Hey everyone I felt that I needed to complete this ff so I wrote the remaining storyline which I had summarised I hope u all enjoy and thank u for the support im glad that a lot of u guys enjoyed it here goes…
Mr Kapoor;but Arjun I thought chakor got divorced?
Arjun;she did but bhagya is being over protective don’t worry tommrow il send chakor and ajay to the new empire hotel so that they can bond and hopefully both agree with the alliance…
Ajay;thanks uncle that’s a great idea I would love to learn more about chakor…
Suraj;what was that why did I not react seeing chakor all the bitterness and anger faded away when I saw her…munna approaches suraj…
Munna;who r u…
Suraj;im suraj and who r u?
Munna;im munna and vivaan and imli are my parents iv never seen u around are you new…
Suraj olv so vimli had a child…
Vimli;suraj ur back! Vimli hug suraj who gets surprised…
Vimli;suraj how dare you leave without telling anyone of us after that incident you and chakor disappeared..
Suraj;I didn’t know that u guys would miss me that much and I cant believe u had a child…
Vimli;suraj it was 3 yrs since u left we were bound to have a child at some point;)
Suraj;it was nice to see your concern but im moving to Mumbai I only came back to get my files and u guys can come to visit me anytime..
Vimli;ur child is cute and u guys look awesome as a complete family…
Vimli;we will surely come to visit now that we know were u gonna be goodnight…
Suraj;goodnight…
Tejswani comes in…
Tejswni;suraj what is all this! You came back after 3 years nd I never sed a word I want an explanation right now..
Suraj shuts the door…
Suraj;mummy remember that night u fell ill me nd chakor lost our child and mummy I gonna tell u the whole truth but promise me you wont tell anyone…
Tejswani;I promise…
Suraj;me and chakor got our drinks spiked in a party and then after the party night chakor found out she was pregnant that’s why we got married that’s why we made a deal that we would only stay together after the child was born but I don’t know how and when I feel in love with chakor but she left me after I lost my child and I couldn’t stay here anymore I was suffercating these walls were causing me bad pain and memoires so I decided to leave azaadganj and to never look back but today I retuned and in the first time I saw chakor in 3 yrs all the bitterness and the questions dissappered when I saw her and my love for her rekindled that I couldn’t express my reaction when I saw her…
Bhagya and chakor reach home…
Bhagya: today chakor u have to tell me the truth what happened 3 yrs ago that you left everything I want to know the truth chakor today you cant hid it from me…
Chakor fell on the floor..
Chakor;mom u know half of the truth but the other half is that I lost my child and me and suraj made a deal that after the child is born we would divorce each other but mumma I left him but my heart broke I wanted him to stop me but he didn’t and I understood that the both of us were not ment to be mom I felt a special connection with and got this werid feeling when ever im around him in these 3yrs theres not been one day where I have never thought about him he is everywhere I see him all the time and today after 3yrs I saw him and the feeling was unimaginable..
Bhagya;chakor why did you leave suraj if ur heart was saying not to and that feeling you have for suraj is love chakor suraj is ur love…
Chakor;love
Bhagya;that special feeling and passion you have for suraj is love you love him suraj is your pehela pyaar…
Tejswani;suraj! You have been suffering for 3 yrs and didn’t even tell your mother anything suraj chakor is your love that’s why you couldn’t hide your feelings from her chakor is your pehela pyaar..
Suraj;mom I need some air…
Chakor;mumma I need some air…
Bhagya,tesjwani;but wait…
Arjun comes home..
Arjun;bhagya iv set up a date between ajay and chakor tell my princess to be ready at 7 ajay will come to pick her up and I wont take a no for an answer…
Bhagya;but..
Sukor walk thinking of one another and bump into each other…
Sukor;ow cant you see where your going both look up and stare at each other with deep intensity…
Suraj;chakor!
Chakor;sursj!
Chakor;suraj suraj suraj!!!! Everyewhere I go I see u!!!!
Suraj;….everywhere I go I see chakor chakor chakor!!!
Suraj holds chakor against the wall..
Chakor;let go u r hurting me…
Suraj;what about the pain I lived in for 3 years first I lost my child then I lost you..
