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Recap:sukor n cowshed…chakor supporting suraj…
Chakor sat wit suraj for sometime and came back haveli nd gone to their room. She opens the door… Wind blows she feel suraj’s presence nd starts calling suraj’s name…
She sees suraj’s sofa and thinks of him…
Flashback:
Suraj was lying in his sofa and sleeping…chakor comes out from bathroom…she was wiping her hair, a drop of water fall on suraj and he wakes up…
Suraj was staring at chakor… Chakor didnt notice tis…suraj was mesmerised in her beauty…
Suraj(in mind): sometimes tis jangle billi seems to be so beautiful…
Again a drop of water falls on suraj… He comes to conscious..
He sees the time its just 6’o clock..
Suraj: arey madam…wat the hell is ur problem…whole day u r troubling me nd fighting wit me …cant u leave me in peace while i am sleeping…
Chakor gives him a dead stare…
Suraj:dont stare as if i am ur lover…first tell me why u got up early nd troubling me from my sleep…for god sake pls leave me to sleep…
Chakor: oh k….take ur own time Mr.suraj rajvanshi…so tat ur father can easily kill u…and never think always i will be there to save u…like diwali night…
Suraj: haan…u r jagatmata so u will save everyone right…
Chakor: I told not to call me jagatmata
Suraj: y should i listen to u…i will call…jagatmata jagatmata jagatmata…
Chakor: k i am jagatmata only…thank me for saving u tat day…
Suraj: so u want credits tat u saved my life…not at all think tat..even in ur drmz…i know how to save my self..
Chakor: s s… i saw how u saved urself…if i was not there u would have been in heaven now…sorry u would have been in hell…
Suraj ( in anger): stop ur nonsense talks and tell me y u woke up so early…
Chakor: we want to meet tat jailer who has proof against kn..so we have to leave early before others wake up..especially before kn nd ragini wake up…
Suraj: I guess by eating my brains u got brain nd finding ideas chakor..
Chakor: very bad joke…go and get ready we have to leave…
Suraj: I know…dont start ur lectures…
( suraj entering bathroom)
Suraj: jagatmata dont take much time to get ready as if we are going to miss world competition… We are going to find jailer only…get ready soon…
Chakor: stop it Mr.pahkandi…u r always irritating…
Suraj: oh… U too….
Fb ends…
Tears rolled from chakor’s eyes…imli came there….chakor hugged her and cried….
Imli: dont worry didi…we will make everything fine…
Chakor: no imli…i havent seen suraj hurted Tis much…i feel his pain…we lost everything imli…
Imli: pls dont talk like Tis didi…we will never lose…
Chakor: from the day when kamal narayan again entered in our lifes…suraj had been a great support for me…we worked together in finding the proof…
U know very well how we used to fight alot…bt now Tis room make me think of suraj…i should do something to get him out of this banduvagiri…
At night…chakor takes food for suraj…ragini come nd stop her…she throws the food plate..imli comes down hearing the sound…kn smiles…
Kn: my dear baadi bahu…do u think ur husband is guest and he is staying in the guest house…dont act smart…he is my banduva forever… Whatever i decide only should go to him…or he will suffer a lot…
Chakor: what do u want y r u doing this to suraj…he is ur son…i just want to give him food allow me to go…
Ragini: we cant repeat the same thing chakor…cant u understand wat papa is telling…no food for tat banduva suraj…
Chakor: dont do Tis…he is not used to it…he lived a great life till now…food for him is necessary…
Kn: oh… I will not leave u to give food for him…since u care this much for ur patidev… I will give u an offer… u can give water to him…
Chakor and imli were happy nd smiling….
Kn: bt for tat u have a condition chakor…if u want suraj to have water… U should not eat for 5 days…if u do it…end of fifth day suraj will get water…else he will die in thirst…
Chakor nd imli were shocked….
Precap: will chakor accept kn’s condition
9 Comments
Awesome update. Loved the flashback. Kn is such a devil
Emotional update, loved the flashback. Five days without food is too much. Looking forward to the next update.
Amazing
Hate KN he is so evil. The flashback was cute. She cant fast for 5 days. Its too much. Loved their nok jhok.
Loved rhe fb scene and i think chakor will try fasting but evil kamal? will do somthing and ruin it
Amazing part…I just loved dis ff…especially in dis part fb is nyc…loved it…precap also interesting…eagerly waiting for d next part…
ohh how sad !! kn may rot in hell…sukor argument was cute ur prevrse epi also was gud
Thank you guyz
Amazing. That KN is so evil. Update soon.