Helloooo!!! Here comes the first part of my new story. I’m giving prologue again so have a look if you don’t remember.
Let’s begin:
Sunshine In The Darkness(SwaSan)
Prologue:
A simple, sweet story of swasan where dark world of someone will be enlightened with sunshine.
Scene 1:
” whose daughter is she???” Roared kaveri purohit pointing at the little angel.
” she is my daughter” swara tried to act firm but her heart is engulfed with immense fear. A little girl of about few months is in her arms. She hugged baby close to her chest looking at red eyes of the Lady.
” where is your husband???” Kaveri asked.
” I’m divorced” swara looked down as tears welled in her eyes.
” you can’t live here don’t know whose illegitimate child is this” kaveri give a disgusting look to swara and baby.
Swara’s blood boiled listening those words but she preferred to keep quite.
Swara packed her things and left the house after giving some money to kaveri.
Scene 2:
Sanskar entered inside the huge well flourished mansion in his car and came out. As he was about to go inside, he heard a baby crying in the room near their garden which they often give on rent. But from last few months that was empty due to lack of tenants.
He stepped towards the room and saw a girl is patting baby’s back to calm her. Indeed she is mesmerizing beauty but some flashes in sanskar’s mind brushed all those soft feelings he felt for milliseconds.
Sanskar went inside the mansion with a stern look.
Scene 3:
” mom who is there in room outside” Sanskar asked from his mother sujata.
” she is our new tenant” sujata said with a smile.
“Ohhh” sanskar neglected as it doesn’t matters to him.
” she is such a sweet and innocent girl. I really like her” sujata was all the time praising her new tenant which irked sanskar. He don’t like to hear anyone’s praise and just hate when its about a girl.
He left to his room not willingly to listen about that so called girl who has became his mother’s favourite.
SHOT 1:
A girl is revealed walking on the road with one bag in her left hand and a baby wrapped in white cloth in right hand. She is feeling difficulty in walking, she look around and went to the bench present on the side of the road. She place bag and then herself sat on it. She saw baby is sleeping and kiss her forehead. After waiting for few mins, she hire a taxi and left from there.
Taxi stop infront of the huge mansion. She paid the driver and came out holding baby carefully.
The name plate of the mansion reads
” Maheshwari Villa”.
” let’s go inside swara” she mumble and took deep breathe.
Picking the bag, she enter inside and press the door bell. Soon the door got open revealing a lady in her mid fifties wearing light yellow saree.
” hi I’m swara i need a room on rent and someone informed me you have an empty room” swara smile and explain her purpose to come there.
” ohk plz come inside” lady said taking her bag as she has baby also.
” myself sujata maheshwari, owner of the house” sujata said as they sat in the hall.
” I’m swara bose and i got job here in the playschool so i have to shift from Hoogly” swara explained.
” okay she is your baby?” Sujata asked looking at the baby.
” hmm my daughter” swara slightly smile which doesn’t reach her eyes.
” what’s her name and age?” Suajta is always fond of babies. She heartily wish that her son should get married so that she can play with her grandchildren.
” shiddat and she is 5 months old” swara told.
” there is room outside the villa which we give on rent. You can come and see” sujata said. Swara nodded and they went to the room.
Outside the mansion, there is a pathway along with the garden leading to a small room. Sujata unlock it and they enter inside. Shiddat is in swara’s hands looking around.
Inside the room there is bed and two single sofas with a table and a cupboard.
There is a small kitchen and attached washroom. Swara felt satisfied as that’s more than enough for her and shiddat.
” so are you okay with it?” Sujata asked.
” yes i want this room” swara said. They discussed about how much rent she has to pay and all. Later sujata left while swara got busy in playing with shiddat.
At night, A luxurious car came inside the mansion and a man came out in black suit. He is one and only owner of the maheshwari empire, Sanskar Maheshwari. When he was going towards the door, he heard baby’s crying voice. He turn and saw the room’ s light is onn which was empty due to lack of tenants. He approached it and saw a girl trying to pacify baby rubbing her back. Indeed she is mesmerising beauty and he got lost in her. Her hair flicks flowing on her chubby cheeks. Some flashes came in sanskar’s mind and he brushed away all those soft feelings he had for milliseconds.
Sanskar give a look to swara and went inside the mansion with a stern face.
After changing into light clothes, sanskar came downstairs for dinner. He sat on dining table and started eating as sujata served him.
” who is in the room outside?” Sanskar asked while eating.
” she is our new tenant today only she came” sujata said.
” ohh” sanskar was least interested as its none of his business. Even he is not in preference of keeping tenants its just sujata who want it.
” her name is swara, she is so sweet i really like her” suajta gets excited. Sanskar chuckles as his mother liked the person in first meeting only.
” she is married and due to her job she is here. She is beautiful in and out, very humble girl. Trust me sanskar if she was not married i would surely make her my dil” sujata said in a flow. Sanskar coughed and drink water.
” mom not again” sanskar said sternly. Sujata always end up at sanskar’s marriage and he hate it. Love, marriage are the words which seems to be all fake to him.
” don’t get hyper she is married and have daughter also” sujata said making faces.