Chakor;you knew that we were only together because of our child and when our child was no more I just followed what we agreed to and why are you getting affected for…
Suraj;because I love you I fell in love with you!!! But I was a fool to think that I could spend the rest of my life with you… there I said it laugh all you want now I know I must be looking like a fool…suraj lets chakor go and walks of…
Chakor;he loves me? Is mumma right do I love suraj… is suraj my love…I love suraj I love him…chakor cries in happiness and runs home…
Arjun;glad ur back tommrow ur going out with ajay im not forcing u to accept the alliance but just go I gave my word and no ifs or but…
Bhagya tells chakor to agree arjun gets happy and goes to bed..
Chakor;mumma your right I love suraj!! I cant think of anyone besides him.. he is my life…
Bhagya;chakor im proud that u understood ur feelings but what about ajay…
Mumma;tommrow il tell him so that he understands that I cant accept the alliance
Sukor go to bed and think of one another all night neither of them sleep…
Chakor;suraj! I need to see you again to tell you my feelings…
Suraj;seeing you after all this yrs….
Tejswnai;suraj wake up I got u some breakfast..
Suraj;thanks mummy and today is my last day my house is done and im leaving for Mumbai and mummy I don’t want you worrying about me…
Tejswani;beta that’s fine as long as I know were you are im happy where you r happy and what about chakor…
Suraj;mom I don’t wanna think about that and iv packed my bags after the meeting in empire hotel im going… tejswani and suraj hug…
Suraj hugs vimli goodbye..
Kamal;wont u say bye to ur father…
Suraj;goodbye suraj leaves
Kamal olv couldn’t he atleast hug his father goodbye…
Suraj leaves a tear drops down tejswani eye but she is happy to see that suraj has become successful…
Chakor wakes up and gets ready…
Chakor;today I will unite with my love
Bhagya;chakor were r u running of to..
Chakor;to see suraj bye…
Bhagya;but chakor…. Chakor runs of and reaches rajvnashi haveli mahiya plays…
Chakor steps in but sees no1 she sees munna…
Chakor;who are you and were r ur parents…
Vimli;munna come and eat ur breakfast ur driving us crazy…
Vimli are shocked to see chakor and run to hug her…
Vimli;chakor!!! Where were u we missed u so much what happened why did u leave… and this is munna our son!!! Come in we want a catch up with you…
Chakor;sure
Vimli and chakor sit down…
Vimli;what happned…
Chakor;since I lost my child I needed space and in that time I learnt I fell in love with suraj so im back for him where is he…
Vimli;chakor he is leaving for Mumbai tonight…
Chakor gets and leaves…
Vimli;chakor….what is fate doing to sukor….
Tejswani spots chakor..
Tejswnai;you can still stop him he will be at empire hotel and chakor he loves u a lot now go…
Chakor goes home to get ready to meet with suraj…
Arjun;chakor are you ready ajay is here.
Chakor olv if suraj is in the same building then of course im ready to go…
Chakor comes down the stairs and is desperate to meet suraj…
Ajay stares at chakor…
Ajay tonght I will make u mine ajay smirks…
Chakor sits in the car ajay comes forward and really close to chakor to put her seatbelt on..
Chakor feels uncomfortable..
Chakor;thanks but I could do it myself…
Suraj reaches the hotel and thinks about chakor…
Chakor steps out ajay holds chakor hand but she lets go…
Ajay checks in…
Sukor feel each other…
Chakor olv I know he is here
Suraj olv I know she is here
Ajay smirks
Ajay;chakor only the bedrooms are vacant we can have dinner there and then we can go home..
Chakor hesitates…
Ajay grabs chakor…
Ajay;come on its only for a meal I promise…
Ajay forcefully takes chakor…
Suraj; I accept the deal and we will name thewelfare on poorly children who are sick since childbirth..
Suraj olv this deal is in the name of my child…
Suraj leaves to sleep…
Ajay;chakor ur a true beauty I love u become mine I wanna be with you forver…
Chakor;ajay please I don’t love you I only love my husband…
Ajay;what husband…
Ajay starts to take his top of…
Chakor;let me go and what do u think you are doing…
Ajay pushes chakor on the bed and holds her against her will…
Chakor;let go of me…il scream…
Ajay do what u want no1 will come…
Ajay comes really close to chakor…
Chakor screams…suraj
Ajay;ur so called husband what come…
Suraj sulks for chakor…suraj hears chakor….
