n u can.pleeees.
Amazing. This story is very different from the rest
Wow ?. Interesting. Keep going. Love chakrs attitude. They are going to have to work together now. Plz try update soon. Try not to take more than 2 days.
Hey Dr….I just loved ur FF….its amazing….tooo gud…nd am really happy that v hv one more sukor FF writer also….eagerly waiting for d next part…
Hi piyal. An amazing start. Really amazing. Plz continue soon. And one more request plz don’t leave this awesome story in between.
Hey loyal. It’s amazing. Loved it. Keep it up. Waiting for the next.
Great start, very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Awesome epi