Suddenly sankar’ s heart twisted for a second. She is married and belong to someone else that thought rushed blood through his veins but he ignore. He is getting irritated as her mother is chanting about that so called girl. Sanskar don’t listen anyone’s praise and just hate when it’s of a girl. He get up and went to his room.
At midnight, sanskar is working on his lappy. He is eligible and well deserving candidate for the award of most workaholic man. His forehead is lined and he rub it in annoyance. He is irritated as baby in the rented room is crying nonstop. He got up and closed the window cursing the girl under his breath.
Swara wipe baby’s tears and try to calm her. She know shiddat is hungry as the little milk she had in the bottle she had already feed her in the evening. In all the shifting, she forgets to bring milk from market.
” may i ask from aunty ji” swara thought. She don’t want to disturb them but shiddat is also starving.
She picked shiddat and went towards the mansion. She slowly press the door bell. Sanskar’s room is near the door so he hurriedly came to open it as sujata slept after having medicine. Sujata is suffering from back problem.
” yes what you want??” Sanskar’s tone was harsh when he asked swara.
” woo sir. ma..dam is th..ere” she fumble with her words as she expected sujata.
” ma is sleeping what you want tell me” sanskar said.
” i need one glass of milk for my baby. Is it there??” swara hesitantly asked.
” no” sanskar instantly denied he don’t want any sort of tension.
” ok” swara’s face fell. She step to leave.
Sanskar look at shiddat who is slowly sobbing lying on swara’s chest.
” wait let’s check in the kitchen” he said. Swara slightly smile and they went to kitchen.
In the kitchen, sanskar start picking utensils to check whether it has milk or not. The way he is looking swara clearly get to know its his first time in the kitchen.
” plz see in the fridge” swara said as mostly milk is kept in refrigerator.
” hmm” sanskar look at swara for a second then open the fridge. She was right there was bowl of milk inside. Sanskar took it and place on shelf. He tried to bend the bowl and pour in glass but that seems to be the toughest task for him. Swara press her lips preventing herself from laughing as sanskar is changing different angles to pour milk.
” let me do” swara said.
Sanskar didn’t said anything just moved back. Swara came forward but then shiddat is in her hands.
” give her to me” sanskar said. His eyes are stern all the time. Swara get to know he is arrogant man.
Swara give shiddat to sanskar and pour milk in glass. Shiddat stare at sanskar blinking her hazel doe eyes several times trying to know who he is as she saw him for the first time. Shiddat clutch sanskar’s neck in her little hands leaving her nails marks. Sanskar wince slightly.
” sorry give her to me” Swara said when she saw what shiddat did.
“Cut her nails” sanskar said. Swara nodded.
” thank you” swara said and left.
” how can a husband leave his wife and daughter alone in a new city??”Sanskar thought as he stare her retreating finger. Shiddat smile at him and sanskar just can’t help but smile back. He signed and went to his room.
To be continued….
How’s the first part??????
If i will get good response then i will give one shot everyday of this story….but it depend on your reaction.
Its just the beginning of the story. If you are not interested i will stop here itself let me know.
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87 Comments
Awesome
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Superbbb…awsmmm
… Soo sweet… Plzz post soon
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Nice episode. Pls carry on
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beautiful dear
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Marsu dear… you are really a very good writter..you are writting so much OS and FF..and giving replying to others it is really not easy…. although i am not a fan of swasan..i just read it bcoz of your khidkitod writting skill…and your all FF and OS are excellent..keep writting like this…loads of love from me..
That’s so sweet of you…..I’m glad you read for my writing skills really means alot??? thank you so much dear tc???
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Nice update..
loved it..
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Awesome…. Good start
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Awesome update . Loved it !
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Awesome ???pls post next part soon…
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nice dr ..continue this story ..love ur wirting that to my favorite couple swasan….ummmmah….
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its really heart touching story i really loved it awesome carry on
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Amazing dear..continue the story
waiting for next part 🙂
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amazing
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Awesome…
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Awesome dear like always.
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Amazing as always… no need to ask the question ‘how’s the part’ marsuu.. we love ur stories and how u describe all little emotions that we r feeling that we r watchng them in the screen as we saw them in serial
Awwww that’s so sweet of you??? glad u like my stories thank you so much dear ????❤❤
plzzz post the nxt part soon
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its awesome dear plz continue… im eagerly waiting for next update…hope u update soon…
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I was waiting for it so long. And please post daily. Loved it and it’s interesting to know about shiddat and her kismat connection with Swasan.
Thank you so much dear yeah i planned to post daily hopefully will do???
Beautiful start !!
Loved it !!
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Shandar jabardast??????????? as always but I like it. But Y swara asked for milk a mother can feed her child????. Kahi baby kisi aur ka to nahi ho skta h?????.
But Mr Maheshwari to pehli nazar mai fida ho gaye aur jealous bhi ho gaye??????????. Don’t worry Sanskar she is only yours, only your SWARA??????????????.
And siddat name is also unique??????? and I know he always stares me??????? love u siddat
Yeh bad mai pta chalega why she didn’t feed her???
Yuppppp right swara is of sanskar so tension not?????
Ha ha shiddat tere ko hi dhek rahi hai??
Thank you so much depuuuuuu tc???
Loved it…..post soon
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