Suraj;chakor?
Chakor screams…
Suraj:it is her suraj knocks on the door but decides to break the door…
Suraj is angry to see ajay ontop of chakor and beats him to death…
Suraj;how dare you touch my wife! If I even see your shadow around her I will kill u… chakor calls the security and they arrest ajay…
Mahiya plays…. Sukor stare at each other…
Chakor hugs suraj…
Chakor;suraj I love u!!
Suraj;what!!
Chakor;I love u so much more than anything in the world ur my whole world in these 3yrs not once did I not think about u u were everwhere where I slept ate I saw u with me please don’t leave me…
Suraj;then why did u leave me after our child died…
Chakor; I didn’t know u loved me too I thought that u too wanted to stick to the deal but now I cant hide this anymore I love you…
Suraj holds chakor face…
Suraj; I love u too…
Sukor come close and kiss each other…
Suraj lifts chakor up and takes her to his bed chakor closes her eyes…
Chakor;suraj promise me that you will never leave me…
Suraj;I promise that I will always love you and I will never leave you ever…
Chakor comes close to suraj and starts to kiss him both stare at each other deeply and make love to one another….
Someone kncoks on the door…
Waiter;hello do u need roomservice…
Suraj sees chakor sleeping and tries to move her…
Chakor;no we don’t need any chakor hugs suraj tightly…
Suraj; I was just gonna…
Chakor;no I wont let u leave me…
Suraj sees the time..
Suraj; oh no I need to leave…
Chakor;where to?
Suraj;Mumbai…
Chakor;what!!! Ur gonna leave me…
Suraj comes closer to chakor… why don’t u come with me…
Chakor;but my parents…
Suraj;then lets go and ask them…
Sukor smile and reach Khanna mansion
Bhagya;chakor!!!where were u all night..
Chakor;mumma I was with suraj and I told him I love him and he wants me to go Mumbai with him..
Arjun hears…
Arjun:no chakor I wont let you go…
Chakor;please papa suraj is my love and I want to spend my lifw with him and papa I promise il come once a month to visit…
Bhagya;Arjun please agree my happiness lays were chakor happiness is and atleast we know she is still in this country so we can visit her anytime please agree
Arjun;fine but I want a phone call everyday…
Chakor smiles and hugs bhagya and Arjun she packs her bag and leaves with suraj…
Moore piya plays suraj spots a mandir and smiles he stops the car…
Chakor;why did u stop…
Suraj points at the mandir and grabs chakor hand…
Suraj;this is the same mandir I married you andnow im gonna marry you again in the same spot…
Chakor smiles and holds suraj hand both go in the mandir and remarry each other…
Priest; please put sindoor on the bride suraj puts sindoor and sukor walk around the fire 7 times…the priest conduct the marriage as complete sukor happily leave for Mumbai…
3 months leap sukor live a happy married life in Mumbai… chakor finds out she is pregnant and goes for her scan…
Sukor argue infront of the doctor…
Suraj this time I know I will have a girl…
Chakor;no it will be a boy…
Doctor;mr and mrs rajvanshi stop fighting u r both having twins…
Sukor;what!!!!!
Doctor; congratulations and this time your having one of each so there is no need to argue…
Sukor;but how will we take care of 2 children…!!!!
Doctor;im sure you can manage see you again soon…
Chakor;what are we going to do…
Sukor hug in worry…
Suraj;don’t worry we will manage afterall they will receive 2 loving parents sukor smile……
The end i had to give a proper ending instead of a summary enjoy
8 Comments
Amazing update. The ending was beautiful.
Loved sukor moment
gud ? very happy i really enjoyed it n how Suraj beat ajay very gud cheap.
Wonderful update! Loved it, their meeting when Suraj confessed was emotional and loved Sukor talk with their mothers. Their confession and romance were beautiful. Thank you for this beautiful ending.
Awesome piyal. I loved it. Proud of you. This is called a real happy ending. And i am also reading your other fanfiction. Its also very great. Lots of love and wishes.
Nice!
Normally doctors in India dont reveal the gender
But its fine, small mistakes can be ignored if the rest is nice!!
Aradhana sukorlover nemo and sukorian thank u for all the support and glad u enjoyed the ending sorry i cant comment individually
Ye kya end kr dia ?????????