Hi guys Sunny here! I’ve been writing ffs on more than one couples all this time so I’m thinking of writing an ff on only one couple now. Without any doubt, yes, it’s Sukor. I was thinking of a future story in Udaan. It will start from the current situation. Sukor get married secretly and then the goons try to kill Chakor. If u don’t mind, I was thinking of having Chunni in the story as well. Below is the Character Sketch of the people I’m adding.
The whole Udaan cast:
Chakor, Suraj, Imli, Vivaan, KN, Teju etc
New:
Chunni / Chardini – She has a new identity. She is now the adopted daughter of a rich man called Harshad Kapoor. She is a psychiatrist and I was thinking that she’ll be played by Nikki Sharma but u can think of her as anyone u want except Meera. She isn’t identical to Chakor. I’ll tell u y later on.
Harshad Kapoor- The father of Chunni. He is very kind hearted and he loves his family. He is like Ishwar / Adi’s Father. He will be played by Sachin Tyagi / Shekar from Swaragini
Mohini Kapoor- The wife of Harshad and the mother of Chunni. She is also very kind and she supports everyone. She will be played by Parineeta Borthakur / Sharmistha from Swaragini
Veer- The elder brother of Chunni. He cares about her a lot and he loves teasing her. Played by Abhishek Malik
Shalini Veer Kapoor- The wife of Veer and the SIL of Chunni. She is selfish and jealous. She wants the power over the house. She is always trying to get rid of Chunni. Played by Smriti Khanna
So these are the extra people but don’t worry, there will be Sukor. The first few scenes will be Flashbacks though.
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Epi 1
It all starts from when Chakor is running from the goons. She runs as fast as she could. She trips over a twig and blood trickles from her foot. Her heart is beating faster and faster. She stops to take a breath, she sees one of the goons and she hides behind a bush.
Chakor olv: What’s happening?….Who r these people?….What do they want?….and…and Where’s Suraj?…Could they have done something to him?!
Chakor folds her hands, closes her eyes and prays
Chakor olv: Hee Bolenath / O Lord Shiva. Plz protect my Suraj.
The bells of a Mandir start ringing. Chakor notices a crowd of people in front and looks behind to see the goons coming closer to where she is.
Chakor olv: If I want to escape from these goons, then I have to join this crowd….I have no other choice.
Chakor puts her goonghat on and joins in. The goons see the crowd and start asking women to take off their goonghat. One of the goons see a girl.
Goon olv: U love running a lot don’t u?…And now ur playing hide and seek…If I don’t finish u off today then I don’t deserve my name.
The goon goes upto the girl and removes her veil. She reveals not to be Chakor.
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Suraj comes into the tent only to see that Chakor has disappeared.
Suraj olv: Where has Chakor gone?…Could she be talking on the phone again?
Suraj tries calling her but her phone is in the tent
Suraj: Her phone is here!..Where did she go without her phone?….Could she be in any trouble?
Suraj shouts Chakor and searches for her everywhere. He gets out of the camp site and restlessly calls out her name. He then notices one of the anklets he gifted her on the floor. He picks it up and notices blood on it.
Suraj olv: Blood?!..Why is there blood on it?..This is Chakor’s anklet…Where is she?…Does this mean she’s in trouble?
Suraj, now even more restless screams out Chakor’s name. He then sees a trail of blood and this brings him a ray of hope
Suraj: This will probably lead me to Chakor.
He follows the trail
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Chakor is in the Mandir at the front of the crowd. The Pandit starts doing the Aarti and singing Bhajans. Chakor prays.
Chakor: O Lord! Plz help me! Plz protect my Suraj from every harm. I don’t mind anything happening to me but plz not Suraj. Save him plz. Save my husband
The priest touches Chakor’s head and she opens her eyes.
Pandit: Dear. U seem Agitated…I’m sure..Whatever u have just asked will definitely get fulfilled.
He gives her Prasad / offerings
Pandit: Here. Take this..Consider it as a blessing from The Lord….Ur Husband will be safe..Don’t worry.
The pandit notices that Chakor has no sindoor in her hairline
Pandit: What’s this?..Where’s ur sindoor?….Dear..I don’t know what generation u believe in but u should know…Sindoor isn’t there just for fun..It is there cuz it’s a symbol of marriage and the longer the bride keeps her sindoor on, the longer the life her husband will have.
The pandit passes her the sindoor tub
Pandit: Here. Apply it in ur hairline…Ur husband will be guaranteed to be safe.
Chakor recalls her marriage with Suraj
Chakor olv: If by doing this protects Suraj, then I’m ready to do it…We r married now anyway so it’s no big deal….I can give up my life for Suraj.
Maahiya plays……
Chakor applies sindoor in her hairline and recalls when Suraj put a rose petal there.
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Suraj is still searching for Chakor and stops at a halt all of a sudden near the temple Chakor is in.
Maahiya plays…………
Suraj olv: What’s wrong with me? Y did I stop?…My heart is beating faster…Why?!
Will Suraj find Chakor?……..
This was the start. Ik it’s quite short but that’s only cuz I don’t know if I should continue or not…Plz do tell me.. Hope u enjoyed it.